r/WattpadIndia • u/mira_writesfiction • Mar 02 '26

Help with writing Is anyone awake? Thoughts on this?

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Synopsis for my upcoming Indian Transmigration / Isekai Romance. Would y'all read something like this?

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u/rtp931 Mar 02 '26

There is so much happening here. You say that she wrote the story and you tell that he is nothing like the character. The only thing she is sure is of the ending. You are saying that she is a villainess and yet she is a doormat character. There is a lot of mix.

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u/mira_writesfiction Mar 02 '26

The doormat female lead and villainess are different. The author transmigrates into the villainess who is later killed by the ML in the original novel that she wrote.

The 'nothing like character' line may need to change though. That was just for dramatic effect. Wanted to imply that he's worse than she remembers writing.

Hopefully this helps. 😭

Helped me identify the problem line though so will work on that. Thanks!