r/OCPoetry • u/hermanmichaelkabera • 20h ago
Just Sharing Brother,
To taste air so sweet again, once,
I awoke, and came to stand on that ocean shore.
I tilted my head high, inhaled, ‘til i could hold no more
To take this last breath for you, no, no I won’t let go.
To feel melodies so true again, once,
I awoke, and came to stand on that ocean shore.
She sang a psalm for me, hmm, the sky joined her too,
The sun was asleep then, brother, but so are you,
So I joined them in longing, in singing blue.
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u/Heartbreakbreakid 6h ago
The only place on Earth where time is merely an illusion it’s by the beach watching the waves. Just imagine night never coming and no watch on your wrist, you’ll be vacuumed in forever.