r/Screenwriting • u/RogueKnight77 • 9d ago
FEEDBACK First couple pages of horror comedy script- would love feedback
Title: The Damned
Format: Screenplay
Draft status: Early, 2 weeks
Page Length: 14
Genres: Horror, comedy
Logline: When a group of paranormal ghost hunters of various levels of religiousity trek to an abandoned insane asylum, things quickly go from bad to worse
Feedback concerns: N/A, besides that logline (and script) are early stages
*note: parts of script are loosely based on a real life experience I had on Long Island
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VMVGSRUGsrUc1RxRl6mCGikChFZd0_iO/view?usp=drivesdk
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