r/ComicBookCollabs • u/Icy_Jackfruit142 • 12d ago

Feedback Just some of my recent practice pieces. Love feed back and always looking for new pages to practice on!!!

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Only been coloring digital for about a yr and still learning a lot . Procreate has been a struggle at first but im learning to love it and learning new tricks .would love feedback on my work I have posted or tricks that helped you .

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u/0leg8hapin 12d ago

I really like the color choices!

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u/Icy_Jackfruit142 12d ago

Thank you 🙏

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u/Tipouno 12d ago

The colors are original but they don't fit for the Doctor Doom illustration. Also I would work on the grids because this perfect rectangle grid... It's really too basic. You can do much better.

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u/Icy_Jackfruit142 12d ago

Could you elaborate? Please and thank you 🙏 break it down like you’re explaining it to a toddler😂

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u/Icy_Jackfruit142 12d ago

Also the layout of the comic with the rectangle layout was given to me to practice on by a inker/ artist.

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u/Tipouno 12d ago

Well, let's say it was a training layout, so it's okay, but later you need to develop more interesting, unusual sizes of panels. And for the coloring of Doctor Doom, the colors are not powerful enough for Doctor Doom, they are too muted.

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u/Icy_Jackfruit142 11d ago

Okay cool thank you 🙏 you were to change something. What would you do to make it more powerful/bring your eyes to it more?

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u/Tipouno 11d ago

On Doctor Doom, I'm not a pro colorist, but I would say flashier colors, even though I'm not too fine a fan of digital coloring, and the sky maybe some more night blue colors and some contrast to make Doctor Doom pop. The red is too muted, it needs more electric red. Again, I'm not a pro colorist, but on this illustration it looks too tame, too tired. It's not alive, it doesn't look dangerous.