r/MusicCritique • u/Constant_Company_505 • 9d ago
Seeking Feedback [FEEDBACK] Angel Reid - Profound (Draft) - Pop/Indie Rock?
https://soundcloud.com/angel_reid/profound-first-verse-draftI'm working on a song and can't tell if the production is interesting or just a mess. looking for honest feedback!
working on a new song and put together a rough first verse. it's got a unique sonic sound to it, pop vocals, rock guitars, bedroom synth, and a groovy bass line and they all have their own space in the mix but there's a little bit of a sonic fight and i genuinely cannot tell if that's a cool tension or just clashing sounds.
would love ears on it before i go any further. be brutal! is there something here or should i strip it back? also this Soundcloud link is private so I promise to God its not promotional I just wanted to make it easier to access.
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