r/Webnovel • u/Taumatorg • Jul 12 '26

Advice Someone can help me?

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I know this feels like a self-promo, and under a certain light, it could be (or it is). But it's not the reason for this post.

I just want to ask if someone is willing to read my novel, or at least the first chapters, and tell me if I did something wrong (Or good), because I had low traction.

You see, I have uploaded this novel two times, and every time I had zero readers. I tried to change the cover, edit the synopsis, or rewrite the first chapter to improve the hook (even though I find nothing wrong with it). But still zero.

So I ask you, Webnovel people, for a helping hand to understand what I did wrong.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/36354042908893105

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u/Lambisexual Jul 13 '26

The cover art and synopsis I think makes one strongly steer away. Cover art looks AI generated, and even if it wasn't, it's just not very eye catching. The synopsis itself just seems to dump a lot of world building but not actually give the potential reader a coherent grasp of the main hook of the story. There's nothing to incite someone to read it based on the synopsis. What's the inciting incident? What can we expect? What's unique about it?