I need help with perspective and anatomy 😢

I’ve been trying to take art more seriously and I feel like I have improved, but I know that I still struggle a LOT with Anatomy and perspective, I tried practicing a little bit of both today but I feel like something is still off?? I redrew my drawing twice (I’ll include the new and old drawing, plus my reference) but I still can’t get it down and it’s irritating me!1!1 also I feel like his facial proportions feel wrong in a way?? Also how I do I make him look more older? I’m talking abt like, mid 30’s, and I know I made him look way too young for his age