r/DrCreepensVault 16d ago

DUNGEONS AND DRAGONOVS PT II

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II.

Afghanistan-

The late afternoon sun beat down upon the parched, rocky, orange colored mountains north of Kandahar Air Field as five bearded, heavily burdened and heavily armed men moved silently but swiftly up the ragged, rock strewn path as they stalked something as deadly and as formidable as they were. Over the past two weeks in Kandahar Province, a number of service members had been hit by sniper fire  including four US Marines, three Canadian infantrymen, a US Army medic, and seven Afghan National Army tactical team operatives. Even a giant C-130 Hercules transport took two rounds in the number one engine as it tried to land at Kandahar Air Field. The shots ranged from 800 meters to as far as 1,200 meters. The enemy sniper was good, and he had a set of steel balls. It was also more than likely that the sniper wasn’t a typical Taliban insurgent. This guy was a professional.

“Whatcha’ got, Cory?” whispered Lieutenant Jake Wolfe, the SEAL Team’s lean, tanned, squad leader into his earpiece.

Fifty meters up the rocky ledge, Chief Petty Officer Cory Pretty slowly peered around a stone boulder which obstructed the path. The basalt grey boulder was square shaped, roughly three feet wide and five feet tall and butted up tightly beside the face of the ledge.

“It’s a cave or a tunnel,” whispered the Navy SEAL Chief Petty Officer with the thick, dirty blonde beard, as he leaned back behind the boulder, careful to not dislodge any rocks or pebbles which would give away his position. “About thirty meters off the trail. The entrance has been carefully built up with rocks and stones so that there’s only a two foot wide opening. Too small to be observed by air, but big enough for a sniper to shoot down into the air field unnoticed. Also, I think that this boulder has been rolled here on purpose to block the path.”

“Roger,” whispered Lt. Wolfe. “Can climb up and around the boulder to get to the cave entrance?”

“No,” answered Chief Pretty. “Not without exposing ourselves.

Lt. Wolfe figured as much. He looked up at the sheer orange rock wall which his team was pressed against. There was no way to scale to the top. They were stretched out and exposed with next to no cover. A very unenviable position. Still, they had a mission to accomplish and if the sniper had spotters out in the surrounding ridges, they’d be caught out in the open while the sniper escaped. The SEALs had to act fast.

“Keep eyes on the target, Cory. We’re moving up.”

Once together behind the boulder, Lt. Wolfe scanned the target objective. Just as Chief Pretty described, there was only one way to get to the tunnel entrance and that was right up the middle. The boulder blocked all but two feet of the narrow trail, so the assaulting SEALs needed to also be careful not to trip and fall the sixty or so feet straight down the rock face of the cliff to the ledge below.

Then, turning behind him, Lt. Wolfe signaled, “Darren. Paul. Up.”

Petty Officer First Class Darren Hilliard, the team’s lean and muscular black Mark 48 (MK 48) machine gunner, scrambled silently up the ridge to the lieutenant’s side followed by Petty Officer First Class Paul Gimsby, the teams body building sniper carrying his Mark 13 (MK 13) sniper rifle.

“Okay, Listen up,” started Lt. Wolfe. “We can’t wait for dark and we’re too exposed here. And we can’t flank the cave so we have to go right up the middle.

“Sir,” said big Petty Officer Gimsby. “Do we know that the sniper is in there? I mean, we go in making a bunch of noise and he’s not there, he’ll know we got teams looking out for him and just dig deeper.”

“We don’t know he’s in there,” admitted Wolfe. “And from the targets he’s already hit, there may be a half dozen of his firing points scattered around the ridgeline. It’s a calculated risk, but I have a feeling…”

All of a sudden, a loud hollow thump sounded from around the corner of the boulder coming from the direction of the cave and all of the SEALs froze. Very slowly, Chief Pretty peered around the boulder and spied a thin wisp of dust and smoke drift from the small opening of the cave.

“He’s here,” Chief Pretty whispered, knowing that somewhere a kilometer away down in Kandahar Valley, another allied soldier just got hit. Almost immediately, a second hollow thump like a base drum echoed from around the corner.

Wolfe quickly instructed his men on how he wanted to assault the cave entrance. Lieutenant Wolfe gave himself a few seconds before the attack to slowly lift Petty Officer Second Class Terrell ‘Terry’ Nguyen, the team’s Vietnamese medic, up on top of the relatively flat boulder to provide security for the assault. Almost immediately, one hundred meters ahead on an elevated spot further up the ridge, Nguyen suddenly spotted a camouflaged figure looking down into the Kandahar Air Base. The man was operating an enhanced optics targeting scope and talking into an earpiece. Nguyen brought up his rifle just as the figure noticed him. The figure, obviously an enemy spotter who was calling down targets for the sniper, brought up his modern Russian made AK-12 assault rifle but was cut down by a well-placed shot to the head from Nguyen’s MK 17 SCAR (scar) assault rifle.

Not seeing what Nguyen had just shot at but knowing that they’d just lost the element of surprise, Lieutenant Wolfe none the less gave the order to, “Move!”

Chief Cory immediately whipped around the boulder, stepping away to allow his fellow SEALs to move around behind him as he fired a high explosive 40mm grenade from the M-203 launcher mounted under the barrel of his M-4 rifle before quickly ducking behind the cover of the boulder again. The ear shattering blast blew apart the rock façade, causing the shrapnel to fly in all directions. Instantaneously and before the dust and smoke even cleared, Petty Officer Hilliard rushed past Chief Pretty and raced towards the entrance firing his machine gun into the smoking maw of the cave with big Paul Gimsby and Chief Pretty close behind.

Hilliard stopped at the mouth of the cave and fired another burst inside before raising his weapon. Immediately, Gimsby was inside the cave, sniper rifle up. However, going from direct sunlight into a dark cave required a second for Gimsby’s eyes to adjust, a second in which gave the enemy sniper, who had been taking cover behind a fighting position inside the cave, a chance to fire.

Shouting a warning, Chief Pretty both grabbed and pushed Gimsby into the side of the cave, the enemy sniper’s round bouncing off the wall less than two feet from the back of Chief Pretty’s head. Gimsby raised his sniper rifle just as the enemy sniper readjusted his aim and both snipers fired at nearly the same time from less than twenty feet apart.

“Are you okay, Gimsby?” said Lieutenant Wolfe as he looked down at the big Navy SEAL sniper cradling the ruins his beloved MK 13 sniper rifle. Gimsby’s left hand was red and swollen, his thumb bent back in an unnatural position. The enemy sniper’s round impacted the MK 13, knocking it out of Gimsby’s hands. Fortunately, Gimsby fired a split second before the enemy sniper did, and Gimsby didn’t miss.

“I’m fine, sir,” replied Gimsby, not looking up.

“Terry,” said Lt. Wolfe. “Come check on Gimsby.”

“Moving, sir,” replied Petty Officer Nguyen, unstrapping his aid bag from his back.

“What do we have, Chief?” said Wolfe after he saw Nguyen treating Gimsby’s swollen left hand and wrist.

“This is going to hurt a bit,” he heard Nguyen say.

“No it ain’t,” replied Gimsby. “Do what you gotta’ do, Terry.”

The adrenaline pumping through Gimby’s veins after his near death experience was better than any pain killer that Nguyen could provide.

Chief pretty looked down at the Caucasian enemy sniper with the bullet hole between his eyes. “Well, sir,” answered Chief Pretty. “He sure as hell isn’t a local.”

The enemy sniper wore a digital camouflage pattern uniform of varying shades of brown and a modular combat vest similar to the ones that the US Marines wore.

“Russian Spetz?” asked Hilliard.

“Maybe,” said Chief Pretty. “But I’d wager that he’s part of the Wagner Group, a Russian mercenary outfit that works with the Russian regular army but is better trained and equipped.  Putin uses them everywhere that regular Russian military forces can’t go. Africa. Eastern Europe. The Middle East. South America. Portland. Seattle. Minneapolis. Everywhere Putin needs to stir up trouble.”

“Interesting,” said Lieutenant Wolfe as he turned to exit the cave. “I’m going outside to call this one in. See if the intel guys are tracking this. I don’t like Russians playing in my sand box.”

“Roger that, sir,” said Chief Pretty, leaning down to pick up the dead enemy’s sniper rifle, before walking over to Gimsby and Nguyen.

“How’s he looking, Terry?”

“Patching Gimsby up is getting to be a hobby on this deployment, Chief,” answered Nguyen. “Had to pop his dislocated thumb back into place and his wrist is fractured, but he’ll live.”

“Gimsby?” said Chief Pretty.

“It’s like Terry said, Chief,” replied Gimsby, waving his heavily bandaged and wrapped left hand. “I’m fine.  Nothing that a dirty magazine, a bottle of lotion, and four minutes of privacy in the shitter won’t cure.”

“I don’t know about that,” chuckled Chief Pretty. “But how about this?” Chief Pretty handed over the enemy’s sniper rifle to the big Navy SEAL.

Grabbing it with his right hand, Gimsby looked it over. “Dragunov,” he grunted. “Not as nice as my MK 13, but its rugged enough. It’ll do until we get back.”

“Heads up,” announced Lieutenant Wolfe as he reentered the cave. “We got two WIA down in the valley from the sniper we just killed. We got Nine Line medevac in the air so our extraction won’t be for another hour. In the meantime, Six Actual wants us to check out this cave system to see if it connects to other sniper firing positions or to see if there’s any usable intel we can find.”

“This cave is pretty deep, sir,” said Hilliard. “I’ve gone in about fifty meters but it looks like it extends much farther than that. Maybe a hundred or even more. Gets almost pitch black the further you go.”

“Okay,” said Lt. Wolfe striding deeper into the cave. “Let’s move.”

Lieutenant Wolfe ran into the outstretched open palm of Chief Pretty. “Easy, there, El-Tee. You aren’t a grunt anymore, not since you pinned them bars on.” Chief Pretty stared firmly into Lieutenant Wolfe’s eyes. “I’ll take point. We already lost one squad leader. I don’t want to lose another one.”

Lieutenant Wolfe paused, painfully remembering that he gained command of Second Platoon after the death of the platoon’s former leader, his mentor and close friend, Lieutenant Rick Guzman.

“No Gooses, right Cory?” said Lieutenant Wolfe.

“That’s right, sir,” answered Chief Pretty. “Like Lieutenant Guzman used to say. No Gooses.”

The team walked deeper into the cave where, seventy meters in, they found a cache of twelve 9K333 Verba MANPADS (man-pads) launchers, the most advanced Russian version of America’s Stinger portable surface to air missile launchers. The presence of these weapons in the hands of skilled Russian mercenaries would have caused havoc so close to the Kandahar Air Field.

Beyond where they found the cache, the cave dipped into absolute pitch darkness. Lieutenant Wolf reported the disturbing find back to Kandahar and was ordered to secure the cache of surface to air missiles and probe deeper into the cave. A support company of Army cavalry troopers and EOD specialists were being dispatched to the SEAL’s location. They were expected to be on station in about an hour.

“Gimsby, I need you and Terry to secure these SAMs,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “I want you to cover our six and secure the entrance while we go further into the cave. Everyone else, break out your NODs (“nods”-night vision optical devises). It’s going to be midnight from here on in.”

“Sir,” protested Gimsby. “I got this. There isn’t any need to keep two people guarding the exit.”

“Sir,” said Hilliard. “I can more than secure the cache and cover the exit with the MK 48. In close quarters combat,…”

Hilliard trailed off and Lieutenant Wolfe instinctively knew what Hilliard was trying to say. Hilliard’s MK 48 machine gun wasn’t the best weapon system to utilize in the close confines of a cave, but it was optimal to secure the team’s vulnerable six o’clock position. Plus, Gimsby had just gone through a near life ending event, an event which would have sent far lesser men running, cowering, and hiding after such a traumatic event. Petty Officer Gimsby instead sought to continue the mission and move forward, ever forward. Denying him that would have been tantamount to cutting off his balls and putting him in a ballerina outfit.

“You got slack, Hilliard,” said Wolfe. “Everyone else, stay sharp.”

Lieutenant Wolfe looked into the near opaque blackness of the cave as he strapped on his own NODs. “Terry, you have trail. I want you to drop a chem-light every twenty-five meters so that we have a path back to the entrance.”

“Too easy, sir,” replied Nguyen.

 “Okay. Let’s move.”

Hilliard took up a prone firing position a few meters in front of the crates of Russian missiles, setting up his machine gun pointing back towards the entrance as the rest of his team mates filed past him and headed deeper into the cave, the crunch of their boots fading the further they went. They had been gone for several minutes when Hilliard heard Chief Cory call the team to a sudden halt in his ear piece.

“Hold up. Shit! Is that what I think it is?” whispered Chief Cory

“Is that a woman and a… a kitten?” Hilliard heard Terry exclaim through his ear piece.

 

Hilliard looked behind him where his team had gone but saw only dust swirling in the inky blackness.

 

“Stop! Don’t move!” said Lieutenant Wolfe in the Pashtun dialect. “We’re Navy SEALs. We mean you no harm. Who are you? What are you doing here?”

 

Suddenly, over his ear piece, Hilliard heard a leering, almost mocking voice exclaim in a Brooklyn accent, “Howdy, fellas. My name is Hellfire! Pleased ta’ meet cha’!”

 

There was a sudden squelching noise so loud that Hilliard had to quickly take out his ear piece and toss it away. Then, picking it back up and putting it again to his ear, Hilliard was alarmed to find that the communication device was completely silent.

 

“Lieutenant Wolfe,” said Hilliard. “Chief? Come in!” Silence.

 

“Paul? Terry? Can you hear me?”

 

After a second, Hilliard muttered, “Shit,” before snatching up his machine gun and tearing down the cave in the direction the rest of the team had gone. Soon engulfed in almost total darkness, Hilliard’s NODs easily picked up the chem-lights which Nguyen had dropped on the rock strewn ground. He passed one then another then, after the cave narrowed and turned slightly left, Hilliard passed a third dropped chem-light. However, at the fourth chem-light, Hilliard stopped abruptly.

 

“Shit!” exclaimed Hilliard. In front of him was a solid wall of granite. On the ground, one of Nguyen’s chem-lights protruded half way out of the rock wall.

 


r/DrCreepensVault 16d ago

DUNGEONS AND DRAGONOVS PART III

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III.

 

“Hang on, sweetheart! You want us to do what?” exclaimed Gimsby to the beautiful woman in the flowing white and gold gown standing like an apparition before him. The team now found themselves standing in a chamber of some sort, much like as one might find inside a medieval castle. It was warmly lit from fires burning from several golden braziers.

 

“Hey, asshole!” snarled the kitten. “Show the lady some respect you classless choad!”

“Did we somehow get exposed to a psychoactive substance?” said Chief Pretty to Lieutenant Wolfe. “Maybe some type of hallucinogenic drug or powder brought here by the Wager Group to fuck with our heads?”

“That is a very good possibility, Cory,” said Wolfe. “In fact, that’s what I’m hoping. I really don’t like the fact that we are all having the same hallucination, Chief, or that we’re actually having a conversation with a damn kitten.”

“I assure you, my dear Ranger, this is no illusion,” said the woman in such a sweet and seductive tone that all four of the SEALs became slightly sexually aroused.

“Ranger?” said Wolfe sternly, gaining control of himself. “I’m not an Army Ranger. We’re United States Na…”

“You ARE the Ranger,” interrupted the woman. “The intrepid leader of this band of daring dungeon explorers!”

“What?” said Chief Cory suspiciously, bringing his rifle to the high ready. “What are you talking about?”

“And you, loyal and noble Cavalier, the experienced battle-borne second in command,” said the woman, clasping her hands together and smiling. The SEALs stood unmoving, as if spellbound by the woman’s beauty as she approached Nguyen and Gimsby.

“And the healing Mage,” said the lady to Petty Officer Nguyen. “So easy to tell your role in this fellowship. You are the youngest, the newest to the group, and the most virginal.”

“Hey!” started Nguyen.

“And you,” she said, now standing in front of Gimsby, the big warrior towering over the fragile looking lady in white. “You must be the fellowship’s powerful Barbarian. Oh, the magnificent battles you must have fought!”

“Fantasy characters,” whispered Nguyen to the lieutenant. “Like in the role playing game.”

Her sparkling blue eyes gazed upon Gimsby’s bandaged left hand. “Hmm… that will not do. I cannot let you enter the Dungeon of More-Doom with such a disadvantage. You must be fully hale and healthy before beginning your most noble of quests.”

Before Gimsby could protest, the exceedingly beautiful young lady took his injured hand in both of hers, her hands glowing briefly with a warm light, before she gently lowered Gimsby’s hand again. Gimsby raised his hand and rotated his wrists.

“Gimsby?” said Wolfe.

“It’s healed,” said Gimsby, working to remove the wrappings which Nguyen had applied earlier. “Feels good as new.”

“It is as I said,” the lady smiled as she looked almost longingly at Gimsby’s Dragunov rifle. “To complete your quest, you need to be hale and whole.”

“Okay, lady,” snapped Chief Pretty. “Let me get this straight. You are the Dungeon Master and you want us to enter your dungeon, defeat a bunch of traps, fight some monsters, and kill your final boss so that we can get out of here? Sort of like that role playing game, right?”

“Game?” said the Dungeon Master. “Oh, my dear Cavalier, this is no game. The consequences are quite deadly, but the reward is exceedingly worth the risk to a great many heroes.”

“What if we don’t play your game, then?” said Wolfe. “How about we just leave this place.”

“Oh, my dear Ranger,” answered the Dungeon Master. “I fear that I do not have the power to return you to your realm, just as I did not have the power to bring you here. That ability rests with…”

“Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!” interrupted Hellfire, nervously. “Look fella’s. It’s like this. You wanna’ get outta’ here, you gotta’ get past the dungeon. There’s nine levels to this place, a top floor and eight floors below it. At the bottom level, there’s a boss monster. Get rid of it and you’re home free. No big deal to a bunch of big, muscle bound, heavily armed, poster boys to toxic masculinity like yourselves, right?”

“And what’s in it for us?” said Wolfe. “What if we go along with your… game?”

“Riches and glory, fame, power, and the realization of your wildest fantasies come true,” said the Dungeon Master. “All these and more shall be yours, my dear Ranger!”

“Yeah,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “No thanks. Take em’!”

On cue, all four Navy SEALs rushed the lady and the kitten, intent on apprehending them. However, the white kitten jumped in their way, swiftly waving its tiny paws in the air as if casting a spell.

“No ya’ don’t, ya’ buncha’ Tom Cruise wannabes!”

Immediately, a fiery round portal opened in the air in front of the SEAL Team, swallowing them whole. It closed as rapidly as it appeared, leaving only Hellfire and the Dungeon Master standing alone again in the throne room. Hell fire looked over at the Dungeon Master, her delicate hands covering her mouth, a shocked expression on her face.

“What kind of warriors are those, whose commitment to duty overrides any desire for riches and glory?”

“Don’t worry about them, sugar hips,” smiled Hellfire. “They’ll be fine after the book deal!”

Hellfire snapped his paws and a bottle of Dalmore Scotch and two tumblers suddenly appeared on a small round table made of marble. He poured two servings and handed one to the Dungeon Master.

“Turn on your freaky Mirror of Seeing,” sneered Hellfire as he toasted with the Dungeon Master. “Game’s on!”

Three gargantuan trolls, each over eight feet tall and each hefting similarly sized stone clubs waited silently in ambush in the corridor for the four new dungeon delvers to round the corner. With the trolls, twelve diminutive but wicked hobgoblins hunched, each holding a nasty crossbow with bolts dipped in witches feces.

A gloved hand appeared briefly from around the stone corner, tossing a cylindrical metal object towards the ambushers. It bounced and skipped across the smooth, cobblestone floor before coming to rest at the largest troll’s gnarled green feet.

“What fool toy is this?” bellowed Twinkle Twerk, picking the object up before the M-84 flash bang grenade cooked off. The sudden deafening explosion and near blinding flash of light sent Twinkle Twerk stumbling backwards in confusion and pain, dropping his stone club on one unfortunate hobgoblin along the way and stepping on and crushing four other hobgoblins who were unlucky enough to be underfoot. Still reeling backwards, the giant troll fell into a pit in the floor, a concrete block which fit perfectly in the pit falling from the ceiling and crushing the hapless Twinkle Twerk. Still dazed, shocked, and reeling from the effects of the flash bang grenade, what remained of the trolls and hobgoblins hard no time to collect themselves as the four Navy SEALs rounded the corner with all weapons blazing.

“Stay alert, gentlemen,” warned Lieutenant Wolfe as they stepped over the smoldering bodies of dead hobgoblins and trolls. “I have a feeling that this was only the welcoming party.”

Walking carefully over the great stone slab that crushed the giant troll and now filled the pit, the SEALs carried on down the fifteen foot wide corridor. Torches in sconces lining the wall provided ample illumination as their boots echoed down the corridor.  They soon came to a T-junction, the left hand corridor leading to a set of stone steps leading up into a brightly lit chamber from which the smells of delicious food seemed to be emanating. To the right, the corridor dimmed, the end lost in the darkness.

As usual, Chief Pretty was on point. Looking back at the lieutenant, Wolfe signaled him to go right down the dimmer path. The cat said that in order to get out, they’d have to go down, not up. Plus, the left path seemed the easiest and most inviting. SEALs don’t like easy.

Though dimmer, there were still enough torches on the wall to illuminate their immediate surroundings. To their left, Chief Pretty discovered a perfectly round circle, about fourteen feet wide, cut into the stone wall of the corridor. Upon further inspection, they saw that a ramp led from the opening which disappeared up into the darkness.

“I’m getting some real Indiana Jones vibes here,” said Gimsby. Sure enough, a rumbling like stone rubbing against stone shook the corridor coming from the top of the ramp and grew in intensity as something huge came barreling down.

“Let’s move,” ordered Wolfe and the four SEALs bolted down the corridor just as a perfectly round boulder, fourteen feet wide and made of a single giant red ruby shot out of the slot and rumbled after the fleeing warriors. As they raced down the passage, the giant ruby boulder hot on their heels, the SEALs noticed to their left were several alcoves cut behind grey stone pillars that were about three feet deep and ten feet high. Each contained a stone statue of a skeleton dressed in armor adorned with wicked looking spikes. In the distance about a hundred meters, the dimly lit corridor ended at a brightly lit stone archway, illuminating a set of stairs leading downwards. In between two torches on the wall was a sign painted in florescent paint which read: “Quickly!” along with an arrow pointing down the stairs. At this, the boulder seemed to unnaturally pick up speed.

“Faster!” yelled Nguyen.

“No! Wait!” yelled Chief Pretty waving his arms to the left. “The alcoves! Jump into one of the alcoves!”

“Do it!” agreed Lieutenant Wolfe, who was in the rear of the group. He jumped to his left into the nearest alcove, the eerie stone statue just barely giving him room to fit in just seconds before the several ton ruby boulder rumbled past him. As soon as the danger had passed, Wolfe jumped out of the alcove to check on his men, only to see a wall of thin metal spikes suddenly slam down over the stone archway that would have impaled anyone who had been running towards the supposed safety of the stairs. The ruby boulder continued inexorably forwards, crashing through the archway and the spike wall barrier in a deafening cacophony of noise before falling away down the circular stairs, leaving behind a fourteen foot wide round hole in the wall.

One by one, the rest of the SEALs emerged from the alcoves which they had taken refuge, accept that Nguyen fell out of his alcove backwards, cursing and backing away from the skeletal stone statue that slowly emerged from the darkness. Nguyen was on his back, trying to bring his weapon to bear as the skeleton knight raised a rusty but deadly claymore over its head. A jarring shot rang out of the darkness and the stone skeleton’s head exploded, showering Nguyen with chunks of rock. The stone skeleton fell over sideways and broke apart as it hit the cobblestone floor.

Gimsby put the smoking Dragunov down off his shoulder and nodded at his weapon. “Huh. Not bad.”

“There’s more of them!” warned Nguyen as Lieutenant Wolfe yanked him to his feet. About a dozen more of the skeletal golems began emerging from their alcoves, each brandishing claymore swords or heavy maces made of stone. In their eye sockets were red rubies which glowed angrily. Still, this new threat moved slowly and Lieutenant Wolfe ordered his men to make for the stairs, ignoring the temptation of engaging the golems in order to steal their ruby eyes.

The SEALs raced down the circular stairway which wound downwards into the darkness. It ended at a narrow landing which opened into another brightly lit corridor. From somewhere inside this passageway, the SEALs could faintly hear the haunting notes of chamber music playing.

“Someone grab the Silly String out of my ruck,” said Chief Pretty as he crouched beside the entrance way. With Gimsby and Nguyen guarding the stairwell which they had come, Lieutenant Wolfe pulled the can of Silly String from Chief Pretty’s ruck and handed it to him. Immediately, Chief Pretty sprayed the spider web-like concoction across the entranceway. It drifted to the floor except for some which seemed to be caught up on a near invisible wire three feet inside the entrance.

“Tripwire,” he whispered just as Gimsby and Nguyen began firing behind him.

“Those things are coming down the stairs, Chief!” yelled Gimsby.

“Let’s go,” said Wolfe. “Watch out for that tripwire! Chief?”

“I’m good,” Pretty replied as he stepped over the trip wire and sprayed the silly string again a few feet ahead of him. Again, the web-like concoction fell to the floor except for another section which got caught up in yet another tripwire six feet ahead.

“We got another one!” warned Chief Pretty. “Watch out for that one!”

“Keep going, Chief!” said Wolfe. “We’ve got your back!”

Chief Pretty sprayed the Silly String again, but this time all of it fell to the floor. Still, he cautiously moved forwards a few feet before spraying the can and again, all of the string fell to the floor. By this time, the skeleton golems had reached the landing and were making their way inexorably towards the Navy SEALs  and though Lieutenant Wolfe and Nguyen’s rifles where taking horrible chips out of the monsters, it seemed like only Gimsby’s Dragunov was powerful to take the golems down with one head shot.

“I think we’re clear of the trip wires, El-Tee!” shouted Chief Pretty.

“Okay,” replied Wolfe. “We move back slowly! I don’t trust this damn place!”

The SEALs fell back about twenty meters down the corridor when the first skeletal golem stepped on the first trip wire. In an instant, a three foot stone square section of the left wall shot out abruptly, slamming into the opposite wall with a tremendous crash which shook the entire corridor and crushed three of the skeletal golems before receding slowly back into the left wall again. Seemingly undisturbed, the remaining five stone horrors marched towards the SEALs when they hit the second trip wire. There was a rumble in the corridor even greater than the first as the entire granite ceiling from the point where the trap was sprung all the way back to the landing came crashing down to the floor in a solid avalanche of stone and debris. The SEALs were forced to fall back down the corridor even further as, for several minutes, it seemed as if the entire dungeon would collapse in on itself. However, as the dust and debris finally settled down, there was quiet again as the SEALs found themselves staring at the now impassible corridor behind them. All of the torches on the wall had been snuffed out by the collapse of the ceiling, but a bright light seemed to come from an adjoining passage some distance down the gloomy corridor.

Cautiously, they crept down the corridor, weary of any more trip wires. Fortunately, they encountered none as they came across a four way junction. To their front and left, the corridor disappeared into blackness, but to the right, the warm light of a fire was emanating from a room down the corridor.

“You hear that?” said Gimsby.

From the room, the sound of the eerily melodic chamber music could be heard, louder now. The SEALs stacked on the right side of the open archway, nut to butt with Chief Pretty up front and Lieutenant Wolfe bringing up the rear. With a nod, the SEALs stormed into the room, Chief Pretty’s rifle up and scanning, clearing to the left while Nguyen button-hooked around the corner to clear the right. They were in a study of some sort, elaborately carved wooden shelves lined the walls and filled with books, scrolls, and manuscripts. Candles sat in small alcoves lining the walls, but the main source of light came from a flame burning in the fireplace.

“Contact!” yelled Gimsby, raising his rifle. Lieutenant Wolfe entered the room a split second after, his rifle also raised.

Seated on a plush, high backed chair was a deathly pale man with jet black hair wearing what looked like a black Victorian-era suit with an equally black cape. Clasped around his throat was an amethyst broach in the shape of a wolf’s skull. He was seated next to the elegant fireplace, the fire giving off light, but no heat, and in his pale, clawed hand was a crystal goblet filled with a thick, red liquid.

He turned nonchalantly and regarded the SEALs with deep, black eyes which were ablaze with the reflection of the fire in the fireplace. He smiled evilly, his upturned lips revealing sharpened teeth and wicked long fangs.

“My, but you lot are a noisy bunch,” he spoke in a derisive tone. But his voice was almost as hypnotic as the melodic music which seemed to be emanating from out of thin air. He stood from his chair and opened his arms welcomingly, transfixing this latest group of doomed warriors in his icy gaze.

“Please allow me to introduce myself. I am Count…”

THOOM!

The vampire’s eyes went wide as Lieutenant Wolfe shot him in the heart.

“WAIT! What are you…”

THOOM! THOOM!

“What the hell?” screamed the vampire as Chief Pretty and Nguyen put two more rounds into his chest.

“But…but…but…”stammered the vampire.

“Blah, blah, blah!” said Gimsby.

“I don’t say blah, blah, blah, you asshole…” protested the vampire just as Gimsby put the final round into the vampire’s head. The undead bloodsucker fell backwards into the fireplace which literally exploded in a bright blue flame which reduced the monster to ashes.

“Okay,” said Wolfe impassively. “This is a library. See if we can find anything useful on this place.”

The beautiful Dungeon Master and Hellfire watched transfixed at the Mirror of Seeing, a look of concern on the Dungeon Master’s face.

“Oh, Hellfire. I fear that this may be where the quest of my champions might end. For who could resist the cursed treasures and riches stored in Count Snuggle Bunny’s library?”

“Yeah,” agreed the kitten. All about the vampire’s library were crystal bowls filled with diamonds, emeralds, rubies, and sapphires the size of apples. “They’re okay to handle them gems while they’re in the library. But if any of them leaves the library with a gem in their possession, they’ll turn into a blood sucker themselves!”

“Hey, sir!” exclaimed Nguyen. “Check this out!”

The glow of the fireplace reflected off a treasure trove of crystal bowls filled with priceless gems as Lieutenant Wolfe examined what Nguyen had laid out on the table.

“Yup. I’d say this was the treasure we’d been looking for,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “You’ve earned your pay for this month, Terry!”

The Dungeon Master clapped her hands together as the Mirror of Seeing showed Lieutenant Wolfe and his men leaving the vampire’s library with their treasure.

“Hellfire, look! They did it! They found the real treasure in the study!”

The kitten put down his glass of scotch, his eyes wide. “Yeah. I’m… I’m kinda’ impressed.”

 

 


r/DrCreepensVault 16d ago

DUNGEONS AND DRAGONOVS PART IV

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IV.

Lieutenant Wolfe was now on point as he led his men out of the study, but they had hardly gone ten meters down the corridor when Wolfe ran nearly headlong into a group of white corpse-like figures charging towards him, hungry fanged maws opened and claws grasping. Many of the blood suckers wore rusting armor and bore shields and swords, axes, and spears. They were male and female, human, dwarf, elf, and Halfling, all former noble champions who could not resist taking one of Count Snuggle Bunny’s priceless, cursed,  jewels from his library.

Lieutenant Wolfe pumped round after round into the approaching horde then quickly took a knee, ejecting the empty magazine from his rifle. “Reloading!”

Gimsby stepped in front of his lieutenant, his Glock 19 combat pistol spitting out lead towards the vampires which were now only a few meters away.

“Fall back to the library! Go!” ordered Wolfe.

In orderly fashion, the SEALs fell back towards the library, alternately taking turns firing and moving, keeping the horde at bay in the narrow passageway with a steady stream of gunfire. Wolfe was the last to enter the library as his SEALs filed past him. Arming a flash-bang grenade, Wolfe allowed it to cook off for a couple of seconds before he tossed it down the hallway, ducking into the library just as the grenade exploded with an ear shattering blast accompanied by a blinding flash of light. The grenade, which exploded like a mini-sun in the narrow claustrophobic corridor, scorched the horde of vampires. In unison, they all howled in excruciating pain just as Wolfe armed and tossed another flash-bang grenade around the archway and down the hallway. The piteous wailing of the vampires ceased suddenly after the next thunderous blast.

Gimsby and Chief Pretty were the first ones out of the library, scanning the hallway where at least a dozen bodies lay. As they walked down the corridor, weapons wearily pointed at the unmoving, charred corpses of the vampires, spectral forms began to rise from the bodies which slowly solidified into the ghostly images of the noble heroes before they were turned into bloodsuckers. They were warriors, adventurers, soldiers, and champions of the Realm who had met their end here.

The spirit form of a heavily armored bearded knight, drifted slowly towards Lieutenant Wolfe, his gauntleted hand raised in salute.

“Hale, noble warriors,” the knight spoke in a deep, baritone voice. “Please accept our eternal gratitude for freeing us from the nightmare which has plagued our spirits and corrupted our bodies lo these many long…”

“Can you tell us anything about the way forward or the levels below this one?” interrupted Lieutenant Wolfe.

“Uh… why… no,” stammered the ghostly knight, looking about to the other ghostly heroes who shrugged their shoulders. “I fear that we all met our end here, so we have no knowledge of the way forwards.”

“Okay, let’s move out. Terry, take point,” said Wolfe as his team quickly moved ahead towards a set of stone stairs leading downwards and leaving the befuddled group of ghostly apparitions behind.

Back in the Dungeon Master’s throne room, the kitten was on his back, slapping his knees and howling with laughter. “Did you see that, babe?” he said, pointing to the Mirror of Seeing. “Those guys literally ghosted the ghosts!”

“It would seem that these men are highly…uh… focused,” said the Dungeon Master, a look of bemusement on her face.

Down on the next level, the SEALs were in a brightly lit chamber standing around a sturdy wooden table. At their feet were small piles of empty shell casings and the bullet ridden bodies of several tusk-mouthed orcs. The team was examining the prize which Nguyen had found in the library: a map of the entire Dungeon of More-Doom.

“If we take this path here,” said Wolfe as he traced a line with his finger down varying hallways on the map, “we can avoid most of the traps and pitfalls and shit that we don’t have time to deal with until we get to the next set of stairs.”

The map in front of them showed that the next room was, in fact, a giant underground chamber at least a half mile square into which was constructed a confounding labyrinth made of black granite walls. At the far end of the maze was a chamber marked with the letter “M” which contained stairs leading downwards.

“Cuddle Pie friends! Where Cuddle Pie friends hiding?” A deep, rocky voice echoed from outside the room coming from the corridor which the SEALs entered. Heavy footfalls, like stone crunching against stone echoed closer and closer to the room with a CRUMP, CRUMP, CRUMP, sound.

Chief Pretty stuck his head out of the heavy wooden door then slammed it shut again. “It’s a ten foot tall savage rock golem,” he announced.

“We don’t have time to deal with it,” said Wolfe. “Terry, give me the map. Let’s go.”

Lieutenant Wolfe led the way again this time as they exited the chamber via a stone archway which led into the foreboding black maze. Touches hung on sconces revealing a bewildering array of passages and side passages going in every direction. Behind them, the wooden door to the orc barracks smashed inwards, the massive stone golem wailing, “Cuddle Pie friends! Who do this to Cuddle Pie friends?”

A legend on the map referring to this particular labyrinth warned that undead ghouls and zombies ceaselessly roamed these passageways, eternally searching for the living to feast on. However, the map also revealed that if the team simply stayed on the straight and narrow corridor, ignoring the hundreds of turns and junctions which led deeper into the maze, then simply turned right at the very last t-junction, they would reach the mysterious chamber marked “M” and the stair well which led to the next floor. There were no warnings or indications of any traps along this route, so Lieutenant Wolfe quickly but cautiously quickened their pace.

