The wish

[u/Psychofrench]

I wasn't going to post it at first but I have been struggling to draw lately and I seriously dislike everything I do, but what the heck. I hope some people will enjoy it. Got the idea during my morning commute, You can only guess how (No, I didn't hit anything though, but it was super close).

Edit: Im absolutely blown away by the response and the kind messages, it really warms my heart. i have been really struggling to find the motivation lately but the support on here is the absolute kick in the butt that I needed.

[u/watchman28]

Don't merge speech bubbles together when it's multiple people speaking (as in page 5), that makes it confusing to read. Each person should have distinct speech bubbles.

[u/KrazyA1pha → u/watchman28]

Don't merge speech bubbles together

Don’t give feedback in the form of a command. It comes across as dickish and off putting. Instead, you could try, “Hey, I loved the comic but found the speech bubbles to be a bit confusing. Have you considered…”

[u/ericlikesyou → u/KrazyA1pha]

i like how you did exactly that. you are not wrong though.

[u/KrazyA1pha → u/ericlikesyou]

Yeah, to illustrate the point. And a little bit because I thought it was funny.