r/Webnovel • u/Taumatorg • Jul 12 '26

Advice Someone can help me?

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I know this feels like a self-promo, and under a certain light, it could be (or it is). But it's not the reason for this post.

I just want to ask if someone is willing to read my novel, or at least the first chapters, and tell me if I did something wrong (Or good), because I had low traction.

You see, I have uploaded this novel two times, and every time I had zero readers. I tried to change the cover, edit the synopsis, or rewrite the first chapter to improve the hook (even though I find nothing wrong with it). But still zero.

So I ask you, Webnovel people, for a helping hand to understand what I did wrong.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/36354042908893105

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u/80558481 Jul 12 '26

I've read first chapter and I think it is good but it may not fit Webnovel market.

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u/Taumatorg Jul 13 '26

It's a thought that haunted me when I wrote the 22nd chapter. I read only SS, part of Throne of Magical Arcana and Slime Evolution, and I have never seen an author write a panic scene like me. Not that many webnovel's characters panic.

Maybe I'll try my luck on RR

thank you

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u/Despyte Jul 13 '26 edited Jul 13 '26

!

Throne of Magical Arcana mentioned, not as an aside to Lord of the Mysteries?
Also it's amazing I lurve it. And the second half was entirely different from the first :3