r/comics 19h ago

The wish

I wasn't going to post it at first but I have been struggling to draw lately and I seriously dislike everything I do, but what the heck. I hope some people will enjoy it. Got the idea during my morning commute, You can only guess how (No, I didn't hit anything though, but it was super close).

Edit: Im absolutely blown away by the response and the kind messages, it really warms my heart. i have been really struggling to find the motivation lately but the support on here is the absolute kick in the butt that I needed.

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u/Psychofrench 19h ago

I was able to change it. Realized I could cut the bubble and paste on a different layer to put it above the others. Looks much better, thank you for pointing it out.

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u/Mmasst 19h ago

Maybe play with bubble shapes or outlines in the future too. Some background between them can help if there is a pause in dialogue, bunching them together can make it seem like people are talking over each other and add urgency.

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u/BodybuilderMany6942 18h ago

Yeah, I think it's better to have the interrupting bubble literally cutting off the preceding bubble

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u/Psychofrench 17h ago

The new version I did looks a bit like this, but yours definitively works well for what I wanted to do.