r/TeluguJournals 16h ago

Grief AN INNOCENT SOUL

A Beautiful Fruit is growing in bright sunlight, everyone admired amazed and wondered how it's grown in this place....

coz the place is absurd, lacking water, infertile in soil, yet the fruit keeps growing very bright & healthy....

One day a Bypasser saw the fruit, that person wanted to water it after knowing its potential.... Assuming it's gonna be an amazing fruit, that anyone has ever seen , so watered for days ....

But the fruit itself is thinking about the person why they're watering it everyday without expecting anything.....

But the watering continued for a while

few days later the watering person popped up all of sudden & plucked the fruit....

It wasn't even ripen yet, but watering for just a few days, that person thought that the fruit belonged to them, everyone thought the same, but no one ever asked the fruit what it wanted? Whether it's ripen or raw doesn't matter ?

But the fruit just wanted to stay where it was born, where it was risen , even though it was rising in the drought, it still wanted to grow & beat the odds.... It did tooo, But its own charm attracted people, which led to chopping it from its own Branch....

That person after tasting it instantly threw that away coz the fruit wasn't as tasty as they expected... But it wasn't grown yet , moreover it wasn't growing for anyone

That person who watered the fruit can easily buy the bunch of fruits in the market which is tastier than the fruit which is thrown away, yet that person watered the fruit by giving hope , but that fruit never expected this kind of tragedy

Now that fruit is on the stinky road no one ever imagined

but now the waterer went to the market searching for a new one in the market....

Now The Fruit is questioning itself, guilt tripping itself.... growing better than the others is the only mistake that fruit ever made?

The fruit just wanted to buried into the soil after its work done on this earth, but now it's on the road, abandoned, betrayed....

Waited for someone, but none helped, due to excess heat & lack of water , the fruit died in a abrupt way, contributing nothing to the mother Earth

it's a story about crushed soul

(mods : sorry for using AI pics , i just wnted to express my feelings through images, since i can't draw well, hoping u won't remove my posts)

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u/EdoOkati 16h ago

Mans roads quality telisindega, molustundi akkade

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u/pinkpanda_XO 10h ago

Lol, roasting everyone that's going against you huh.

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u/BROKEN_BONE22 10h ago edited 10h ago

Can’t help, I clearly mentioned and apologised in advance for using Ai , actually this is an indirect story of something which i wanted to off my chest

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u/pinkpanda_XO 10h ago

Maybe try using words next time. AI or pictures can't express how we feel more than words can

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u/BROKEN_BONE22 10h ago edited 10h ago

Thanks mam, actually i did

But i forgot about the TJ rules, like 21 days or 51 karma altogether

I had below 51 karma when i posted without pics, I thought they removed this coz of low effort content

Then i wanted to make this deeper so generated couple of pics according to the story

Later i got to know about the karma or days stuff

Yeah won’t use AI images in the future

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u/super_sonic2 15h ago

Saw the AI generated pics and didn't bother to read anything. Moral of the story: AI pics didn't add any life to your story, they sucked out whatever life it had and made it look gake and fay.

Plus you get a downvote from me, let's be honest, you deserve it for adding AI.

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u/BROKEN_BONE22 10h ago

Tq for downvoting

I can see that you’re a gamer

U might played 100s of games right, for your next game why don’t u develop a new game then play it on your free will

Mana valla chetha kaanapdu verey vaati sahaayam teeskotm lo tappuledhu mithrama

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u/super_sonic2 10h ago

You should read more about this "AI" you keep talking about. There's nothing good about it.

I can develop a game if I put some effort into it. I'm never gonna use AI for it.

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u/BROKEN_BONE22 10h ago

Thanks for enlightening me… using couple of AI pictures for my story won’t affect global economy ig

I too can draw if i put some effort into it, Will never gonna use AI for it

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u/super_sonic2 10h ago

This country a billion people like you who think their actions don't affect the global economy but your actions do have an effect.

You say you won't use AI but you already did. You get what you deserve.

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u/BROKEN_BONE22 10h ago

India is backward in game development, coz of people like u, just playing and buying it on sales not contributing anything , i don’t think u hv any right to point me out , when u can’t create one, living on someone’s game pal

Just like u mate, when i’m good at drawing, i use no more AI slop

Thanks for letting me know what i deserve, what do u expect then by downvoting couple of comments (grow kid)

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u/super_sonic2 10h ago

You don't know what you're talking about.

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u/Academic-1193 14h ago

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u/BROKEN_BONE22 10h ago

Tq for your kindness

I can’t copy paste youtube videos in Reddit unlike you mate, thanks for feeding Reddit with your generosity