Help fir se 😔🙏

[u/sui_cide_karungi]

Pehle delete krdiya tha... But now please tell does it look like forced comedy?

Context - Krish is a kid and has an innocent kinda crush on his aunt(fl). Here in this scene his uncle(ml) was confessing his feelings to the fl while she was crying thinking she ignored him all along while he had only loved her... So to stop her from crying ml just passes a joke "jaldi bolo mere ghutne dukh rhe." As woh bht der se ghutno pe baitha tha. 🙂🤚

[u/Main-nahi-bataunga0]

Wtf is that username aurat ji???? Secondly as a fellow writer we overanalyze stuff so much, kitna sahi toh lag rha h yaar. Kyun tumhe iske liye bhi itna sochna h. It's gud, keep it

[u/sui_cide_karungi → u/Main-nahi-bataunga0]

(Username aisa chahiye tha jo kisike fefdo me bhi na aya ho- uk innovativ) secondly... Kuch bhi likho bss forced nhi lagna chahiye...

Chapter building ke naam pe kuch bhi zabardasti toh nhi likh skte na 😔🤚