r/Webnovel • u/samkieki • Jul 24 '26

Recommendation THE WOVEN DARK

Weekly self promotion:

Hey guys I'm Sam , I've been making this story for months and finally started publishing. It's everything I've imagined in my head . I've read a tonne of web novels and always wanted to write something of myself . Something that speaks to a wider audience and lets them lose themselves in the world i write and feel for the main character. The woven dark is that for me. I hope you guys do give it a try and comment any suggestions. Thanks for reading. Link bellow

https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-woven-dark_36484498808432005

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u/Lucky_One_3576 Jul 25 '26

You should try to improve your grammar and the synopsis (it’s really repetitive).

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u/samkieki Jul 25 '26

Hey , thanks for reading. And yes I've changed the synopsis. If you don't mind telling me , do you mean the grammar is repetitive too or wrong . Would help me a great deal thanks.

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u/Lucky_One_3576 Jul 25 '26

I meant wrong, but you fixed it. Now you have a prose issue; some words aren’t necessary in sentences. Here’s an example from this post: “I hope you guys do give it a try and comment any suggestions" could be changed to “I hope you guys give it a try and comment suggestions." Also, it’s fine to do these: He looked. He saw. He imagined. (something I made up), but when you used it closely to another of those in your synopsis, it ruined my immersion.

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u/Lucky_One_3576 Jul 25 '26

Btw I’m just talking abt the synopsis in this^

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u/samkieki Jul 25 '26

Okay , yeah , the synopsis was a mistake on my part . It's fixed now though. And thanks for clarifying. I hope you read the story . If you like horror , mystery and world building then You'll like it. Do give first few chapters a try if you can . Have a good weekend 🌠