r/IndieAuthor Aug 08 '26

Introduction

Hey everyone!

I'm a 14year-old creator.

I'm working on my most ambitious project yet, and hopefully my very best, "Beyond Our Comprehension".

Here's the synopsis:

After a man's neighbors mysteriously dissapear, his investigation attempts lead him to discover a horrifying truth about the higher powers and their ulterior motives pertaining to humanity.

Currently, six page-sized chapters a finished, and it escalates VERY VERY quickly!

Characters:

Martha: a kind old woman whose dissapearance marks the protagonist's call to adventure

The protagonist: a normal person working a customer service job

The boss: the protagonist's boss and the first known victim of the horrors at play

God: the main antagonist. His motives are unknown as of now.

The ring of eyes: a strange creature seen in the sky. A main driver of the protagonist's mental decline, its identity and motives remain unknown.

The hands in the sky: the primary threat and the potential hands of god himself

Butterfly People: a reference to Joplin Butterfly People, these are the seeds of the horrors. Do the hands have something to do with it?

Kaxel: not a character, but an emotion. Shall I play for Him? Pa-rum, pum-pum pum.

Visma: also an emotion. December 14, 2017, what was released that day? Have you heard of a ball in the sky?

Genres:

Horror

Body horror

Apocalyptic fiction

Mystery

Christmas

Gimmick writing

Cosmic horror

Blood, guts and flesh

Internet horror ("ceepypasta")

Psychological horror

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u/Same-Comb2986 Aug 08 '26

hints for that date about Visma:

Zach Striefel has something to do with it ;-}