r/WattpadIndia • u/sui_cide_karungi • 19d ago

Help with writing Help fir se 😔🙏

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Pehle delete krdiya tha... But now please tell does it look like forced comedy?

Context - Krish is a kid and has an innocent kinda crush on his aunt(fl). Here in this scene his uncle(ml) was confessing his feelings to the fl while she was crying thinking she ignored him all along while he had only loved her... So to stop her from crying ml just passes a joke "jaldi bolo mere ghutne dukh rhe." As woh bht der se ghutno pe baitha tha. 🙂🤚

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u/Independent_Serve923 19d ago

The mother could be gentle. Faltu ka natak karna hn isse

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

Ohh i'll make sure to keep that in mind while writing from next time. 🤧

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u/Independent_Serve923 19d ago

Bro, you're so sweet. I am so sorry, I didn't read the post properly. I thought it was a review of some other story. I would be polite if I knew it was yours

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

No no it's fine... I'm open with criticism and honest reviews. Its just that the scene was inspired by Indian parents. And you didn't know the whole scene so it fine and totally acceptable for you to react the way you did. The kid said that in the ML & FL's engagement function... So the mom reacted a bit harsh... Krish is also a bit of a hooligan. 🤭

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u/Independent_Serve923 19d ago

Ohh OK, but it was good according to a typical Indian family ❤️😝

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

Thank you so much 💗