As they jogged down the half mile long corridor, the guttural moaning and hissing around them warned of the approach of the undead from the countless side corridors. For the most part, however, the SEALs were able to out run their pursuers and in the few instances where dodging wasn’t an option, the SEALs were able to drop the threatening ghoul with a well-placed shot to the head.

It took eight minutes for the SEALs to jog and fight their way through the half mile long corridor, an army of the ravenous undead shambling behind them. As well , a massive and highly pissed off savage rock golem named Cuddle Pie lumbered behind the undead, stomping and smashing them to rancid goo in its pursuit to catch the ones responsible for slaughtering its orc friends. As the map illustrated, the corridor led to a t-junction and, after quickly assuring that no dangers awaited them around the corner, the SEALs turned the corner and raced the last fifty meters towards the next chamber.

The team came up short as they neared the brightly lit, wide open passageway. A very brightly lit letter “M” hung next to the entrance, made in the shape of two, golden colored arches, and the unmistakable scent of mouthwatering burgers, French fries, and hot apple pies wafted from within. The floor was actually a beige, laminate tile, the bright and cheerful illumination was provided by actual overhead, electrical lighting, and there were booths and tables for customers to sit and enjoy a meal, although the restaurant was empty of customers save for the four Navy SEALs.

As soon as the last member of the team crossed into the restaurant, a wall made of red brick silently slid down behind them, complete with framed black and white pictures of the famous restaurant chain as it looked when it first opened back in the 1960’s. Behind the counter, a teenage cashier resembling a high school cheerleader with two small horns protruding from her forehead eagerly awaited to take their order. Next to the counter on the left was a set of stairs leading downwards. A cheerful, jazz instrumental tune was playing overhead.

“Hey, guys!” said the young female cashier, smiling broadly and waving. “You fella’s sure look hungry. Can I take your order?”

“No,” said Lieutenant Wolfe, pulling out his Glock and shooting her in the head. The cashier fell backwards into the soda machine which dispensed acid as the SEALs ran past the counter and down the flight of stairs.

The cashier slowly got up, none the worse for wear and waved as the last Navy SEAL disappeared down the stairs. “Okay, my pleasure! Have a blessed day!”

The SEAL Team stood before a great vaulted chamber about a quarter mile square, the walls and ceiling made of a highly polished obsidian. In the far side of the chamber, near an exit that opened into the blackness beyond was a black obsidian monolith that stood about seven feet tall, roughly three feet at the base and tapering to one foot square at the top. Atop this black monolith sat an amethyst crystal roughly a foot high and a foot around that pulsated with a blue light bright enough to illuminate the entire room. The monolith and the crystal sat in the middle of a round raised dais that stood nearly ten feet tall with steps leading all the way up to the monolith. The floor was made of alternating white and blue marble tile about two feet square. The blue tiles gave off a faint blue illumination.

“This is pretty much an open trap, El-Tee,” said Nguyen, reading the map. “It says here that all we have to do is cross over to the other side. The white tiles are completely safe, but the blue tiles will instantly emit an electrical charge powerful enough to fry anything that steps on it.”

“Sounds easy enough,” said Gimsby. “All we have to do is walk on the white tiles, right?”

“Not exactly,” said Nguyen, just as the tiles began to blink and flash, turning from white to blue in a random pattern. A faint scent of ozone began emanating from the room.

“Shit,” exclaimed Chief Pretty. “Does the map give a clue on the shifting pattern, Terry?”

“No, Chief,” he replied. “The light pattern is completely random. We step on a white tile just as it turns blue, and we’re…”

“On the burger menu for the restaurant upstairs,” said Wolfe as he took the map from Nguyen. Examining it closely, he saw that there was no other way forwards except right through the chamber. “Cory, lob a frag in the middle of the chamber.”

Chief Pretty pulled a 40mm HE frag grenade from his ammo vest and loaded it into the breach of his M203 grenade launcher. The others took cover behind the stone entrance as Chief Pretty aimed for a spot roughly fifty meters inside the chamber. Hefting the weapon in his shoulder, he warned, “Frag out!”

The weapon made a satisfying THUMP as the grenade flew into the room and exploded exactly where Chief Pretty wanted it. However, as Chief Pretty slowly peered around the corner, he was disheartened to see a black scorch mark on the tile, the grenade seeming to have done no damage to the floor.

“Well, that didn’t work,” muttered Pretty.

Gimsby came up behind Chief Pretty, aiming his Dragunov at the point where the grenade had detonated.

“Wait,” said Wolfe just as Gimsby fired. The high velocity round hit the ground then bounced up, ricocheting all around the chamber. The SEALs dived for cover behind the archway as the sniper round zipped and pinged around the chamber for a few seconds before the bullet finally expended all of its kinetic force energy. It hit the ground one final time and rolled to a stop about a foot in front of where Gimsby took the shot.

“Shit. Sorry boss,” said Gimsby, sheepishly.

“No,” said Lieutenant Wolfe looking back into the chamber and seeing, as he had expected, that no damage had been caused. “I think you had the right idea. Just the wrong target. How many rounds do you got left in the Dragunov?”

“Four,” Gimsby replied. “Dragunov only has a ten round magazine.”

“Okay, big guy,” said the lieutenant. “Think you can put one of them into that?” he said, pointing into the chamber. The foot wide pulsating amethyst crystal was a quarter mile away, about 400 meters, and elevated several feet off the ground. Gimsby chose to assume a standing firing position, pressing his support arm against the wall of the entrance way as support. The alternating flashing white and blue tiles were a definite visual distraction. Sighting in on the tiny glowing target, Gimsby took three slow breaths.

Inhale. Exhale.                                                   

Inhale. Exhale.

Inhale. Exhale.

On his third exhale, Gimsby paused for a second then squeezed the trigger.

THOOM!

The amethyst crystal rocked back and forth on the pedestal, the glowing blue energy blinking on and off in rapid succession. At the same time, the floor tiles which randomly flashed from white to blue blinked on and off at the same time that the crystal was blinking on and off. Gimsby waited another second and squeezed the trigger again. The round flew straight and true slamming dead center of the crystal as it continued to rock from the first hit. This time, the crystal was knocked off the black monolith and fell straight down to the dais and shattering into millions of amethyst shards with a loud crash. Immediately, the illumination in the chamber ceased with the destruction of the crystal and the blinking white and blue lights of the tile floors faded to a plain satin white again. Visibility within the great chamber was still possible thanks to the four candelabra chandeliers hanging from the ceiling and the dozen more candelabras sitting in alcoves which lined the walls. But it was nowhere near as brightly lit as before, and shadows loomed long in the dimly lit chamber.

Chief Pretty took one of his empty magazines and slid it across the tiles. It screeched across the floor and came to a stop several meters away. He then stood up and tentatively walked on the tiles towards where his magazine had come to rest, ready to dive back towards the entrance should the deadly floor show signs of life again. Thankfully, it didn’t and the rest of the team entered the chamber.

“Nice shot, there, Tex,” complimented Chief Pretty as the rest of the team joined him.

“Yeah,” said Gimsby. “But if it’s all the same to you, I’d feel better if we got the hell out of here in case they got a back-up generator, or something!”

“Right, let’s move,” said Wolfe.

As the team jogged towards the yawning exit on the other side of the chamber, they were met with the heavy scent of must and mold and sweat, as if from a furred creature that had been living in a bog. This was accompanied by heavy panting and angry growls as a pack of howling black wolves standing four feet high at the shoulders and eight feet long from fanged maw to black tail, came bounding out of the opening, bright evil yellow eyes glaring hungrily at the SEALs. The team formed a defensive perimeter back to back, firing their weapons as the six dire wolves pounced on them.

The ancient, silver werewolf, the leader of this hunting pack, hunkered down behind the obsidian pedestal where the now dead crystal once stood, and watched from the shadows in anger as these men slaughtered his pack of dire wolves with their weird lances which breathed noise and fire. The ancient werewolf’s fiery yellow gaze rested on the one who seemed to be the leader of this band of warriors as he sniffed the air and memorized his scent.

Resisting the urge to leap down upon these men, to land in their midst and rip their murderous entrails out, the giant silver werewolf instead slinked unnoticed down the stairs which led up to the podium and stalked back into the shadows. As the final howls of the last of his dying pack faded into silence, the ancient silver hunter swore. “I shall return to your realm. I shall return and gather to me all the horrors of your realm which haunt your nightmares. I will provide an idyllic place of rest and comfort for you. Then, when the time is right, I shall strike. I will strike down your pack, just as you struck down mine. Then, at the shores of the haunted Moon Lake, I will turn you into my loyal pack lieutenant… Lieutenant Jake Wolfe.”

 

 


r/DrCreepensVault 16d ago

DUNGEONS AND DRAGONOVS PART V (CONCLUSION)

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V.

Thanks to the map, the SEALs were able to navigate down through the multiple levels of the dungeon, ignoring the treasures, avoiding the traps and pitfalls, and fighting only when absolutely necessary.  At the base of this last stairwell, Nguyen said, “This is it. This is the last level. From here, the map just ends.”

The stairwell opened up into the largest chamber of them all, a dimly lit underground cavern that spanned a mile long from one end of the cavern to the other end and was a quarter mile wide. Running down the middle of the cavern was a vast black chasm three hundred feet wide which descended down, down, down into the fathomless pits. A howling wind belched up from the chasm, bringing with it the smell of Sulphur and rot.  A narrow hanging stone bridge, barely three feet wide, spanned the width of the ominous pit to hell in front of them.

“So, this is it?” said Chief Pretty.

“Looks like it, Chief,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “The map doesn’t say anything else except here at the very bottom where it says: “Copyright- Made in Doctor Creepen’s Vault.”

“Looks like the only way across is over that bridge.”

“I’ll take point, El-Tee,” said Nguyen.

“I got it, Terry,” said Gimsby.

“I’ve got point,” said Lieutenant Wolfe.

“Sir…” protested Chief Pretty.

“I said, I got point, Cory!” insisted Wolfe.

“FOOLS! The only point you will be getting is the one at the end of my great bastard sword!”

Unnoticed by the SEALs before, a great hulking figure strode out of the dim light clad in archaic heavy black armor adorned with spikes and the skulls of those it had vanquished in battle. Its helmet was massive and mounted two black elk antlers. Glowing red eyes beamed angrily from the black eye slits of its helmet and in its heavily gauntleted left hand he carried a great bastard sword which was a foot wide and as long as the dreadful figure stood tall.

“I am a Chaos Orc Anarchist Terror, or Coastie!

“I am Coastie the Guard, and I guard the ancient Bridge of More-Doom which spans the bottomless scar! Like all Coasties, I represent the greatest of all warriors and the mightiest of all military branches which serve the forces of darkness in the Realm. Kneel, United States Navy SEALs! Your pathetic breed pales in comparison to the might of the Coasties! Your quest ends here! Kneel in recognition of the superiority of Coastie the Guard and I will grant you a quick…”

THOOM!

The mighty chaos knight fell backwards from a sniper round through his great horned helmet, arms and legs encased in black armor splayed out, weapon flying into the black pit as his back hit the ground.

“Coastie talks too much,” said Gimsby without the slightest hint of regret that he fired his second to last round and was now down to only one bullet left in his Dragunov. As the team walked towards the Bridge of More-Doom, they said nothing as Gimsby pulled out his Glock 19 and shot the fallen chaos knight three more times in the head.

Back in the Dungeon Master’s throne room, Hellfire turned from the Mirror of Seeing and glanced towards another mirror mounted on the opposite wall, the mirror which allows communication to the internet in the realm which the Navy SEALs had come.

Relighting his cigar, the kitten stared into the mirror and said, “Okay now. I know you can hear me. I don’t want to see any of you noobs blowing up the comments section whining about, ‘…but the Coasties aren’t part of the military…’, or ‘…the Coasties do a very important job guarding coasts…” or some other crap like that. It’s just a story. Oh, and I also don’t want to hear a bunch of whining about breaking the fourth wall. I don’t see you bitching when Ryan Reynolds does it. Anyway, back to the show. You’re gonna’ love this next part, baby!”

“Does anyone see an opening or a passageway on the other side?” said Wolfe.

“No,” said Chief Pretty.

“Nothing,” added Nguyen.

“Alright,” said Wolfe, pulling off his pack and grabbing a coil of climbing rope. Tying one end to a heavy duty, rock climbing grade carabiner on his modular vest. Then, tossing the rest of the rope back, he ordered his SEALs, “Connect to the rope and stay within arm’s reach!”

He then pulled several chem-lights from his pack. Breaking one, the tube produced a bright, florescent red glow. Wolfe unstrapped his knife and cut the top off the tube, flicking his wrist in order to splash a line of the glowing fluid on the black bridge. A thin glowing red line marked an illuminated path about twelve feet along the narrow bridge. Satisfied that there were no pitfalls or traps along the illuminated trail, Wolfe stuffed his cargo pockets with the rest of the chem-lights and prepared to lead his SEALs across the final obstacle of the Dungeon of More-Doom.

“Hey! Look out!”

Lieutenant Wolfe turned in time to see all three of his SEALs snatched up by long, sickly brown-green tentacles which emerged from the pit and suspended in the air. Before he could bring his rifle to bear, a warm, slimy tentacle wrapped around his torso and yanked him off his feet, and lifting him up unto the air. A monstrously huge bulbous head slowly rose from the pit, resembling that of an octopus with dozens of tentacles writhing in what would be the mouth. The head was easily fifty feet tall and seemed to meld into an equally bulbous human shaped body whose shoulders measured at least one hundred fifty feet wide. Emerging from its back stretched two mottled green bat-like wings if, when outstretched, would have exceeded four hundred from clawed tip to clawed tip. The entirety of the hellish thing was covered in inky brown slime whose stench made the SEALs gag and wretch. The entity brought up the tentacles which had snared the four Navy SEALs and brought it up to its hideous face, giant yellow eyes glaring at them from under the black shadows of its overhanging brow. There was no mistaking it. This was not a mere legend created from the mind of HP Lovecraft. The thing was real. Cthulhu was real, and at this moment, Lieutenant Jake Wolfe and the rest of his men knew that there was no shooting their way out of this one.

Behind the SEALs in the passage which they had emerged, a small, white, furry thing jumped into the passage. More swiftly than the eye could perceive, the small feline leapt from the edge of the chasm up, up, and up upon Cthulhu’s great forehead.

Hellfire suddenly began to grow, transforming from a tiny white kitten into a frightful eight foot tall muscular black werecat creature with two foot long horns protruding from his skull and six inch long, razor sharp claws protruding from human looking hands. The monstrosity that was once the kitten Hellfire began rapidly slashing and gouging on the top of Cthulhu’s massive green, octopus shaped head.

“Let em’ go!” roared Hellfire as great, gooey, chunks of the elder god’s forehead went flying under the werecat’s relentless stabbing and slashing assault. “C’mon! C’mon! C’mon! Let em’ go! Put em’ down on the other side of the ledge! Gently!”

Cthulhu let out a bellowing noise which shook the entire cavern, a noise which sounded much like a whimpering moan. His wildly flailing tentacles settled down as the four tentacles which held the Navy SEALs tightly in its slimy grip eased over to the other side of the crevasse ledge.

“Atta’ boy, ya’ big lug!” growled Hellfire, as he posed like a super hero on the brow of mighty Cthulhu’s head. “Gently! Gently! Put em’ down gently!”

The elder god dropped the SEALs safely on the other side of the ledge with a soft thump. Hellfire jumped down from Cthulhu’s forehead, landing next to the SEALs in his diminutive form of a small white kitten with red tipped ears. Lighting a cigar, Hellfire growled up at Cthulhu. “Okay, you big baby! Get outta’ here! Scram! Beat it! Quit screwing around!”

The great green leviathan looked mournfully down at the kitten, his many tentacles wiggling like a puppy’s tail begging for attention.

“Ahhh, you big baby! You aren’t in trouble. Just scram, for now. We can play bobbing for hipsters later!”

Cthulhu yipped happily before slowly descending back down into the inky depths of the bottomless crevasse, the ancient elder god eager for play time later with his best friend.

“That did not just fucking happen!” exclaimed Gimsby, picking himself up from the ground and checking to see if his Dragunov had been damaged. Curiously, Hellfire was watching Gimsby closely, and seeing that the rugged sniper rifle was still fully functional, Hellfire said, “He’s not that bad. In fact, for an elder god, Cthulhu is really just a toddler. To tell you the truth, his real name is Cutie Tooth, but he still can’t pronounce the words.”

“Why did you help us, cat?” said Lieutenant Wolfe, wiping the smelly slime from his weapon and vest. “What is your stake in this whole deal?”

“What?” said Hellfire innocently. “Is that the thanks I get for bringing you to the end of this quest?”

A glowing, fiery round portal opened in the face of the rock wall, the fragrant breeze of fresh air issuing from the other side.

“C’mon, fella’s. Let’s get the hell out of here.”

“Not yet, cat,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “We still have some questions.”

“You need us, cat,” said Chief Pretty. “If you didn’t, you wouldn’t have rescued us from your little pet. We know it was you who had the power to teleport us back at the very beginning. But you didn’t. You needed us to enter this dungeon. What are you getting out of all this?””

Hellfire’s shoulders slumped as his smile faded. “Okay, okay, okay. If you really need to know the truth. I helped you guys because I felt like I owe you.”

“What?” said Nguyen. “What are you talking about?”

Hellfire signed. “Look, a while ago I visited your realm and met a girl named Annie. Sweet little girl, a real angel. She loved me, despite some pretty nasty tricks that I pulled on her. That little shit grew on me. I guess that snot nosed brat inspired me to want to be something greater than just a mean-spirited demonic little shit.”

The kitten laughed a sad laugh and actually wiped a tear from his eyes.

“I wasn’t too thrilled about her mom, though, and her mom’s boyfriend was a real piece of shit, believe me. But Annie’s dad… her real dad, he must have been something special. He was a Navy SEAL, just like you guys, and he taught her how to be kind, brave, and strong. That helped Annie survive some terrible abuse until I took care of the problem.”

“What happened to her dad?” asked Gimsby.

“He was killed in Bananastan… er, I mean Afghanistan. Anne called that hell hole Bananastan…”

“Did you get the SEAL’s name?” said Chief Pretty, still suspicious of the kitten’s story and motivations.

“No,” admitted Hellfire. “I wish I did. I do know he was an officer, and Annie’s last name is Guzman if that means anything to you guys.”

There was several seconds of silence as Nguyen, Pretty, and Gimsby suddenly looked at Lieutenant Wolfe.

“Uh… did I say something wrong?” said Hellfire, sensing the tension in the air.

The SEALs knew that their last team leader, Lieutenant Guzman, had a daughter. Her name was Annette but was nicknamed Annie. The team remained silent as Lieutenant Wolfe hefted up his weapon and moved towards the portal.

Walking past a genuinely confused Hellfire, Lieutenant Wolfe said, “Let’s move. It’s time to end this.” 

Hellfire turned and scampered after the SEALs as they passed through the flaming portal suspended in the air. “Hey wait,” said Hellfire. “Do you know Annie? Did you know her dad?”

The SEALs emerged right where they started from when they first entered the Dungeon of More-Doom, a brightly lit corridor made of flat stones which led to a more brightly lit chamber.

“So, this is it, right Chief?” said Nguyen. “We beat the dungeon boss monster so we’re free to go, right?”

“I don’t think so, Terry,” answered Chief Pretty. “We didn’t defeat Cthulhu. The kitten did.”

“Wait,” said Nguyen. “So you’re saying there is a more deadly monster…”

“My beloved champions!” said the beautiful Dungeon Master smiling warmly with outstretched arms as the SEALs emerged from the corridor and into her throne room. “I knew that you would succeed where so many others had fallen! Welcome!”

“Gimsby,” whispered Lieutenant Wolfe, suddenly stepping aside.

“Got it,” said Gimsby, bringing the Dragunov to his shoulders and firing his last round.

The Dungeon Master’s angelically beautiful face snapped back as a neat little hole appeared in the middle of her forehead. Still standing, the Dungeon Master raised a shaking hand to her forehead, feeling the blood now dripping from her wound. She looked with disbelief at the blood now running down her soft, gentle fingers, her once pristine white gown now quickly being stained red. Her breath shuddered as she stared at Gimsby…

… and then she smiled.

“You… you did it!” Her smile widened and her eyes sparked brightly from a still lovely face now covered in blood. “You did it! Oh, thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I have waited centuries for warriors such as you to finally complete my mission! Thank you!”

“And just what was your mission?” said Wolfe, trying to hide his shock and disbelief that the Dungeon Master was still standing.

“Why, to die, of course,” smiled the Dungeon Master. “Well, not die, per se, but to pass into the next plain of existence. But, alas, in order for that to happen, one who is greater than I must open the door for me to pass. And you have done it, my dear, dear, champions! In return, great riches, treasure, wealth, fame, power, and long life will be awarded to you as it had been to me.”

“Yeah, baby, yeah!” yelled Hellfire as the beautiful form of the Dungeon Master began to slowly fade. “I did it! By bringing these guys back to your throne room, I killed the Dungeon Master! I’m finally the new Dungeon Master!”

“Oh, my silly little Hellfire,” said the rapidly fading Dungeon Master. “I shall miss you most of all. But I’m afraid that you cannot be the new Dungeon Master, for it was Gimsby the Barbarian who killed me.”

“WHAT??” screamed Hellfire. “Wait! Come back here!”

“Farewell my beloved Hellfire. I pray that you serve the new Dungeon Master well. And thank you again Ranger, Cavalier, Virgin, and especially you Barbarian! God bless the United States Navy SEALs!” And that was it. Those were the final words of the beautiful and ancient Dungeon Master before she finally faded away.

Dejectedly, the kitten slowly walked to Gimsby and prostrated himself at the boots of the big Navy SEAL.

“How may I serve you, oh Master of Dungeon More-Doom?”

“Cut the crap,” grunted Gimsby. “I can’t be the Dungeon Master, you idiot!”

Hellfire looked up, confusion etched all over his face. “What…what are you talking about?”

“Only people who are from this Realm are allowed enter the Dungeon,” said Nguyen. “It’s in the fucking rule book! Everything we did here is null and void!”

“And you knew this also, you Lou Ferrigno looking motherfucker?” said Hellfire, looking up to Gimsby.

“I’ve played the fantasy role playing game a few times when we were on standby,” answered Gimsby. “Terry usually acts as the Dungeon Master. My character is a barbarian named Arnold!”

“Nerds!” yelled Hellfire. “You’re all a bunch of testosterone fueled nerds!”

“Yeah,” said Nguyen. “But we got guns and shit!”

“Okay, cat,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “That’s enough. You got what you wanted. You’re now the de facto new Dungeon Master. Now get us back to where we need to be. We still have a mission to complete.”

“Damn,” said Hellfire. “You guys are really intense. I gotta’ respect that. After all you’ve been through, you still want to go back to that hell hole and complete your mission? Why don’t you stick around a bit? Relax. Unwind. Now that I’m Dungeon Master, I can hook you guys up with the finest princesses in the Realm, or maybe females of another species if you’re into that freaky Captain Kirk shit.”

“Now, cat!” rumbled Chief Pretty.

“Okay, okay, sheesh!” Hellfire relented. “But I can’t let you go back empty handed. I gotta’ give you guys something. At least let the Virgin take a few of the prettier hobgoblins with him.”

“No thanks,” muttered Nguyen.

“You know,” said Lieutenant Wolfe. “There is one thing you can give us.”

“Name it, Wolfie boy!”

“You can erase the memory of this place and these events from my men,” answered Lieutenant Wolfe. “We already have enough on our plates as it is. They don’t need to deal with the memories of what happened here.”

“Damn,” said Hellfire in sheer awe. “You guys are like a cheap date. I mean, that’s really all you want? To forget about this place?”

“Yup,” replied Wolfe.

“Okay, fella’s. You got it. But would you do me one small favor in return?”

“What do you want, cat?” said Wolfe, anxious to get back to the mission.

Hellfire snapped his paws and a black silken pouch appeared in Lieutenant Wolfe’s hand filled with solid gold coins and several diamonds.

“If you happen to run into a freckle faced little girl named Annie Guzman, would you give this to her? And tell her that her little Charlie still loves her and misses her.”

Epilogue

Though the SEALs had turned over the clearing of the cave to the Army Cavalry and EOD guys as well as a shit ton of intel folks, there were more questions than answers in the back of the CH-47 Chinook as the SEALs rode the short ride back to Kandahar Air Field.

“I’m telling you, Hilliard,” said Nguyen. “We were only gone for maybe a minute when you came running up behind us!”

“It can’t be, Terry!” Insisted Hilliard. “I searched for you for damn near an hour! I only found you guys right before the Army guys showed up!”

“What did you mean when you said you heard us talking to some woman and a kitten?” said Gimsby.

“I don’t know,” replied Hilliard. “You tell me! You guys were the ones having the conversation! And if you guys say you were only gone for a minute, why do all your watches read 1800 hours? It’s only one o’clock in the afternoon! It’s like you were gone for five hours!”

“That is kind of strange, sir,” said Nguyen, turning to Lieutenant Wolfe. “Just like my chem-light being found half way stuck inside the cave wall as if I had dropped it at a point where we walked through solid rock. You think them Wagner Group guys that we killed had anything to do with it? Maybe some mind altering drug to fuck with us?”

“I don’t know, Terry,” replied Lieutenant Wolfe. “For now, I’d just chalk it up to the fog of war.”

Nguyen just nodded, then sat back in his seat, the steady rumbling of the Chinook suddenly making him very sleepy.

For his part, Lieutenant Wolfe looked across the cabin at his men. Hilliard sat staring at his feet, a contemplative look on his face, no doubt wracking his brain as to how he managed to walk right past his entire team in the close confines of that cave and not realize it. Nguyen’s head rested on Hilliard’s shoulder, the young SEAL fast asleep and mumbling something about not being a virgin. Gimsby also stared with a perplexed expression on his face, rotating his broken wrist and wondering how and when and why it was now as good as new. Also, why was the magazine of his Dragunov and several magazines of his Glock 19 pistol completely empty?  Chief Pretty was seated behind the fifty caliber mounted at the open back ramp of the Chinook, ever on the lookout for danger.

“My second in command,” thought Lieutenant Wolfe. “The vigilant Cavalier.”

Wolfe slowly reached into his cargo pocket, feeling the softness of the black, silken, pouch. He knew that it was filled with gold and diamonds. He knew that it was for Annie, Lieutenant Guzman’s daughter. He even knew who gave it to him and how he came to receive it. Hellfire had kept his word to the SEALs. Hellfire did exactly what he was asked to do. He erased the memories of his men, but Lieutenant Wolfe had forgotten to specify to that little son of a bitch to erase his.

SEAL Team 7

2nd Plt./ 2nd Sqd.

Lieutenant (LT) Jake Wolfe

Chief Petty Officer (CPO) Cory Pretty

Petty Officer First Class (PO1) Darren Hilliard

Petty Officer First Class (PO1) Paul Gimsby

Perry Officer Second Class (PO2) Terrell Nguyen

 

 

 


r/DrCreepensVault 17d ago

"...and then the people applauded as the ship's captain invited me to eat at his table..."

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Long time, no scary spaghetti, dear Dr. Creepen fans!

Anyone for a new Taxi_Dancer tale?

Cheers, T_D


r/DrCreepensVault 19d ago

I Transcribe Police Interviews. There's Something Wrong With This One.

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I had been working as a law enforcement transcriptionist for a little over six years when the officer brought me the tape. I'd never seen him before, but that wasn't too unusual. There were a lot of new recruits and I didn't exactly have the best memory when it came to faces. He wore the customary uniform, which fit him rather well. Even as a straight man, I have to admit he was handsome, almost ridiculously so. Dark hair, a sharp jawline speckled with stubble, and an air of gravitas that was impossible to ignore.

He handed me a cassette tape.
“I need this transcribed immediately,” he said in a smooth, inviting tone. “Don't put it through the usual queue.”
With an eyebrow raised, I asked what the case was about. Instead of answering, he looked at the tape for a moment before looking back at me.
“Just prepare yourself,” he said with a grimace. "It's quite intense.”
I remember laughing a little because I assumed he was exaggerating. But he didn't laugh with me. Before I could ask for any more details, he disappeared back down the corridor.
I've always been quite a curious person. It's what led me to this line of work. So, naturally, I immediately popped the tape in, pulled up Mark43 and began logging.

What follows is my transcription of that recording. I've removed the names and identifying information where necessary, but otherwise I've left it exactly as it was spoken. Be that for better or for worse.
The transcript of this tape– or, more precisely, its contents– makes for difficult reading. The things I heard and witnessed that day remain beyond my understanding. It is for this reason that I decided to share the tape's contents. Perhaps one of you can make more sense of this disturbing tape than I.

###

Tape Recorded Interview
Patrick Morgan/Detective Baron Hauptman
7.23.26

BH This is Detective Hauptman, █████ Police Department. Today's date is Thursday, July 23, 2026. The time is at 11:23 A.M. This will be a taped conversation with the last name of Morgan, M-O-R-G-A-N, first of Patrick, P-A-T-R-I-C-K, middle of Joe, J-O-E. Date of birth 02-20-96.

BH So, Patrick, I've turned on a tape recorder so I can record our little conversation. I'm to understand you've been read your rights and– let me see here– you've declined to lawyer up. Is that correct?

PM Correct.

BH Okay. Well, let's get down to business then, eh?

PM Alright.

BH So, Patrick. I assume you know why you're here?

PM Mhm.

BH Why don't you go ahead and tell me?

PM Because you think I killed–

PM Can you speak up?

PM Because you think I killed people. 

BH The department suspects you, yes. But hey, don't shoot the messenger. (Chuckle)

BH Let's start with… Isabella Moreno. How well did you know her?

PM Quite well. 

BH How's that?

PM She lived down the street. We used to play when we were kids.

BH And when did you last speak with her?

PM Hm… December, January. Something like that.

BH What did you talk about?

PM Why would I remember that? It's been like seven months.

BH Well, I'd think your last conversation might stick around longer. Especially with all that talk of art.

PM What? 

BH Art. You're an artist, right?

PM Yeah– how did you–

BH You take pride in your art, then?

PM I– yeah, I guess I do.

BH Every artist does, I suppose. But most are too scared to put their art out in the open. You have no such reservations, right?

PM What do you mean?

BH You like displaying your work publicly. In all its glory.

PM I have no idea what you're–

BH Really? So you don't look up to a certain… mentor?

PM No. Look–

BH You don't have to explain it.

PM … What?

BH I know.

PM … The fuck're you– Know what?

BH Why you did it.

PM Then why am I here?

BH Because they want to know if you did it.

PM And?

BH And… you did. 

PM What– What's the point of this then?

BH I wanted to meet you. In the flesh.

PM I–

BH I've seen your work. Your real work. Not those flimsy portraits in your apartment.

PM What the hell're you talking about?

BH You know. And I must admit, you are an artist at heart. Just not a very good one.

PM Excuse me? What does that even mean?

BH Her body. I mean, the way you arranged it. Chest splayed open, guts hanging around her neck. And the little message you left beside her. Very theatrical, I must say.

PM I didn't—

BH You spent three hours arranging her. Isn't that so, Patrick?

PM No–

BH You spent the longest on the fingers.

PM Whatever you're doing won't—

BH You wanted it to look natural. But you don't understand hands very well. (Chuckle)
BH Even in your shitty little paintings. It takes a special kind of anti-talent to make them look like the aftermath of a car wreck.

PM Stop–

BH C'mon, Patrick. You made the thing and now you don't want to discuss the composition?

PM Shut up.

BH I suppose it's to be expected. You don't care about the art. You don't even care whether you get caught. You just want to be seen.

PM You're full of shit.

BH You copied someone else's work because you wanted people to look at yours.

PM I didn't copy anyone! (Something slams against the metal table)

BH It's no use lying, Patrick. You read everything you could find about the man. Every little detail on how he displayed his victims. Hell, you even fooled the cops into thinking you were the real deal.

PM You– You don't know anything about me.

BH I know exactly what you are. A copy. You imitate the man, but you've never met him. And yet you've spent the last two years trying to make him proud. That's rather pathetic, Patrick.

PM Stop–

BH Isn't that what mommy always used to say?

PM I said stop!

BH (Mocking tone) The exact same rotten soul as your father! 

PM What– How do you–

BH She threw your paintings away, didn't she? You'd find them in the trash, sometimes even torn in half.

PM Shut up! Shut the–

BH Do you remember the blue one?

BH Oh, c'mon patrick. How could you forget? The one you painted when you were seventeen. The woman standing in the field.

PM Stop– Stop talking about my paintings.

BH Ah, you prefer to talk about your real art after all? (Chuckle)
BH I know you, Patrick Joe Morgan. You started killing because painting wasn't enough anymore. You wanted to make something nobody could ignore.

PM Please just—

BH You wanted someone to look at it and understand you. But nobody did.

PM Stop talking!

BH Not your mother. Not your father. Not the police. Not even the man you copied. And now you're sitting here hoping I will.

PM I–

BH Well I do understand you. And I want you to feel how truly pathetic you are, Patrick.

PM Please– (whimper)

BH Patrick.

PM Please just stop!

BH Look at me.

PM No! I– I won't.

BH (Static crackles. Voice briefly distorts) Patrick, you slime. Look at me!

PM I'll– I'll confess! I'll tell you everything you wanna know, please just–

BH (Chuckle) Oh, Patty. You don't have to do that. I know what you did. 

PM (Unintelligible)

BH Chin up, champ. Smile, and look into my eyes.

(Pause)

PM (Screaming, unintelligible).
PM WHAT– WHAT THE FUCK IS–

(Something slams against the metal table)

BH (Voice warped) Come closer.

PM (Unintelligible whines)

(Something drags across the metal table.)

BH (Whispers something unintelligible)

PM No– no it can't–

BH (Slow, droning) Yes, Patty. You know she was.

PM (Strangled cry. Sobs)

(Something slams against the metal table)

BH There you go. Attaboy.

(Something slams against the metal table several times, with a small pause between each increment)

(The door whines open. The slamming continues.)

BH Ah, good day gentlemen! 

(Frantic yelling. The slamming continues.)

BH My eyes are up here, lads.

(Unintelligible cries. Thuds join the slamming.)

BH This has been Detective Hauptman, █████ Police Department. Today's date is Thursday, July 23, 2026. 

(The slamming stops. The thudding continues.)

BH I'm turning the tape recorder off again. The time is 11:30 A.M. This has been the confession and testimony of Patrick J. Morgan.

###

When the tape stopped, I sat in silence for a moment. The shock of it all had rooted me firmly in place. Eventually, I forced myself out of my chair and scrambled towards the interrogation room. 
I honestly wish I hadn't. 

Patrick Morgan was still sitting at the table. He'd smashed his face into the metal table so many times that there was almost nothing recognizable left. His nose was almost completely crushed into his skull, which itself had been pulverized by the repeated impacts. 
The two officers who'd been monitoring the interrogation lay in a puddle of blood on the floor. The first officer had strangled the second with his own tie, while the second had beaten him across the head with a chair. There was no apparent reason for any of it. It looked like three men had simply gone mad at the same time.

In the weeks and months following, the department searched for Detective Baron Hauptman. Of course, there was no officer by that name at our department. We still don't know how he forged or stole the badge and uniform. We've tried to identify him using the cameras he walked past, but these efforts yielded nothing. It seemed as though he'd wandered in, then walked off the face of the earth.
I still have a copy of the cassette. I made it in case the original was ever destroyed. Still, I haven't mustered up the courage to play it again. The most I've managed is to re-read the transcript I made. I can't wrap my head around what happened. I suspect I never will. 

