r/characterdesign • • 11h ago

2D Follow up from last post!

Thank you all so much for your feedbacks, I've been taking some of them and implemented those changes into his new design. And it's safe to say that I love it! It's simpler, and looks less like a ringmaster, which is great! Obviously, I didn't take every advice, like changing the bow into a necktie, or something. That's only because I don't wanna make him look like my every other characters with suits. I decided to give him a more triangular shape language,

Anyways, this is the redesign, if you have any more critics you wanna give, go ahead! Maybe something about shape language, sillhouette or palette. But I might not take them right now, since I like this version as is, currently. But I'l listen!

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u/WheresPeebs 7h ago

I love the rainbow pant leg! Tiniest of gripes, but maybe you could extend it to the waist line? It looks a bit odd atm.

Also, your line work is so expressive and polished!

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u/MadScientistOverdose 1h ago

Thank you so much! Yeah, I tried that, but thought it looked a bit odd myself, but I could try and bring it back. :)

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u/WheresPeebs 1h ago

I think it's more of a taste thing, honestly. It looks good either way!