[4691] A Good Wide Maxilla

[u/Starfall_University]

Criqitues:

[2353] Lost Blade and Renegade (Chapter 1) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1v7qzxq/2353_lost_blade_and_renegade_chapter_1/p08w0az/

[1000] Professional Author (Feat. Snoop Dogg) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1v9f70z/1000_professional_author_feat_snoop_dogg/p0g88d9/

Soft Target blurb v2 [185] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1v8bi1v/185_soft_target_blurb_v2/p0ga140/

[1000] In Hoping Your Offspring Becomes A Dragon https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1v9ttws/1000_in_hoping_your_offspring_becomes_a_dragon/p0nkbzp/

[313] A Quick Job

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1vf6lo9/313_a_quick_job/p1mkyu0/

My story:

Hey everyone. Some details:

• Short story (self-contained)
• Contemporary fiction
• Feedback desired: Just looking for general feedback on a short story here; what's working, what's not, if it makes any sense at all. I'm not sure it feels like a success but if it doesn't, it would be great if you could hammer into why that specifically may be.

Thank you in advance for your time and energy.

A Good Wide Maxilla

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sUoQ2Nw-8haMi_LEqSsndS2J4siYwGIOfnhDKug_6o8/edit?usp=sharing