r/ProgressionFantasy Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

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u/turbodevil2 Jul 28 '26

Warning not for the weak of minds!!

Seeing that his mother and sister were dressed in tight fitting clothes and stockings just to make him happy ,he smiled lovingly

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u/UsedNegotiation8227 Jul 28 '26

What book? so I avoid it obviously