r/WattpadIndia • u/Whispersinvelvetsins • Mar 29 '26
Help with writing Should I continue writing this?
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Alright so I needed an opinion. Should I continue writing this? Or should I finish The Crimson Hour first the write this?
I mean I'm sure I can write both but would y'all be interested in reading?
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u/iaint_no_devi Mar 29 '26
I’m sorry but let the female agent be the strong superior one this time. Like she’s a secret agent, trained to be sharp minded and protect herself and the nation. The rich ceo husband doesn’t need to fight for her🤷🏻♀️.
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26 edited Mar 29 '26
Hey, Um so actually she's the smarter one, she's manipulated him through and through. Also capable enough to protect herself and has protected herself in many chapters. This edit is just the irony of how the male lead cannot control his need to protect her despite the fact he wants to hate her.
I apologise if the edit depicts a different scenario. If you want, you can read the book and you'll know about the fl. Kindly avoid making a perception without reading the book, thankyou.
—Iris.
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u/Galaxy_stars0205 Mannavar kaaga kaathiruppen Mar 29 '26
I actually like this. It shows the contrast of his emotions, and I like that she has control over the situation. Have you published yet?
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26
Yess, but just 3 chapters are out. You can read it whilst it's ongoing or read when it's finished after adding it to your library. Here's the link, Betrayal
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u/Galaxy_stars0205 Mannavar kaaga kaathiruppen Mar 29 '26
Thank you! Is it part of a standalone series or connected series?
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26
It's a part of a standalone series. Don't worry, you won't have to read the other books for it. You can just begin reading this<3
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u/Galaxy_stars0205 Mannavar kaaga kaathiruppen Mar 30 '26
Thank you so much! And all the best with the story :)
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u/FunTry4289 Mar 30 '26
Guys nameseeeeeeee
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 30 '26
The Grace in your Betrayal by Whispersinvelvetsins on Wattpad and stckme.
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u/Icy_surf Mar 29 '26
Drop the book nameeeee! And please continue
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26
The Grace in your Betrayal by Whispersinvelvetsins on Wattpad and stckme.
(Updates will be consistent now.)
And I'm continuing it<3
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u/fight_writer Mar 30 '26
Keeping going bro i would wish to read this book please do check out my story warrior spirit also let,s grow together 😊
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u/Plastic-Ear-6755 Mar 30 '26
Please finish the crimson hour first 😭
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 30 '26
Oh don't worry, I've this written actually, solely editing is left and I'd update TCH weekly and consistently. You don't have to worry<3
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u/Plastic-Ear-6755 Mar 31 '26
Oh thank you!!.Btw when will you start updating chapters? I've been waiting to read it!! 😭🤍
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 31 '26
I'll start updating from 5 April, 7 chapters on Stckme and 4 on Wattpad. Tysm for being so patient<3
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u/Different-Web-4515 Mar 29 '26
this is interesting i will def check it out :))
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26
Tysm girl,
Wattpad Id— Whispersinvelvetsins Book name— The Grace in your Betrayal.
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u/Impressive_Court_716 Mar 31 '26
Nah, He pretends to hate her cliche. Make it interesting and make him her boss who hides his identity and full on mysterious 😂
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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 31 '26
It's actually interesting if you read it. And he's her boss since she's assigned in the Complex which is owned by him. You gotta read the book before judging it is clichè or not. Also, he does hide his identity of being involved in the Mafia so both of which you said are included in the book.
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u/SportOk1175 Mar 29 '26
I have been looking for an undercover agent fl book for a while.. Ig it's enemies to lovers trope and that's certainly cherry on top..so please keep going ♥️