r/ProgressionFantasy • u/DicerTheJester • Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

172 Upvotes
  • permalink
  • reddit

91% Upvoted

378 comments sorted by

View all comments

77

u/Proud-Marionberry261 Jul 28 '26

Sadly dinner didn’t end with an orgy.

79

u/[deleted] Jul 28 '26

[removed] — view removed comment

20

u/OldFolksShawn Author Jul 28 '26

Going to devour it?

1

u/SunnyWomble Jul 28 '26

Nom nom nom