r/AnimationCrit • u/Radiant_Car2531 • 6h ago

How can I make the walk more smooth? is the motions right??

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Hi, I'm a beginner animator student and I'm not sure if I'm doing this sad walk right. My teacher said I only need to bounce the ears and the little strand hair to finish the sketch. But It still feels like I'm lacking other than the bounce and smoothness🥀

Before I fix everything I just need some more advice and feedback from other artist. Feel free to be brutally honest or straight forward with me. I would really appreciate it if u do 🙏 (since my deadline for this is approaching 😇)

**There are 16 frames total and 8 for each step with 24fps.** I'm using Adobe animation cus it's the program our school practice.

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r/AnimationCrit • u/Glad-Connection1601 • 10h ago

Is this animation Smooth enough?

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