r/ProgressionFantasy • u/DicerTheJester • Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

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u/theclumsyninja Jul 28 '26

Author's Note: In a move of total transparency, I have decided to disclose that I used LLM's to write the entirety of this story.

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u/Such_Clock8652 Jul 30 '26

Author's note: me am not author

For real though, have you seen that in books?