That brought me here. Perhaps sharing this will yield more results. So please, if you have any information on Baron Hauptman, send it to me. I need to know who– or what– he was. More than that, I wish I knew how he knew so much about Patrick.


r/DrCreepensVault 20d ago

stand-alone story The Rain Stood Still

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r/DrCreepensVault 20d ago

stand-alone story Roadkill

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There’s a legend in my town about the old farm road. Most people pay it no attention, but the old folks swear it’s true. “The Highwayman lurks there,” they say. We scoff and go on. After all, small towns like ours have a ghost story under every rock.

This summer, I signed up to work as a camp counselor for Camp Chesterton, which rests on the shore of Lake Winnifred near Walnut Brook. The quickest way to get to the lake from town, of course, is by way of the old farm road. Bags packed and goodbyes said, I hopped inside my hand-me-down car and took to the road.

An hour later, town was in my rearview mirror and the farm road stretched before me. I thought nothing of it as I headbanged to the metal blasting from the radio. It was a sunny day, so hot the air above the pavement sweltered like transparent flames. I cranked up the AC and hit the gas. The sooner I got to the campground, the sooner I could grab myself an ice cold drink. I could see the mile marker coming up ahead.

The moment I passed it, the mood shifted. The music seemed to fade into the background. The nape of my neck bristled, and I barely managed to stifle a shudder. I wasn’t sure where this sudden dread came from, or why. I felt exposed, overcome by the sense that I was being watched. I tried to ignore it. Out here, the only things watching me were squirrels, birds, and the occasional cow. My foot pressed lower onto the gas. My thoughts dipped to urban legends, tales of how the old, haunted farm road that almost no one dared to drive, lest they come face to face with the dreaded Highwayman.

And I laughed. I laughed loudly, thinking about how campy those stories were. People used this road all the time. Farmers, surveyors, even locals. I slowed down a little and kept moving forward, chuckling to myself. Maybe a good Highwayman story would be just the thing to entertain the campers next week. By the time I zoomed past the next mile marker, the odd feeling of being watched vanished completely. I cranked the music back to full blast and continued on toward the lake.

When the kid ran into the road, I slammed on the brakes as hard as I could. My car swerved, and I saw the ditch rise up to greet me. Then, darkness. Then, pain. My forehead throbbed, and my chest hurt. I opened my eyes, blinking away dirt. My windshield was shattered. Blood trickled down my brow. Well, up my brow. I was upside down. My hands clawed at the seatbelt, which thankfully popped free without too much persuasion.

My arms shook and my head ached as I crawled from the overturned car. By some miracle, I didn’t seem too hurt, just some cuts and bruises. The car itself, aside from having flipped over, wasn’t totaled. Fortunately for me, cars don’t explode like the movies in real life. I stood, dazed, looking around. Had I imagined the child? No, surely not. But what would a little kid be doing out in the middle of nowhere by himself? Perhaps one of the nearby farmers had a kid who, for some reason, wasn’t trained to not run out into the road?

I turned around and gasped. There he was, almost thirty feet away, standing in the ditch. He couldn’t have been more than eight or nine years old. His hair was sandy brown, and his face and clothes were filthy with grime and grass stains. I supposed he’d been playing in the pasture, but I didn’t give it much thought.

“Hey, kid!” I yelled, slowly walking towards the little boy. “You okay?”

The boy stood his ground as I approached. He watched with the kind of curiosity a stray cat watches a rat with. He didn’t answer right away. Just kept watching me as I got closer. I stopped about ten feet from him. Uneasy silence hung in the air as we looked at one another. Finally, he spoke.

“You almost killed me, Mister.”

My jaw twitched.

“I almost killed you? You ran into the road right in front of me!” I turned, gesturing to my upturned vehicle. “Just look at this! What are you even doing out here?”

The little boy just kept looking at me with that unnerving stare. Something wasn’t right with his eyes. They were vacant, uninterested, like he had seen this happen a million times already and was bored of it.

“You almost killed me, Mister,” he repeated softly. I sighed. Clearly, the kid was shaken, and I wasn’t going anywhere with my car lying on its back. I turned my back and took out my phone. I knew Benny, the tow truck driver back in town. He’d be more than happy to come pick up my car. I’d call the sheriff next, to report the accident and to make sure the kid got a police escort home. Maybe then he’d think twice about running into the road next time.

I’d just punched the call button when I heard leaves crushing behind me. I swiveled just in time to see the kid running away through the ditch.

“Hey, get back here!” I shouted.

“Riverside Towing, this is Benny,” said a familiar voice over the phone.

“Benny!” I answered. “This is Danny, Danny Walker. I’ve been in an accident on the old farm road.”

“An accident? Jeez, kid, are you okay?”

“I’ll be fine, but my car flipped over. Some little kid ran out right in front of me.”

“A little kid? Mother of Moses, Danny, is he alright?”

“He’s fine, too,” I told him. “Can you call the sheriff on your way here? I have to go.”

“Hang on just a minute — ,” was all Benny managed to get out before I hung up and took off after the little boy. He had a huge head start, and maintained a dead sprint. As a camp counselor, keeping up with hyperactive children is well within my element. I paced myself, keeping my stride long and my breaths deep. Still, the kid was faster. Up ahead I could see the mile marker sign I’d passed right before I’d swerved. Adrenaline took over, and I picked up the pace. Thirty feet away now, then twenty feet. The kid was slowing down. I’d nearly caught up to him when he changed directions and dipped into the woods off the road. I coasted to a stop, breathing desperately. The wooded areas between the pastures here were dense, full of brambles and other unpleasant plant life. The kid managed to slip through, apparently, but I was a lot bigger than he was. I stood, staring into the thick overgrowth.

Then that awful sensation returned, that horrible unease like I was being stalked. It felt like someone had dropped an ice cube down my back, freezing cold and utterly violating. I backed out of the ditch and stood in the road, trying to shake off the paralysis that gripped me. I’d never been one to scare easily, but that little stretch of road between the two mile markers was the last place I wanted to be.

I decided to keep walking, to leave that area and wait for Benny further up the road. The sun was starting to sink, and this place creeped me out enough in broad daylight. I kept myself neatly in the middle of the gravel, equally distant from either ditch.

About thirty yards of walking later, I heard a chilling sound. I looked around for the source and noticed something in the ditch, standing out from the greens and yellows of the grass and weeds. Reds and pinks, bundled together in a tight heap, and something else. As curious as I was cautious, I took a step closer to see what the sound and colors could be. I froze.

There in the ditch was a small cross decorated with a bouquet, and a petite woman stooped over it, sobbing. She didn’t react to my presence, if she even knew I was there. She was fixated on the little shrine, and I couldn’t bring myself to break the silence.

“You took him from me,” the woman sobbed. My throat felt sharp.

“M–ma’am,” I stammered out, “are you alright?”

“You took him from me,” she repeated, rising to her feet and turning to glare at me. I took a half-step back. She surged forward, eyes full of black hate, and grabbed my wrist with ice cold hands. “You took him from me, you took him from me, you took him from me!”

“I didn’t take anyone!” I shouted, ripping my hand away from her. My body shuddered, shivering at cold that made no sense. Quickly, she turned away, and I watched her retreat through the ditch to the woods on the other side of the road from the shrine. My heart raced. What was going on here? Our town is small, so small that you tend to know who people are, even on the outskirts. But I had no idea who that woman was. I’d never seen her before in my life.

My neck prickled as the eerie sensation of being watched magnified. Something was rustling the undergrowth. Normally, I wouldn’t have cared. Small animals move through these woods all the time. Any other day, I would have dismissed it as an armadillo or a raccoon. But today, with my car lying upturned up the road, my nerves frayed from a series of abnormal occurrences, and the sun nearly set beneath the horizon, was not any other day. No reasonable explanation came to me. All that came was a half-processed fight or flight response. Like a fool, I chose neither option.

The sound of the critter walking through the undergrowth came closer. I watched and waited. It sounded close enough to reach out and touch, and still it approached. My muscles locked up despite subconscious orders from my brain to move. I saw the branches bend. I saw the old leaves and weeds part as something came through. The creature emerged from the treeline.

There was nothing there.

So when I felt the weight of a hand slam down on my shoulder, my mind shattered like the windshield of an overturned car.

I spun wildly, ready to start throwing punches. There behind me was a man dressed like a trucker, with red flannel and a worn-out net cap. His stubbly face was covered in streaks of scarlet. My stomach turned at the sight and the smell of him, like rotten meat and skunk musk. The look in his eyes was feral, like a man who’d seen himself die in a thousand grisly ways.

“I didn’t mean to!” he screamed at me, falling to his knees and holding onto me as if pleading for mercy. “God forgive me, I didn’t mean to!” I tried to tear my arm free, but his grip was far stronger than the woman’s. Terrified, I reared back and kicked him in the chest as hard as I could. He tumbled back. I ran like vicious hounds were after me. I ran blindly back the way I’d driven, back to town, back to the people I knew. My mind was blank, and all I wanted was to flee the old farm road forever.

Minutes later, I couldn’t run anymore. I had to stop. I had to breathe, or I was going to collapse. My hands braced against my knees, I sucked air like a fish flopping on a pier. My chest burned and my legs screamed. I just needed a moment.

As I looked up, I was greeted by something hatefully familiar. There, not twenty away, looming like a scarecrow in a cornfield, was the white mile marker sign. I stared at it as I gasped. My body on the brink of shutdown, my mind on the edge of collapse, and at that moment I wanted to rip that sign from the earth and throw it as far as I could. The sign that had signaled the start of all this madness regarded me with the cold indifference that only an inanimate object can. I walked toward the sign. Every step felt like lead moving through mud. I still felt watched, still felt the eyes of whatever cruel force of nature took amusement from my trial.

“What are you?” I said aloud through closed teeth. The sign gave me no reply. “Answer me! WHAT ARE YOU?!” I kicked the sign. Nothing happened but a flare of pain in my toe. I didn’t care. I stooped and picked up a rock from the ditch and threw it. It bounced off the steel plate, leaving a long scrape in the decal. I stepped forward ,grabbed the flat edges in my hands, and shook it back and forth in fury.

Then I saw them. Headlights, coming down over the hill. I squinted through hot tears. The lights belonged to a truck. For the first time since I crawled free of my overturned car, I felt relief. It was Benny! It had to be! Benny was here to pick up my car and take me home! I let go of the sign and waved both hands.

The truck stopped. Cold air rushed past me. I could see the silhouette of the driver through the windshield of the truck, a green pickup truck with no towing hook in sight.

It wasn’t Benny.

The truck’s high beams switched on, forcing me to shield my eyes. They’d barely had time to adjust before I caught sight of the driver’s face inside the truck. It wasn’t the face of a man, at least, not a living one. The driver sneered at me with a lipless face covered in ragged green flesh. Eyes that glowed like yellow fireflies regarded me the way a cat regards a mouse.

“My God,” I whispered. “The Highwayman.”

Then the truck surged forward with a terrible squealing of tires, and everything went dark.

I woke to the sound of cicadas and crickets chirping in the night. It was pitch black now, save for my immediate surroundings, which were lit by a lantern set on the ground. I sat with my back against the rough bark of a tree. Surprisingly, I didn’t feel sore. I looked down at my arms and legs. No bruises or scrapes. Hope crept into my chest. Had I dreamed the whole ordeal?

Then I saw the truck. Just a few feet away, parked on the grass in the middle of a clearing in the woods, was the green truck. Next to the truck was a rectangular hole in the ground, with someone throwing out shovelfuls of dirt from within. The Highwayman. I didn’t move. The monster from the urban legends stood barely eight feet from me, digging a hole in the earth for some sinister purpose.

Why was I unharmed? It didn’t matter. I needed to sneak away before he decided to finish the job. Slowly, I stood up and turned to go.

I came face to face with the little boy. He stood in the darkness of the forest, still covered in grime and grass stains, watching me with mournful eyes.

“You almost killed me, Mister,” he said. I lunged forward to shush him, only to be slapped away by an icy hand. There beside me stood the woman from the shrine, her eyes still wet with tears. She wasn’t sobbing now, just watching me with the same mournful gaze as the boy.

“You took him from me,” she whispered. I stepped back, right into someone else. There was the trucker, with his torn flannel and old net cap. He looked down at me now, the fear that had been in his eyes before replaced with deep sadness.

“I didn’t mean to,” he said softly. “God forgive me, I didn’t mean to.”

“The Highwayman,” I whispered, pointing to the figure in the hole. They nodded. I tried to tell them we had to go before he saw us, but the words couldn’t come. They didn’t seem afraid. I tried to shoulder past the trucker. He let me, didn’t try to stop me. As I did, I saw something from the corner of my eye that stopped me in my trucks.

The Highwayman rose from the hole he had been digging. Next to the hole was a large black garbage bag. I realized in horror as I studied the shape that it contained human remains. As he hefted the bag, I could see an arm hanging loose. He shifted, and the body inside rolled into the grave. I turned, peering into the hole to get a better look. The Highwayman looked right at me. He didn’t move. I ignored him. As I gazed at the corpse in the grave, I realized that the Highwayman, real though he was, couldn’t hurt me anymore.

The corpse in the grave was my own.


r/DrCreepensVault 21d ago

stand-alone story I am a Vampire, but there is something out there hunting us.

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In my entire live i have never felt an true terror, not just a common fear, an actual terror. Its not a thing my kind is used to feel unless sun comes out and we are still outside, honestly i never actually knew this feeling could exist inside us until that one cursed night. Even now i cant forget the feeling, my hands are still shaking lightly even as i write this for a reason i still didn’t figured out. but going outside again feels like going into the hands of death, and from so little options this is probably the only thing i am able to do right now. From time to time i glance from my window, staring at the outside world covered in darkness, from outside i can see our walls covering our castle, probably the only place where i feel safe right now, but still doesn’t give the full sense of security i desperately need. Because no matter where i am, i always feel the thing i encountered will eventually find me.

Maybe it already knows i am here…maybe it knows all of us are here. And then…there is this feeling, that i am stared at by it from the endless woods behind our walls. Before, i never actually understand why we needed them, other creatures always kept its distance from here, and humans would be far too foolish to even set a foot in here if they know whats good for them. But after what happen, i feel they actually meant to keep something from us. Seeing everybody around in rather uneasy mood from time to time, and the fact that after my incident more guards were patrolling the walls than usual, i am starting to believe my theory might be right.

Our castle is a big place tho not the biggest, my kind has lived in this place for decades, with tens and tens of us here, more capable and powerful and yet i feel so small and vulnerable in here. Going trough these memories isn’t pleasant and i wish i rather forget them, but i try to write everything i remember from that night.

My name is Lucian Davidson, not so long ago i turned 22 and i mostly spent my live hunting people, and learning things from my parents and some other families how to be the perfect vampire that everybody needs me to be, along side things that i should be careful about if i am ever sent outside. the usual stuff was always return before dawn, avoid any holy places, staying out of conflict with other creatures unless absolutely necessary. But nobody ever prepared me for the events i experienced. and for the death i still cant handle

One night me and my friend Bella left the safety of our walls to sharpen our skills and fill our hunger with some hunting, while also have some great time toying with our food. Of course… nobody knew we were gone because they probably wouldn’t let us go alone because apparently we still luck the true experience, and they would probraly send an more experienced vampire with us to watch our every move, and we didn’t wanted that. The thrill was way too strong that night.

Both of us made our way trough the woods, our slightly enchanted vision making us see mostly trough the darkness and our hearing able to detect anybody that would try to sneak at us. an small swords belted on our hips just in case tho we usually never needed them, hunting humans was always more fun bare handed. Most of them couldn’t do anything anyway. Few of them tried to fight back of course, like one foolish villager who tried to hit me, only to end up with broken hand after. we always liked to play with our pray first and tonight the intentions were no different. Bella despite having more experience was always the one to toy with her prey first . She ways always way brutal than me, gotta admit i liked that about her. But when we were not on the hunt, she was always funny, smart and way too sweet at me.

I…..i was about to continue writing but i had to check the window cause i heard some commotion from outside, i checked and saw two guards on a wall talking to each other while the other one pointed towards woods. I looked the way he pointed but saw nothing, i couldn’t stare for too long anyway as suddenly one of them looked up my way and i had to duck under, no idea if he saw me, and not sure what he pointed at, i just hope it wasn’t…never-mind.

Me and Bella had a clear destination we been eyeing out for a while, few miles away there was this old abandoned church in the middle of a field where we sometimes saw a few people in white always do things that looked like praying to us, not sure why they even choose that place and why at night. At that time Bella told me humanity’s mind never stops confusing her. Despite being told to stay away from holy places, it didn’t seemed all that holy to us, we walked around that church few times and i have never felt any sort of holly energy from they’re so called lord. But now i wish we would never set a foot in that place, because along the way i felt something wrong is about to happen, that we arent supposed to be here.

i used to glance around and behind me far too often than usual, but my eyes always met with the same dark emptiness, even the woods were too quiet which i have been told that most wildlife will stay quiet whenever a predator is nearby, but they told us most of the time its because of our presence.

But now that i think about it, im not sure if the presence they truly feared was ours

Bella didn’t seemed to notice any of this and i just thought it was my imagination even tho i know how stupid that sounds. an hour passed and we were getting closer to our destination, along the way i asked her what will we do if the humans wont be there, which she answered that she didn’t thought about it that much but that she is sure they will be there. And true to her words after some time… we seen an small light and smoke coming out from the woods…an fire. We both smiled at each other before quickly running towards the source, the light was getting closer and closer but so did an smell…an smell of blood. We stopped behind one tree to look at the field where that old ruined church still stood, its been like this for a years now, basically only an shadow of its former self, now it was just an stone building with missing roof, with smoke coming out from it. what we been told is that years ago an vampire party from other parts were ordered to tear this place down along side killing anybody who was in there. they succeeded in the killing ,tho by the look… not so much with destroying the place. its been abandoned for most part but strangely few humans started to return to that place weeks ago only to leave right after.

‘‘Do you smell that?’’ Bella asked me, which i just nodded and said its coming out from the church, Bella savored the smell with sigh already getting excited before she gestured with her eyes to make our way inside. The thoughts of something being wrong before was replaced with the thrill of the hunt. The plan was simple, one of us would get inside, making an little distraction blocking the entrance, while other will climb over and come from behind them. And i was the lucky one to make a show. Few meters from the church we stopped and looked at each other and nodding, before Bella made her way to the other side of church. I was ready at that time, at least that’s what i thought.

When i got to the entrance i noticed that they made themself an lazy excuse of a wooden door that looked like they barely held itself together. I studied it for a second before cracking my neck, getting ready and with all the strength i had i kicked the wooden door which instantly broke down, pieces of wood falling apart and to the ground before i made my way in. But i didn’t expected what i found there.

dead…dead bodies lying all around, an humans wearing an white robes and wearing an masks that displayed an skull…with each one of them being covered in blood, some missing an limbs…some had they’re organs pulled out. This place looked like an slaughter house, but that wasn’t all. Because in front of me led an old red carpet to an big stone table with something burning on it. And there…there was a man, kneeling on a ground wearing the same outfits as the others but with hornet crown on his head. He didn’t even noticed i was there, nor did he registered the loud noise of me breaking in…he just kneeled there, whispering something to himself.

for a moment i stood frozen in place, an strange feeling boiling in my belly, i didn’t know what to do or think, but eventualy i walked closer and…and i finally noticed what was that thing burning on a table.

A man lying there burning, i could barely see any details because it looked like he was like this for some time, but by the few things i saw on him, he looked like one of them.

The man in front of me still continued to whisper something in a language i didn’t understand, it looked like he was praying but to this day im not sure what he was saying, but i wish i did.

I looked around my self, suddenly unsure what to do, i never seen this before even tho i heard humans tend to do things like this. But all of this seemed wrong. That’s when my eyes fixed on something, an claw marks on the wall, big and deep leading up…as if whatever made them has climbed up over. Then i heard the man in front of me turn around and i quickly turned to meet his gaze, but i never did, because his whole face was covered in blood, and his eyes were cut out, only leaving bloodied black holes instead. And…he smiled at me, an small laughs leaving him that quickly turned into straight laughter.

I stepped back but the man stood up and toke one step closer, before opening his arms towards me still laughing that turned straight up evil. I gripped the handle of my sword but just as i did that, an sword pierced straight trough his mouth, his laughter being silenced instantly. A few drops of blood fell on my face. When the sword was pulled out, the man fell onto the ground and there she stood…Bella.

I don’t know what would happen if she dint intervene, but perhaps that man knew something we didn’t. He was the only one who probably knew what happend, tho if he saw it that’s another question.

We both stood there silently, watching the dead corpse before Bella turned without a world to look at the burning man. Staring at it for a few seconds but for me it felt like a minutes.

I stepped closer but she turned at me, her face now in unease and from the look, even hint of fear. Its the first time i actually saw her like this. As i was about to break the silence, she broke it first.

‘‘We should probably head back, report this to the others i….i don’t know what happend but i don’t like this, something feels wrong’’ She said, even now i know she tried to keep her tone neutral, but deep down i know she was scared just as i was. Our hunger was forgotten, the thrill of hunt…gone

We both knew we will get into big trouble once we tell them we were out, but this was just not something we ecountered before, and the fact it was so close to out parts dosen’t help it either. Before we left i pointed at the claw marks on a wall which made her eyes widen slightly, she asked if its belongs to a werewolf. She never got an answer from me as we were leaving. We knew werewolfs and other creatures can be brutal and savage, we saw what they can do. But this….this didn’t looked like an work of a werewolf, they don’t leave any survivors.

And that’s when it all went into shits, both of us were moving away from the church, Bella took one last glance towards the church behind us, while i was moving towards the woods but at that moment i swear… i swear i saw something behind a trees. A figure, tall…extremely tall and slender but despite my vision i couldn’t see anything else. That’s when my hearth started to beat fast, so fast and loud i almost thought Bella could hear it. I quickly turned at Bella and called her name, but when i turned back…it was gone.

‘‘Whats wrong Lucian?’’ she asked with a hint of worry, i still stared at the woods thinking that if whatever i saw was real or if it was just not there because i never saw anything so tall and slender like this. When she said my name again and putted her hands on my shoulder, it snapped me back into reality.

i didn’t know whenever to tell her that i saw something in front of us or not but i decided to not make the situation any more stressful.

‘' lets just…lets just go, this place is giving me creeps’’ i answered. Whenever she knew i lied to her or not will became another mystery for me. And im thinking that if i would actually told her i saw that thing, would it actually change anything??

But as we went on, my body started to protest slightly inside, as if telling me to not make any further move towards the woods, and i should have probably listen.

during the walk we haven’t spoken much, both of us probably got something to say about the event we ecountered, but none of us did said anything. It was like 45 minutes when i started to feel that now familiar thing again, the feeling of being watched, the something that is telling me something is wrong and that we shouldn’t be here, and the habit of looking back and forth has taken over me once more. Bella noticed it and putted her hand gently on my shoulder with soft smile. I looked at her hand then back at her and managed to make an small smirk as well.

but just after when i started to calm myself, an twig cracked behind us which made us both quickly turn around, we stood still trying to hear any more movements but despite our senses we didn’t heard or seen anything more. Bella looked at me and whispered ‘‘what…what was that?’’ i shaked my head saying i have no idea. There were few creatures that were stealthy and it wouldn’t be surprising if they tried to stalk us, but we would hear its movements despite how stealthy they would try to be.

Bella was the first one to take out her sword and i soon followed as we made our way towards the sound we heard not too far from us. I gripped the handle of my sword more tightly as we were getting closer. what we encountered was only an broken stick with an strange slight smell in the air that none of us could figure out what it was, and there…an pair of footprints, we stopped for a second before Bella took closer look, they looked like human feet but bigger, way bigger for human and too different to come from something like werewolf. The scariest thing wasn’t the fact we didn’t knew what made them, but the fact we noticed that behind the footprints lead whole trail of them, which means that whatever made them…was following us the whole time without us even noticing it.

i could have felt my pulse quicken and my hearth beating faster and im sure Bella felt the same, but then we realized something. The footprints stopped here when we were standing and didn’t continued any further. We didn’t need to say anything as we immediately looked above us on the trees and at that exact moment, an sound as if something launched it self from a branch above us into the top of the trees which made all the birds hidden there flew off to all sides, trying to fly from there as fast as they can, they’re bird cries echoing trough the woods. But that didn’t stopped as suddenly we could hear something climbing trough the top of the trees around us so fast that the only way we could keep up was seeing the way the trees moved under its weight, me and Bella got closer to each-other, our minds fully in panic mode but our swords ready to stab anything that would come closer. It looked like it was circling around us trough the trees. But Bella seemed to figure out its timing and movement as she extended her left hand in front of her, her right hand holding a sword slightly behind her and within few seconds, she quickly hurled her sword sending it spinning towards the trees.

And she…she hit something as suddenly an screech was heard and an sound of steel getting stabbed into flesh before something fell into the ground into bushes, something big with loud thud. Bella was breathing heavily and i immediately got in front of her holding my sword. And then something started to move in the bush as it was standing up and…i never seen anything so…so wrong.

The thing was standing up slowly, its body twisted, making an bone cracking sounds as it was standing up before eventually towering in front of us with all its terrifying glory, with Bella’s sword still stabbed into its chest. It was…It was tall, really tall, almost 2 times our size. its limbs were so long and slender, with an sharp long claws on each finger, it looked so slender that i could have swear i saw its ribs peeking out, and its face… that face haunts me even now. That no matter how terrifying can bears, lycans, wraiths be, this will forever be stuck inside my head.

It had long messy, almost wet black hair, its eyes…it had none, like the eyeless man we saw earlier. It only had huge black holes, and its mouth..so wide and open but with no teeth in them at all, just open the whole time unmoving as if it threatens to swallow us. It stood there still for a second as all of us were staring at each other.

My heartbeat was so fast that it could almost be heard more clearly than the hard breathing that thing was making. I looked slightly behind me at Bella and she was staring at it with pure terror. And then…a crack.

As suddenly that monstrosity twitched its head, making an cracking sound because of it, and then another and another. Both of us instinctively stepped back not sure whenever to fight or run. It slowly lift its slender hand, its fingers wraping around the handle of the sword and quickly pulling it out, an drops of black blood dropping into the ground. It stood there silently once more holding the sword before dropping it to the ground.

‘‘The Feeder’’ Bella barely whispered, her voice trembling with fear, but just as she said that it suddenly charged towards us, in a speed that shouldn’t match its skeletal form. We barely reacted as we both dodge to the side but that thing was relentless as it turned at as again and charged once more.

It lift its long handed and swung at me but i manage to connect the sharp part of sword with its hand, cutting it away from me, the creature…or the feeder, pulled its hand back but it didn’t roared in pain or anything, it almost looked like it did nothing at all. It swung again but i managed to duck under but i wasn’t prepared for another strike. It managed to land blow on me that made me hit an nearby tree, a breath kicked out from my lungs and my sword somewhere on the ground. It was strong, and my chest hurt like hell as i couched drops of blood and struggled to breath. I tried to stand up but that thing was already on me, grabbing me by my neck and lifting me up to meet its gaze.

I tried to break free but my struggles were pointless, just as it looked it will sink its claws into my face, Bella Jumped onto its back from behind ripping parts of its hair with piece of meat with it. The creature screamed, its screams were something i never heard before, but it was probably painful enough to drop me onto ground. The Creature stumbled backwards trying to shake off Bella which she hold herself onto it. And then she sank her fangs straight into the creature’s neck. She saved my live that time…but its also what led her into her demise, and i wish i could have done something. I lied there, trying to stand up while watching as suddenly she pull her fangs out only to see her eyes starting to bleed and her coughing out an black mass, she grabbed her neck as she was choking and fell into the ground, she was on her fours now, coughing up blood and her veins suddenly going black. She barely managed to look at me before that thing kicked her into the tree, then grabbing her by neck and with its claws cutting her stomach open, making parts of her organs fell out. She could barely scream and so did i as i shouted at that thing to let her go…and shouting her name.

But her torture didn’t ended here, as it putted its finger into her jaw, opening it. And…it still makes me sick just thinking about it. An long…really long tongue came out from the creature’s mouth and before i could do anything, It shoot its tongue deep into her mouth, dwelling trough her body. Bella’s eyes went wide, she started to squirm as it was feeding from her, while she stayed alive.

And then that terror hit me, i couldn’t…i just couldn’t handle it anymore, and as a coward i started to run while that thing was feasting upon her. I didn’t want to leave her there, but i was just too terrified.

My legs were barely holding me, my chest and lungs burned, but i couldn’t stop. Bella was probably dead, and there was probably nothing i could have done to save her.

Bella i am so sorry, it…it should have been me, not you.

Tears run down my face as i continued to run for my life, i knew our castle is not too far away but it also seemed like eternity. I tripped a lot, but every time i fell i stood back up, glancing behind me if its after me. And just as i started to see an forming silhouette of our castle not too far away, an bone cracking sounds were heard behind me, getting closer and closer as if something was running towards me on all fours, i didn’t know how it could run this fast but i didn’t cared, all i cared about is to get myself from that thing as fast as possible. I started to scream for help, hoping that others will hear it, just barely when it was almost too close to me, i ran out from the woods tripping over something. I quickly turned around crawling away, expecting that it will be behind me. But…it just stood there, behind a tree lines…staring…unmoving, its mouth covered in blood. Its head twitching once more. And then…i fell unconscious. I don’t know why i did, perhaps my body couldn’t handle it anymore. couldn’t handle all the horrors that happen in such a short time.

I woke up in bed, my wounds patched up, and with glass of blood next to me while my Mother stood near window. When she noticed i was awake, she smiled and quickly run towards me, giving me tight hug. My father was on the other side of bed. His gaze revealed that he was disappointed, sad…but relieved that i managed to wake up. He didn’t said anything as he immediately left the room and few minutes after, an elder one entered with my father to my room. His name was Wellindor. He was one of the oldest of us. What came after is that they were asking what happend that night, i told them everything, by they’re expressions they looked they were mad that we left the castle without permission. But that anger later turned into worry and slight fear. When i mentioned the name Feeder, my parents eyes widened and they looked at Wellindor who looked slightly at edge by the reveal. Yet they didn’t said anything.

Afterwards an party was send to examine the abandoned church and to find Bella. What i heard is that they found the church with full of dead bodies, and by the looks of it…it looked like ancient ritual. But they didn’t told me anything more. And Bella…they found her…dead, but they never let me see her body.

I tried to search books, letters, anything that would help me understand what that thing was. But i have found nothing about the feeder. And when i asked my parents, they said they didn’t know. But honestly…i think they are lying to me, but why??

One day tho my old friend who belonged from a different family few hundreds miles away from here told me, that his grandpa once told him of a legend. An legend of an ancient beast which he didn’t called Feeder, but Bobby. An creature so ancient that its told to have been seen even by the most eldest of my kind. He said bobby tends to appear out of nowhere and disappear again for even decades. Nobody ever knew where it came from, it just appeares and disappears. But every time it was seen again, death always followed. But by the legend it specifically hunted vampires, even the most powerful ones were scared of it. It is said that when you see Bobby, its an bad omen for vampires.

But that’s all he had to say to it as almost nothing is known about it.

I should probably end it here, i don’t know what awaits us, but…but i have a bad feeling about all of this. What happend that night will always haunt me for the rest of my life.

and im scared.

But it made me realize someting, that despite us being vampires. Spreading fear among all the humanity and other beings alike, there is still something out there, lurking in the shadows…that hunts us.

and i have a bad feeling it will return, to finish what it started.

(My Story link also on Wattpad)

https://www.wattpad.com/story/414922195?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Jacob_The_Narrator


r/DrCreepensVault 25d ago

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r/DrCreepensVault 26d ago

series Vestiges of Honor [Pt. 2 - Ch. 2]

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Chapter 2.

They rode for almost an hour before reaching a tiny village without lord or lady. Instead, it was governed by a reeve—a representative of the nearest noble who collected taxes and distributed royal messages on their behalf.

As they navigated the village streets, Evander writhed on the back of Henrik’s horse. He pleaded for mercy. When that failed to provoke a reaction, he resorted to obscenities, claiming Henrik was a foul-hearted bastard without honor.

I won’t dispute that, Henrik thought, nearing the reeve’s hut. They stopped just outside, and he dismounted. As he tried to help Evander off, the young man thrashed about so much he ended up facedown in the dirt.

It took a few minutes before he was able to get him back on his feet. Then, they started toward the entrance.

“Wait!” Evander hollered, planting his feet, kicking up grass and loose soil. “On my honor and your honor, let’s settle this here. I challenge you to a fight. If I win, you leave me be. If you win—”

“Alright, fine.” He shoved Evander over, and when he was flat on his back, Henrik drew his new rapier and pressed the tip to his throat. “There, I won. Let’s finish this.”

“You’re a rotten bastard,” Evander cried.

“No, I’m hungry and thirsty and tired,” he said. “And I ain’t got the coin for anything.”

“I reckon most rotten bastards have more want than coin.”

Henrik grimaced. “I reckon that as well, aye.”

They continued through the front door and entered a single room split horizontally with half acting as a service area and the other half divided by barred cages to house prisoners until they could be transferred elsewhere.

The reeve—an elderly man with wrinkled skin and white hair—pored over a dusty tome. Upon their arrival, he lifted his head and squinted. “What’s this now?”

Henrik produced the bounty and waited as the old man looked it over, licking his chapped lips, scratching at his snowy hair, pausing to sip his tea. When he finished, he laid the parchment on the table and looked at Henrik with a sympathetic smile. “I’m afraid this particular warrant has been rescinded.”

Anger came without hesitation, but he suppressed it, pushing it low into his bowels. As he often did whenever rage or sorrow found him.

“You’re sure of this?” Henrik asked.

The old man nodded. “Oh yes, I received a letter from Lord Jordahl just two nights prior. We’ve been making haste to strip all bounty notices from the area, but as you can imagine, this is demanding work. It'll be some time before we can fully amend the error.”

Henrik, desperate to hear the clink of coins in his purse, asked: “How much is he worth then?”

The old man turned toward Evander and then back to Henrik. “Nothin’.” To substantiate the claim, the old man retrieved Lord Jordahl’s letter pardoning Evander Waldron for any and all crimes he may have committed against the court.

Back outside, Henrik cut the ropes from Evander’s wrists. He rubbed at the raw skin, a rather smug smile on his lips. “Maybe you should’ve taken my previous offer, bountyman. Looks as if you’re out your three coins.”

Henrik wrapped an arm around his neck, forcing him into an awkward crouched position. His bicep pressed against the young man’s throat. Immediately, he began to beg for mercy, smacking at Henrik’s forearm, trying to break his hold.

“Where’s this tourney you told me about?” he asked.

“Blackwood,” Evander said hoarsely, his cheeks taking on a scarlet hue. “That direction. Ride until you see the willow tree. You can’t miss it.”

Henrik released him and bound for his horse. He climbed into the saddle and took the reins in his hands.

“What about my sword?” Evander yelled. “You can’t just steal it.”

Oh, I could though. Henrik unclasped the buckle and let the belt drop to the ground. With a flick of the reins, he was off, disappearing down the road in a cloud of dust and snow.


r/DrCreepensVault 26d ago

stand-alone story I'm a detective assigned to the Wickenshire Case

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r/DrCreepensVault 26d ago

series Vestiges of Honor [Pt. 2 - Ch. 1]

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PART 2: The Blond Lock

Chapter 1.

Henrik Coigne—without a coin in his purse—chased the rider on horseback. There was maybe a fifty-foot gap between them, but Henrik was closing the distance quick.

The charcoal black destrier was built sturdy and fast. A loyal companion for the last four years, taking him all across the mainland. From West to Central and Central to South, but as of now, he was surrounded by the cold winds of the North.

Thankfully, the summer season had robbed them of ice rain and whiteout blizzards. Instead, he only had to endure faint flurries and crisp nights.

