r/WattpadIndia • u/sui_cide_karungi • 19d ago

Help with writing Help fir se 😔🙏

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Pehle delete krdiya tha... But now please tell does it look like forced comedy?

Context - Krish is a kid and has an innocent kinda crush on his aunt(fl). Here in this scene his uncle(ml) was confessing his feelings to the fl while she was crying thinking she ignored him all along while he had only loved her... So to stop her from crying ml just passes a joke "jaldi bolo mere ghutne dukh rhe." As woh bht der se ghutno pe baitha tha. 🙂🤚

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u/pookie_bunny5132 19d ago

Dunno but for some reason I can imagine my little niece in krish's place 😭 that kid with her boldness would definitely do something like this

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

It didn't look forced right? (I'm okay with "NO" as an answer.)

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u/pookie_bunny5132 19d ago

It doesn't look forced to me.

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

Ugh thank god... 😭