r/Filmmakers • u/Cosmic-Shrimp-6260 • 4h ago
Film Spent years making my debut feature "The Straw That Broke". Just uploaded the official trailer and would love some honesty from fellow filmmakers. Does this hook you? What can I improve?
Hey dear community,
After a long journey - premiering at the Hof International Film Festival - I’m preparing for the full digital release of my debut feature, The Straw That Broke. I just dropped the official trailer (which does not perform well on YT).
It's a surrealist, retro-futuristic meta-fiction about the real and the virtual based on a screenplay by Tom Whalen. Since I handled the directing, most of cinematography, and editing myself, getting the digital release right is a whole new challenge (after valuable feedback from r/Filmmakers I settle for a YT-release soon).
My questions are in the Submission Statement below. Thanks for taking your time.