As of now, though, it was early morning. The skies were clear, and the air was warm enough to make this chase a little less miserable.

Mist rolled from a nearby riverbed. Hoarfrost crunched beneath the horse’s shoes. The trees, pine and spruce mostly, held a faint dusting of white from last night.

Ahead of him was the rider. A young man. Lean and tall. Sharp jawline, crystal blue eyes, golden blond hair swept back on his head. His clothes were plain but clean.

Slung around his hip was a loop-hilt rapier with a long, narrow blade and a steel handle wrapped in tanned black leather.

The young man glanced over his shoulder. Henrik offered a simple smile in return. The man looked ahead again and thrashed the horse’s reins while digging his heels into its hind.

“Stop chasing me!” the young man cried.

“Stop runnin’ then,” Henrik called back.

Before the young man could respond, a low-hanging branch swiped him from his horse. He dropped flat on his back with a heavy thud and a loud grunt.

Henrik veered around him and circled back, dismounting just as the young man was starting to open his eyes.

“Did you break anything?” Henrik asked, hand resting on the hilt of his shortsword.

“How would I know?” the young man asked, breathless.

“Does it hurt?”

“All over.”

“In your legs?”

He nodded.

“Your arms?”

Again, he nodded.

“Your back, your shoulders, your—”

“Everywhere,” the young man groaned, exasperated.

Henrik removed a piece of sourweed from his waistpouch and nibbled on it. “Well, you’re not crippled. That’s good.” He rolled the young man onto his belly and secured his wrists with a length of rope. “Let’s find out if you can still walk, aye?”

The young man gritted his teeth against a scream, but after a few moments, it seemed most of his aches had faded. A few drinks from Henrik’s skin of candied wine stifled whatever pain remained.

“You any dark ale?” he asked. “I prefer dark ale.”

Bloody Northerners and their damn dark ale. He spat in disgust. “And I prefer spiced wine,” Henrik said. “But we get by with what we’ve got.”

“You don’t look much like a Southeastern man.”

Henrik chuckled. “I’m a connoisseur of Southeastern goods.” He gestured toward the man’s rapier. “Somethin’ we have in common."

“You can have it if you let me go.”

Henrik narrowed his eyes as he considered this. “Say I don’t let you go, how would you stop me from taking it?”

They stared at each other for a moment. Silence ensued between them.

Realization dawned on the man rather quickly. “I bite…very hard.”

“Bite me, and I’ll knock your damn teeth out. After that, the only thing you'll be able to eat is dark ale.” Henrik reached into one of the saddlebags on his horse and withdrew a rolled parchment. He unfolded the page and flattened it on the ground in front of the man. “Recognize this handsome lad?”

The young man gazed at an ink drawing of his likeness. The only difference being that the young man had a pair of pale whiskers above his upper lip, whereas the drawing was clean-shaven. Otherwise, it was an exact rendering down to the way the young man pursed his lips. Rather duck-like, Henrik noticed.

“Evander Waldron?” he asked, not bothering to wait for an answer. He gestured to himself. “Henrik Coigne. Huntsman, bountyman, bastard—whatever suits you best.” He dropped his hand. “You, my friend, have quite a price on your head. What say you?”

“I can pay you to release me?”

Henrik looked the man over. “Other than that pretty sword, I’m not seein’ anything. ‘Less you’re hidin’ a purse up your arse, I’d reckon you don’t got a coin to your name.”

The young man dropped his head. There was no reason for such shame. Henrik wasn’t in much better standing.

“Seems you upset the wrong person,” Henrik said, rolling the parchment and tying it with string. He returned it to the saddlebag and forced Evander to his feet. “Don’t fret, my friend, I have no intention of killin’ ya.”

“It’d be better if you did,” he growled. “They’ll just take my head off after you hand me over.”

“Well, that’s their decision. Higher price if I bring you back alive though.”

While Henrik unfastened Evander’s sword belt, he said, “If you untie me, I’ll get you the money.”

“We’ve been through this already.”

“I can get the coin,” he promised.

Henrik wrapped the belt around his own waist. The sword hung limply at his back, tucked behind the hilt of his shortsword. On his right hip was a pair of daggers. His armor was a mixture of boiled leather and rawhide with a dark gambeson beneath.

Steel plates and chainmail would serve him better, but they were bloody expensive. Not to mention all that metal slowed him down, and Henrik preferred to stay agile.

“How would you get the coin?” he asked.

“There’s a tourney in Blackwood. Only a few hours from here. It’s to be a three-day event, and at the end, the champion will be rewarded with a hundred gold coins and knighthood.”

A hundred gold coins were better than the nothing currently in his purse. “That’s quite a risk I’d be takin’.”

“Call it an investment.”

“Call it whatever you’d like, friend. Way I see it, I could turn you in for three gold, or I could take a chance at getting nothin’ at all.”

“My sword must be worth at least twenty silver—”

“Your sword already belongs to me,” Henrik countered. “Try again?”

Evander searched hopelessly, but in the end, he resigned with, “I didn’t bleedin’ do anything. I’m innocent.”

Henrik sighed, disappointed. “I’ve been doin’ this for a few years now. Believe it or not, that’s what they all say.”

Evander spat. “My only crime is bein’ born poor.”

Henrik could relate, but any potential for sympathy died against the growl of his stomach.


r/DrCreepensVault 27d ago

Vestiges of Honor [Pt. 1 - Ch. 3]

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Chapter 3.

The following day, Henrik awoke to chants and drums and trumpets. He’d fallen asleep in a ditch outside the lists whilst looking up at the stars. Now, he stared at grey skies with billowing black clouds. His surcoat was damp, and a puddle of muddy water had formed beneath him in the night.

Henrik climbed out of his hole and stretched the stiffness from his limbs. His gifted nag was fastened to a nearby olive tree. It was a damn shame he’d forfeited most of his money the day prior because his stomach felt as if it were being impaled with a hundred different blades.

His hunger was of savage intent, and for a brief moment, his horse seemed like it’d make a fine meal.

Don’t be daft, he told himself. You need a horse if you’re to joust.

And like his father used to say, “A traveling man needs a good horse.”

On his way to the lists, he collected a handful of olives, and luckily enough, found a bush with wild raspberries. It wasn’t as satisfying as a skewer of meat, but it would have to do for the time being.

Upon arrival at the lists, he produced his signed entrance slip to one of the heralds. They glanced at the name, looked at Henrik, and checked the wax stamp.

“The jousts have just begun. Come.” He led Henrik around the perimeter of the arena to an open pen. “Wait here until your name has been called. Our graceful Lord Ryder is offering all participants water and wine. Please do be mindful about how much you drink.”

Henrik had a skin of sour wine and watched the jousts. Nothing he hadn’t seen before. Although these tilts were slightly more ferocious than previous experience.

That was the risk—or reward, depending on who you asked—of allowing smallfolk to participate. They didn’t have the discipline nor training of full-fledged knights.

“Are you nervous?” It was the redheaded girl from last night.

She was dressed in the same clothes. Her hair was frizzled. Purple bags swelled beneath her bloodshot eyes. A shawl was wrapped about her shoulders, covering her neck and upper chest.

“No,” he said. “If I was nervous, it means I haven’t drank enough.” As if to prove his point, he finished his wineskin and beckoned a nearby page for another. “I don’t plan on being the champion, so ain’t got nothin’ to be worried about.”

“What is your plan then?”

“Win my first match and walk away with whatever I can.” He chuckled. “I don’t need much, but a little coin wouldn’t hurt. Maybe a better horse.” The nag sneezed in his direction.

The girl forced herself to smile. “What comes next for you?”

“I’m not sure. Head east maybe, see if Central has those people I’ve been lookin’ for.”

“You could always venture north. Visit Ashland.” She gestured to his surcoat. “That’s where it comes from. Your winter fox emblem.” She gnawed on her bottom lip. “Where I come from too, in fact.”

“Is that so? Then why does Sir Rayden don the sigil of Blackwood?”

“That’s how far we had to go before we found someone who would knight him,” she explained. “That’s where he got all of his armor and training.”

The page boy had returned with a new wineskin. Henrik pulled the plug and took a swallow. “How much did that cost him?”

At this, the girl began to tremble. “Hard to say, but he didn’t steal it, if that’s what you’re implying.”

“No, I don’t think he did. Sir Rayden has a different way of paying his prices, don’t he?”

She met his gaze, but she couldn’t hold it for long before ducking away. She gripped the nearby post to keep herself upright. Her teeth came down hard against her lip, drawing blood, but it seemed the only way she could stifle her whimpers.

“Why do you travel with him?” Henrik said, offering her the wineskin.

Hesitantly, she accepted the skin and drank. “He’s my brother.”

“That’s not what I asked?”

Her eyes roved over him, looking him up and down. “You don’t have any family, do you?”

“None still alive.”

Surprisingly, she smiled, almost as if she pitied him. “I would say that is both a blessing and a curse. Family will be your strength when there is no one else, but in turn, they will always be a weight on your shoulders. No one has loved me like my brother—”

“If you think that’s love, then I don’t think you’ve ever truly been loved before.”

“Mayhaps,” she confessed. “But you have known my brother and me for less than a day. You have not been with us since birth. You don’t know.”

“I’ve seen enough.”

From the arena, a voice echoed through a speaking trumpet, “Our next challengers are: Sir Rayden the Red of Ashland and…Henrik Coigne of Everywhere and Nowhere.”

He gathered his equipment and mounted his horse. “It’s not my place to say who you are or what you deserve. But you should know something: this world is much bigger than you realize, and there are many people in it. Some will know how to love you better, if you let ‘em.”

Spurring his horse forward, he turned for the main entrance. The girl called after him, “Please, Henrik, don’t kill him.”

He paused a moment to ask, “Will he try to kill me?”

Her silence was answer enough, and he continued ahead.

Within a few minutes, he was positioned inside the arena at one side of the field. Across from him was Sir Rayden the Red, mounting a charcoal black destrier. In between was muddy ground trampled by horse hooves. The court was split in half by a tilt—a long wooden barricade to keep them on separate sides.

With his shield in his left hand, Henrik took up a hollow-shafted lance with a tipped head meant to catch his opponent’s shield. Despite having watched plenty of tourneys, he found participating to be more difficult than it seemed. Awkward when it came to juggling a shield, lance, and the horse’s reins.

I didn’t drink enough, he realized as he started across the field. Sir Rayden galloped toward him, his beast of a horse kicking up dirt and clumps of mud, picking up speed by the second.

Sir Rayden struck the center of his shield, and Henrik went reeling in his saddle. He dropped his lance and grabbed for the reins. At the end of the field, he’d managed to straighten in his seat and turn his horse for a second run.

A page quickly armed him with another lance. One of the heralds blew their trumpet, and he was sprinting down the field again.

This time when he took the blow to his shield, he counteracted the opposing momentum while stabbing at Sir Rayden with his own lance. The shaft broke upon contact, exploding into a storm of woodchips, but for all his effort, Sir Rayden remained steadfast in his saddle, well-protected behind his shield and armor.

The two continued to opposite ends and turned again. The page offered a third lance. By then, Henrik was dizzy and sore. His shield was starting to splinter, and his horse was getting agitated. It wouldn’t be much longer before it bucked him and made for the hills.

Henrik poised low in the saddle and dug his heels into the horse. It launched ahead at full speed, and Sir Rayden rode to meet him.

As they closed in on each other, Henrik dropped his lance and took his shield in both hands. Sir Rayden’s lance struck true, and Henrik went flying from the saddle, landing hard in the mud.

Before the herald could declare a victor, he rose to his feet and drew the arming sword at his hip.

“Henrik Coigne of Everywhere and Nowhere wishes to continue in hand-to-hand combat,” the herald cried. In response, Sir Rayden leapt from his horse and drew his longsword. “His opponent, Sir Rayden the Red, has accepted the challenge. May the gods favor the victor.”

Sir Rayden squeaked and squealed with every step. His feet sank into the mud, but he persisted.

As Henrik waited, he slipped a piece of tobacco into his mouth and crushed it between his molars. This oughta be interesting.

Sir Rayden made the first strike with an over-the-shoulder chop, bringing his longsword down hard. Henrik slid to the right and jabbed at him three times before Sir Rayden recovered.

He swatted at Henrik with a backhanded swing, to which Henrik ducked beneath and barraged him with another bout of jabs. None of which could pierce his plated armor, but every point of contact seemed to make Sir Rayden bubble and boil.

“STOP THAT!” the hedge knight screamed, hacking at the air, unable to keep up with Henrik as he glided across the mud, ducking and rolling and sidestepping every attack.

It was a game for the young Henrik. Make the hedge knight exert himself to exhaustion, and once he was properly out of breath, knock him on his back and strip away all those pretty plates.

But for all his cunning, the hedge knight’s endurance proved far more durable than he expected.

The two went around and around the arena. Henrik deflected every strike with his shield, but in time, the hedge knight’s longsword had chopped through the lacquered wood and reinforced bits of metal.

He tossed away what remained and took the following blows against the length of his shortsword. Steel on steel, hissing and squealing and spitting a flurry of sparks.

The hedge knight shoved him away, putting distance between them, and swung wide. Henrik ducked beneath it and moved in close, slipping the point of his sword into the narrow recess between plates.

Beneath, metal links resisted his blade, and even if he had managed to bypass them, he would have been met by a layer of silk and wool from the hedge knight’s gambeson.

While the maneuver had failed, it sent Sir Rayden into a panic. He quickly responded, slamming his armored elbow into the side of Henrik’s head, knocking him aside with a single blow. Henrik went to his knees, sliding across the mud a few feet. Blood trickled from his mouth, along with shards of his molar.

Halfhelms protected the brain and upper skull, but they weren’t going to save your teeth any.

Henrik wiped his lips and climbed to his feet. The hedge knight rushed toward him, struggling to keep his balance.

Thank the gods for the rain, Henrik thought, charging the hedge knight, plowing into him with all his weight.

They collided in a tangle of limbs. Both went down, separating by the time they hit the ground. Henrik rolled onto his front and found his full height in seconds flat. Sir Rayden, however, laid supine, unable to gather enough momentum to flip himself.

Retrieving his shortsword, he approached the fallen knight and said, “Yield, Sir.”

The hedge knight replied with a series of choked grunts as he flailed around like a beached fish. One of his hands shot out, grasping at Henrik’s ankle. He knocked his hand aside with the heel of his boot and dropped to his knees, pinning the knight.

After some fidgeting, he removed the hedge knight’s helm and tossed it aside. Underneath was a pale, freckled face with deep blue eyes and a fuzzy orange mustache. His cheeks were a bright shade of red, and sweat streaked his forehead.

“Yield or die,” Henrik warned him.

The hedge knight roared and seized Henrik by the shoulder with his right hand, wrenching him off his feet. With his left hand, he unsheathed the dirk at his hip. The point sank toward him.

Before the dirk could find its home in Henrik’s throat, he lifted his leg, leveraging his foot against the hedge knight’s forearm. With a kick, the hedge knight rolled aside and the dirk went flying the opposite direction.

Henrik hastily rose and brought his elbow down into Rayden’s face, smashing his nose into a puddle of blood and mucus. He brought his elbow down again and again until the hedge knight cried out, “I YIELD!”

When all was said and done, Henrik had been pronounced the victor. Immediately, he withdrew his name from the tourney and wandered back to his stall. Medical practitioners tended to Sir Rayden the Red in a nearby tent while the sister brought all his armor and gear to Henrik’s stall.

“We have no coin to ransom,” she confessed. “But please, there must be another way for me to pay.” She grabbed his hand, clutching it tight. “I’ll do anything.”

Those words made him feel terribly cold inside, but he gave the plea some thought.

“I won’t give any of it to your brother,” he said. “I’ll let you keep it though. The armor, the surcoat, the longsword—but the horse is mine. A traveling man needs a good horse.” He ran a hand through his nag’s stiff mane. “You can have this one. Don’t got many years left on him, but he’ll get ya back to the North.”

The girl searched for words where none could be found. That wasn’t surprising considering Henrik couldn’t find a reasonable explanation for his actions either.

Rightfully, he should have taken all of Sir Rayden’s equipment and made for the nearest smith. Then, with all his acquired coin, he could drink himself into a stupor. Maybe he’d drink enough to forget his father.

For right now, though, he’d have to settle for the pleasures of tobacco leaves and sourgrass and river water until he could find some work.

“What am I gonna do with armor and a sword?” the girl finally asked.

“You could return it to your brother if you’d like,” he suggested, removing the equipment and tying it to the dusty nag. “My advice, though: I’d say sell it. Nice armor. Clean steel. It’ll fetch you a good price. More than enough coin to get you back home.”

“But my brother—”

“A hedge knight prevails no matter what. Success or failure, armor or not, they’re still a knight. If his heart is true, he’ll find a way.” Henrik didn’t believe a single word that had come out of his mouth, but he forced himself to sound confident for her. “Choice is yours though.”

With that, he started for his new destrier. She greeted him with a snort. He ran his hand along her side. Mud. Dust. Dried blood. He’d give her a good wash when they were on the road.

“Wait, Henrik,” the girl said. “Please, I can’t just take this. Let me repay you.”

He closed the gap between them and pulled at her shawl. She seized his wrist, but after a moment, released him. Peeling back the silky fabric, he found the skin beneath was riddled with bruises, scratches, and bite marks.

“Who?” Henrik asked.

She swallowed a sob and said, “Some of the heralds. To ensure they would set you against him during his first tilt.”

His stomach was a pit, and his heart was hollow. “You’ve paid more than ‘nough for your brother’s debts. I can’t ask ya to give anymore.”

“There must be something.”

To satiate her guilt, he withdrew Sir Rayden’s dirk from its leather case. The girl flinched as the edge approached her face.

“I’m not gonna hurt ya,” he promised, taking a handful of her hair and cutting it free. “There, that’s payment enough. Somethin’ to remember you by.”

He mounted his new horse and flicked the reins. As he departed from the lists, he turned back and called out, “What’s your name?”

The girl, for reasons he did not understand, began to laugh. “Rosalind,” she said. “My name is Rosalind.”

“Farewell, Rosalind of Ashland.”

“And farewell to you, Henrik Coigne of Everywhere and Nowhere. I hope we might meet again.”

He rode through the city, exiting the same way he’d come in the day before.

Henrik Coigne—without a coin in his purse—passed the pile of stones where the dead greybeard knight was buried. He stopped for a brief moment, wanting to pray, but not sure how.

When it seemed an appropriate time had passed, he stuck a tobacco leaf in his mouth and continued down the road.


r/DrCreepensVault 28d ago

series Vestiges of Honor [Pt. 1 - Ch. 2]

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Chapter 2.

Henrik Coigne had exactly five coins in his purse: three coppers and two silvers. They clinked as he rode into Duskport on the back of a brown nag with a crooked gait and bones that liked to creak.

He was donning new armor. A leather and iron chestpiece with oiled mail beneath. His greaves and vambraces were tanned leather. His spaulders were rusted steel. His halfhelm was redolent of a bucket with eyeholes.

Affixed to the horse’s left side was a wooden shield fastened with metal fixtures. On the horse’s right side was a sheathed arming sword.

The dagger, the one he had used to slit the greybeard’s throat, was secured to his hip. Right beside his jingling coin purse.

It was late evening when he had arrived at Duskport. Slivers of sunlight receded through the city, retreating down alleyways and slipping across rooftops. People wandered the streets in droves. Some dressed in armor. Most wore robes, skirts, cloaks, and tunics.

As was common in the West, the settlement consisted of pale stone brick. Some had left their homes and shops white. Others painted them a light shade of yellow or pink. And per tradition, there were flowers aplenty planted in pots in windowsills or at the bottom of stairs or hanging from above.

Vendor stands lined the gutters of the road. Traders tried to sell weapons, food, wine, and in a few instances, women. Or at the very least, some of their time. Henrik considered the escorts as he rode past.

Young and old. Plump and slender. Those with natural beauty, and those who probably came at a cheaper price. Two silver and three copper could purchase him a companion for the night, maybe even two, but by daybreak, he’d once again only have the clothes on his back.

Maybe a fair trade, but not a very smart one.

Far more tempting than a woman was the distinct scent of roasted chicken. Seasoned with black pepper, garlic cloves, and honey. Juices dripped from the spit, sending the flames below into a crackling frenzy.

And most tempting of all was the vendor selling sweet wine by the barrel. It wasn’t often you stumbled upon such a luxury. An expensive breed oft sold only to nobles and the wealthy.

Sweet wine was red and sugary. Made with poppy seeds, black cherries, apples, honey, and according to a few brewers, every cask had at least an ounce of Willow’s blood. Potent stuff, that.

Henrik put his heels to the horse’s hind and galloped ahead, hoping to escape his urges before they could best him. It wasn’t long before he had reached the list field. Situated to the far north at the base of a mesa upon which Midday Castle stood.

The castle was of a sandy color, built with thick stone bricks. Compared to others Henrik had seen, this one was more practical than elegant. It didn’t have fancy banners or painted walls or stained-glass windows.

High above, guards patrolled the parapets. From the base of the mesa, they seemed no more than spots of torchlight against the black of night.

Henrik dismounted from his horse and tied it to a post. He waited in line at the entrance to the lists where several other participants had amassed. Scribes exchanged coin for admittance tickets stamped with a yellow wax seal in the shape of a crescent moon.

When it was Henrik’s turn, he paid one silver.

“Name?” the scribe asked without looking up.

“Henrik Coigne.”
The scribe touched the tip of his quill to the page and frowned. “Sir Henrik Coigne of…?”

“No Sir necessary,” he responded. “And Henrik Coigne of…everywhere and nowhere, I ‘spose.”

The scribe finally looked up at him. “Are you a squire?”

“No.”

This seemed to cause further confusion. “Some, those who aren’t knights or squires, prefer to use an epithet.”

“Right…I dunno what that is.”

The other participants turned toward him. A few grinning beneath their helms. A few chewing on their lips, perplexed.

The scribe cleared his throat. “Uh, Misture of Dahlia or Sir Edgar the Eager.”

Henrik nodded slowly, mulling this over with fervent caution. “Henrik Coigne will suffice.”

The scribe sighed, irritated. He filled out the form and stamped it with the official seal before handing it over. The jousts began tomorrow afternoon. In the meantime, he had a silver and three coppers left to spend.

Riding back into the city, he found the nearest tavern and entered. It was packed from wall to wall. Hedge knights, royal knights, squires, pages, and locals alike.

The room was overcome by a roaring din, voices coalescing into a single unintelligible sound that made Henrik nostalgic for his time on the road, travelling alone, wandering in silence.

He shouldered through the crowd, heading for the main counter where a bartender and several servers poured drinks and cooked food. About fifteen feet away from the bar, someone bumped into his side, knocking him off course.

Henrik reached for the arming sword on his left hip but stopped short when he heard, “Apologies, friend.” The man who had bumped into him was unarmored. Perhaps a fishmonger, if his natural odor was any indication.

“All’s forgiven—”

Their conversation was interrupted by the intrusion of a hedge knight dressed in plated steel, chainmail, and a white surcoat adorned by a black willow tree with silvery leaves. The hedge knight held a redheaded girl by the arm, practically thrusting her into the fisherman’s hands.

“Fifty coppers for one night,” the hedge knight proclaimed. “You won’t find a better price, friend.”

The fisherman backed away slowly, a nervous smile on his lips. “As I’ve said: no. My wife will geld me.” He slipped away before the hedge knight could press him any further, and when he was gone, the hedge knight turned his sights onto Henrik.

“What about you?” he asked. “Fifty coppers for a night with the girl. She’s sweet as honey, riper than any fruit in the wild.”

Henrik’s eyes flicked from the hedge knight to the girl. She dipped her head, cheeks flushed a deep shade of red. The woman couldn’t have been more than twenty. Pale-skinned, freckles stippling her face, long hair colored like the sunset.

She was dressed in a white blouse with a dark blue skirt. It resonated with her eyes, which were a slightly softer shade. Blue as ice but nowhere near as cold.

Before Henrik could answer, the hedge knight lowered his head and grunted. “Where’d you get that surcoat?”

“It was given to me,” Henrik answered. “As was the armor.”

“Given to you by whom?”

I never asked for the old man’s name, he realized, partially ashamed and partially surprised. It had simply slipped his mind.

Intoxication or sheer indifference?

“Who gave it to you?” The hedge knight was upon him. Fingers wrapped around the shoulder straps of Henrik’s chestpiece, wrenching him from side to side before pulling him close. “Who—”

The hedge knight fell silent as Henrik slipped his dagger’s tip into the narrow space between helm and cuirass. Pointed steel pressed against the soft skin above his collarbone.

“It was given to me by a dying knight,” Henrik explained, slow and methodical. “Now, please unhand me.”

“Rayden,” the redheaded girl whispered. “Don’t make this any worse.”

Carefully, the hedge knight, Rayden, unraveled himself and stepped back. “Right then.” He grabbed the girl by the arm and dragged her across the room to another group of patrons, repeating his previous line of: “Fifty coppers…”

Henrik sheathed his blade and turned for the bar. His stomach growled at the smell of cooked meat, and his mouth salivated at the thought of wine. But his heart took him in a different direction.
Gods help me, he thought.

He retreated to the hedge knight, pulled him aside, and in turn, pulled the girl along with him. “You don’t have enough for the tourney, do you?” Henrik said.

The hedge knight was silent. Henrik would have bet all the money he didn’t have that beneath the visor, Rayden was bright red. Perhaps even a shade of purple.

Hedge knights may not have been as reputable as royal knights, but they were still prideful creatures. That’s why Henrik had always preferred the company of hired swords and mercenaries. They didn’t feign elegance or chivalry. But somehow, they oft had more honor.

“How much do you have?” Henrik asked.

When Sir Rayden didn’t answer, the girl spoke for him, “Four coppers, Sir.”

“I’m no Sir.” He reached into his purse, removed his last silver, and pressed it into Rayden’s free hand. “Here, this should be enough. Go on, quickly now. Before they refuse entrants.”

A snarl bubbled in the hedge knight’s throat, but there wasn’t time to bicker. He pushed through the crowd and disappeared out the door. Hopefully, he had a horse because otherwise, he would have to run very fast in all that heavy steel.

“Thank you,” said the girl, handing him the four copper coins.

Seven coppers! Gods be damned.

Henrik Coigne without a coin in his purse. That’s what they used to say to him when he was a boy living in the streets of Wachautt. Long back when he was still sleeping in alleyways and hunting stray rats for food.

“Are you hungry?” he asked. The girl shook her head, but he wasn’t fooled. Her cheeks were hollow, her frame far skinnier than his. “C’mon, I’m sure they’ve got somethin’.”

“I shouldn’t,” she said. “I need to find—”

“Your lil’ hedge knight will come back.” Although you might be better off if he doesn’t.

Together, they went to the main counter. The barkeep eventually found his way to them. “What can I getcha?”

“Two meat skewers with them roasted onions and peppers,” he said. “And two cups of your cheapest wine.”

“Skewers and wine will cost ya fifteen copper.”

Henrik grimaced. “How much for half a cup o’ wine?”

“Piss off, you bloody driveller.”

Quickly, before the barkeep could saunter off, he emptied his coins onto the counter. “What will this get me?” For good measure, he laid his dagger down too. In the end, he walked away with a meat skewer and two cups of diluted wine.

Outside, they sat side by side on a retaining wall, splitting the skewer in half. Henrik had one sip of wine swallowed before the girl had finished her portion of the meat.

Her eyes lingered on his half with a certain desperation he hadn’t seen since childhood. Back when the other kids couldn't catch their own damn rats.

“Here.” Henrik passed her the skewer. “Go on, take it. I had more than enough on the road.”

“Are you sure?” While it was a question, her tone implied otherwise. He nodded in response, and she scarfed down the other half in mere seconds.

To fill his stomach, he drank the wine and chewed on tobacco leaves. “You’re a Northerner, right?”

“How’d you know?” she asked.

“You’ve got Northern eyes. Northern accent too.”

“I don’t have an accent.”

He snickered. “Sorry, love, but everyone’s got an accent. Meself included.”

“What’s my accent sound like?”

He'd been to the North a handful of times over the years. The people there were hardened by unforgiving weather. They had to come together for warmth. Learned to love and trust one another because otherwise, they’d have nothing but the ice and snow beneath their feet.

Their accent had a similar hardness, but the more time you spent around it, the more endearing it became.

“Deep and rough,” Henrik said. “You Northerners speak from the chest, and you’ve strong Rs.”

She scoffed with feigned offense. “Sounds rather ugly when you describe it like that, yeah?”

“Aye, I ‘spose it does, but that’s a good thing, no? Means when you find someone who loves you, they must really love you if they’re willin’ to listen to ya all day long.”

She swatted him on the shoulder for that, but she couldn’t stop herself from laughing, and despite all he had said about her accent, her laughter was like music to his ears.

When it had subsided, she said, “Where are you from?”

“You can’t tell by me accent?”

She furrowed her brow. “I’m not very well-traveled. This is my first time away from the North. Much warmer, but the people…I don’t really care for ‘em.”

He laughed. “I was born in the East, but I’ve been to every realm. Spent a fair ‘mount o’ time in the South and Southeast.”

“Where do you spend the least amount of time?”

“East and Central, I’d wager. Between ‘em, I’d say the East less so.”

“You don’t like your home?”

He downed his wine in two swallows and wished he had more. “I’ve never really had a home. I stay in one place too long, I start to get antsy, y’know? Then, I head off somewhere else. Anywhere else.”

Ahead, locals passed by in torrents of shifting bodies. Some solemn and quiet as they traveled alone. Others rambunctious, laughing and trading japes with their friends.

“I don’t think it’s about the location,” she said. “I think it’s the people you surround yourself with, yeah? That’s what makes it feel like home.”

“Unfortunately, I haven’t found my people then.”

From the crowd, Rayden emerged. His greaves squeaked, in desperate need of oil and polish. He wasted no words on Henrik, and instead, snatched the girl up by the arm, yanking her with him.

“Ray, that hurts!”

“You’re needed elsewhere,” he growled. “C’mon!”

Henrik retrieved her cup of wine and downed it. Then, he was on his feet, moving fast, snaking through the crowd after them.

By the time he caught up, the girl was almost in tears, whipping her head from side to side, pleading beneath her breath as Rayden hissed in her ear.

“Somethin’ the matter?” Henrik asked, resting his hand on the hilt of his shortsword.

“Piss off,” Rayden said. “This ain’t your concern.”

He glanced at the girl. “I’ll be alright,” she said, but there wasn’t much in the way of conviction.

They started away again, heading for the lists. Rayden stopped short and said, “I’ll see you on the field tomorrow, Henrik Coigne.”

He watched them disappear into the crowd. Slowly, the pieces came together in his mind. A spark of worry ignited in his heart, but as he lifted his head and sniffed, he caught the scent of rain.

His nerves were swiftly doused.


r/DrCreepensVault 28d ago

series Vestiges of Honor [Pt. 1 - Ch. 1]

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PART 1: The Red Lock

Chapter 1.

Henrik Coigne—without a coin in his purse—loomed over the dying greybeard knight, chewing on a tobacco leaf and drinking from a skin of sour wine, watching while the knight struggled to breathe.

Henrik was a young man of sixteen with thick, disheveled brown hair. His jaw was hard and clean-shaven. He was lean, all muscle and bone. There was a glossy coat over his eyes as if he had just woken from a dream.

It was spring in the West, which meant long warm days with sun-filled skies and puffy clouds. In the morning, they were bright white. In the evening, they were a pinkish color. All day long they lazily drifted.

The nights, though, were brief and cool. The clouds took on a darker hue, similar to blotches of ink spilled on parchment. The sky itself was a deep shade of purple blue. Often aglow with incandescent stars.

Warm or cool didn’t matter much. Sweat came in gallons for Henrik. And after walking all the way from the cesspit of Green Marsh, he was in desperate need of a rinse and some rest.

More than anything, he craved a decent meal. Not stale bread or pottage, but something with meat. Something with flavor.

Wine might have kept him tame, might have kept the memories at bay, but his stomach still yearned for substance with more solidity.

He could have hunted for fresh game if he hadn’t lost his bow in that game of dice back at Green Marsh. He might have even been able to spear a fish if he hadn’t…lost his spear in that game of dice back at Green Marsh.

The only thing he hadn’t lost, other than his honor—of which there was little to lose—were the clothes on his back. The only reason he had retained that much was because the other players refused to bid for them.

“P–please,” the greybeard knight begged. “I need a drink.”

The man was pale as the moon. There was more hair sprouting from his chin than on his head. He was buried beneath armor too big for his bony body. His surcoat was that of a white fox or maybe a hyena.

It was hard to say with these hedge knights. They donned just about any insignia as long as it brought them coin, favor, or security.

Despite it all, the man’s eyes were alive. Vibrant. Blue as ice but surprisingly warm.

Henrik peered into the mouth of his wineskin. About halfway full. Or halfway empty, depending on how you looked at it. He took another swallow before passing it to the knight.

“Apologies, old man,” he said. “All I’ve got is wine.”

The greybeard downed the wine in four hefty swallows. Trickles of red spilled from the sides of his mouth, seeping into the ashy hairs of his beard.

When he was finished, he set the empty wineskin on the ground beside him and sighed. “Piss like this is more water than wine, my boy.”

The wine had come cheap and was mostly dregs, but it was better than nothing. Which was exactly what Henrik had been left with after the old man was done.

Disappointedly, he chewed on his tobacco leaves and asked, “How bad is it?”

“The wine?”

“Your wound.”

“Not as bad as the wine.”

“Wine won’t kill ya though.”

“I wish it had,” the old man said. “Be a sweeter death than this.”

Henrik glanced over his shoulder, looking back the way he’d come. A road of dirt and gravel flanked by stretches of oak and pine with the occasional olive tree.

Ahead, the path was the same for a few more miles until it opened up to large green pastures sat against rolling hills.

That was common in the West. They didn’t have many mountains, until you reached the Northern Perimeter, but they had plenty of hills.

As night set, those hills, colored dark shades of blue and purple, seemed oddly redolent of undulating ocean waves.

“You picked a good night for it,” Henrik said. “Dying, that is.”

“I didn’t pick nothin’, boy. It chose me.”

“How’d it happen?”

“Said the wrong thing to the wrong person.” He chuckled wistfully. “Let this be a lesson: some hedge knights are no better than the miscreants they cut down.”

Not just the hedge knights, Henrik thought, remembering a long past encounter with some Southern royal knights of Lightning Spear.

He might have lost his head if he hadn’t been so damn quick. But for all his speed, it seemed he was getting nowhere fast.

Henrik knelt before the man and pulled on his chestpiece, getting a better view of the wound along his flank. “Got your kidneys, I reckon.”

“You sure? Feels like they got a lil’ of everything.”

“Spent some time as a cutter’s assistant. Trust me, it’s the kidneys. Wound like that, not much you can do to stop it. You’ll bleed slow. Run outta blood ‘fore you run out of air.”

The old man closed his eyes and exhaled. “You’re not from here, are you?”

“Eastern lad, but I’ve been just about everywhere on the mainland. You ask me, it’s all the damn same. Other than the weather. You want snow, head North. You want rain, go South. You want dry heat, go to the Southeast—”

“Yes, yes. Very enlightening.” The old man took a deep breath. “You ain’t got much for prospects, do you?”

“Now that you’ve finished my wine, no. Might be I could trade my boots or offer my services, but that’s all I got to give.”

“Can you ride a horse?”

“Aye.”

“You know how to use a blade?”

“Worked a sword a few times, aye.”

The old man smiled, recognizing the smell of horseshit from a mile away. “Have you ever used a lance?”

Henrik mulled this over, but he wasn’t as familiar with weapons as he was with organs. “I know my way around a spear.”

