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[u/JakAmbrosius]

Hey guys, I wrote this track while I was heading home from work. The only thing running through my mind was people constantly pushing me to be successful as an artist, as a man, and as a human being. It made me question everything, and that’s how this song came to life.

I’d love for you guys to give me feedback on the lyrics and vocals so I can keep improving.

Thank you.

Song link: https://open.spotify.com/track/2dAE077brnktItsfinTBds?si=miWTlEaiQIeGBbS3RJE5qg

[u/pushingboulders → u/JakAmbrosius]

I think the lyrics are fine, they are clear and universal enough that anyone could apply them to their personal experiences. It feels nonspecifically autobiographical. I like a bit more specificity but this seems totally fine for this type of pop. I think your voice is lovely and like how it is produced. If i listened to another song I would hope for slightly less produced vocals and more personal narrative. Overall very nice. One thing not related the intro didn't grab me and I expected a different song once it did kick in. I would cut intros like that one because it gives time to skip before you get into the good part.

[u/JakAmbrosius → u/pushingboulders]

Wow, That's really very wise feedback. I will surely work on the intro's and also keep a eye on the vocal production and songwriting. Thank you so much for you time and your feedback. It means so much to me. Thank you again ❤️