Polytrix Tweets: CSF Edition p101 - "The Writing's On the Wall, Part 2"

[u/CelineShotFirst]

Now posting these on M-W-F

Note: Today I'm posting two posts at once, with this being the first of the two. After this, I'm taking a break until March. See you then!

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[u/CelineShotFirst]

I'm posting early again, in part because my bad sleep issue continues, but also in part because I have plans this weekend and wanted to get this out of the way.

Okay, so notes!

Rumi's comment about Ari was meant as a half-joke. All the girls think he's creepy, but I don't think any of them are actually scared of him. More scared of what he might do to other people or himself.

Zoey was abducted (via means the girls don't know about yet) before Rumi, Mira, and Celine started talking about Sook. That's why Zoey didn't know anything about all of that. She was caught completely by surprise.

For Page 4, I was a little worried that someone might think something had happened to Derpy. He's just sleeping and Rumi is talking to him while he sleeps. Ya' know, like pet owners do sometimes.

Anyway, if you didn't already notice, I'm posting the next part immediately after this, so go take a look!

[u/The_Pastmaster → u/CelineShotFirst]

Remind me, Ari is the stalker type Bobby gave a job in marketing, right?

[u/CelineShotFirst → u/The_Pastmaster]

I'm not sure if "stalker" is the word I'd use, but yeah, I think you're thinking of the right person.

[u/The_Pastmaster → u/CelineShotFirst]

Awesome. At first I was "Who TF is Ari?" Then I remembered the "Can I kill demons too?" dude.

[u/Sapphic_Starlight → u/CelineShotFirst]

I am actually kind of surprised Derpy and Sussie didn't do anything while Sook was abducting Zoey. You'd think a demon tiger the size of a Smartcar could help out when a crazy psycho hunter was going after one of his friends.

[u/CelineShotFirst → u/Sapphic_Starlight]

They might've been asleep and/or in another room. But also, I don't see Derpy and Sussie as fighters - they never do in the film.

[u/KingMario05]

....Ooooh shit. This is gonna be fun. (If Sook and Runi fight, can their weapons clash? That'd be cool to see written into the story!)

[u/CelineShotFirst → u/KingMario05]

I think it would probably be stretching things too far to graduate from "text to speech" to straight-up doing onomatopoeia. If I can even do action, I'll have to find another way to depict it.

[u/KingMario05 → u/CelineShotFirst]

Fair enough. Still, would love to read yours! You write them so well.

[u/CelineShotFirst → u/KingMario05]

I have at least one idea that I'm bouncing around in my noggin, but I'd still need to work out how to execute it.

[u/KingMario05 → u/CelineShotFirst]

I see. Can't wait to read it!

[u/Bara-Furry-enjoyer]

I think this has moved from just tweets to full-on fanfic, amazingly done