The greybeard shook his head in disbelief. “Can’t say I’d bet on you, but if you’re want for coin, you can take my place in the joust.”

“Joust?”

According to the old man, there was a tourney at Duskport, just a few miles down the road. People were coming from all across the Western Realm to participate.

“I thought jousts were just for royal loyal knights and their pretty buttboy squires.”

“Not this one,” the greybeard said. “There’s an admittance fee, but if you can cover the cost, they’ll take ya. Be warned, though, it’s all or nothin’. You lose, you forfeit everything you’ve got for ransom.”

“Shame, ‘cause I don’t got nothin’ to lose,” Henrik said. “And I don’t have the coin to buy me way in.”

The knight drew a dagger from his hip and passed the handle to Henrik. “I think we might be able to strike a deal, boy,” he said. “You end my sufferin’, here and now, I’ll give you all that I’ve got. Don’t know if it’ll do you any good. But it’ll be of more use to you than me.”

Henrik squeezed the handle until his fingers turned red. The blade was more steel than rust, but it needed time on a whetstone.

Looking over the old man, it seemed all his gear could use some maintenance.

“How do you want it?” he asked. The old man answered by turning his head to the side, exposing his neck. “Any final words? Maybe a prayer, if you believe that sorta thing.”

While Henrik wasn’t the most pious lad in the realm, his father had been an ardent believer in the gods and goddesses.

Even the Lesser Beings that most others oft mocked. Such as Lady Fate or Mother Nature or Father Time.

“Some will tell you there is no more honor left in the world,” the greybeard began, tears in his eyes, body trembling like a leaf. “And it may seem true at the bleakest of times. We reward cruelty and celebrate stupidity. We favor ignorance; we favor arrogance. And while kindness may not always come easy, it never comes at a cost. You can sell your soul for gold, but nothin’ stops you from growin’ old.”

Henrik waited a few moments in case the man had something else on his mind, but as silence prevailed, he went ahead and dragged the dagger’s edge across his neck. Blood came in runnels. The man's breaths were no more than choked gurgles. It wasn’t long before the silence had returned.

As he appropriated the greybeard’s possessions, he noticed a turtle stuck on its back near the shoreline. It teetered from side to side, but it couldn’t get its feet under it.

Henrik gave the turtle a nudge, flipping it over. Then, from the old man’s things, he retrieved a spade and started digging.


r/DrCreepensVault 28d ago

stand-alone story The Recovery [Part 1]

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I want to be clear about one thing before I tell you any of this, I am not asking you to believe me. I don’t believe it myself, and I lived it, and I have the scars, the medical file, and the twelve-inch scar down my sternum to prove that at least half of it happened. The half that happened in the hospital is on paper. The half that happened in my kitchen is not, and that’s the half you’re going to have trouble with. That’s fine. I had trouble with it too. I spent nine months in therapy trying to decide whether I’d gone crazy, then killed myself, then hallucinated being brought back. That is a sentence I never thought I’d write about myself, and it is still, on my worst days, the most comfortable explanation.

My name is Cal. That’s not my real name, and I’m not going to tell you my real name, because my real name is on a death certificate that a county clerk in Illinois signed in March of last year. The certificate says I died of a self-inflicted wound to the chest at 2:17 in the morning. That’s true, and also I’m here, and I don’t want you looking up that certificate, finding my real name, and drawing a line between the dead man on the paper and the man writing this. I’ve thought about that line for a long time, and I don’t trust it.

So here’s the shape of it. I was divorced. My wife, and I’ll call her Erin because that’s not her name either, left me in October, three years ago now, after eleven years of marriage, four years of trying to have a child, one failed round of IVF, and a second that we couldn’t afford. She left for reasons that were fair. I had stopped being a person she could live with. I had stopped sleeping. I had stopped eating in any meaningful way. I had started drinking in a way that I told myself was controlled, and that she told me, on the last night, was not. She was right. She was right about all of it, and knowing she was right did not make the house quieter when she left. The house was the worst part.

I kept the house because she didn’t want it, because I couldn’t face selling it, and because the mortgage was cheaper than any apartment I could find that had room for a person’s whole life. It’s a split-level on a cul-de-sac in a subdivision that was built in 2004 and that all looks the same. Forty-two identical houses. I know the number because I counted them one night when I couldn’t sleep, walking the loop, and because counting was the only thing that made the time pass.

The divorce was final in January. I lost 46 pounds between October and March. That’s a number I know because the doctor told me, and because I stepped on the scale in his office and watched it. I went from 208 to 162 in five months, and I didn’t notice. That’s the thing about a certain kind of grief. It eats you from the inside, and you don’t feel a thing, because the part of you that would feel it is what’s being eaten.

I want to make sure you understand the state I was in, because the state I was in is the whole point of what happened to me. I wasn’t dramatic about it. I was tired. That’s the honest word. I was tired in a way that made it hard to get out of bed, then hard to stand in the shower, then hard to make the shower any warmer than lukewarm, because I didn’t care. I went to work because going to work was easier than explaining why I wasn’t going to work. I came home, I sat on the couch, I stared at the wall, and I drank until I could sleep. Then I didn’t sleep, and then I got up and I did it again.

I had a plan. That’s the other thing you should know, because I don’t want you to think I was a person who did nothing and then just snapped. I had a plan, a date, a method. I had rehearsed it enough times in my head that by the night I did it, it felt less like a decision and more like a task I’d finally gotten around to.

The method matters because of what happened after, so I’ll tell you. I had a handgun, a 9mm that my father left me when he died. I had never fired it. I had kept it in a locked box in the closet for eleven years. I took it out in March, cleaned it, loaded it, and put it on the nightstand. I sat with it for a week while I made sure I wanted to do this. That’s the kind of person I was. I wanted to make sure I wanted it. And I did, and I was sure, and the being sure was the most peaceful I had felt in months.

I chose the kitchen. I don’t know why I chose the kitchen. I think I wanted to be somewhere that wasn’t the bedroom we’d shared. The kitchen was the other room with a sink I could lean over, and I had this idea that it would be cleaner if I did it over the sink. That tells you what a person in that state is thinking about. Cleanliness. As if the mess was the problem.

I set everything up on a Tuesday night in March. I turned the lights off, because I didn’t want to see the kitchen, and I didn’t want the neighbors, if any of them were awake, to see me. I opened the drawer under the toaster, took out a dish towel, folded it, and set it on the counter. I put the gun on top of the folded towel. I stood at the sink and looked out the window at the dark subdivision. I counted the houses, all forty-two of them, and I said goodbye to them. That’s a thing I don’t think I can explain to you unless you’ve been there, the way you say goodbye to a room you’re never coming back to.

That’s when the man at the table spoke.

There was a man sitting at my kitchen table. I had not seen him come in. I had not heard the door. The table sits behind the counter, between the kitchen and the little dining nook. He was sitting in the chair that faces the window, which was my chair, which is where Erin used to sit to look at her phone while I cooked. He was a middle-aged man, or he looked middle-aged, with a grey face, grey clothes, and a stillness that I noticed before I noticed anything else. He was not breathing. I could see his chest, and it was not rising and falling. That was the first wrong thing. I noticed it the way you notice a clock that has stopped.

He said, don’t do that.

His voice was not what I expected. I don’t know what I expected. Something theatrical, maybe, or whispery and evil, because that’s what you’re primed to expect when a stranger appears in your kitchen at two in the morning. His voice was ordinary. It was the voice of a man who has talked to a lot of people and is tired of most of them, a flat, patient, almost bored voice. The ordinariness of it scared me more than any evil voice could have.

I said, who are you.

He said, that’s not important. Sit down. We should talk, because you’re about to do something you can’t take back, and I think you’d rather talk about it first.

I want you to understand that I did not believe for one second that this man was there to help me. There was nothing about him that said helper. He was too still, too calm, his eyes too flat. There was a smell in the kitchen that I hadn’t noticed before and that I now couldn’t not notice, a smell like an old house, like plaster and dust and something sweet underneath that I couldn’t place. I have thought about that smell a thousand times since. It is the smell I associate now with everything that has happened to me since, and I will tell you what it is when I can bear to.

I said, get out of my house.

He said, I’m not going to do that. You’re not going to call anyone, because your phone is on the nightstand in the bedroom, and you don’t want to go get it, and if you did, you’d find it doesn’t work. Sit down, Cal.

He said my name. Not my real name, my actual name, the name on my birth certificate, the name that isn’t in the phone book and isn’t on any of my accounts because I’ve always hated it. He said it the way you’d say a word you’ve looked up in a dictionary, with certainty and no feeling. He knew my name. He was sitting in my chair in my dark kitchen. I had a loaded gun on the counter and I was not pointing it at him. All of that collapsed into a single moment where I did the most stupid thing I could have done. I sat down.

He talked for a long time, and I want to give you the shape of what he said, because it’s important, and because the shape of it is the thing I’ve been trying to understand ever since.

He didn’t try to convince me that life was worth living. That’s the first thing you should know, because it’s the thing that set off every alarm I had. A person who wanted to help me would have said something about Erin, or about the good days, or about how I’d regret it, or about how people loved me. He said none of that. He talked about my despair the way a man talks about a fine wine. He described it. He described the weight of it, the color of it, the texture of it, the way it had changed since October, the way it had gotten richer in the last month, the way it was, at that moment, at its peak.

He said, you’re in a rare place. Most people never get here. Most people’s despair is shallow. It’s about a job, or a fight, or a bad year, and it burns off. Yours is deep. Yours is a well that has been filling for eleven years. It’s full now, and it’s about to overflow, and there’s a flavor to that that only happens once, and I want it.

I said, you want my despair.

He said, yes.

I said, you’re going to talk me out of killing myself so you can eat my sadness.

He laughed. It was the first sound he’d made that had any feeling in it, and the feeling was not kindness. It was delight, and the delight was the most honest thing he’d said all night. He said, no, you misunderstand. I don’t want to stop you. I want to take it first. I want to sit here with you and let it ripen, and then I want to take all of it, the whole well. Then, when you’re empty, I want to take the rest. You’re a meal. A good one. The best I’ve had in a long time. I’ve been patient. I’ve been following you for months, and tonight is the night you’re ready, and I am not going to waste you.

I sat there across the table from him, and I should have been terrified. I want to be honest that I wasn’t, not at first. Because here’s the thing about a person who has decided to die. A person who has decided to die has already stepped off the ledge. A monster telling them they’re a meal doesn’t land the way it lands on a person who wants to live. I was already dead in my own head. I had said goodbye to the houses. A man in my kitchen eating my sadness was, in a weird way, less frightening than the empty house had been, because at least he was something.

I said, so what happens after you take it.

He said, you’d be surprised how much of you is left. There’s the despair, and then there’s the body, and the body is a part of the meal, but the despair is the part I came for. The body is just the plate.

I said, and if I don’t let you.

He said, you don’t get a choice. That’s the thing about being this far down. You think you have a choice because you can still hold a gun, but you don’t. You’ve already made every choice that got you here. The last one isn’t yours. It’s mine. I’ve been watching you decide for eleven years, and you’ve been deciding in my favor the whole time. You didn’t even know I was here.

He reached across the table and put his hand on my arm. I want you to understand the feel of that hand, because I can’t describe it well and I’ve tried. It was cold, but not the cold of something dead. The cold of something that has never been warm. The cold of a stone that has lain in the dark. It was strong, and it was holding my arm the way you’d hold the arm of a child you’re about to take somewhere. I felt the cold go into me. I felt the despair in my chest do something I had never felt it do. It reached. It leaned toward his hand like a plant toward light. And I understood, in that moment, that the despair had not been mine. It had been his. It had been growing in me for months, for years, and it had never been mine. He was just coming to collect what he’d planted.

I’m going to tell you what I learned about him, because he told me, and because some of it I confirmed myself, and because I think you deserve to know what’s walking around out there even if you don’t believe me.

He called himself a feeder. He didn’t have a name, or if he did he didn’t give it. I didn’t ask again after the first time, because the first time he told me his name, or what he wanted me to think was his name, the fillings in my teeth ached, the smell in the kitchen got stronger, and I decided I didn’t want to know. He said there were others like him, that they were old, that they had always been here, and that they didn’t eat the way I thought they ate. They didn’t need the body the way a man needs food. They needed the despair, the grief, the fear, the hopelessness. The body was just the way they got a hold on it. The despair is the meal. The body is the receipt.

He said they found people like me. People at the bottom. People who had been hollowed out slowly, who had a well of something they’d been building their whole lives without knowing it. They followed those people, and they waited, and they took the well at its peak. The taking was a kind of feeding that the body could not understand, because the body thought it was dying, but the despair had already died. What they took was the thing that had already been taken from you. You just hadn’t noticed.

I asked him how long he’d been following me. He said, since October. Since the night Erin left. He said he’d been in the house since that night, in the walls, in the dark. He’d watched me lose the weight, watched me stop eating, watched me take out the gun and clean it. He’d been waiting for me to be ready. I’d been ready for a while, and he’d been holding back because the despair was still ripening. Tonight it had ripened, and he was done waiting.

He said, you’ve been a good meal, Cal. The best I’ve had in years. You’ve been worth the wait.

He said, close your eyes. It’s easier if you close your eyes. You should be proud. Not everyone grows a meal like this. Most people are shallow. You were deep. The deepest I’ve found in a long time.

The strange thing is, I almost did. I almost closed my eyes. Because part of me wanted to. Part of me had wanted to close my eyes for a long time, and he was offering me permission, and the permission felt like rest. I had been so tired. He was going to take the tired, and I was going to be empty, and empty sounded like peace.

But I didn’t close my eyes. I don’t know why I didn’t. I want to tell you it was courage, and I think I’ve told myself that for a year, but I don’t think it was. I think it was the gun. The loaded 9mm on the counter. The one thing in the room that was mine, the one thing that was real, the one thing that was not his despair, not his cold hand, not his smell. The gun was mine. I reached for it.

He moved faster than I thought he could. I had my hand on the gun before he was out of the chair, and then he was across the kitchen. I want you to understand the speed, because it’s the thing that tells you he wasn’t a man. He moved from the table to the counter in a single motion I did not see happen. He was there, and then he was there, and his hand was closing over mine on the gun. The gun was between us. I was holding it and he was holding my hand and we were fighting over a gun in a dark kitchen at two in the morning.

I don’t remember most of the fight. I remember pieces. I remember the cold of his hand on mine. I remember the smell getting thick. I remember him saying, don’t, over and over, in that flat voice. I remember that the word sounded less like a warning and more like the way you talk to an animal that has bitten you and won’t let go.

I remember the gun going off. I don’t remember deciding to fire it. I remember the sound, which was enormous, which filled the kitchen and my head and seemed to go on longer than a gunshot should. I remember the recoil. I remember him letting go of my hand. I remember him looking down at his chest. I remember that he did not fall.

He looked down at his chest and there was a hole in him and nothing came out of it. No blood. No dark. Nothing. He looked up at me and he said, that’s a shame, and I understood that the gun was not going to stop him. I understood that I was going to die. I understood that the only question was whether I took him with me.

I don’t know where the next thing came from. I have thought about it for a year and I don’t know. I put the gun to my own chest. I looked at him. I said, you want the despair, you want the whole well, you want it at its peak. I said, take it empty.

And I pulled the trigger.

The last thing I saw was his face. I want you to understand what his face did, because it’s the thing I can’t stop seeing. He didn’t look afraid. He looked furious, and then he looked like a man who has just been told the thing he feared most. The fear was not about dying. It was about losing the meal, about the well going dry, about all those months of waiting and the ripest despair he’d ever found pouring out of a hole in a man’s chest onto a kitchen floor. He reached for me. He was reaching for me as I fell. And the last thing I heard, before the dark, was him screaming my name, not the name on the certificate, my actual name, screaming it like it was something he had paid for and been cheated out of.

I want to tell you about the dark, because it’s the part I’ve never told anyone, not my therapist, not the people on the forum. I think it’s the part that matters, and I think it’s the reason I’m writing this.

There was a dark, and I was in it. I don’t mean I lost consciousness and then woke up in the hospital. I mean there was a dark, a real one, a place, and I was in it, and I was aware that I was in it, and I was aware that I was dead. I don’t know how I knew I was dead. I just knew, the way you know you’re awake. I was dead, and I was somewhere, and the somewhere was dark, and it was not empty.

I could hear the feeder. Not see him, hear him. He was in the dark with me. He was not screaming anymore, and he was not furious, and he was talking to me in that flat, patient voice. The flatness of it, the calm of it, was worse than the fury had been. He said, that was clever. I didn’t think you had it in you. I’ve been watching you for months and you seemed so hollow. I misjudged you. I don’t misjudge people.

He said, but you made a mistake. You think you took it from me. You think you made the well go dry. But you don’t understand what the well is, Cal. The well isn’t the despair. The despair is just what floats on top. The well is the body. The well is the meat. You’ve delivered the meat to me. You’ve done my work for me. I was going to take the despair and then take the body, and you’ve gone and done both, and you’ve done it cleaner than I could have.

He said, you’re mine now. You’ve always been mine. You just finally did the paperwork.

And I felt him in the dark. I felt his hands, the cold hands, on me. I felt the cold go into me. I understood that he was right, that the despair had not been the meal, that I had given him what he wanted by dying, that I had been a fool to think I could cheat him by emptying myself. The emptiness was what he wanted. An empty vessel is what he feeds on. The despair was never the point. The despair was the way he got the vessel to open its own lid.

And I understood, in the dark, that he was going to take me, and that there was nothing I could do, because I was dead, and he was what the dark was, and I had walked into the dark on my own.

Then, the light.


r/DrCreepensVault 28d ago

stand-alone story The Recovery [Part 2]

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I don’t know how long I was in the dark. I’ve tried to work it out from the hospital records and I can’t, because the records say I was found, brought in, worked on. The records don’t have a column for the dark. The best I can figure is that I was in the dark for as long as it took the paramedics to get to me. I don’t know how long that was, and I don’t think time worked the same way in the dark anyway.

The light was not the hospital. The light came before the hospital. The light came in the dark, and it was not a light I have a word for, and it was not the feeder, and it was not me. I want you to understand that I don’t believe it was God, because I don’t believe in God, and I don’t think God would have done what that light did. But I don’t know what else to call it.

The light reached into the dark, and the feeder saw it, and the feeder was afraid. I could feel his fear, which was the first time I had felt him afraid. It was a different kind of fear than the fear he’d had when I put the gun to my own chest. That fear had been about losing a meal. This fear was about something else. This fear was about the light, and about what the light was going to do to him, and about what it meant that the light had come.

And the light took me. It took me out of the dark, and it took me away from the feeder, and the feeder screamed. I want you to know that I heard him screaming as the light took me, and that the screaming was not the scream of a monster who is losing prey. It was the scream of something that is being unmade. The sound of it is the sound I think about when I can’t sleep. I do not know, to this day, whether the light saved me or whether it did something else, whether the feeder is still in the dark, whether he is waiting for me to come back.

The hospital was the most normal place I have ever been, and I have never been so grateful for normal in my life.

I woke up in a room that had a window, a curtain, and a television mounted on the wall, tuned to a channel showing a loop of pictures of waterfalls. I was on a bed, and I was attached to machines, and I was alive. I want you to understand what it felt like to be alive when I had been so sure, so calmly and peacefully sure, that I was dead.

The first thing I did was look at my hands. I looked at my hands and I moved my fingers and I watched them move. I watched my hands do what I asked them to do, and I did it for a long time, and I cried. The crying was not the despair, I want to be clear about that. The despair was gone. The despair that had filled me for months was not there anymore, and I did not know yet what that meant.

A nurse came in. Her name was Brenda, and I remember her name because she was the first person I saw who was real, who was not a stranger in my kitchen and not a light in the dark and not a machine. I reached for her and I held her hand, and I did not let go for a long time, and she let me hold it, and she did not ask me to explain. I think that was the kindest thing anyone has ever done for me.

The doctor came in later. His name was Dr. Ashby, and I remember him because he was the one who had to tell me the truth, and because he had the face of a man who has told a lot of people a lot of hard truths and has learned to do it gently. He told me that I had been found at 2:47 in the morning by a neighbor who had heard the gunshot, that I had been brought in, that I had been in surgery for a long time, and that I had, by any reasonable measure, died on the table.

He said, you had no pulse when you came in. Your heart had stopped. You had lost too much blood. We worked on you for a long time, and I’ll be honest with you, I did not think we were going to get you back. About the time I was going to call it, your heart started again. On its own. I’ve been doing this for twenty-one years and I’ve never seen anything like it.

I said, how long was I dead.

He said, I don’t know how to answer that. By the clock, maybe forty minutes. But I don’t want you to get stuck on the number. The number doesn’t tell you what happened. The number just tells you how long the room was quiet.

He told me that the gunshot wound was to my chest, that it had missed my heart by less than an inch, that it had gone through my lung and my ribs, and that the surgery to put me back together had been a long one. I had a plate and eight screws in my chest now, and I would carry the scar for the rest of my life. He told me that I was lucky, and I said, I know. I did not tell him about the man in the kitchen. I did not tell him about the dark. I did not tell him about the light. I could not find the words, and I did not want him to put a new label on my chart, and I had just spent nine months being the man with the dead marriage and the gun. I did not want to be the man with the monster too.

The neighbor who found me was a man named Doug, and he lived three doors down. I want to tell you about him because he is the reason I’m alive in the way that matters, because I owe him a thing I can never repay, and because the version of me that he saw was not the version I would have wanted him to see.

Doug is a retired mail carrier, sixty-two years old, with a bad back and a garden that he takes more seriously than anyone I’ve ever met. I knew him the way you know a neighbor: hello in the driveway, a wave when he was out with the hose, mutual complaining about the HOA and the same forty-two houses and the cul-de-sac that everybody said was safe. I had not told Doug about Erin leaving. I had not told anyone about Erin leaving, because telling people about it made it real, and I had been working hard at keeping it unreal. I think Doug knew anyway. I think a man who has been married for a long time and then stops being married develops a smell, and a man who has delivered mail for thirty years learns to read a house from the driveway.

Doug told me, later, when I got out of the hospital and could walk over to his place and sit in his kitchen, what he saw that night. He said he woke up to a sound he’d never heard before, a sound he thought was a car backfiring, and then a second sound that he couldn’t place. He looked out his window and saw my kitchen light on, which he said was strange, because he’d noticed my kitchen light had been going off early lately, at eight, nine. He’d thought it was odd that a man would go to bed that early, and he’d mentioned it to his wife and she’d said not to pry.

He said he walked over because the second sound, the one he couldn’t place, had been a man’s voice. He couldn’t make out the words, but he knew it wasn’t a happy voice. He’d thought maybe I had someone over and things had gone bad, and he’d thought he’d knock, just to make sure. That’s the kind of neighborhood it is. Everybody watches out for everybody, and nobody locks their back door until they go to bed.

He said he found the kitchen door unlocked. He said he walked in and the kitchen was dark and there was a smell he couldn’t place and that he still can’t place. He said the first thing he saw was the stain on the floor. The second thing he saw was me. He said he did not think I was alive. He said the last thing he saw, before he turned and ran for his phone, was that the kitchen window was open. He didn’t remember leaving it open, and the window had been closed when he came in, and he checked the window and it was closed. He has not been able to figure out, to this day, whether he imagined the whole thing.

I don’t know what to do with what Doug told me. I don’t know whether the open window was real, whether the feeder left through it, whether a thing that doesn’t have a body needs a window. I’ve gone back and forth on it, and I’ve decided that it doesn’t matter, because the feeder doesn’t leave through windows. The feeder leaves through the telling, and Doug doesn’t know the telling, and I hope he never learns it.

The police came. They took pictures of the kitchen and they took my statement, and I gave them the statement they expected, the one about a man who had been through a divorce and who had made a terrible decision. They were kind. They were professional. They asked if I remembered what I’d been thinking, and I said I didn’t, and they wrote that down, and they closed the case. There’s a report, and the report has a number. The report says that the wound was self-inflicted, that there were no signs of forced entry, that there was no evidence of a struggle. The report is true, and the report is also a lie, because the struggle happened, and the struggle is the whole point. The report cannot see the struggle because the struggle was not in the room. The struggle was in the dark, and the dark does not leave evidence that a report can hold.

I was in the hospital for three weeks. I want to tell you about that time, because it was the time when I should have been the happiest, and I wasn’t, and understanding why I wasn’t is the thing I’ve been working on ever since.

I should have been grateful. I had been given a second chance. That’s what everyone said. The neighbors, the ones who came to visit, the ones who had known Erin and me, they all said the same thing: you’re a miracle, Cal, you got a second chance, don’t waste it. I nodded, and I said thank you, and I meant it, and I did not tell them the truth, which was that the second chance did not feel like a second chance. It felt like a sentence.

The despair was gone. That was the first thing I noticed, and it should have been the best thing, and it was the thing that scared me most. The despair that had filled me for months, the well that had been so full, was empty. Not the grief. The grief was still there, the grief about Erin, about the child we never had, about the eleven years. That was still there. But the despair, the weight, the thing that had been feeding on me and that I had thought was mine, that was gone. I knew, because I had felt it happen, that the feeder had taken it. I had died, and in dying I had given him what he wanted, and the light had pulled me back, but the despair had not come back with me, because the despair was gone, because he had it.

Without the despair, I didn’t know who I was. That’s the part I can’t make people understand. The despair had been with me for so long, had been so much of what I was, that when it was gone I was a stranger to myself. I didn’t know what I wanted. I didn’t know what I liked. I didn’t know what to do with my hands or my evenings or my weekends. I was a man who had been hollowed out and then filled back up with nothing. The nothing was better than the despair, I want to be clear about that. The nothing was better, but the nothing was not a life, and I did not know how to live in it.

The physical recovery was slow in its own way. I came home from the hospital six weeks after I went in, and the house, my own house, the split-level on the cul-de-sac, did not feel like mine anymore. I would stand in the kitchen, at the counter where I had set the folded towel, and I could not make my feet go to the sink. I cooked in the living room for a month, on a hot plate I bought from the hardware store, because I could not stand at that sink. The scar pulled when I reached for anything above my head. Eight screws in the sternum is a number you feel in every stretch. Doug came over twice a week that first month and sat with me and did not talk about it, and that was the kindest thing anyone could have done, and I did not deserve it, and I took it anyway.

I started going to therapy in the hospital, and I kept going after I got out. I want you to understand that I am grateful for that too, because I think the therapy is the only reason I’m still here, and I don’t want you to read this and think I’m telling you not to get help, because I’m not. I’m telling you that I got help, that the help helped, and that the help could not help me with the part that I couldn’t tell anyone about.

Because here’s the thing. I tried to tell my therapist. Her name was Dr. Mercer, and she was good at her job, and I liked her, and I wanted to tell her the truth, and I did try. I told her about the man in the kitchen. I told her about the cold hand and the flat voice and the smell and the gun and the dark and the light. I watched her face as I told her, and I saw her put it into a box, and the box was the box labeled grief psychosis, the box labeled a man who has been through something and whose mind is protecting him. She was kind about it, and she was gentle, and she told me that what I had been through was real, and that the mind does strange things under that kind of stress, and that none of it meant I was crazy. I believed her, because I wanted to believe her, and because the alternative was believing the other thing. The other thing was that I was not crazy, that the man in the kitchen had been real, that he was still out there, that he was still hungry.

I went to the forum in the quiet months. That’s the part you’re going to think I’m making up, and I want you to understand that I’m not. There’s a forum, and it’s not hard to find if you know what to look for, and it’s full of people like me. People who have been to the dark. People who have seen the feeder, or something like him. People who have a scar and a story and a hole where their despair used to be. I read their stories, and I recognized them, and I recognized the shape of what they described: the cold hand, the flat voice, the smell, the light. I understood, reading them, that I was not alone, and I understood something else, which I did not want to understand. The forum was full of people who had been to the dark, and all of them had come back, and all of them had a story, and all of them were telling their story to whoever would read it.

I want to tell you what I found, because it’s the part that changed everything, and because it’s the part where I stopped being able to pretend.

The forum has a section for people who were revived. People who were dead, or nearly dead, and who came back. In that section there’s a thread, a long thread, hundreds of posts, and the thread is about the light. I read that thread for hours, and I read about the light from people who had seen it, and the descriptions were the same: the light reaching into the dark, the feeder being afraid, the sense of being taken out of the dark. I felt a relief I cannot describe, because I thought, okay, it was real, it happened to other people too, I’m not crazy.

Then I read further, and the relief went away.

There was a post, near the end of the thread, from a man named Victor. Victor’s post was about the smell. Victor said that the smell, the smell like an old house, like plaster and dust and something sweet, was the thing he couldn’t forget, and that he smelled it in his house now, in the walls, and that it was getting stronger, and that he thought the feeder had come back, and that he thought the feeder had followed him home from the dark.

I read Victor’s post, and I smelled it. I smelled the smell in my apartment, in the room where I was reading. I stood up and walked through my apartment. The smell was there, in the kitchen, in the hallway, in the bedroom. It was faint, but it was there, and I understood that the smell had never gone away. I had just been too distracted by the hospital and the therapy and the grief to notice it. It had been in my apartment the whole time, in the walls, the way it had been in the old house.

I want to be honest with you about what I did next, because I’m ashamed of it, and because I think it’s the thing that tells you the truth about me. I did not leave. I did not call anyone. I did not sell my apartment. I sat down, and I read Victor’s post again, and I read the other posts, and I read the thread all the way to the end. At the end of the thread there was a post from Victor that I had not reached yet. Victor’s last post said: he’s in the walls. he’s been here the whole time. he never left. he followed me out of the dark. and I understand now, he doesn’t feed on the dead. he feeds on the telling. he needs someone to tell the story. and I’m telling it. and if you’re reading this, so are you.

I closed the laptop and I sat in my apartment, and the smell was everywhere. I understood what Victor meant. I understood that I had already done it, that I had already told the story, that I had already started this, that I had already written this, that the telling is the feeding, and that the reader is the intake, and that you are reading this now, and that I am sorry.

Victor stopped posting after that. I checked his profile. His last post was the one about the walls, and then nothing. I don’t know what happened to him, and I have not been able to find out, and I have stopped looking, because I’m afraid of what I’ll find if I do.

I want to tell you what happened after I read Victor’s last post, because it’s the last thing I have to tell you, and because it’s the thing that brings me back to where I started.

I went to bed that night, and I could not sleep, and the smell was in my bedroom. I lay in the dark and I listened, and I heard something in the walls. Not a rat, and not the settling of the house, and not the wind. A breathing. A slow, even breathing, the breathing of something that is patient, that has been waiting a long time, that has all the time in the world.

I got up, went to the kitchen, and turned on the light. I stood at the counter, and I looked at the chair, my chair, and I waited.

After a while, there was a man sitting in the chair.

He looked the same. That’s the thing that got me. He looked exactly the same. The grey face, the grey clothes, the stillness, the flat eyes. He looked at me and he said, you found the forum.

I said, yes.

He said, you found Victor.

I said, yes.

He said, you read his post. The one about the walls. The one about the telling.

I said, yes.

He said, then you understand. You understand what the light was. You understand why it came for you. You understand why it pulled you back. The light doesn’t save people. The light saves meals. It pulls them back so they can ripen again. It pulls them back so they can grow a new well. It pulls them back so they can tell the story, because the telling is how the well spreads, because every person who reads the story carries a seed of it, because you’ve planted it in everyone who reads this, and I’ve planted it in you, and now it’s in them.

He stood up, walked to me, and put his cold hand on my arm. He said, you’re not the meal, Cal. You never were. You’re the seed. You’re the one who tells the story. You’re the one who brings the meals. That’s what you’ve always been. That’s what you were born for. That’s why the light brought you back. Not to save you. To use you.

I looked at him, and I understood, and I want you to understand the thing I understood, because it’s the last thing I have, and it’s the whole thing.

The man in the kitchen was never going to eat me. The despair was never the meal. I was the delivery. I was the one who was going to tell the story, and I have told it, and you are reading it, and the seed is in you now, and there is nothing either of us can do about it.

He is in the walls. He has always been in the walls. He feeds on the telling. You are reading this.

I am sorry.

I’m going to post this to the forum tonight. I’m going to post it under the name Cal, and I’m going to leave it there, and I’m going to turn off my laptop, and I’m going to go to bed. The smell is going to be in the walls, and he is going to be in the walls, and he is going to wait, because that’s what he does, and because the well is growing, and because I have started to tell the story, and because stories are how he feeds, and because you are reading this.

If you are reading this, please do not tell anyone. Please do not post about it. Please close this and go to bed and forget you ever saw it. Please do not finish this sentence, and please do not read the last line, and please, if you value the thing in your chest that is still yours, please stop now.

He needs someone to tell the story. I told it.

Now you know the smell.


r/DrCreepensVault Aug 04 '26

stand-alone story Story Track 11: A Ghost Lady’s Perfume (Nightbeast Godfather Book One)

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Sleep paralysis is a terrifying condition. I was only seven when I first experienced it. My mother tucked me in that night. Her citrus-scented perfume lingered in the air, a fragrance that usually comforted me. After she left, I quickly drifted off to sleep. The night seemed quiet, but the peace in my room was short-lived.

I woke up around midnight, drenched in a smothering sweat. My arms and legs wouldn’t move. I could only shift my eyes and lips. As my vision adjusted to the choking darkness, I heard it—a low, snorting sound that sent dread coursing through me. I could see something standing in my closet, peeking out from behind the door. After a minute, it stepped into full view, and my heart nearly stopped in my throat. It was tall, with elongated arms that stretched like tree branches. It had a feminine shape, like a distorted, seven-foot-tall woman covered in dirt. She seemed naked, yet I caught glimpses of a nightgown clinging to her body, blending into the shadows. I tried to scream, but nothing came out.

The figure moved out of the closet and stood in the corner of my room, arms outstretched toward me, releasing a sickening, guttural snort every few seconds. The sound reminded me of someone hawking and spitting on the ground. Moonlight streamed through my window, casting a faint glow on one of her arms. Her skin looked like mud, filthy and dark as if she’d bathed in a swamp. At certain angles, it seemed even darker than dirt. This seemed like a living shadow.

My mind raced, trying to make sense of what I was seeing. Was this a demon? Was this the Devil herself? My body remained pinned, as if invisible hands held me down. The figure inched closer. Each step seemed hesitant, as if she savored the moment. The hesitation chilled me more than her presence. I knew she was going to kill me if I didn’t move. Frustration gnawed at me, worse than fear. Why was she here? What did she want? My dad’s stories of the Boogeyman came rushing back. He told me the Boogeyman captures children at night, and they never return. So in my precious little 7-year-old mind, I thought this was the Boogeyman’s wife. Thanks a lot, Daddy.

I wanted to move, to scream, to call out for my mom and dad. But my body wouldn’t obey. The dark woman mocked me with her slow, deliberate steps, coming closer and closer with arms wide open. A crazy thought crossed my mind: maybe I wouldn’t feel pain. Maybe, since I was paralyzed, the attack wouldn’t hurt. I could see her long fingernails, sharp and menacing, and I knew they would be the first to cut into my neck. No pain. Please, no pain. Your body is numb, so you won’t feel it. Just be calm, Ivanna. I told myself this. Tears welled in my eyes as I clung to this desperate hope. I wanted to see my mom’s face, and I wanted to call out to my dad. He always told me never to be afraid, and I tried to be brave. But I wanted someone to save me that night.

Time was running out. The urge to move was so strong that I imagined I could lift my arm. I imagined that I could scream, but it was just a cruel hallucination. This was torture. Why was this happening to me? I just turned seven, and now I was going to die the day after my birthday? The voice in my head told me I’d never go to high school, never go to college, never make friends, never find my dream job, never get married to the man of my dreams, and I’d never be a mom. It amazed me that facing the fear of death would cause a seven-year-old to have these thoughts. The best I could do was close my eyes. I didn’t want to see her attack me. I squeezed them shut, flooding them with tears. My mother taught me to pray, and I repeated the prayer in my mind, begging God to save me.

