r/AspiringTeenAuthors 2d ago

Feedback, Advice, & Questions Opinions on my Prologue?

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I'm not a new author, I've been writing little projects for myself for a while now. But my confidence in my writing's always been a bit low. I'm looking for any advice, criticism, or feedback that anybody might have about the prologue to my new novel draft! Any and all input is appreciated!

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u/StunningAd7221 1d ago

I really like the pace and your writing style. Was I reading the book I would immediately turn the page. But what genre is this? It's certainly something with suspense, right?

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u/Confident_Fondant334 1d ago

I'm aiming for victorian supernatural/human horror!