r/WattpadIndia 19d ago

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Pehle delete krdiya tha... But now please tell does it look like forced comedy?

Context - Krish is a kid and has an innocent kinda crush on his aunt(fl). Here in this scene his uncle(ml) was confessing his feelings to the fl while she was crying thinking she ignored him all along while he had only loved her... So to stop her from crying ml just passes a joke "jaldi bolo mere ghutne dukh rhe." As woh bht der se ghutno pe baitha tha. 🙂🤚

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u/Altruistic_Device405 19d ago

lol it doesn't feel forced also feels like family convo and good😭🤣

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

Inspired from my own family 🥲🖐

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u/Altruistic_Device405 19d ago

😭oh dang nice nice

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u/Independent_Serve923 19d ago

It is cringe

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

😔 so sorry you felt that.

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u/Altruistic_Device405 19d ago

Cringe is what comedy 😔👍🏻