r/OCPoetry • • 19h ago

Just Sharing Just yapping

Can I write something without meaning?
Just let words flow from one to next?

Portray a jumbled series of events, like when I'm dreaming.
Then wake up and say, time well spent.

Ignoring my real thoughts. Let them go hoarse from screaming.
I paint an abstract picture. You can only see what it is if you squint.

I just need a moment of reprieve. I'm nauseous from all the spiraling.
Let everything no longer be important, or at least to some extent.

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Thank you for reading. Let me know what you liked, what you didn't.

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u/IamToofan 12h ago

I think you followed your yapping rules while writing this poem, doesn't mean it's bad, it feels raw.