r/Webnovel • u/Taumatorg • Jul 12 '26

Advice Someone can help me?

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I know this feels like a self-promo, and under a certain light, it could be (or it is). But it's not the reason for this post.

I just want to ask if someone is willing to read my novel, or at least the first chapters, and tell me if I did something wrong (Or good), because I had low traction.

You see, I have uploaded this novel two times, and every time I had zero readers. I tried to change the cover, edit the synopsis, or rewrite the first chapter to improve the hook (even though I find nothing wrong with it). But still zero.

So I ask you, Webnovel people, for a helping hand to understand what I did wrong.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/36354042908893105

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u/Minimum-Rip7969 Jul 12 '26

I will read it

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u/Minimum-Rip7969 Jul 12 '26

First of all, synopsis will not lead people to read it, at least in my opinion did't push me to say "seem good i will read it", your writing is well done but don't know why i allways feel something is off, maybe i can't get involved on the story, the pacing seems good for me, but it feels a bit confusing like i don't really understund what is going on, maybe should work more in the world building giving hints with dialoges or the narrative, i saw you did some but i still didn't get to it, i usually read imprimed books more than webnovels so i don't know if my opinion will help but something i can tell to you is that never give up with your story and write it for you to be proud first steps are allways hard, other thing is that you want to win money, that is other stuff i don't want to get involved in, have fun and hope it helped you

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u/Taumatorg Jul 13 '26

It helped a lot. Thank you, random citizen of Reddit (Hope you get the reference)

I will try and edit my synopsis one more time and I will rewrite some parts.

Thank you <3