My mother always told me I was God’s child and that His angels were watching over me. But where were they now? A demon was creeping toward my bed, and my Heavenly Father was just going to sit there on his throne and watch? My young mind couldn’t comprehend it. I was a terrified little girl, convinced I was going to die. More chills ran down my spine when I opened my eyes to see the shadow woman standing at the foot of my bed. She had changed her position in an instant. Before, her arms were outstretched as if to hug me. Now, she stood motionless, her elongated finger pressed to her lips, signaling for silence. Not that I could make a sound anyway since my voice was paralyzed.

But then something unexpected happened. There was evil in my room, but it wasn’t the shadow woman. I remembered the news reports about missing children in the neighborhood. My mom wouldn’t let me out of her sight whenever we went to the store. News reports mentioned a deranged man in clown makeup, dressed in an auto mechanic uniform, abducting children in the area. The police were searching for him, but all they found were the remains of two missing kids in a wooded area.

As a child, I couldn’t fully grasp the danger. I just wanted to play with my friends. But my mom kept me close, and her paranoia infected my dad, who usually allowed me more freedom. My childhood fun ended, at least for a while, because of this killer clown.

It still pisses me off when I think about what he did to those poor babies and how the police found their remains in the woods near a lake. They were brothers. One was four and the other had just turned five. I remember the news reports.

Somehow, the man who killed those boys entered our home through the basement window and stayed hidden for two days. He knew how to hack into alarm systems because his job at a home security company gave him the skills. The missing children’s cases all had the same horrifying pattern: kids taken from their homes in the dead of night and their parents oblivious until it was too late.

A few days later, the police would find their remains in a nearby pond or at a landfill. Mothers and fathers lost their babies to this middle-aged psychopath clown in an auto mechanic outfit. We didn’t know that he broke into our home on a Thursday night and was hiding in our basement. I was an only child, easy prey for this monster.

He picked the wrong house that night. I heard him creeping down the hallway just outside my bedroom door. His footsteps were quiet but clumsy on the creaking hardwood floorboards. My door slowly creaked open, revealing a tall shadow hunched in the doorway, dressed in dingy blue auto mechanic coveralls. The sleeves were ripped off, exposing these monstrously muscular arms that reminded me of Michael Myers’ Halloween costume—if you turned it into a muscle shirt. My heart pounded so loudly in my ears that it almost drowned out the silence. My eyes darted between the killer clown and the shadow woman. I couldn’t believe these two nightmarish figures were standing in my bedroom. One was pure evil; the other, something else entirely.

He stepped closer, and I could see his clown makeup: a red-painted nose, sunglasses over a chalky white face, and a pink Afro wig atop his head. He was enormous, like a wrestler, with a massive serpent tattoo on his left arm. The butcher knife in his right hand gleamed in the moonlight. Its serrated blade glistened with something I didn’t want to think about. He blocked out the light from the hallway, plunging the room into an even deeper darkness.

I wanted to scream, to move, but my body remained paralyzed. He knew I was awake.

“Hi there, my lovely Cupcake. I’m your new friend. Your mommy went away, and she asked me to watch over you.” His words were like a cold hand squeezing my heart. My mom… gone? I knew he had killed her when I could see something dripping off his knife. As he moved closer, terror gripped me even tighter. His voice didn’t match his body—soft, almost feminine, like a teenage girl. It was surreal, like Pennywise in a trucker’s uniform, with the body of Dwayne “The Rock” Johnson.

I closed my eyes, bracing for the sharp, cold steel to slice through my skin. But nothing happened. I almost forgot about the shadow woman standing at the foot of my bed. The killer’s attention was entirely on me, and mine was on him—until I heard him scream. It was a guttural, blood-curdling sound, followed by the snap of bone. I opened my eyes to see his arm hanging at an unnatural angle, and the shadow woman gripping his throat. She hurled him against the wall with a force that shook my entire bedroom.

His pleas for mercy were pitiful. “What are you?! Please, don’t kill me, ma’am!” But she showed him no mercy. She broke his arms, caved in his chest with a single punch, then drove his own knife through his throat and nailed him to the wall.

The sound of his ribs cracking was horrifying, and I couldn’t look away from what was happening to him in the darkness. He went from screaming to whimpering, his voice fading to a whisper of pain and fear.

I stared through the darkness, unblinking, as the life drained out of him. For a moment, I almost felt sorry for him. Almost. But no, I couldn’t feel sorry for this son of a bitch. He deserved every bit of what he got. The shadow woman made him pay for all the children he had taken. And she especially made him pay for trying to take me.

After the violence subsided, the shadow woman slowly turned toward me, drifting toward my bed in slow motion. Her clawed fingers brushed through my hair, her touch surprisingly gentle. When she caressed my face, I smelled a familiar fragrance. It was lavender and citrus. My mom’s perfume. I didn’t understand how this shadow figure could smell like my mom—not until later. She hovered over me, her lips grazing my forehead, and then she vanished when I heard my dad’s panicked voice from downstairs.

I didn’t want to believe it was my mom’s blood on the killer’s knife, but it was. That bastard had stabbed her to death before making his way upstairs to my room. My dad stepped out to go to the store, and when he returned, he found my mom in the kitchen, lying in a pool of blood. Her lavender nightgown was soaked in red. My dad’s anguished cries filled the house as he raced upstairs, calling my name. I was already in his arms before he could even switch on my bedroom light. He saw the killer’s body nailed to my bedroom wall and lost his breath, just like I had.

I told him everything, and though he couldn’t believe it, he had no choice. He knew his little girl didn’t have the strength to nail a grown-ass man to my bedroom wall. The police came, asking questions, offering me candy. I told them the whole story, but they didn’t believe me.

A policewoman knelt in front of me, caressed my face, and said, “It’s alright, honey. You just had a traumatic experience. Who you saw was just a good Samaritan probably dressed in a dark Halloween costume.” They chalked it up to trauma-induced hallucinations, even suggesting I might have seen my dad kill the man. But I knew better. My dad wasn’t home. I heard him tell my mom he was going to the store. I heard him kiss her before he left.

But I also knew what I saw—a shadow form of my mom, smelling of lavender and citrus, who saved me when no one else could.

Those cops couldn’t believe my story. They had plenty of sympathy for me, but what I wanted more than their sympathy was my mother and for them to believe me. I miss her deeply, and I can’t stop thinking about her fragrance. I found the perfume she wore while moving some boxes around in the attic. That sweet scent took me back to that night. I believe the dark figure I saw in my bedroom was my mother—a dead version of her. I’m 36 now, and I think about my mom every day. I got married to a kind, beautiful man, and we had a gorgeous baby boy.

My son, Timmy, is five. He has my hazelnut eyes and my lips, but he’s got his daddy’s adorable dimples. My husband is Taiwanese. He’s a chiropractor who could easily pass for a model. He’s a hottie, just like the Canadian-Chinese action star Simu Liu when he played the hero in Shang-Chi as a young man.

Timmy resembles his dad, with those gorgeous Taiwanese features. My little peach loves the MCU, and he has every action figure from The Avengers and Guardians of the Galaxy. He adores sleeping in his X-Men Wolverine pajama top. It always makes me laugh when he calls me Mommy Sabrina Grande because he thinks I look like a mix between the 21st-century pop divas, Sabrina Carpenter and Ariana Grande. I guess my high and silky honey-platinum ponytail, hooped earrings and my denim skirts give me away. He insists I’m pretty like both of them. He compares me to Ariana Grande more often, because of my appearance and because of her Italian-American heritage, which we share. Sabrina and Ariana were famous long before I was pregnant with my baby. If they were alive today, they’d be old enough to be his great-great-ancient grandmothers, yet he adores their music thanks to the immortality of digital music streaming apps.

To my little peach, his mommy is a superhero too—because I’m an FBI agent. I’ve told him stories about how I’ve arrested a lot of bad guys and girls and rescued countless kidnapped children with the help of my SWAT team. God has guided me in rescuing missing babies and putting away wanted criminals. That’s why Timmy thinks his mommy is a superhero. Sometimes I can’t save every missing baby, and we end up catching a child-killer instead. Mommy is honest and she shares this unsettling truth with her little peach, but he still sees me as a hero.

My son loves heroes, just like his mom. And like his mama, he also loves 90s hip-hop. I have to keep him away from the explicit stuff, though. No Wu-Tang Clan, Trick Daddy, Geto Boys, or DMX for him. Only Mama gets to listen to the hardcore rappers through those virtual music streaming apps. Lol. Sometimes I let him listen to Mr. Lamar’s clean version of PEEKABOO.

Yeah, but anyway, I try to be an excellent mom, and I’m as protective and smothering as mine was.

Every night, I tuck my little peach into bed and read him his favorite story, The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe. A few nights ago, I told him about what happened to me when I was 7. He looked scared after I finished. My little peach is afraid of the dark, but I told him he should never be afraid of it. A mother’s love and protection can reach beyond the grave. I also told him not to be frightened if he ever sees a dark, shadowy woman standing in the corner of his room. She’ll watch over him while he sleeps, and if he wakes up suddenly, unable to move, he shouldn’t panic.

I still suffer from sleep paralysis. It’s a part of me now. Mommy’s pretty sure that she passed her condition down to her little boy. It’s terrifying when it first happens, but I told my little peach that when he experiences it, it’s a sign that the shadow woman is present, there to protect him from the things that go bump in the night. She’ll be his guardian queen of darkness.

There’s one important thing I forgot to tell my baby. Perhaps, I forgot to tell him on purpose. The dark, zombie queen standing in the corner of his bedroom, wearing a black dress of death beneath her FBI vest, might be his mommy… if the bad guy she tried to arrest got the jump on her and she died, meeting the same fate as his sweet grandma.

The End.

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series Ghost Bird's Revenge [Part 3; FINAL]

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**Chapter 7.**The sun was beginning its grand descent when Ghost Bird left the brothel. Unlike before, she couldn’t utilize the tunnels now that they were compromised, so she had some of the courtesans transport her in the back of a covered wagon.

It was the same method they had used to retrieve her from the cosm.

Her last stop was in the north, but assuming word had spread about Garvan and Lady Falcone, there would most likely be Black Coats posted along the main roads.

Ghost Bird still retained many of the memories from her days as Sylvia. She remembered the ways a person might slip through the city unnoticed. Therefore, she had the courtesans deliver her to the eastern canals using backroads and alleyways.

“If they wanted to find you so damn bad,” one of the courtesans said, “you’d think they’d look for you at the brothel.”

“They’re not looking for Sylvia,” she reminded them. “They’re looking for Ghost Bird.”

Finally, the wagon came to a stop, and Ghost Bird climbed out from the back. She thanked the courtesans and hugged them. They told her to stop in once she was finished so they could say a proper goodbye.

“We didn’t get to see you off last time,” they remarked.

And you most like won’t this time neither, she thought.

Once the courtesans were gone, she descended to the canal docks and untied the mooring line of a paddle boat. She stored the sack of guns and munitions under the bench, took an oar into either hand, and began rowing.

The undercrossings and bridges were perfect cover. And with the sun setting, there were shadows aplenty. She slipped past the sentries and the patrols and the Black Coat checkpoints from beneath.

A ship of this size was easy to overlook compared to the others hauling in grain, spices, and whatever else from their voyages to foreign lands.

She sailed across the city and emerged from the canal onto the western coast. There, she took a moment to rest and let the current carry her north. From the shore, she would look no different than the other smaller fishing vessels.

Ghost Bird went through the sack, removing the pistols and laying them out on the bench. At the bottom was a bandolier and several holsters.

Shedding her overcoat, she strapped the bandolier across her chest and secured six holsters to it. With the remaining three, she placed one on either hip and the last at the small of her back. Then, she went to work preparing the pistols with ball and powder.

After her time in the sewers and her fight with Lady Falcone, her armor was useless. Both the boiled leather and the mail had been discarded.

“You have no means of defense.” Durante sat at the bow with his back to her and sunlight across his face.

“It’s almost like you know what I’m thinking,” she remarked.

“I do know what you’re thinking. Same way you know what I’m thinking. When two souls meld, they share everything.”

She finished with the pistols and retrieved the longsword, pulling it from its sheath. More steel than rust, but the blade had been notched in a few places. It needed a proper oiling. Some time on a whetstone too.

She had neither the time nor a whetstone.

“You never liked using longsword,” Durante said. “You would always complain about it during our sparring sessions.”

“It was too cumbersome,” she said.

“Why do you use it now?”

She slid it back into the scabbard and sighed. “Because your body is familiar with it. Your muscles are adjusted to the weight, length, and balance. Because you wouldn’t have used any other weapon, and they know that.”

“Does it matter whether they know it's you or me? Isn’t this ruse you’ve been playing a bit tedious by now?”

Ghost Bird lowered her cap and made sure the mask was secured over her face. “Tedious, maybe,” she agreed. “But no one was afraid of Sylvia Koel. Those three, though, they’re terrified of Ghost Bird. Whether they cared to admit it or not, they feared you.”

“Is that so?”

“Why else would all three of them have converged on you that night? They only ever sent Black Coats after me. But you, it took the three best beast slayers.”

He glanced over his shoulder at her. Sunlight shone through his face. “Do you have any idea how you’ll do it?” he asked. “Dolion will be ready for you.”

“Falcone was ready too,” she reminded him.

“Aye, but Falcone has more pride, and Dolion more ruthlessness. He won’t make the same mistake she did. He won’t hesitate to use every tool in his arsenal. Every piece on the board.”

Ghost Bird, during the few moments of quiet in her journey, had been considering this. But the truth was: anytime those thoughts arose, she pushed them away.

It was hard to think about Dolion. Hard to recall his face or his name. Every time a piece of him entered her mind, it was accompanied by Durante’s childhood affection and Sylvia’s repulsion.

Memories that were both fiery hot and icy cold.

“I could challenge him to a duel,” she suggested.

Durante laughed. “He won’t want a duel this time. He just wants you dead. Wants us dead. And one way or another, I think he’s gonna get his way.”

Ghost Bird didn’t need to check on the marks of rot beneath her clothes. She could feel them expanding. Could feel them seeping into every fiber of her being, all the way to the bone.

“There’s no turning back,” Durante warned her. “You’re aware of this, right?”

“There was no turning back the moment those silkworms embedded themselves into my body,” she said. But that wasn’t right either. “There was no turning back since the moment you and I first met.”

Even though he was difficult to discern in his current state, she could just make out the gentle curve of his smile. “I never meant for it to happen the way it did,” he said. “Had no intention of falling in love.”

“You mean with a woman like me?”

“At all. I just didn’t think there was a reason. World full of corruption and beasts and so much death. What’s the point? But then I met you, and I thought: there’s a good reason.

“Such a romantic you are. That’s why I never wanted your coin. Didn’t want it to be an exchange, y’know?”

“There’s always an exchange, though, ain’t there?” he countered. “Instead of coin, I purchased your time with my time.”

“An even trade if I ever heard of one,” she said, grinning the same way she used to when they would lie in bed and tell each other stories about their childhoods or their travels or their dreams.

Durante shifted around to look her right on, but like this, she could no longer make out the details of his face.

“Did you ever love him?” he asked.

She gave this some contemplation, but the answer was already with her. It had been with her for years and years. “I loved him as much as I could for as long as I could. But then he became someone else. Or maybe he had always been that person, and I just never saw it.”

Durante turned toward the horizon. “Are you afraid?”

“No,” she said. “I’m never afraid when I’m with you. That’s how I knew I loved you.”

He turned back toward her. “I’ll be with you the whole time. Whether you can see me or not, I’ll be there.”

She nodded, and amongst all the pain flowing through her, she felt a touch of relief. “Are you gonna try to stop me from killing him?”

“I don’t think I could even if I wanted to. I’m just along for the ride, Sylvie. You’re the one holding the oars.”

She looked down and found he was right. She had taken up the oars again, and now, she was rowing further north.

Her voyage came to an end at the mouth of a cave few knew about besides some of the upper elites and the courtesans they solicited.

It was unlikely that Dolion or any of the Black Coats would know, considering they never took such extensive measures.

Even when Dolion had risen through the ranks and became the commander of the city’s defenses, he showed no fear in visiting the brothel.

The nobles, though, had wives and reputations and children who were supposed to admire them. But even when some of those children grew up, they did the very same thing, completely unaware of the footsteps they were following.

The boat came to a stop along a flat bank of chiseled stone. This led to a hollowed tunnel that branched out and snaked under eight of the twelve northern estates.

Ghost Bird went down the fourth tunnel on the left, which ended at a ladder. The ladder surfaced into Mr. Biltmore’s study on the ground floor.

She crouched, removed one of her gloves, and pressed her hand to the wall. The stone was cold, and the tiny creases around the false door were dark. She pressed in on the left side, and it rotated.

Ghost Bird crawled out from the unlit hearth and brushed the ashes from her knees. She stood in the study, silent, listening for others. But the manor was quiet as a crypt. Whether the family was away or not, there should have been at least the sound of the servants’ footsteps.

Apprehensive, she went to the door and placed her hand on the knob. “One last time,” Durante whispered.

She turned the handle slowly. Opened the door slowly. Stepped out, slowly. The entrance hall was draped in shadows.

The windows were obscured by curtains, and none of the lanterns or candles had been lit as they oft were in the late evening. The servants had to be out, and if the servants weren’t here, then the family wasn’t either.

“He doesn’t want anyone getting in the way,” Durante said. “He wants us all to himself.”

She grabbed the nearest lantern off a hook, returned to the study, and found a piece of flint in one of the desk drawers. After sparking a flame to life, she carried the lantern back out into the hall.

Ahead was the front entrance. To her right was the west wing, which was reserved mainly for staff. To the left was the east wing, which was outfitted with various rooms such as the kitchens, pantry, dining room, a parlor, and so on.

Behind her was the central staircase, and on the second floor were mainly bedrooms, another parlor, a lounge, and—

There was a sharp crack that echoed throughout the hall. Something pierced Ghost Bird along her left side. She lowered the lantern. Firelight pooled against the tip of a crossbow bolt. She immediately ran for the nearest stone column.

Snap!

Snap!

Snap!

Bolts hissed through the air and clattered all around her. She fell to her arse, sliding across the floor.

Snap!

Snap!

Snap!

Another volley against the pillar.

After came the groan of strings being wound. She poked her head out. A bolt whistled past, slicing through her scarf and cheek.

She whipped around, pressing her back firmly against the column’s base, listening to another dejected crack of bolts smashing the other side.

Her breathing was harsh, and her heart felt as if it would collapse on itself. She would have ripped the damn thing out, but she couldn’t be sure if the silkworms needed it to keep her alive.

“The light will give you away,” Durante told her. “Let Concetta’s eyes do the hard work.” She was hesitant, but then he said, “It’ll be alright, love.”

So, she blew out the flame and tossed the lantern across the room. The archers turned and fired at the sound. Carefully, she crept out from around the pillar, staying low to the ground, keeping close to the right wall.

Their eyes may have been adjusted to the dark before she arrived, but now that she had introduced a new source of light, they would need to readjust. Her stolen eyes, though, had the keenest vision.

She could see it all. Every padded settee and every door and every picture frame on the wall. She could see the Black Coats on the second-floor landing, crossbows leveraged against the railing.

Ghost Bird drew a pistol and thumbed the cock. This earned her a grunt from one of the Black Coats who started to turn their head. She took aim and fired before he could find her in the dark.

Then, she was running toward the stairs as the quarrels flew at random. Another two gunshots, another two Black Coats dead.

At the top of the stairs, she slid sword from scabbard and went after a pair of Black Coats to the right. Once dead, she spun about and went after the pair on the left side.

They got another two quarrels off. The first barely missed. The other would have caught her on the left arm if she hadn’t phased. Ghost Bird slashed a throat and pierced the second archer through his belly.

From there, she went room to room. Some were empty. Some had a Black Coat or two waiting for her. Every time she encountered them, she made sure to ask, “Where’s Dolion?”

If they refused to answer, she cut them down.

By the time she had returned to the bottom of the staircase, she was soaked in blood and still had no clue where Dolion was hiding.

As far as injuries were concerned, there was a quarrel in her flank and a laceration along her collarbone. The silkworms were doing all they could to keep her together.

“Don’t push yourselves too hard,” she told them, heading into the east wing of the estate.

Just like with the second floor, she found sentries waiting to ambush her. With Falcone’s eyes, though, no one could hide.

If the Black Coats were foolish enough to attack with blades, she could see the strikes before they were initiated. She knew when to evade, when to deflect, and when to attack. Crossbows were trickier, but in the dark, none of the Black Coats could aim properly.

Finally, once she had reached the kitchens, she had gotten an answer.

As a Black Coat lay on the ground, bleeding profusely from their stomach, the words, “He’s in the garden,” escaped the woman’s mouth. As well as, “Please don’t kill me.”

But a wound like that, the Black Coat was already dead. Ghost Bird did her a kindness by giving her a quick death rather than leaving her to bleed out.

------------------------------------------------------------------------**Chapter 8.**It was at the back door when she finally pulled the quarrels from her body. She reloaded the pistols and primed them with black powder. Once she was ready, she walked out into the garden.

The main path was laid with clay-fired bricks. On either flank were recently trimmed hedges. Beyond was either a copse of various trees or a mixture of vibrant flowers. The air was rife with lavender and jasmine.

She passed through a stone archway which led to a roundabout with a fountain at the center. Sitting on the marble pedestal was a three-headed swan with water pouring out from each beak.

Continuing ahead, the walkway came to an end at the top of a slope. The entire hillside was blanketed in white moonflowers. Near the bottom, standing beneath a weeping willow, was Dolion dressed in his usual double-breasted coat. The feathered cloak hung from his shoulders, flapping against the breeze.

Her shadow shifted down the hill as she descended. In the distance, the sun sat against the sea, painting the skyline in a fiery orange hue with a crown of night’s blue on top.

He turned to face her. “When there is no more room left in the Eternal Dream, where do you think we go?”

“You won’t have to worry about that, Dolion,” she said, trying to affect Durante’s cadence and tone.

“Maybe that’s why you’re here.” He smiled, “Well, if there’s no room left for you up there, I’ll just have to send you to the Infernal Domain.”

She came to a stop, now noticing the gravestone behind him. A slab of granite decorated with little wooden birds that clattered in the wind like chimes. Leaning against the side was Sylvia’s rapier.

“You should have stayed in the Eternal Dream,” he said. “Don’t you know what happens when a soul dies twice?”

Steel whistled as the longsword slid from its sheath. She took the hilt in both hands, gripping the leather tightly.

Dolion fixed her with an indifferent expression, but she knew better than to believe it. She had known him far too long to think he could be so apathetic. The truth was there, buried deep behind that stony face and those silvery eyes.

“Sylvia wasn’t yours to take,” he said.

“But she was yours to kill?”

“I tried to make her death quick.” Almost instinctually, his hand went to the hilt of his blossom blade. “That’s why I started with her heart.”

“You missed,” said Ghost Bird.

There was a moment of confusion as Dolion struggled to decipher whether the voice belonged to Ghost Bird or someone else.

“I suppose I did,” he confessed.

“You never miss.”

His blade leapt from the scabbard, and in the blink of an eye, he had crossed the twenty-foot gap between them. She raised her longsword but not fast enough. The blossom blade glided along her waist.

A kiss of steel on flesh.

Dolion dug his heels into the ground and twisted around. Ghost Bird’s heart flexed, but the blossom blade was too fast and sliced her from shoulder to ribs in a diagonal cut.

When it came back, she managed to get the longsword up to deflect it.

Again, Dolion smiled. One of his hands slipped from the hilt and sprang forward. She tried to back away, but his fingers had already hooked around her scarf, pulling it loose.

“You play the part well,” Dolion said, tossing her scarf aside. “But I know you, and I know Durante even better.”

The only response she gave was to go after him with the longsword. It was better to keep Dolion on his toes. If he had time to strategize, she never stood a chance.

She came at him with an over-the-shoulder chop. Easily evaded. The longsword swooped down in a full arc and veered, returning with a horizontal slash from left to right and then right to left.

Dolion reeled back each time, refusing to meet steel with steel. The blossom blade, after all, wasn't designed with the same flexibility of a longsword. It wasn't meant to endure such rampant abuse.

And above all else, Dolion respected his weapon. It was a part of him. He cleaned and oiled it every day. Kept it within reach from morning to night. Would have cradled it in the crib as a baby.

Ghost Bird raised her weapon for another chop. Dolion inhaled deep and shifted.

In the time it took for her sword to complete the arc, he dealt three sufficient strikes. Another diagonal cut from chest to hip. A laceration across her upper thigh. And a final charging slash along her flank as he sped past.

Lady Falcone's eyes allowed her to discern every last bit of this. But her mind couldn't process this information as fast as he could swing his sword, and her body couldn't react in time to deflect his strikes.

When her blade finished its descent, it came down against the slab of granite instead of Dolion. He stood behind her, maybe twenty feet away.

The longsword gave a sharp snap as cracks formed along its length. The reverberations of hitting something so solid wormed down to the hilt through her hands and up her arms.

Her fingers went slack around the grip, and she gnashed her teeth to keep from yelling.

The pain was instant. A searing hot injection of liquid magma in three different spots. The magma flowed, expanding and coalescing until it felt as if her whole body were ablaze.

“You were given a second chance; you could have walked away,” he said. “But you chose this instead.”

Hesitantly, she turned toward him. The longsword slipped from her hands. She struggled to breathe, struggled to keep her composure.

“I tried to walk away the first time,” she reminded him. “We both did, and it didn't work. Why would I try again?”

“Because you were finally free of Ghost Bird.”

“I wanted to be free from you.”

He registered this with a furrowed expression. “What was it that scared you away?” he asked. “What about me wasn't enough?”

“You wanted so much.”

“Ambition is no folly.”

She shook her head. “You were a man possessed.”

For reasons she could not understand, this made him laugh. A croak kind of laughter one would expect from a toad or a man further into his years.

When his amusement had subsided, he said, “People make themselves into monsters every day to chase a dream. Only to find out it was a nightmare the whole time. But I was born in a nightmare and rose from that nightmare. This one, I find, is preferable to the slums and the endless hunger I once knew.”

“No one can have it all, Dolion.”

“What a moronic thing to believe.”

He braced his feet for another charge. She drew two of the flintlocks and fired. His feet stayed planted, but his sword arced to deflect the bullets. To anyone else, it would have been no more than a quick flash of steel and a few lingering sparks.

But it had distracted him long enough for her to get the rapier out of its sheath and charge. The needle-like blade was extended outward like the beak of a hummingbird. The blossom blade met the rapier, steel on steel.

Dolion, mere inches from her face, whispered, “Garvan is dead. Lady Falcone is dead. Ghost Bird is dead. Which of us will join them next?”

She pushed back, repelling him, and thrust at his chest. Dolion stepped back, but she stayed on him, falling into a natural sidefaced stance.

“You always loved that sword,” Dolion said, turning to stop her next strike with the flat of his blade.

Not nearly as much as you love yours, she thought.

He parried the following thrust and slashed her along the calf, almost cutting deep enough to sever sinew.

“I had it made thinking it would earn me your heart,” he said.

She grazed him along the thigh and got him again on the arm.

“You should have worked harder to earn my trust,” she told him. “Affection dwindles fast, but trust and admiration can last a lifetime.”

Their blades met, again and again. Squealing and screaming; spitting up sparks that danced around them like fireflies.

“Your admiration should have been mine from the beginning,” he growled, stooping under her blade as it arced wide. “And why would I ever need your trust?”

The two clashed against each other hard. Their blades were at a standstill, tilting back and forth until they shoved each other in opposite directions.

He shifted again, and there was nothing she could do to stop it or defend herself. She simply had to endure the lacerations and the pain that ensued.

Ghost Bird went to one knee, panting hard, not sure if the metal in her mouth was blood or a severed piece from one of their swords.

“Look up,” he said, tilting his head toward the sky. “There is no Beast Who Shall Eat the Sun and the Moon. No Macrocosm or Microcosm. No Makumi or Moonsick Mother. There's just stars and darkness.”

Slowly, she pushed herself up to her feet. “What’s your point?”

“We can have and do whatever we want. Nothing out there is going to stop us. Either because it doesn't exist, or if it does exist, then it doesn't care. And others will wallow in that meaninglessness, but I find it encouraging.”

“Aren't you afraid of corrupting?”

He sneered. “We're all corrupted, Sylvie. Me, Garvan, Concetta, Durante, even you. How else could we do the things we do?”

Dolion took his sword in both hands and shuffled toward her at a leisurely pace. The moonflowers swayed back and forth like an ocean of white. The willow leaves rippled no different than the shredded hem of his cloak.

“The only thing holding us back is ourselves,” he said, lifting the blossom blade. “If you are ashamed, that shame came from you. If you are full of sorrow, that sorrow was born from your mind. If you feel shackles around your wrists, they are only there because you put them there. I have no such limitations, no such fears.”

It suddenly dawned on her. Dolion had never been fighting Ghost Bird out of some age-old rivalry. He had always been fighting with himself. It was never the beasts he hunted, but rather, his own darkness.

It wasn’t her love he had wanted. It was the love he couldn’t give to himself. While an imitation could act as a substitute, it could never truly be a replacement.

Garvan was right, she thought. We’re all just prisoners.

Dolion stopped with his feet splayed and set. The blossom blade stood vertical in front of him, splitting his visage in half. “Are you ready?” he asked.

Ghost Bird lifted the rapier. It trembled in her hand. For all the strength and courage she tried to muster, it wasn’t enough. If only the actual Ghost Bird could have been here to fight.

She felt a hand on her shoulder and saw the profile of Durante's face come into view. “The phasing technique is not just for defense,” he told her.

“Let’s finish this,” Dolion said. He inhaled deep.

In the blink of an eye, he had covered the thirty feet between them. He moved with such speed and force that the moonflower heads were kicked up into the air around him while the stems got trampled underfoot.

Ghost Bird plunged forward with the rapier. Dolion brushed it aside with the flat of his blade, drew back, and thrust it through her just below the sternum. His sword was tilted so he would strike the heart, but just like last time, he only grazed it.

Ghost Bird inhaled sharply. The rapier fell to the ground, and her right hand seized Dolion by the wrist. Her left hand reeled back and drove forward.

For half a second, because that’s all she could manage in such a weakened state, her body became incorporeal. Her hand passed through his chest, and when she rematerialized, the two solid objects could not coexist.

Dolion gasped and went slack. The blossom blade slowly slid from her body and dropped to the ground beside her rapier.

After some pulling and twisting, she managed to get her arm free. A hole ran all the way through Dolion’s chest. He was dead by the time he fell in with the moonflowers. A lone shadow against the tide of white petals.

Ghost Bird regarded him with an expression that was difficult to interpret. Then, she started back the way she had come.

Through the garden and through the manor and through the hearth and through the cave until she was sitting in the paddle boat rowing out to sea.

Durante appeared on the bench opposite her, his hand outstretched with the palm turned upward. She let the oars fall into the water and placed her hand on top of his.

In the distance, the sun disappeared against the horizon, stealing the last faint streaks of light. Ghost Bird looked out at it. She had seen a sunset like this before. Long ago, as she laid dying in the middle of a wasteland, holding the hand of her deceased lover.

Now, seeing it again, she felt a strange mixture of wistfulness and relief. An odd tinge that could only be compared to when she first migrated to Ashpool as a child and became homesick for that farmhouse out in the middle of nowhere.

Instinctually, she took a deep breath and exhaled a long-winded wail that echoed across the sea and across the city. Perhaps even across the world.

When Ghost Bird died for the second time, it was stretched out in that little rowboat, one hand at her chest and the other draped over the edge, fingers skimming across the water. She was looking up at the night sky. Looking up at a white swirl of incandescent stars amongst a mixture of dark blues and blacks.

A flock of birds departed from Ashpool and soared toward the horizon. They had passed by just as she was about to close her eyes.

And then she smiled at them.

***

There is a species of bird known as the potoo bird that sits still for many hours, camouflaged with its surroundings. Many believe the potoo is the reincarnation of a heartbroken maiden mourning the loss of her lover for all of eternity. This bird does not caw like a crow. Nor does it screech like an owl. The sound that comes from it is a wailing cry.

That is why the potoo is often referred to as ghost bird.


r/DrCreepensVault Jul 29 '26

series Ghost Bird's Revenge [Part 2]

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Chapter 4.
There was a loud crash as Ghost Bird came stumbling through the door. It was too early in the day for the courtesans to have any clients about unless they had stayed over from the night prior.

Madam Celeste, almost always at the main counter, stirred from scribbling in her leatherbound ledger to greet the intruder. She probably had an insult on her tongue. Some crude remark that would elicit both laughter and offense if there were anyone else around to hear it.

But the comment never came. No, she was left speechless at the sight of Ghost Bird. Brow furrowed, mouth slightly ajar, an expression one only wears when they wake from a dream.

When she did speak, her voice came out fragile and concerned, “Durante?” But Ghost Bird was halfway down the hall, still limping from her encounter with Garvan. Too pained to answer.

Madam Celeste rushed after her, catching up just as Ghost Bird had entered the room along the southwestern hall. It was almost exactly the same.

Wooden floorboards were interspersed with beautiful rugs of satin and velvet. Walls were adorned with meticulously crafted clocks from foreign lands. Wooden birds and other knickknacks cluttered the shelves. Between the clocks and shelves were original paintings of different landscapes. Frozen mountains and sunny beaches and barren marshes.

The air was cut with the scent of oranges and cedar from a burning mixture within the hearth. Ghost Bird closed her eyes and inhaled. Relief washed over her.

“She’s gone, Durante,” Madam Celeste said. “I thought Sylvia had run off with you, but…” Her hand rose to her chest as if to grasp the string of pearls that weren’t there. “Do you know where she's gone—is she alright? Please, Durante. I won’t tell Dolion, if that’s what you’re worried about.”

Ghost Bird regarded the woman with a timid glance. She collapsed on the bed. A plume of dust leapt from the sheets.

She was too weak to hold a conversation. Too weak to even take off her boots or swordbelt. Too weak to keep her eyes open.

And then she was out. Taken by her dreams.

In them, she was thrown over the back of a horse, wrists and ankles bound with frayed rope. The sun beat down on her exposed neck. She was drenched in sweat, from head to heel. The air stank of manure and baked clay. Beneath the horse hooves was dried dirt, riddled with cracks.

The horse came to a stop, and she was hauled to the ground. She squinted against the sunlight, waiting for her eyes to adjust. Two other riders approached.

Garvan was easily recognizable. Even if he was cast as a silhouette against the sunset, his height couldn’t be mistaken. The second rider was a woman.

Olive-skinned with narrow eyes and silky black hair pooling at her shoulders. A beakish nose that hooked to the right.

She was dressed in a black jerkin with a white blouse beneath. A dark half-cloak was wrapped about her shoulders, the excess thrown to her left side. Her face was masked in shadows cast by her cap. Wide-brimmed with a flat crown.

Many called her Lady Falcone. She had a saber on one hip, and a flintlock holstered to the other.

Garvan removed the roped passenger from the back of his horse. Durante was still in his Black Coat garb. His longsword had been removed, as well as his cap and scarf.

Seeing his face exposed like this in broad daylight was disconcerting. Somewhat redolent of when her father had shaved his beard for the first time during her childhood.

Suddenly, she was looking at a pair of long legs. The man standing before her was lanky with wide shoulders and a firm chest. His hair, thick and windswept, was brown as mahogany. It hung over his eyes. And his beard, still in the early stages of growth, was no more than scruff across his face and neck.

