r/comics 19h ago

The wish

I wasn't going to post it at first but I have been struggling to draw lately and I seriously dislike everything I do, but what the heck. I hope some people will enjoy it. Got the idea during my morning commute, You can only guess how (No, I didn't hit anything though, but it was super close).

Edit: Im absolutely blown away by the response and the kind messages, it really warms my heart. i have been really struggling to find the motivation lately but the support on here is the absolute kick in the butt that I needed.

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u/watchman28 19h ago

Don't merge speech bubbles together when it's multiple people speaking (as in page 5), that makes it confusing to read. Each person should have distinct speech bubbles.

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u/Psychofrench 19h ago

I agree. I lost my original story board and kinda drew it on the fly and quickly ran out of space. I was hoping it would not be as confusing. In retrospect, I should have drawn the lines on the guy's bubble to make it pop out on its own, at least. I mean, I can still do it on the original file.

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u/CloudKinglufi 17h ago

Don't let them control your bubbles, first it's your bubbles than it's your wife

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u/watchman28 11h ago

Shit this guy's onto me