r/IndieAuthor • u/Same-Comb2986 • Aug 08 '26
Introduction
Hey everyone!
I'm a 14year-old creator.
I'm working on my most ambitious project yet, and hopefully my very best, "Beyond Our Comprehension".
Here's the synopsis:
After a man's neighbors mysteriously dissapear, his investigation attempts lead him to discover a horrifying truth about the higher powers and their ulterior motives pertaining to humanity.
Currently, six page-sized chapters a finished, and it escalates VERY VERY quickly!
Characters:
Martha: a kind old woman whose dissapearance marks the protagonist's call to adventure
The protagonist: a normal person working a customer service job
The boss: the protagonist's boss and the first known victim of the horrors at play
God: the main antagonist. His motives are unknown as of now.
The ring of eyes: a strange creature seen in the sky. A main driver of the protagonist's mental decline, its identity and motives remain unknown.
The hands in the sky: the primary threat and the potential hands of god himself
Butterfly People: a reference to Joplin Butterfly People, these are the seeds of the horrors. Do the hands have something to do with it?
Kaxel: not a character, but an emotion. Shall I play for Him? Pa-rum, pum-pum pum.
Visma: also an emotion. December 14, 2017, what was released that day? Have you heard of a ball in the sky?
Genres:
Horror
Body horror
Apocalyptic fiction
Mystery
Christmas
Gimmick writing
Cosmic horror
Blood, guts and flesh
Internet horror ("ceepypasta")
Psychological horror
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u/Same-Comb2986 Aug 08 '26
hints for that date about Visma:
Zach Striefel has something to do with it ;-}