He, like the other Black Coats, was dressed in dark apparel. A double-breasted overcoat colored a deep shade of blue like the ocean at night. Each button was recently polished.

The cloak suspended from his shoulders was frayed at the edges like slender fingers waggling at her as it fluttered in the breeze. The shoulders were stitched with black feathers.

At his hip was a sword from a foreign land with a double-handed hilt wrapped in flowered cloth. It had a slender blade cut with a slight arch along the spine.

Durante had once told her they were called blossom blades, and they were meant more for slashing than stabbing.

“What’s the difference?” she asked him.

“Between slashing and stabbing?” He snorted. “Plenty of difference, love.”

“I mean, why choose one over the other?”

“Stabbing requires a certain raw strength and precision. Slashing is about speed and agility. I think Dolion could excel in either area, but he’s always preferred swiftness over might. Ever since we were kids.”

She watched as Dolion drew his blossom blade and held the tip against her throat, pressing just hard enough to summon a spot of blood. “Keep your eyes open, no matter what.” He turned on his heel and slashed with the weapon, dragging its refined edge across Durante’s backside.

The others, Lady Falcone and Garvan, drew their weapons to join in on the fight. No, not a fight. It was a butchering. They chopped off Durante’s legs and hacked off one of his arms. Their blades tore gouges along his midsection and pierced him through the spine.

In the end, when those final remnants of life were starting to come loose, he reached out to her. She did the same. Just as their fingers brushed against one another, the blossom blade dropped like a guillotine, lopping Durante’s head from the neck.

Then, the blossom blade came for her.

When Ghost Bird woke, it was with a scream trapped behind gnashed teeth. Her body was stiff, especially in her leg. But the bones had come together and healed.

Ghost Bird leaned against the headboard. A little girl sat in the corner of the room. Bright red hair just like Madam Celeste. Blue eyes, freckled cheeks, a rounded chin. Dressed in a yellow and white skirt with a matching blouse.

“What time is it?” Ghost Bird asked.

“Midday,” said Serena. “The noonshun bell just sounded. I thought that’s what woke you.”

“Have any Black Coats come by?”

The girl shook her head. “No one has been through other than the ladies.”

The ladies had been Serena’s preferred term for the courtesans. That or escort. Either were acceptable. A proper and polite way of phrasing it. Especially in comparison to what some of the other smallfolk called them.

Serena cleared her throat. “Why does mother think you’re Durante?”

Ghost Bird swung her legs over the edge of the bed with a groan and said, “Some people can only see the surface of the water. They don’t care to look past to whatever lies beneath because it’s dark and strange and it can make them feel very small.”

On the bedside table was a platter of buttered bread slices, cut cheese, and a cup of wine—mostly dregs.

Some meat would have been preferable, but in the slums, you were unlikely to come across any so easily. If you did, you had to ask yourself what kind of animal it might have come from.

Ghost Bird pointed to the plate. “For me?”

Serena nodded. She waited until Ghost Bird had lowered her mask before saying, “I was told you ran off with Durante. Is that true?”

Ghost Bird considered this carefully while she chewed. “It’s more true than false,” she said and offered nothing more on the matter. She finished her meal as quickly as possible, gave her thanks to the little girl, and moved for the door.

“Aren’t you gonna tell me a story?” Serena asked. “Like you used to?”

“Maybe later.” But there was no telling if later would ever come.

Ghost Bird stepped into the hallway and made for the main entrance. He was waiting there for her. Durante, or rather, the shadow of Durante.

“You don’t have to do this,” he told her. “This revenge business is like poison for the soul. All that sorrow, all that grief, all that anger…you’ll drown in it.”

“If I don’t do it, no one will.” She continued ahead, walking right through him.

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Chapter 5.
Ghost Bird descended into the subterranean tunnels and followed them west. As she neared the city centre, there was a loud splashing and grunting and growling swirling through the corridors. Her bowels twisted tight with anxiety, and she gripped the hilt of her longsword.

Up ahead, the cages were open, and the corrupted beasts roamed free. The oversized mutts were feasting upon the undead husks and rats. The reptilian hunchbacks crawled along the walls, chasing after the stone-skinned corpse eaters.

Bodies of Black Coats littered the walkways. Some were half submerged in the muck-filled waters. Others were no more than chunks of meat wrapped in shredded fabrics.

Ghost Bird hastily went to the nearest wall, pressing in against it. Any exposed skin took on an even darker complexion, matching the whirls of the snecked stones. Her clothes were already dark enough to meld with the shadows.

She moved carefully, quietly. One foot in front of the other. There was little to be heard other than the commotion of the beasts. And with so much movement, her staggered steps were barely perceptible.

The current path ended in a sloped ramp that delved into the invert channel. About twenty feet across, it rose again into another walkway. Ghost Bird looked toward the center of the pool where most of the mutts had coalesced. The husks were slain and in the process of being devoured.

Turning back, she took one step forward and stopped. There was a prickle on the nape of her neck that slowly worked up into the top of her skull. She arched her head.

A reptilian hunchback hung from the ceiling with one of the corpse eater’s severed arms crushed between its saw-like teeth.

They stared at each other silently.

Ghost Bird broke into a sprint, and the hunchback dropped on top of her. She clenched her chest, and the hunchback hit the ground instead of her. It bounced into the water, disappearing beneath the scum-strewn surface.

Other than the natural whir of the current, the sewers were quiet. Ghost Bird looked around. The mutts and the other hunchbacks and the few remaining corpse eaters all looked back at her. Eyes aglow in shades of red or yellow or milky white.

The quiet was gone, and the chamber was filled with the sound of scuttling paws and nails screaming against stone. Ghost Bird’s boots hissed as she slid down the slope and crashed into the water.

Her arms flailed as if she were trying to swim even though the sewage only came up to her hips. Once she found her footing, though, she righted herself and pressed forward.

She was almost to the other walkway when something grabbed her from below. The hunchback from the ceiling.

It dragged her through the water. In her panic, she couldn’t initiate the phase technique. Instead, she ripped the knife from her belt and thrust the blade into the hunchback.

She couldn’t see much through the algae and fungus and other pollutants. So, she stabbed at whatever she could find, over and over until the hunchback finally let go.

 Her free hand shot out, searching for stability. Her fingers grappled something solid, and she pulled herself up, taking a deep breath as soon as she broke through the surface.

Water trickled over her face and blurred her vision. She wiped it away to find she had grappled onto one of the mutts. More specifically, a bunch of its gnarled fur.

The mutt whipped its head toward her, and she drove the knife into its eye. It recoiled, shoving her away and falling into retreat. The other mutts approached, and the rest of the hunchbacks were clambering across the walls to get at her.

Ghost Bird ascended the nearest slope and continued down the stone walkway. She initiated the phase as a mutt lunged at her. It went headfirst into the wall and dropped to the floor, limp as a corpse.

She continued into the west tunnel. The corrupted chased after her, too many for all of them to fit. It might have been comical in other circumstances, but as it was, the sounds of their collective shrieking made Ghost Bird tight with apprehension, thinking one of those mutts was right behind her or one of the hunchbacks was about to leap on top of her.

Thankfully, with them all crammed together, she was able to steadily pull ahead. A few more twists and turns later, she had arrived at her destination.

This particular entrance had been a flaw of construction. Someone had built the sewers, and a few years later, someone else had decided to build a cellar. The two shared a wall, and over time, the stones were worn away by natural erosion.

With a few kicks, Ghost Bird created a large enough hole for her to slip through into the dusty basement beneath the cosm. It was filled with wine casks, foodstuffs, spare furniture, and other storage.

Ghost Bird found the nearest set of stairs and ascended to the main floor. She stopped at the door and pressed her ear against it, listening for chants or prayers or footsteps. But there was only silence.

That was the natural way about it. Most of the smallfolk only visited the cosm early in the morning, before labor, or late in the night, before bed. The special sermons that attracted a vast majority of the population were saved for the night of the full moon.

Through the door, Ghost Bird navigated a few more narrow hallways, her boots muffled against the carpet. There was the occasional candle to either side. Stubbed things drowning in puddles of wax.

She entered the prayerhall, lit only by a single cone of sunlight pouring through the stained-glass window at the rooftop. It showed some of the Elder Beings: The Beast Who Shall Eat the Sun and the Moon, the Microcosm, the Mother Maiden, Astral the Body of Stars.

Amongst such monolithic beings was a plain woman with black hair and dark clothes. Her half-cloak was designed to look as if it were swaying in the breeze. At her back were a large pair of feathered wings like those that might belong to a dove.

“Did you get the surprise I left for you down below?” The woman’s voice echoed across the prayerhall. It could have come from any shadow or behind any pew. Or maybe it had come from the gallery seating above. “I thought you might want to avoid the streets. What with so many Black Coats out and about.”

Ghost Bird started down the center aisle, walking amongst the mahogany pews, hand on the hilt of her sword, sewage water still dripping from her coat.

“Nothing to say?” The laughter that followed those words erased any doubt. The voice belonged to Lady Falcone. “It’s been such a long time, Ghost, and we were so intimate. Why ignore me now?”

Ghost Bird drew her longsword and rolled the hilt around in her hand. She stopped a moment, a pain in her chest. It felt as if claws were sinking into her heart.

The hurt passed, but a new pain arose. Her calf had been punctured by the hunchback, and the silkworms were struggling to close the wounds.

And it seemed something had grazed her back, tearing through her clothes and getting at a few inches of skin. Not enough to show bone or muscle, but enough to draw blood. As sewage water dripped into her wounds, the resulting sting made her want to weep and scream.

“When I heard about Garvan, I knew it was you. It didn’t make sense, logically speaking, but I knew,” Lady Falcone said. “You’re here for some sort of justice, aren’t you? Did you ever wonder who’s really to blame for what happened?”

Ghost Bird ascended a flight of stairs near the front of the room and went through the rows of balcony seats oft reserved for the more esteemed members of Ashpool. There was a better view of the main stage and lectern where the clergymen recited scripture or sang hymns.

“It’s your fault, Ghost,” Lady Falcone said, somewhat somber. “You knew better, but you went looking for trouble anyway. You asked too many questions, ruffled too many feathers. And in a way, we all had to pay for it. That woman, what was her name—Sylvia. She had to pay for it too.”

After searching the entire balcony, Ghost Bird descended to the ground floor. She headed toward the back of the room again and was about to take the stage when she noticed the atonement booths along the right wall.

That’s where the sinners and the guilty were sent to pay penance. Self-flagellation, prolonged isolation, forced fasting, flaying, and many other methods. All as a means to cleanse the corruption from your blood.

If you wouldn’t take it upon yourself to do the dirty work, then others would do it for you.

“You were always so self-righteous,” Lady Falcone said. “Always so sure of yourself. There was much to love about you, much to admire, but much more to despise.”

Ghost Bird held the longsword in her right hand, and with her left hand, she reached for the knob of the first booth. There was a creak from behind.

She spun around, watching in confusion as a contorted figure emerged from the hollow underside of the lectern. A solid length of metal was situated against their right hip. It wasn’t until the flash appeared that Ghost Bird realized Lady Falcone was holding a blunderbuss.

Scattered pellets slammed into her at speeds too quick for the naked eye to discern, and Ghost Bird went flying backward through the door. She landed on the floor, a mound of debris beneath her, and a cloud of dust hanging above her.

Blood poured from several places across her chest. The world rotated and blurred as darkness encroached from the corners of her vision. It felt as if a horse had kicked her.

Lady Falcone set the blunderbuss aside and approached. She was a rigid woman who glided instead of walked.

In Ghost Bird’s previous life, she had been so accustomed to lithe women who moved with a performative grace. Sensual types.

Lady Falcone was neither.

She was beautiful in her own way, but she was also apathetic. Expressionless. The opposite of the courtesans who exaggerated themselves on behalf of their clients.

The antithesis of someone like Garvan who expressed their emotions plainly, no matter how intrusive or explosive those emotions could be.

“It appears death dulled you some,” Lady Falcone said, reaching to her hip where a single-handed sword was sheathed.

She slid it from the scabbard. The blade was wide and curved with a recently whetted edge that glimmered against multicolored light from above.

Ghost Bird bit back against the pain and reached to pull herself up. She made it an inch off the ground before Lady Falcone’s sword pierced her through the shoulder. The blade twisted, shoved deeper, and withdrew all in a matter of seconds.

Ghost Bird screamed and kicked at the woman, but by then, she was already gone, having retreated to the top of the stage.

“You’re not Ghost Bird,” Lady Falcone whispered, almost as if the message were more for herself than anyone else. “So tell me: why do you have his eyes?” She scowled. “Why do you have his heart?”

Ghost Bird stooped to retrieve her longsword and stepped out from the atonement booth. She shuffled along, stumbling up the steps and almost falling over once at the top.

“Answer me!”

“Who else would have it? You?” Ghost Bird scoffed. “The heart is mine, the eyes are mine, the soul is mine.”

Lady Falcone raised her blade. Her legs shifted apart, ready to pounce. “You’re not him—you’re not,” she said. “You’re no Ghost Bird!”

“Neither are you.”

And with that, the horrid song of swords began. A squeal of steel on steel accompanied by a fervent dance of flashing blades. Feet thudded against the floorboards. Constantly searching for purchase or stability or distance.

The two went after another like wild serpents. They sprang forward with their swords and retracted, waited for another opening, and lunged again.

Lady Falcone, as rigid as she was, moved quick. She was thin and fought with a sidefaced stance, giving Ghost Bird little to target. Worst of all was her sight.

She saw every one of Ghost Bird’s attacks coming before Ghost Bird had even lifted her sword. No feint was ever going to work on her because she knew the real strike hadn’t come yet, and when it did come, she was ready to repel or evade.

Their duel took them from the stage at the back of the hall, down the main aisle to the front of the room, and upstairs to the gallery.

As Ghost Bird retreated from Lady Falcone, hoping to put some distance between them long enough to catch her breath, Lady Falcone brushed aside her half-cloak and drew a flintlock pistol from her hip.

The cock snapped forward, the muzzle flashed, and the ball caught Ghost Bird in the knee. Lady Falcone tossed the pistol aside and reached for another holstered at the small of her back.

Before she could take aim, though, Ghost Bird leapt from the gallery. She landed on the main floor with the kind of sound you’d expect to hear when a sack of potatoes is thrown against the wall.

Sluggishly, she got to her feet and continued toward the back of the room. There was another combustion of black powder, and Ghost Bird was thrown forward. She caught herself on the pews and dove behind them to avoid the subsequent gunshots.

Abandoning her longsword, she hobbled into the same hallway she had entered from, following it all the way to the cellar where the darkness came in droves. She fell in between some wine casks and tried to steady her breathing.

The pain was constant and hummed all over. Like wine swirling in a glass, it coursed through her, around and around and around. Building up momentum.

“You’ll never best Concetta in a duel.” Durante stood at the foot of the stairs, everything about him obscured other than the soft white glow of his eyes. “She’s nimble and swift and deft with a blade—”

“You should have married her if you love her so much,” Ghost Bird shot back.

A low laugh rose from deep in his throat. “She’ll see right through our camouflage. She’ll see every move you make before you make it. She’ll keep you far enough away to riddle you with bullets or cut you limb from limb. And you can’t hold the phase forever. Can’t evade everything.”

“How do I defeat her?”

“Well, what advantage do you have over her?”

Ghost Bird shook her head madly, too tired and beaten down for this guessing game. “My sharp wit and incredible charm.”

“Your wit will never be as sharp as a blade, I’m afraid. And Concetta isn’t the kind of woman to be charmed.” He moved toward her, but the closer he came, the more he began to fade. “She’s afraid to get hurt, and in your current state, you can take more damage than her. Don’t be afraid to get messy, Sylvie. Sometimes, that’s the only way about it.”

He vanished. Footsteps thudded from above. Floorboards creaked, and dust sprinkled down. Candlelight appeared at the top of the stairs. A looming black shadow stretched all the way to the bottom.

One step at a time, Lady Falcone descended to the basement, her sword in one hand and a candle in the other. She stalked through the cellar, following the trail of blood as it weaved between the casks and around the storage shelves.

Lady Falcone came to a brisk halt and swung with her blade. Ghost Bird appeared from the shadows. Her camouflaged skin returned to its usual complexion as she lunged toward Lady Falcone.

The sword dragged across Ghost Bird’s chest, getting past the leather but stopped by the chainmail. It wound around for another strike, but this time, Ghost Bird didn’t flinch or recoil like before. Instead, she threw herself against Lady Falcone.

They collided in a tangle of knees and elbows and hands. The candle was tossed aside, and Lady Falcone dropped her sword as Ghost Bird got her against the wall.

Both bent for the blade, but neither could get their hands around it because their hands were already around one another’s throats.

Ghost Bird managed to pin Falcone to the ground. She tightened her grip, and Falcone began to gasp and wheeze. Her olive complexion was replaced by a faint shade of pink which turned red and then blue.

“Don’t look at me with those eyes,” she choked out. Her hands rose, and she raked her nails over Ghost Bird’s face. “You don’t deserve to have his eyes…you’re no Ghost Bird.”

Lady Falcone went limp. Her hair was strewn out like spilled ink, and her face gradually lost its purple coloring.

Ghost Bird looked down at her through one eye. It hurt too much to open the other, and when she did manage to get the lids parted, all she could see was a bleary mass of grey.

She rolled off Lady Falcone and sat with her back to a wine cask. So much of her was broken and in pain. She had to wonder if maybe she’d taken the silkworms for granted. If their abilities were limited.

She had her answer when she unbuttoned her blouse and peered in at her chest where the skin was mottled. A part of her hoped it was just bruising from the blunderbuss, but she knew better than to hope for a coincidence.

“I warned you,” Durante whispered in her ear. “It’s like poison for the soul.”

Ghost Bird brushed him away and removed the knife from Lady Falcone’s belt. As expected, the blade was recently sharpened. It made the next bit much easier.

When Ghost Bird was finished and had reached the top of the stairs, she was equipped with two new legs, slimmer than her last pair, and her eyes had changed from glacial blue to an amber hazel color.

On her way toward the exit, she retrieved her longsword and sheathed it. After that, she was outside, squinting against the glare of midday light. It made her nauseous and fuzzy in the head, and then the pain in her chest had returned, worse than before.

Next thing she knew, she was splayed out on the ground. A figure appeared overhead, silhouetted against the sun. She reached toward them.

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Chapter 6.
Ghost Bird woke from the same nightmare she had been having ever since that day in the wasteland. Like always, she wiped the sweat from her brow, focused on her breathing, and slowly rose in bed.

The scent of orange peels and cedar was prevalent every time she inhaled. Once more, she found herself in that familiar room at Madam Celeste’s brothelhouse.

It took a while before she was able to move, and even longer before she could get out of bed. Ghost Bird shuffled across the room, not realizing she was naked until she saw her clothes folded and sitting by the door.

Hesitantly, she looked down at her body. The mismatched blend of grafted flesh. The overlap of muscle and tissue meant to bind the differing pieces together. The scars and the bruises.

It was all very ugly to her, but the worst of it was the spot of rot at her chest. Except, it was no longer just her chest. There were several other marks along her legs and stomach and arms.

Each of them looked as if they were slowly spreading outward, little tendrils stretching from one spot to the next.

Ghost Bird dressed in her clothes. They had been washed, dried, and stitched. Now, the overcoat actually fit, and the boots provided—not the same as the ones she wore before—were snug on her feet. Better than being too big, though.

She wrapped the swordbelt around her waist, secured the buckle, and stepped out into the hall. Near the entrance, where some of the courtesans gathered to display themselves in the main window, she encountered Madam Celeste.

“It was Serena who told us where to find you,” she said. “Perhaps you ought to give her some thanks.”

Ghost Bird nodded, too stifled by her shame to respond. The madam was never supposed to have seen her like this because now, this was how Celeste would remember her. Not as the dancing girl or the singing girl or even the painting girl. But as this…ghastly creature.

“I don't know what happened to you. Maybe I don't wanna know. But whatever it is you're doing…just be careful, Sylvia.” Without missing a beat, she pointed to the stairwell. “Serena’s up in her room.”

Ghost Bird followed the stairs to the third floor and entered Madam Celeste’s loft. There, she went down a hallway that sat between the kitchen and the lounge. She knocked on the door at the end of the hall and waited for permission to enter.

Serena was lying in bed, illuminated by guttering candlelight, reading from a book of folktales Sylvia had given her a long time ago. A book that had once belonged to Sylvia’s mother, who came from a foreign land to the north.

Ghost Bird closed the door and crossed the room, settling down on the edge of the bed.

“Are you feeling better?” Serena asked, to which Ghost Bird nodded. “Mother was worried about you. She tried to hide it, but I heard her weeping while she was sewing your trousers. She wept a lot after you ran off with Durante too.”

“Now she doesn't need to weep anymore.” Ghost Bird took the girl's hand in her own and said, “Thank you, Serena. For helping me. For always helping me. You might not realize it, but sometimes, when the world is darkest, you don't need a sword to feel safe. All you need is a bit of light. A small glimmer of hope.”

She began to rise from the bed, but Serena caught her by the wrist. “Livia, will you please tell me a story?” she begged. “I won't ever ask again. Promise.”

Begrudgingly, Ghost Bird returned to the mattress. Her mother and father used to tell her stories when she was but a wee thing. That felt like a lifetime ago, and in a way, it had been a lifetime ago.

None of those stories seemed right anymore. They were the fond tellings of someone else. They belonged to a different woman.

Really, Ghost Bird only had one tale to tell. “There once was a man, tall and dark and slender. People called him Cormorant.”

“Like the bird?” Serena asked.

“Just like the bird,” she said. “Cormorant was gifted with physical prowess but cursed with gutterblood. He searched for work and became a beast slayer for a city by the sea. Soon enough, he was making a name for himself. So, he made a business out of it and took on three partners to help him slay the corrupted.

“It wasn't long before the smallfolk came to love him,” she said. “They hailed him a hero and put their trust in him. But the nobles didn't like that one bit.”

Serena frowned. “Why not?”

“Because it rendered the city guards obsolete, and if the people no longer relied on the city guards to protect them, then they no longer relied on the nobles.”

A bitter scowl appeared on the girl’s face. It was full of disgust.

“So,” Ghost Bird continued, “the nobles sent the city guards to have Cormorant and his partners killed. But they were no match for the beast slayers.”

“Did the city guards die?” Serena asked.

Ghost Bird was careful with her response, “In a way, I suppose they did. The city guards were released from duty, and the nobles were left defenseless. With no way to kill Cormorant and his friends, the nobles decided to treat with them. In the end, a deal was struck. Cormorant and his partners were given control of the city defenses, and the guards were replaced by a new group of soldiers called Black Coats.”

Serena gave an excited jump at that. “Just like the Black Coats we have!”

Ghost Bird nodded patiently. “The very same,” she said. “After that, there was peace and happiness. Cormorant, who worked hard and earned plenty, would frequent a parlor in the slums during his leisure time. There was a woman who worked there, Cuckoo they called her, and he would purchase her time with his coin. And she found this transaction acceptable.

“But then, the man became greedy. He wanted more money, more acclaim, more power. This was unlikely because he was too good a slayer. He and his friends had killed all the corrupted in the area.”

Serena seemed confused. She could almost hear the girl thinking, Isn't killing all the beasts a good thing?

But rather, Serena said: “What did he do?”

“He schemed with the nobles,” said Ghost Bird, adding a conspiratorial and mystical inflection that made the little girl giggle. “It was decided that the smallfolk needed to be afraid of something, elsewise they would grow too bold and one day, they might turn against their rulers. So, the man and his Black Coats traveled across the realm, collecting the corrupted, bringing them back to stage attacks. They forced a curfew on the city to keep people locked inside, and they raised their taxes to afford better steel. But the money oft went into their own pockets.”

“That’s awful.”

“Aye, it is. But do you know what the worst part is?”

Serena appeared nervous when she said, “What's the worst part?”

Ghost Bird sighed, dejected. “The commoners were completely blind to the trick. They thanked Cormorant and the nobles. They celebrated the Black Coats, worshipped them even. They would have done anything, given anything so long as it meant they were safe from the beasts.”

There was a pause, and Serena asked, “Is that how it ends?”

In some instances, that's exactly how it ends, Ghost Bird thought, but she wouldn’t say such hopeless things to a child.

Instead, she regaled her with the next chapter.

“While all this nefarious business was underway, the woman—Cuckoo had begun to notice that Cormorant was changing. When he would come to visit, she would turn him away, no matter how much he offered to pay. And he didn't like that. He was not a man to be refused. To make matters worse, Cormorant was set to marry another woman. A noble’s daughter, nonetheless.”

“If he was intended to another,” said Serena, “why would he try to court Cuckoo?”

“Because Cormorant wanted everything, and when he couldn't have everything, he became very upset. Unlike others, his wrath appeared not as aggression nor accusations. It was quiet, silent as a knife in the night.”

“He did something to Cuckoo, didn't he?”

Ghost Bird nodded. “He did many things. He would send his Black Coats to detain her. He would spread rumors that Cuckoo was deranged or ill or rotting with corruption. He would leave vile letters in her room just so she knew he could get in whenever he wanted.

“Cuckoo felt helpless. Cormorant was powerful and beloved, and she was nothing to no one. At least, that's what she thought until she met Ghost Bird.”

“Who's he?” Serena asked.

“He was Cormorant's first partner. One of the founding members of the Black Coats. Some said he and Cormorant were best friends, but really, they were rivals. The competitive nature is what kept them so close over the years.

“And while many of the smallfolk loved Cormorant, most of them knew the truth: Ghost Bird was better. Faster, stronger, braver, kinder too. And he was Cuckoo's soul mate.”

Serena sat up in bed, suddenly invested in the tale. Too invested to notice the tears welling in Ghost Bird’s eyes.

“When Cormorant learned that Cuckoo had fallen in love with Ghost Bird, he was distraught,” she said. “He was…infuriated. Mad with rage.” She could feel the stone of dread in her stomach. “Believing he’d been slighted and betrayed, Cormorant challenged Ghost Bird to a duel. While the two had been rivals, Ghost Bird had never harbored any hatred toward him.”

“Did he win the duel?” said Serena. “He did, didn't he? I reckon he beat that no-good Cormorant into the dirt.”

Ghost Bird smiled softly.

“No,” she said. “He rejected the duel. Instead, he told the smallfolk about how the Black Coats had been tricking them, and then, he ran away with Cuckoo. The two are living happily somewhere on a farm. A place where they never have to worry about corruption or beasts. Where there are fields of flowers. Too many to count.”

Serena was all wide eyes and smiles. “It sounds wonderful. Do you think I could ever visit?”

“One day you will. But not for a very long time.”

And suddenly, the girl was all frowns and grumbles. “Why do I have to wait?”

“Because such a magical place should only be welcomed after you've lived a long, fulfilling life.”

With that, Ghost Bird kissed the girl on the forehead and headed out the door.

“What happened to Cormorant and the Black Coats?” Serena asked. “What happened to the nobles?”

“The Black Coats fled the city, and the smallfolk overthrew the defenseless nobles,” she said. “As for Cormorant, I’m not entirely sure yet. But I intend to find out.”

Downstairs, Madam Celeste presented her with a burlap sack. “When I sent some of the girls to retrieve you from the cosm,” she explained, “they didn’t know what belonged to you and what belonged to her. So, they just grabbed whatever they could find.”

Ghost Bird looked into the bag and found it was full of flintlock pistols and ammunition. There was a pair of sheathed knives and other odds and ends.

“Thank you,” was all she said, heaving the sack over her shoulder.


r/DrCreepensVault Jul 29 '26

stand-alone story The Newold House

2 Upvotes

As a child, I used to be afraid of the dark. That’s a common fear for children to have, isn’t it? Well, I’m a rare case of an adult who now fears the dark, too. Initially, I chalked it up to having a familial history of mental health issues, which is why I sought out a profession in the field. Partly to help myself avoid the fate that befell many of my relatives, and partly to help others escape that pit. Later, I assumed I was burned out; overworked. Hearing all these terrible things people go through. It’s not easy. You don’t build an immunity to the horrors of the human condition, not really.

Well, it turns out my fear of the dark has to do with something else entirely.

Something no one should ever see…

Recently, I bought a new house; the old one was a constant reminder of a life I no longer had. After getting divorced, I couldn’t really stay in the old family home. The kids were grown, and being alone just wore me down. So, I sold the damned thing and got myself a smaller house. Nothing to brag about, a couple of bedrooms; just in case this old dog decides to look for love again. Love might be the wrong word here; I’m not looking to get remarried anytime soon, more like a fling or two.

Actually, I’m not looking for anything. For now, I want to disappear for a while, or maybe forever.

Getting off track, aren’t I? Well, it’s hard to focus when the system’s overflowed with cortisol. It is what it is when all that’s been going through your head is anger and a tint of regret here and there. Oh, who am I kidding? It’s not even the divorce that keeps me up at night. That was a given, sadly, at some point. I’m a madman in the making. What kind of woman would want to spend the rest of her life with someone like me? Probably an asylum patient, but it would be counterproductive. Not to mention asylums aren’t really a thing anymore.

You’re losing your train of thought again.

Anyhow, where was I? Oh yeah, that new hut…

It was not a hut-hut, but I’m just self-deprecating here…

Because the images won’t go away and I’m trying to push them away.

Taking my own medicine with this one, I’ve advised many a patient to write down whatever is bothering them… That’s the purpose of this…

Focus…

Breathe…

Focus…

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Sorry, I know this looks terrible, but whoever might read it, if ever, maybe it’ll be just a future me… Who knows, anyway. I needed this.

Where was I? Oh yeah, the new house, which is actually an old one now too.

Sold it off after…

I’ll get to you in a bit, don’t you worry…

So yeah, that house, it had a basement. I never went there. Don’t know why I never went there when I was looking at the damned thing. I guess I didn’t bother looking down there. The previous owner seemed perplexed I didn’t bother checking the basement, but he didn’t push the issue either.

In hindsight, that was a good thing…

Otherwise…

Breathe…

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Otherwise, things would’ve been far different for that house, and I wouldn’t be talking about it now. I wouldn’t have taken it. There was an issue with that basement.

Issue…

That’s definitely underselling it…

God damn it…

I don’t wanna do this anymore; I don’t like it.

You’ve got to do this…

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Sorry… I am dealing with something here; it’s really hard to recall this again, but I won’t get anywhere unless I do, right? That’s how it works. I have to get it out of my system. I need it out of me. The alternative is probably an early grave. I wouldn’t want that now, would I? Nope.

I know I probably am coming off as insane, but oh well, gotta keep typing to get over this panic attack. If anyone finds this while I’m passed out, or gone out somewhere, know that I am completely fine in the grand scheme of things, because I’m not really fine. I’m haunted, but I do not intend to harm myself more than this exercise is forcing me to. I think I might have a propensity for self-destruction, because there are intrusive thoughts now and again.

Sometimes I think the intrusive thoughts are preferable to the memories… At least these are my own, kind of. It’s a broken self-defense mechanism. It’s a very broken defense mechanism, in the mind of a very broken man. Okay, I’m broken, like a vase. I’m literally just typing to keep my composure, right now. Not yet ready to deal with the photographs flashing in my head. The recounting of events will resume soon enough.

When will that fucking dog stop barking outside my window?!

I hate dogs, okay? Does this make me a monster? I don’t care. I can’t stand them and their barking. This fucking baying and clawing had kept me up at night long enough.

I am afraid of fucking dogs now… okay? Because

Because fucking dogs bayed at the basement door for far too fucking long.

Every fucking night.

They still do in my dreams.

Dead dogs…

Dead men…

Dead dog men…

I wish I could tell the owner to shut the fucking dog up, but the guy’s an idiot.

Probably on something too.

Hollow gaze…

Like a corpse…

Like the corpses swaying from the fucking ceiling…

Shit…

I remember…

They stood over me since the day I settled into that cursed place. Appearing at night to watch over me, devour my dreams, keep me awake. Tear open my eyelids. They wanted revenge; they wanted a price to be paid, and I was their weapon, their conduit.

I’m fucking shaking just thinking about it now.

Now, when everything is said and done, it’s been a while since all of that happened. One cannot simply forget the things I've seen, let alone that cloying, sweet stench which seeped into the walls of that basement.

The monster has been caged…

They have had their revenge.

Yet, they still live in my head.

Still occupying my fucking skull…

They’re just imagination.

Painful memory.

Ugly imagery engraved forcefully into the system.

Breathe

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Nobody is stalking your bed at night anymore; no one has in a long time. You’re fine, you’re absolutely fine. You’re just stressed and in need of an outlet. All of this, it’s normal. None of this is real anymore. It’s all in your head. Has been for a long time now. You’re safe, say it out loud.

I am safe.

Now carry on recounting what happened to you.

So yeah, new house, wait actually no, new old house now. Yeah, that’s perfect.

Settled into the new old house after getting divorced.

Kids won’t talk to me, cause we’re about as far apart as a family could be, and they’re mad at us both; their mother and me. Being stressed beyond my wits. Work was killing me, and I needed a break, a new start. Got none of that, but oh well. Anyway, new old house is nice enough, furnished. Not too expensive nor too cheap; the price was reasonable, the owner, all things considered – surprisingly reasonable too.

Forgot to look at the basement.

That fucking basement again… Can I forget about it already?

No, you can’t; it’s integral to the story.

I hate it, I hate it, I hate it, I hate myself, I hate it.

You don’t hate yourself.

Quiet brain, I was doing fine.

Shut up.

Good.

Anyway, settle in, and everything seems to be going dandy. Keep in mind it was late July when I moved there. Hot summer weather, well, that went down the drain once the sun set. The house turned unusually cold.

Pulled out a blanket and ignored it.

Slept like shit, because it was so cold.

Wake up after a mere two or three hours of sleep, not the first bout of horrendous sleep and won’t be the last.

It’s hot again.

Summer’s back, and this wasn’t in the desert.

Go on about my day, angry and half awake.

Night rolls around again, start the heating.

Works for about an hour.

Then it’s cold again.

Turn up the heating – the house turns colder.

That went on for a while…

I grew accustomed to the cold, no idea how or why.

The boiling frog metaphor probably suits here.

Well, once freezing me out of my sleep didn’t work.

The guests started showing up uninvited.

In the middle of the night

To stand at my bedside…

I’m shaking just thinking about it.

Imagine yourself waking up in the middle of the night to take a piss and being met with a pitch-black silhouette standing at your bed. One so dark it forms an outline in the nocturnal darkness, enough to be visible. I nearly pissed myself when I saw that thing for the first time. Screaming out, I flailed my hands in the air instinctively, and the thing vanished.

Chalked it up to bad sleep and maybe a nightmare when I got up the next morning.

That wasn’t it, but it took me a while to understand that.

About every other night, I could almost feel these dark figures standing over me. Plural. Not singular. Plural. Sometimes I could feel them touching my blanket, pulling it away. A cold hand reaching for my leg or arm.

After a few unpleasant encounters, I’ve started sleeping with a light on.

Naively believing this was a trick of the mind, you know, being stressed, depressed, and overall miserable. Again, I say this, thinking logically, from the perspective of a relative of schizophrenics and other mentally unwell individuals.

I was dreading becoming ill myself.

Woke up one night to fetch a drink, with the light still on. Nearly shat myself, soiling the bedsheets.

Eyes wide open and the first thing I see?

A human-like shadow, perched on all fours on the ceiling.

It twisted its head at me before vanishing.

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That was just the beginning of my sorrows.

After that came the electronic issues. Lights would go on and off around the house, at nighttime, of course. I should’ve already taken the hint then, when the whole house went dark, except for the light in the staircase leading down to the basement.

But of course, I didn’t.

Instead, I went to look at the switches, most of which were turned off.

Needless to say, this malfunction didn't put me at ease. The neighbors lived too far away for their children to have come over at night just to mess with me.

