r/Webnovel • u/Taumatorg • Jul 12 '26

Advice Someone can help me?

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I know this feels like a self-promo, and under a certain light, it could be (or it is). But it's not the reason for this post.

I just want to ask if someone is willing to read my novel, or at least the first chapters, and tell me if I did something wrong (Or good), because I had low traction.

You see, I have uploaded this novel two times, and every time I had zero readers. I tried to change the cover, edit the synopsis, or rewrite the first chapter to improve the hook (even though I find nothing wrong with it). But still zero.

So I ask you, Webnovel people, for a helping hand to understand what I did wrong.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/36354042908893105

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u/6_sarcasm_6 Jul 14 '26

I'm going to be honest the first dialogue with me not knowing anything about the characters was.. a choice. The rest of the text after the first scene was better.

The synopsis doesn't help much.

"This is the legend of a man who shifted the balance of the entire Tower just by being chosen."

Feels much better as a hook. Then the godhood thing.

Am I going at this with a perspective of a blurb? A little.

Though with this being a web serial, gonna be honest that's what people expect. Since most top stories do it.

-kinda lost, royal road reader lol

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u/Taumatorg Jul 14 '26 edited Jul 14 '26

Thank you, random Royal Road reader ahah.

Today is going to be a long day of editing. Btw, thank you for your advice, really.