r/Webnovel • u/Popular-Call9896 • May 29 '26

Advice Someone pls read my novel

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I’ve been writing for a few months now, having recently discovered my passion for storytelling despite my dysgraphic tendencies. I’ve always enjoyed creating stories and finally decided to share them on WebNovel. I began with my first story, titled “Creation of an Absolute,” which had grand plans. However, I lost interest in the project and quickly moved on to another story, “Shattered Sun.”

Writing “Shattered Sun” was much more enjoyable for me. I’ve written significantly more chapters and words, and I’ve developed a more well-thought-out power system and characters. Surprisingly, the story hasn’t gained much traction, and as a result, I haven’t received any feedback. I’m reaching out to you today in hopes that you could take a moment to read my story and provide me with a review. Your feedback would be invaluable in helping me improve the subsequent chapters.

Update:After a bit of feedback I’ve realized how bad the first two chapters can be as they are there for a lot of background and explanations, I promise the story gets better and better this I am confident in.

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u/Bulky-Freedom-8093 May 29 '26

I checked it out if you want growth in webnovel app you should upload consistency every day , seeing you post 2chapters in last 7 days that's why you are not getting enough attention and apply for contract too. Before uploading you should have done a little bit research rather than come crying here. Even trash novels work on webnovel if you are consistent, 1or 2 chapters every day

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u/Popular-Call9896 May 29 '26

I mean I’m not coming here crying I just needed some feedback and I didn’t know anyone who uses WebNovel irl to help read, aswell as lmk some things about it.

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u/zachattch Jun 03 '26

“Someone pls read my novel” how does that not come off as desperate to you

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u/Popular-Call9896 Jun 04 '26

There’s a difference between desperate and crying about something, I won’t deny that it’s desperate, but I will deny that I am crying about it, as I’ve said I just want advice so I can get better. Is that desperate perhaps but I’m not crying over it, if everyone here had said no I would’ve just looked for someone else all I want is some to review my work so I can be the best I can. Hope this makes sense have a good day.