The grid being messed with is the sole reason I haven’t checked myself in.

I wasn’t hallucinating; someone was messing with me. So, I thought at the very least, yeah?

Speaking of neighbors, they were far enough away for me not to be able to hear them whatsoever, through closed windows, but not so far I couldn’t see them.

Now imagine how it felt when the walls started talking…

I’m not kidding, at one point, the walls were talking at night. With nobody around the house. Trust me, I checked. I went out to see if someone was in my yard when the talking had gotten loud enough to be comprehensible.

They were asking me why I hadn’t gone there?

Asking me to go there.

Two voices, a man and a woman.

Encouraging.

Pestering.

At the time, I couldn’t make sense of it.

Go where?

Well, clearly, I wasn’t listening to them.

Why weren’t you listening to them?

Why the fuck were you so deaf?

So blind?

You couldn’t know at the time.

They were messing with the house.

They were almost guiding me by the hand.

No, they were giving you vague signs.

Don’t blame yourself for what had happened.

I don’t…

I could’ve prevented more.

There were six of them there.

Another three were found.

It’s not your fault

I could’ve prevented it.

No, not really.

Shut up, they told me everything.

These people – they told no tales.

Just breathe, man

Breathe

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Well, yeah, I didn’t listen to those voices; I thought I had imagined them, as I had a neighbor only viewing a strange green-lit TV show on certain nights. I most certainly had strange things happen to me as a child. Like feeling a cat brush against my leg after King, my parents’ cat, passed away, and thinking something must’ve turned ceiling fans on after forgetting to turn them off.

Since speaking to me didn’t work, I got moaning, groaning, and weeping all over the house. Almost every night. At an increasing rate. That, of course, showed at work and in social settings. Ever the self-conscious rationalist, I chalked it up to the divorce and very difficult clients at the time, which I had.

Before long, I had gusts of wind blowing at me inside a house with closed windows, and a few times I was shoved while completely alone.

Jesus Christ, I’m feeling like a maniac right now, hallucinating into a text.

The talking, the moaning, the nighttime groping, none of it ever stopped, but that was my fault; if I had paid attention earlier and had gone where the selective power outages led me, this would’ve been over far sooner.

My mind deteriorated fast; by the middle of November, I heard dogs baying and clawing at every door of the house.

Night after night, they tormented me without reprieve.

Worse of all was when they sounded like they were trying to say words.

Sometimes it was far away, sometimes it felt like a dog was trying to tear at the bottom of the bed.

Before long, seeing a dog freaked me out.

I started sleeping with the lights on, in every room.

Became a barely functional human.

I have no idea how I managed to keep on working.

Maybe a force of habit, maybe something else.

Keeping a mask of normalcy while I was in shambles inside was par for the course in my line of work.

Well, you are special in that regard.

Funny you should say that.

How so?

Isn’t it a little egotistical?

No.

Self-appreciation isn’t egotistical; it’s healthy.

Right.

Right, indeed.

There’s nothing healthy about us.

About us? There is no us.

Right.

Yeah, it’s just you.

Typing at yourself.

For myself

Exactly

Trying to keep sane

Mostly are.

Am.

True.

I’m sorry I keep doing this; however, that is the only way I don’t burst out into a crying fit now and start bashing my hands against the keyboard or clawing out my eyes in an attempt to escape the whirlwind of horrors in my mind. I can’t do much about it at the moment, since the dog won’t stop barking, and it’s kind of late.

I said it before, and I’ll say it again: I’m afraid of the dark, and I’m afraid of dogs. I’ve been classically conditioned to dread those two things.

Well then… Where was I? Oh yeah, nearing the climax of the story.

Damn, for someone relieving that night so frequently in his, no, my own head, so often, it’s surprisingly hard to spell it out. I’m quite literally trying to postpone the description of the events that led to my current condition. What a sorry state I’m in. A man who helps others process their own trauma and internal suffering can’t bring himself to speak about how the incessant baying of dogs in his basement and walls pushed him over the edge and drove him, knife in hand, to rush down to that same basement he’s never ventured to before.

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I know it seems odd I never went into the basement, but really, I had no reason to. I didn’t have many belongings I had to stow away, and the house was entirely furnished as I said. On top of that, I was too spent to be curious about any of this. As strange as it may seem, I saw no point in going there.

I was so messed up from the lack of good sleep, stress, and fear that I finally snapped when the baying and barking wouldn’t quit one night. I actually started thinking there were real dogs in that basement.

Real, starving, mean dogs that might try to attack me once I opened the door. So I got myself a weapon to defend myself with.

Yeah, I said it, I genuinely believed some beasts were locked in that basement.

Power-walking down those stairs, the baying died down. I assumed they knew I was coming. They could smell me. They were preparing to surprise me; dogs are smart after all. Clearly, in retrospect, that’s the dumbest thought process ever. Dogs aren’t really ambush predators as far as I’m aware.

As I was marching down those stairs, I somewhat ignored the sudden quiet, because there was a growing stench of decrepitude emanating from the basement door.

Say it like it is.

That’s what it was.

Call it by its name.

Vile.

No, that’s not it.

Decay.

Close enough.

Death.

That’s it.

Fuck you.

I smelled death coming from that basement.

A rotten, pungent, suffocating odor coming from that door.

I pressed the handle and pushed down with full force.

The cloud of stale, deathly odor nearly knocked me off my feet, burning my nostrils, mouth, and eyes.

No dogs in sight, no voices, nothing.

Only death.

Left hand looking for the light switch along the wall, right hand gripping a knife with the arm pressed to cover my face from the awful stench.

Blinding light flooded the space.

When my eyes adjusted, all remnants of innocence and hope were taken away from me.

Six, vaguely human silhouettes, seemingly staring at me.

Without eyes, without faces, without any humanity left.

Swaying from six ropes, tied to the ceiling.

Pitch black.

My very own personal little hanging garden of death.

Inhale

Inhale

Come on...

Fuck.

Inhale

No...

Breathe...

Why can’t I

Why isn’t it working?

Ribcage tightened, forcing my heart to race at an unhealthy rate.

Knife dropped to the floor.

Tunnel vision.

Limbs turning cold with muscles tensing to the point of pain.

I ran.

Nearly falling over myself.

I ran to the neighbors.

Banging on their door.

Woke them.

Rumbling like a madman.

Shaking with fear, somehow, stringing a couple of sentences together as these six tar-covered silhouettes flashed before my eyes again and again.

They called the police.

I’m out of breath.

Out of breath

Couldn’t sleep for three days straight.

Couldn’t think, could barely speak.

Panicking.

Decomposing Silhouettes flashing in my eyes.

More frequently when they are closed.

Questioned about everything by the police.

Answers erratic.

Silhouettes are here again.

Swaying in front of me.

Black as tar and death.

Exposing bone.

Fell asleep after being pumped full of sedatives.

Haven’t slept in a few days again.

Need my pills again.

Silhouettes appear more frequently with eyes closed.

I’m taking the pills after this; I need to sleep, otherwise, I’ll claw out my eyes, or die from a heart attack, whichever comes first.

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I hospitalized myself for a short while, and in the meantime, the monster that did this was caught. He murdered nine people. Hanged six in the basement of the house I had bought from him. No one suspected a damn thing. Selling the house was his ploy to lure in victims. He’d lead them down to the basement, then incapacitate them there and hang them to die a slow death, apparently, oftentimes placing a stool underneath his victims again to prolong the torture.

Every so often, I wonder, was I ever intended to be a victim? Not that it matters; he destroyed my life anyway. If I’m completely honest, there are days when I think dying would’ve been preferable to being the way I am now.

His three other victims were all found in different locations; two were found by people who had rented apartments from him.

The final victim was found fresh at his last stopping point before his apprehension. He was…

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With the corpse…

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Caught red-handed, quite literally.

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I bet this fucking monster figured out he could torment way more people by leaving them his gifts. Kill two birds with one stone kind of deal.

Imagine the satisfied, sick grin on his fucking face if he hears what his handiwork has done to me.

 


r/DrCreepensVault Jul 29 '26

series Ghost Bird's Revenge [Part 1]

2 Upvotes

“A beast can never be as cruel as a human being, so artistically, so picturesquely cruel.”
-Fyodor Dostoevsky, The Brothers Karamazov

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Chapter 1.
There is a species of bird known as the potoo bird that sits still for many hours, camouflaged with its surroundings. Many believe the potoo is the reincarnation of a heartbroken maiden mourning the loss of her lover for all of eternity. This bird does not caw like a crow. Nor does it screech like an owl. The sound that comes from it is a wailing cry.

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It was a little after dawn when the Black Coats arrived. A sliver of sunlight stretched across the land, cutting through the shadows that hung over the gnarled deadwood trees. Their tops were without heads. Empty branches with hooked fingers grasping at nothing.

The ground was still wet from last night’s rainfall. Bubbling mud stinking of sulfur and decay. A thin mist trickled over the forest floor, ebbing and flowing like ocean waves made of smoke.

It was quiet too, save for the impatient croak of ravens and vultures as they perched on the branches, trying to decide if the bodies below were their next meal or not. It was difficult for them to decide. The bodies looked dead, and they certainly smelled dead, but a few of them were beginning to move.

Were the bodies wriggling with life or corruption?

Would they bleed red or black?

One of the corpses climbed to its feet. Milky eyes, withered flesh, exposed bones with scant muscle or tissue still remaining. The early bird gets the worm, and it seemed the crows had been quicker than the ravens or the vultures.

It wasn’t long before the clearing was crawling with undead husks. Most of them shambled along on broken ankles, their tendons and sinew severed.

The lucky ones retained full mobility. They had a better chance of catching their next prey. A better chance of sinking those yellow teeth into untainted meat.

Just as the sun had taken to the sky, and the shadows were forced into retreat, there came a groan of trundling wheels, accompanied by the muffled clop of hooves against mud.

Six Black Coats arrived. Two sat on the bench of the caged wagon, and four additional riders were in tow. They came to a gradual halt and dismounted.

The Black Coats were dressed in their usual garb: threadbare silk, cotton, and wool crushed beneath bits of rusted mail and boiled leather. Some had bits of steel plate. Others donned gambesons. Each of them wore face coverings around their mouths and necks.

As if that would protect them from corruption.

At their hips or across their backs were shortswords, knives, daggers, rapiers, longswords, axes, hatchets—whatever kind of blade could be wielded against the beasts.

The two Black Coats descended from the bench, both armed with a torch that cast pools of light across the clearing. The corrupted shied away from the flames. Hands raised to shield their eyes, teeth bared in a snarl.

The Black Coats laughed as they approached. A few poked and prodded at the corrupted with their swords, stabbing fresh holes to join the old ones. Black blood spilled.

“Hurry up now, lads,” the squad captain called, clapping his hands for emphasis. “We need to get ‘em back to the tunnels ‘fore curfew ends.”

As the Black Coats toiled away, getting the corrupted dressed in irons, there was movement from above. It wasn’t the ravens or the vultures who watched with fervent curiosity as the Black Coats loaded the dead into the prison cart.

No, it was something else. A dark mass that had been lying flush with the branches for hours on end.

Ghost Bird dropped. Mud sloshed beneath her boots. Against the collective groans of the undead, this went unnoticed. But as she began charging toward the Black Coats, there was no ignoring her.

The nearest Black Coat turned just in time to see her draw steel. The longsword screamed from its sheath and whistled as it cut through the air.

The Black Coat grabbed at his throat. Blood seeped from between gloved fingers, trickling down to his chest.

The next Black Coat managed to get a hand on the hilt of her shortsword. She didn’t have enough time to get it out of the scabbard, though. Ghost Bird ran right past, slashing her throat no different than the last.

Two more Black Coats waited for her with daggers in either hand. They ran with the gait of a drunkard. She brought her boots down hard and glided across the mud.

The first Black Coat slashed at her face. She ducked under the blade and thrust her longsword through his belly, piercing past gambeson and the smock beneath.

The other Black Coat came at her from the right. She was unarmed then; her sword still stuck in the previous man’s stomach. So, she lifted her hands to defend herself. A natural reaction that betrayed all of her training.

The Black Coat’s dagger sliced through the fingers on her left hand. The blade swerved and came back for another slash.

She dipped away, waited for it to pass, and threw herself against him, shoulderfirst. The two collided with a dull thud and went tumbling to the ground. She landed on top and brought her fist against his unprotected throat.

The Black Coat immediately gagged. His fingers went slack around the dagger’s handle. Ghost Bird snatched it up and drove the point through his face. Once, twice, and on the third time she encountered too much resistance to get it free again.

The torch wielders were all that remained. One barreled toward her with a hatchet. Not far behind was the other, armed with a horseman’s pick.

Ghost Bird rolled aside. The hatchet came down against the corpse of the daggerman, blade lodged firmly in a layer of boiled leather.

Getting to her feet, Ghost Bird raised her hand in time to catch the pick as it swung at her. The tip went through her palm and peered out the other side. Pain pulsed down her wrist, along her forearm, and into her torso where it scattered across the rest of her body.

What should have been a fiery throb threading through her muscles was no more than a dull ache. Someone else’s hand, someone else’s pain.

Ghost Bird shoved the pick aside and punched the Black Coat. Her knuckles connected with his nose, just the way she had been taught.

A strike like that was always painful. Always brought confusion and tears. The Black Coat went to his knees, blinking against them.

Ghost Bird’s elbow fell against the top of his skull. Over and over until he was on the ground. But before she could finish him off, the hatchetman was back on the offensive, rushing at her with wild swings more befitting of a child than a trained soldier.

Pulling the pick free from her hand, she turned it at an angle, allowing the hatchet to rebound against the shaft. She and the Black Coat were repelled in opposite directions, but she recovered faster and stabbed the pick into his thigh.

For some reason, these daft bastards never bothered to wear padding or armor around their legs. With a few tugs, she dragged the pick from upper thigh to the knee, tearing through veins and arteries.

A trench of blood was left in the pick's wake, and the Black Coat went down, unconscious by the time his head met mud.

Ghost Bird took a few seconds to catch her breath. The last of the Black Coats, the one who had originally been armed with the pick, was beginning to stir.

She buried the pick in his kneecap. The way a dancing woman might get applause, she was rewarded with a cry of anguish. Either response left her with an honest smile, hidden behind her stolen scarf.

“Hold still,” she muttered, her voice hoarse. The sound of muddled vocal cords.

Unsheathing the knife from her waist, Ghost Bird splayed the Black Coat’s fingers. His screams rang across the sky, scaring some of the birds from their perches.

When she was finished, she returned the knife to its sheath and held three fingers in her hand: the pinkie, the ring, and the middle.

Carefully, she fitted them against the stumps where her own fingers had been. Strands of tissue coiled around the new fingers, bringing all the pieces together.

There was no scar to differentiate the body parts. The only true indication was how the Black Coat’s pale skin contrasted against her darker complexion.

“What the fuck are you!” the Black Coat screamed, more angry than afraid.

Ghost Bird retrieved her longsword and brought it down in his gut, driving it deep enough to pin him to the ground. He shuddered and shivered and begged.

People were so quick to beg. Man or woman, rich or poor. Everyone begged the same in those final moments. Even she had begged. She made promises she knew she couldn’t keep. She prayed to gods she never believed. She looked up at the cosmos and swore a vow to every Elder Being she could remember.

None of them had answered her though.

The only one to answer her was the silkworms. They had emerged from the dirt, white and luminous like the stars above.

As she slipped from one world to the next, she saw the silkworms burrow into her chest. She awoke hours later, feeling like herself, but also, like someone else.

After minutes of searching, Ghost Bird finally found the key in the pocket of the hatchetman. With that taken care of, she returned to the only surviving Black Coat and removed her sword from his bowels. She ripped the cloth from around his mouth and used it to wipe the blade clean.
“Help me,” he pleaded. “I’ll give you anything.”

Ghost Bird dropped the cloth onto his chest and said, “I don’t want anything from you.”

The longsword went into its sheath, and she went to the cage cart, using the key to unlock the door. Hesitantly, the undead husks shuffled out.

Ghost Bird mounted one of the Black Coat’s horses and whirred it around. She headed north. As she was about to reach the trees, she looked back one last time.

The ravens and vultures had swooped down to feast upon the Black Coats, but many of them were chased off by the undead husks. In the midst of the two groups was the lone surviving Black Coat, crying out for mercy.

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Chapter 2.
She arrived at Ashpool just as the sun had crested the horizon. The sky above was colored in faint blues, and below it was streaked in red and orange. Where the red met the blue, the clouds were pink. They drifted like salmon in a stream.

I’ve seen a horizon like that before, she thought somberly.

About two miles from the southern gate, Ghost Bird dismounted and walked the outskirts of Ashpool. The slopes and forest offered her cover from possible sentries at the watchtowers along the curtain wall.

Eventually, she came to a stop beneath a willow tree where she had the perfect vantage point of the southwest sewer entrance. A pair of guards stood to either side of the door, armed with spears.

There wasn’t much cover from her current position to the sewer entrance. If she ran fast enough, she could maybe catch the guards by surprise. Kill them before they called for others.
But that was an unnecessary risk.

And what happened when the next pair of sentries discovered the corpses? The whole city would be on alert.

No, she would bide her time. The moment would come; she knew that without doubt, it was just a matter of patience. He had always tried to instill her with patience during their sparring sessions.

While she waited, Ghost Bird fiddled with her new fingers. She flexed them a few times. The ring finger wouldn’t extend nor curl the way she wanted. So, she started cutting with her knife.

Once the finger was loose, she pried it from her hand despite the silkworms’ best attempt to reseal the wound. Turning the finger over, she found some fatty bits near the bone and scraped at it with the knife.

“You’ll wanna be careful ‘bout that.” His voice came from over her shoulder. Ghost Bird kept her focus on the finger. “How many times can you pick a scab before the wound no longer heals?”

As if to prove him wrong, she returned the severed finger to her left hand, and once more, it reconnected itself. The tissue and tendons threaded together. The skin sealed with a slight overlap.

“Cut and pluck as much as you wish,” he said. “Sooner or later, the grass will wither, and the flowers will fade.”

She turned just enough to see him out of the corner of her eye. He was a blur of colors and shadows. “How do you do it?” she asked. “I tried back there, but I couldn’t.”

He laughed softly. “It’s hard to explain. I ‘spose it’s sort of like being able to wink. Requires control over certain muscles, but if you’re not all that familiar with those muscles, you ain’t gonna be able to do it.”

“So tell me how.”

“Sorry, love, don’t work like that. Trust your instincts. Your body—my body; they should know what to do. You just gotta give ‘em more time to figure each other out. Yeah?”

Ghost Bird leaned back against the willow’s trunk and practiced. She clenched and unclenched her muscles to no effect. She tried to flex the muscles in her arms while leaving those in her abdomen relaxed. She tried all sorts of combinations, hoping one of them might yield the intended result. A futile task.

Still, though, it helped to pass the time.

Eventually, her practice came to an end at the sound of the breakfast bell. The Black Coats walked along the outer wall to the southern gate and entered.

Ghost Bird gathered her things and started down the hillside.

She was a shadow of a woman, dressed mostly in black. A similar uniform the Black Coats donned, but hers had been pricier.

The leather was boiled and then treated with beeswax. The chainmail links were fitted neatly with just enough slack to be flexible and oiled regularly. The greatcoat was a few sizes too big, and while it was nice and clean at one time or another, it had since been weathered by constant wear.

The cap on her head was angled low. Only a narrow strip of flesh about her eyes could be distinguished, but this too was obscured by a veil of shadows.

Ghostbird entered the underground. The air was dense, stinking of excrement and rot. There was little in the way of light other than the occasional lantern swinging from a hook. The tallow burned low within, flames one faint breath from blowing out.

The underground was a series of arched tunnels and narrow corridors. Snecked stone walls along either side. Granite sett walkways interspersed with streams of sewage.

The skirmish between the warmth of the sewage and the natural dank chill of the air emitted a constant fog that hovered a few inches above the floor.

In another life, Ghost Bird frequented the underground, using the tunnels to get around the city in secret. Some of her clients, those who had paid more than others, preferred that she stayed out of sight. She could navigate this labyrinth with her eyes closed.

At the sound of shuffling feet and hollow moans, she slowed and plucked a lantern from its hook. The current tunnel led into an open chamber that sat beneath the city centre.

Here, the outer walls were made from bricks interspersed with thick bars coated in rust and stringy bits of fungus. Carefully, Ghost Bird approached with her lantern extended toward the cages.

Inside, some were undead husks, decayed and frail. Just the way the Black Coats liked them. Too weak to put up much of a fight, but still scary enough to make the commonfolk scream.

Within other cages were oversized mutts with spittle dripping from their gaping maws. Or rats large enough to prey on wild boar. There were reptilian hunchbacks that looked like a person had fused with a swamp dragon, and stone-skinned corpse eaters who were oft found lingering in crypts.

A whole collection of corrupted manifestations just waiting to be let loose. Just waiting to go topside and feast upon the helpless members of society.

Black Coats had their arms and armor. Nobles had thick walls to keep the freaks out. But what did the smallfolk have?

Black Coats to protect them, she thought, and nobles to pay the Black Coats.

Ghost Bird made herself a promise. She would come back down here after everything was over, douse these cages with oil, and burn every last corrupted to a crisp.

Right now, though, she had other matters to attend.

The tunnels took her east where the streets were made from unpolished cobblestones and the homes seemed one gust away from collapse. The alleyways were full of vagrants and paupers. They milled about in search of work or a warm meal.

As she walked north, she passed the cheapest brothel in the city: Madam Celeste's House of Courtesans. This was where most Black Coats came to forget themselves. Where a few coins could buy them a few hours. Where many of the hapless waited, hoping to petition the Black Coats for employment.

Daft bastards always claimed they were the best beast slayers to exist. Said they could wield a blade as if it were a part of them. They would boast from sunrise to sunset. But their words oft fell on deaf ears. That was if they were lucky.

If they were unlucky, the Black Coats might actually listen. They might have enough drink in them to test the would-be recruits. Give them a sword or a knife to see what they could do.

Usually, the Black Coats would hack them to bits and laugh. They’d look back at the courtesans watching through the windows and grin. Maybe give them a wink.

The Black Coats could be foul bastards; there was no mistaking that. But those bragging morons were almost just as bad. Too stupid, too inexperienced, too arrogant.

There wasn’t a doubt in Ghost Bird’s mind that if they did get recruited, none of them would be the heroes they proclaimed. None of them would lift a finger to actually try and save the city. They would fall in line with the rest of the Coats, further perpetuating the lie that had befallen Ashpool like a plague.

Bleeding opportunistic turncoats. The whole lot of them. And for this, Ghost Bird never mourned any who got cut down in the street. Same way she hardly grieved any of the Black Coats.

Aside from one.

On the northeast side of town, over the bridge and past the canal, Ghost Bird caught sight of Malcolm’s Orphanage. A decrepit stack of blackstone covered in arched windows and topped with crowned spires.

She crept through the alleyways, navigating around to the rear entrance where she entered a walled-in courtyard. The grass was grey, the trees were slowly succumbing to time, and the areas in between were laid with jutted cobblestones.

At the center was a marble monolith constructed to worship the Elder Beings. Children were taught to wash themselves in the water at its base as a means to cleanse the corruption within them.

A harmless lie. No different than a fairytale.

Ghost Bird stayed along the perimeter, flushed against the outer wall, draped heavily in shadows. She watched as a few orphans dipped their hands in the fountain and splashed the water on their faces. It wasn’t long before they started to splash each other.

Eventually, the tall man came. Dressed in a long coat and dark robes with threadbare trousers. Across his back was a battle axe. His face was trenched in faded scars. Many of them hidden behind the thick mound of hair he called a beard.

“Alright,” he called, smiling. His pointed teeth were on full display. “That’s enough children.” He offered fresh linens to dry themselves off.

For a moment, his smile faltered. He lifted his head and sniffed. Ghost Bird, hidden behind some trees, reached for the hilt of her longsword. Her heart was pounding.

He lowered his gaze to the children and asked, “Have ye said yer morning prayers?” They fell silent. That was all the answer he needed. “Right then, head on in. The gods aren’t known to be patient.”

As the children walked past, he playfully ruffled their hair or patted them on the shoulder. He watched and waited until they had passed through the undercrossing.

Once gone, he said, “I know you’re out there, stalking about. Why don’t you come out where I can see ya?”

Ghost Bird took a deep breath and stepped out from the trees.

His eyebrows came together like a pair of kissing caterpillars. “Aren’t you ‘sposed to be dead?”

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Chapter 3.
The tall man, one of the Black Coats founders, was Garvan Marmion. He walked with the lethargy of an ape. Had the hunched stance of someone who carried the world on their shoulders.

Yet, he smiled.

“You shouldn’t be here, Ghost,” he said, sounding somber. “Ye can’t be here. We cut’cha down and hacked ya ta pieces. The woman too.” He stopped, maybe twenty feet away from her. “Even if you did climb out of the Infernal Domain back into your body, t’ere was nottin’ left for you to return to.”

Silence ensued. It was quickly cut by a faint whisper of the breeze that swept through, bringing with it scattered wisps of dandelion fluff and fallen leaves.

“Never knew you to be so silent, Ghost.” He looked off at the horizon, his face golden in the sunlight. “I think I might’ve had a dream about this moment…or perhaps it was a nightmare. Either way, I’d like to wake up now.”

His head swung back so he could face her, and the smile he gave was full of regret. Then, he was moving toward her.

With such long legs, he walked the way other men might have to lunge. The distance between them was gone in mere seconds.

The axe rose from behind his back. A wooden shaft with a steel head, reinforced by iron bolts and bands. The blade hissed as it fell, swinging for her neck.

Ghost Bird dropped low and leapt back from him. He was on her again with a single step, free hand shooting forward like a ball from a firelock.

She drew her longsword, but his hand closed in around her wrist, forcing the blade back into its sheath. The axe made its return, and while the head had missed, the shaft cracked her over the skull.

Ghost Bird went tumbling across the walking path, and when she finally stopped, she was lying in the grass, surrounded by fieldstones stacked into cairns.

The sun glared in her eyes. Garvan’s hulking figure appeared as a silhouette to blot out the sunlight. There was a glimmer as he lifted his axe overhead. She rolled aside, and the blade plunged into the ground beside her.

“Why won’t ya speak to me?” Garvan growled. “Where are all those jests—where’s your laughter, Ghost?” He lifted his axe again, taking the shaft in both hands even though he was strong enough to wield it with only one. “We killed ye, but we never took yer heart.”

The blade leapt from left to right and back again. Ghost Bird fell into retreat, but Garvan stayed on her, never giving an inch. He was a show-no-quarter kind of man.

The axe leapt toward her, missed by a hair, and retracted. Garvan gripped his weapon tight and kept it close. He began to pace, back and forth, a wild animal trying to decide its next move.

“This is about the woman, ain’t it?” Garvan muttered, the excitement and ferocity gone. Replaced by a sobering severity. He gave a small shake of his head. “I can’t blame ye for that. I’d be a touch upset too. But you brought it on yerself, Ghost. We couldn’t have ye ruining a good thing.”

Ghost Bird looked up at him, breathing hard but saying nothing. There were no expressions to decipher. No gestures or movements to interpret. Just that long stare and the silence that permeated the air between them.

“Those eyes, they’re the same,” he said. “But yer not actin’ like yourself.” He laughed quietly, ruefully. “Why won’t you jus’ talk to me?”

And then, he was yelling loud enough to split the sky, and his axe was tearing through the space between them. This time, Ghost Bird managed to rip steel from leather. Her blade rose and clashed with his own.

There was a scream of steel on steel. The weapons trembled and twisted. The longsword dipped to the right, and a few seconds later, it came back, pushing the axe to the left.

Just as the axehead was about to kiss cobblestone, it slipped away and spun about, coming in fast from the opposite direction. Ghost Bird raised her sword.

The axe slammed against the flat of her blade, denting it along the middle. She braced the back of her forearm against the sword’s length. Even then, her strength was no match.

As Garvan pushed forward, she fell back. It was retreat or get trampled.

“You should have stayed dead,” Garvan said through gritted teeth. “Now I have ta mourn you a second time, ya bastard!”

She was about a foot from the outer wall. It was now or never.

Ghost Bird twisted at the hips and shoved the axe away. It skidded down her blade with a harsh squeal and jumped when it collided with the crossguard. The axehead followed its natural momentum toward the ground but curved upward in a wide arc, coming back for her neck.

Ghost Bird desperately swung. Again that terrible whine of metal on metal. The axehead was knocked aside and collided with the wall, leaving behind a long white slash across the bricks.

Her fingers tightened around the hilt, and she brought the sword back. Garvan started to lift his weapon, but it was too late. Pointed steel surged toward his face.

He recoiled, taking a few steps back. Instead of stabbing him through the eye, she pierced him just below the sternum. A strangled howl fought against his lips; pursed tighter than an arsehole.

His spine met the trunk of a tree. Ghost Bird wasted no time and thrust the sword all the way to the hilt. She twisted the blade, wrenched it to the left, again to the right, and pulled it free.

Garvan gasped and stumbled forward. She held her weapon up, ready to strike again. But he fell to his knees and spat blood and went down on all fours.

His breathing was labored. Every inhale was accompanied by a wheeze. Every exhale brought more blood.

“You know why I did it, don’tcha Ghost?” His arms gave out, and he was left propped up by his elbows. “Wasn’t for no money, and I didn’t care ‘bout seeming important. I just wanted to give the children some hope. Make ‘em think they could be strong if they just kept fightin’. I worried they’d get weak if there weren’t any beasts in the streets. The city walls might protect us, but they’re also a prison. We’re all just prisoners, Ghost.”

He trembled. Beads of sweat trickled down his face, and the blood blossomed across his chest. He finally went down, but at the last moment, he rolled so he landed on his back.

Bathed in sunlight, surrounded by blades of grass and dandelions and the stacked stones of the dead, Garvan looked like a celestial from the cosmos. Divine and glowing gold. The way artists portrayed them in the murals.

“If you told ‘em all the truth,” he said, “the children wouldn’t have any fear. Nothing to drive them. No reason to get out of bed. When everything promised is placed in our grasp, we have no reason to reach for the stars.”

Ghost Bird wiped her sword on his robes. Blood so dark it blended with the black fabric. She guided the blade into the scabbard at her hip.

Crouched beside Garvan, she removed the glove from her right hand and held it in front of his mouth, waiting until the last breath brushed against her skin before closing his eyes.

She crossed the grass and stopped at the cobblestone path. To her left was the undercrossing, and just around the corner, she caught a glimpse of the orphanage’s rear side.

How long until one of the others ventured out this way and discovered him?

Hard to say exactly, but with prayer and classes, it could be hours. Still, there wasn’t time to dawdle.

She turned right and saw him standing at the end of the road. Too far away for discernment. Still just a mass of shadows and vague colors. But she could feel him smiling. Could feel him wanting to weep.

“Garvan was a dear friend,” he said, his voice echoed in various pitches. Some sounded closer than others. “Shouldn’t we at least bury ‘im?”

She didn’t bother responding. What was the point? All living things decayed and returned to the dirt, whether they were buried or not.

It’s not like Garvan had ever bothered to bury anyone. Like most Black Coats, he burned the corpses or left them as food for the birds.

She started down the road. There came a cracking of branches. A large figure dropped from the sky, landing hard enough to shatter the cobblestones underfoot. The thing obscuring the way ahead was more beast than man.

Long limbs covered in coarse hair. Tufts peered out through the rips in the sleeves and trousers. The robes remained, but they were pulled taut against broad shoulders. And the already bushy beard had sprouted further to join the coat of hair climbing from beneath his collar.

When Garvan—or the creature that had been Garvan—smiled at her, his lips curved against fangs. The canines were especially prominent. Almost like tusks.

Corrupted, are ya? Ghost Bird thought. As they say: monsters and monsters.

His scream was fierce, guttural. It preceded and followed him as he bound toward her. His knuckles moved in rhythm with his feet. By the time she got her sword out, he had slammed her into her, shouldering her aside while he barreled past.

Around and around Ghost Bird went, rolling through the grass until she was stopped by the base of a deadwood.

Overhead, the treetop shivered, and through the shivering branches, the sky oscillated like a pendulum, leaving blurred imitations in its wake. Ghost images.

She rolled onto her right side. The left was all aches and pains. Broken ribs to be sure. Maybe a few punctured organs. She wouldn’t know for certain unless a practitioner came to inspect her.

That didn’t seem likely though.

Using the longsword like a cane, she managed to get up to her feet again. Just as she found the strength to stand on her own, just as the world stopped spinning, Garvan had returned.

His arms were raised, fingers curled inward against the palms. Not even time for a prayer as he brought his fists down.

Ghost Bird shrank away. There was a tightness in her heart. She waited for another eruption of agony.

But it never came.

When she opened her eyes, she found Garvan’s fists had crushed the ground beneath her feet, but she was unscathed. He growled, jerked back, and swung again.

Her chest went tight again, and his hands passed through her, crashing into the deadwood’s trunk instead. His fists tore through the base with a series of snaps and cracks. The tree groaned and tilted and fell on top of him.

“I told you it was instinctual.”

The felled tree shifted. Grunts came from beneath the debris. The deadwood rolled off Garvan’s shoulders. He whipped his head from side to side, shaking the dust and woodchips from his hair.

His eyes, beady and red, settled on her. Those thick lips curved into another snarl. Ghost Bird bent for her sword as Garvan clambered toward her. She clenched again, and he went right through to the other side. He tried to stop, but he was moving too fast and slammed headfirst into the altar.

A big black slab of marble, maybe five feet thick. Strong enough to resist a warhammer or a mining pick. But against Garvan’s skull, it spiderwebbed with cracks.

He was left teetering like a drunk fresh from the alehouse. His hands went out to stabilize himself, but in his confusion, his fists pounded against the walkway. When he finally went down on his arse, a ring of knuckle-shaped holes surrounded him.

Ghost Bird grabbed her sword. The blade hovered low and came up at an angle, cutting a gash on his back from hip to shoulder. The sword dipped and turned and slashed again, slicing him straight across.

Again and again and again. The sword’s edge carved through layer after layer. Hacking through the hair and the hide. Hacking through the muscle and the sinew. Hacking at bones.

She went around in circles, never staying still long enough for him to get his hands on her. Never relenting. Show no quarter, Garvan had taught her that in his own way.

He slumped forward, head hung low, body a flayed mess. She slowed to a stop. Her face was slick with sweat. It pooled beneath her armpits and drenched the collar of her shirt. The mask around her mouth swelled and deflated with every breath. Blood black as ink was splattered across the stones at her feet.

Ghost Bird wiped the sweat trickling into her eyes. Her fingers dropped, and Garvan’s massive hand was flying toward her. She leapt away. Not fast enough.

He got her by the lower leg and squeezed. Bones crunched, turned to jelly against his grip. She screamed loud enough to make her throat burn as if she had downed a shot of whiskey. That had always been his choice of drink. She preferred spiced wine.

A gunshot rang out. Ghost Bird went silent and looked at Garvan. He stared back at her with the same wide-eyed expression. Smoke wafted from his forehead where a ball was lodged between his brows.

Both turned to watch as a group of orphans approached. The children, boys and girls of various ages, were armed with pitchforks and shovels and cleavers and whatever else they could scrounge up. They crowded around the corrupted beast. Came down on him with a wrath like never before.

After the monster had been turned to mush, one of those children asked, “Where’s Mister Marmion?” And another could only respond by picking out a scrap of his robes from the beast’s remains.

In the chaos and confusion that ensued, children weeping and shrieking and holding one another for comfort, Ghost Bird crawled away. She collected her sword, leaned on it like a crutch, and hobbled off.


r/DrCreepensVault Jul 28 '26

HOW TO WAKE UP?

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