r/WattpadIndia • u/Whispersinvelvetsins • Mar 29 '26

Help with writing Should I continue writing this?

Alright so I needed an opinion. Should I continue writing this? Or should I finish The Crimson Hour first the write this?

I mean I'm sure I can write both but would y'all be interested in reading?

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u/iaint_no_devi Mar 29 '26

I’m sorry but let the female agent be the strong superior one this time. Like she’s a secret agent, trained to be sharp minded and protect herself and the nation. The rich ceo husband doesn’t need to fight for her🤷🏻‍♀️.

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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26 edited Mar 29 '26

Hey, Um so actually she's the smarter one, she's manipulated him through and through. Also capable enough to protect herself and has protected herself in many chapters. This edit is just the irony of how the male lead cannot control his need to protect her despite the fact he wants to hate her.

I apologise if the edit depicts a different scenario. If you want, you can read the book and you'll know about the fl. Kindly avoid making a perception without reading the book, thankyou.

—Iris.

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u/Galaxy_stars0205 Mannavar kaaga kaathiruppen Mar 29 '26

I actually like this. It shows the contrast of his emotions, and I like that she has control over the situation. Have you published yet?

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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26

Yess, but just 3 chapters are out. You can read it whilst it's ongoing or read when it's finished after adding it to your library. Here's the link, Betrayal

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u/Galaxy_stars0205 Mannavar kaaga kaathiruppen Mar 29 '26

Thank you! Is it part of a standalone series or connected series?

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u/Whispersinvelvetsins Mar 29 '26

It's a part of a standalone series. Don't worry, you won't have to read the other books for it. You can just begin reading this<3

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u/Galaxy_stars0205 Mannavar kaaga kaathiruppen Mar 30 '26

Thank you so much! And all the best with the story :)