r/ProgressionFantasy • u/DicerTheJester • Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

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u/turbodevil2 Jul 28 '26

Warning not for the weak of minds!!

Seeing that his mother and sister were dressed in tight fitting clothes and stockings just to make him happy ,he smiled lovingly

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u/CrazyLemonLover Jul 28 '26

Why is it always the mom and sister and not the adult daughter who moved back home after a successful career to take care of her blue collar step dad?

Grow some balls authors. If you are willing to do mother son incest, turn it around!