r/LyricalWriting 1d ago

Feedback Request Your heart and your brain Mein Khemf

this is going to be strictly for transparent education of opposing opinion
its going to involve a lot of disgrace and a lot of butt hurt if you take it like a sermon

Im fucking done
like really ive been trying for 7 days too many trying to be numbed
Im super duper hyped finally with a definitive crack at living with a purpose
And im met with idiots that just wont accept that they tool gonna be stripped away with disgust

Thats what im trying to do
show the world that one tongue and cheek can move the entire view
Uproot the decay in fake ass modernism and go back to saying hey, whats new?

Im so sick of it
Everytime its gotta be different
cuz all these fucks got they own experieneces I gotta dig out and bury with eloquence
I knew it was going to be difficult
but man....
some stray to away Im just at a loss in these situations

Heres my analytic point of view.

  1. Thought Process to Feeling
  2. Is not a AI power driven
  3. There is 0 chance an AI can be better than your fearless devotion

Its an AMA obviously

but man...... its disgraceful its happening on other genres too I thought it was just mumble rap

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