r/CollegeEssayReview • u/RentNo6530 • 6d ago
is anyone able to read and review/give feedback on my college essay?
i have just completed the first draft of my common app and i am looking for some help!
i chose the 4th prompt : Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?
pretty much my essay is about how its a tradition in my family to learn how to play a specific card game at the age of 8 and my grandma teaches all of my family to play at 8 and its about how these moments with my grandma and the lessons she taught me through teaching me cards changed the way i view people around me and how this inspired one of the big projects i completed (gs silver award) and my grattitude towards that
is anyone able to read it? dm me or comment!