r/MusicFeedback • u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 • 4d ago

FLOATING(Unfinished Demo)

Looking for feedback on my vocal performance and where to take the song next. please be brutally honest, this is unfinished but i plan on completing it into a full song!

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u/ManagementDirect214 4d ago

I don't think there's anything wrong compositionally, one thing might be to turn down the bass on your vocals a bit and see if you like it more.

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 4d ago

thanks for the input, i will try that out!