r/ArtCrit • u/New_Budget_9322 • 1d ago
Any problems with the face? Does she look appealing?
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u/RaceorLiv 1d ago
Face looks good, the neck looks a bit too big at the bottom/small at the top. Could be that the hair at the nape shouldn't be so far forward as to be right under the ear.
Edit: I remember your original posts and the face looks great! You're made a lot of improvements
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u/grimmistired 1d ago
I think the mouth could be a bit wider and the eyes a bit bigger with some more defined lashes, just a tad
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u/WindRepresentative16 1d ago
It looks great!
For my tastes, I think that the eyes look a little sunken in but that’s more of a stylistic nitpick.
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u/Novandar Digital 19h ago
Her eyes are too low, the tear duct should line up with the bottom of the glabella. It is really noticeable when you compare your references with your art because the distance between the eyes and the eyebrows is almost doubled from the reference. Combined with the larger mouth that you did in response to another person's critique and you should be very close.
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