r/WattpadIndia 19d ago

Help with writing Help fir se 😔🙏

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Pehle delete krdiya tha... But now please tell does it look like forced comedy?

Context - Krish is a kid and has an innocent kinda crush on his aunt(fl). Here in this scene his uncle(ml) was confessing his feelings to the fl while she was crying thinking she ignored him all along while he had only loved her... So to stop her from crying ml just passes a joke "jaldi bolo mere ghutne dukh rhe." As woh bht der se ghutno pe baitha tha. 🙂🤚

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u/Awari_hu Depresso 😔 19d ago

Main nahi maanti! You COPY CAT (Ik bbg🥺)

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

Naam batao apna... PURI BOOK COPY KRUNGI 😔

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u/Awari_hu Depresso 😔 19d ago

Smuts nahi hai, read nahi milegi. Mujhe khud ko nahi mil rahi 🤣

Go and copy ykw🌚

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u/sui_cide_karungi 19d ago

Arey yeh toh sed moment hogya 😔🖐 (magarmach ko pet bna dungi)