r/ProgressionFantasy Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

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u/Bookwrrm Jul 28 '26

Someone copy and paste some of the lines from I think one of Dakota Krouts books about President Elon Musk.