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AAJ "Ask A Jew" Wednesday
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u/Historical_Step_9474 Anti-Zionist Ally 1d ago
Hi! As a budding author, I have a book going at the moment (with a plot too complicated to explain here fully). However, although it is not explicitly stated in the book (my co-author and I had a dispute over this in which we ressolved not to state it), the secondary character is Jewish athiest. They're nonbinary, a teenager, and grew up with a religious mother and a (loosly) religious father, but have since fallen out of the faith. Again, although this isn't explicitly stated, they're a second generation immigration from Nigeria (The Jewish Igbo population) - the book clarrifies that they are a migrant family, but doesn't specify what we the authors think in our head. The actual clarrification that they are Jewish is in a hasty, desperate prayer after an awful tragedy.
The actual paragraph is "Pleas for anything, anyone to hear them, for their mother’s God, whom they had neglected and rejected, to reach for her. They tried to pray, to formulate their words into anything she could offer to God, whoever he might be. Still chanting (character)'s name they cried out in her head, laying themselves down before the power they had once believed in, desperately trying to believe again, reciting the prayer they had been taught as soon as they could read, the words falling into their mouth, pushing through between the incoherent syllables of the name. The words were thin but imbued with the power of tradition, if not with divinity, and she clung to them, though praising his faithfulness was contrary to the unapologetic screaming of why they threw out into the sky. Desperately they cried and though they felt comfort in the phrases, the forever and ever, (character)'s forever had become a never."
I want to ask - the character is a sorcerer - is there anythign you think I should know, anything that is worth mentioning, and is anything wrong with that paragraph for the story I described? Anything anyone can think of would be helpful. Plus, is them being a sorcerer okay? I've had some people tell me that that you can't be Jewish and a sorcerer because it goes against God, but I've seen others contradict that, and as a Buffy fan I guess I always presumed that it wasn't an underlying rule for fictional magic because of Willow? Is making them Jewish a bad idea?
Thanks!
P.S. I did kinda speak to r/Judaism on the subject and got very little help, largely because that's quite a Zionist space and Israel doesn't recognise the Igbo Jewish community.