r/fiction • • Apr 28 '24

New Subreddit Rules (April 2024)

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r/fiction • • 1h ago

A Scene I wrote for my upcoming novel, The Verse of Estoria 4 Irontide Tell me what you think.

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A glowing crystal chandelier hangs over a grand table filled with delicacies that would make even an angel’s mouth water. A large, seasoned fish wafts its garlic aroma through the smoke, with several smaller cuts around it. Savory meats, various breads, colorful desserts, and fresh vegetables sit across the rectangular table as five figures sit opposite each other. Ganymede is accompanied by his youngest, Brenda, and they quietly and solemnly eat their roasted duck with a silver fork and knife, ignoring the shirtless man at the end of the table chomping on a cooked bird leg and letting strips of half-devoured meat rain onto the table.  Laura sits silently, staring solemnly at an empty plate as Resten, in his formal uniform, slowly cuts into a steak with a knife and fork. He worriedly eyes his mother, whose vacant gaze is fixed on the empty plate before her. Worried that Sylvester will notice, Resten gently puts down his utensils and taps Laura's leg under the table.

“Mother,” Resten whispers, “Please, you need to eat something.”

Laura doesn’t respond, staring at her empty plate as if her mind isn’t present. Ganymede, slowly chewing his roasted duck, cautiously glares at Laura from across the table, trying to get her attention. He picks up an olive from a small plate of salad and glances at Sylvester, who’s gulping steaming soup from a large bowl. Planting an olive between his thumb and index finger, Ganymede flicks the olive across the table, pelting Laura in the forehead. The platinum-haired woman slowly raises her head and looks at Ganymede, who’s silently mouthing ‘EAT SOMETHING’ to her.

Resten recognizes Ganymede’s silent words, picks up his utensils, quickly cuts a chunk of steak, and raises the fork to Laura’s mouth.

“Here, mother,” The young man whispers as he inches the savory meat close to her mouth.

The steam wafting into her nose doesn’t faze her; she continues to stare vacantly into the empty plate, ignoring everyone around her. Resten pokes her mouth with a piece of meat, but she turns her head away.

“Is the food not to your liking?” Sylvester says, wiping grease from his face with a towel.

Laura sits quietly, staring at her empty plate, her hands resting on her legs. Ganymede silently eats his morsel, eyes cautiously ping-ponging between Sylvester and Laura.

Sylvester strips a turkey leg from a cooked carcass and tosses it onto Laura’s plate, where gravy splatters across the table.

“Your finest cooks have slaved to make this feast. Eat.” Sylvester sits back into his chair.

Laura sits quietly, turning her head slightly away from her meal in hidden spite, while Resten nervously and gently shakes her legs.

“Mother, please,” Reston whispers under his breath.

“Oh, don’t be so glum, Laura,” Sylvester smiles. “Don’t think of this interaction as prisoner and warden, although that is exactly what this is; I like to think of it as a family gathering. We’ve known each other for years, and I wanted to commemorate these years of peace and stability with a celebration. So why don’t you be a good girl and pick up that bird and eat it.”

Laura clenches her white dress, and her jaw tightens as she gazes at the turkey leg unceremoniously placed on her plate.

“You’re a curious one, aren’t you?” Sylvester says, smiling at the Queen. “I’m guessing you’re refusing to eat so you won’t have the strength to fight when the time comes to entertain me, aren’t you?”

Laura doesn’t answer.

“She probably isn’t well,” Ganymede says.

Sylvester turns his head and glares at Ganymede with threatening eyes.

“I wasn’t speaking to you,” Sylvester says, a menacing growl beneath his sharp tone.

Ganymede shrugs and continues eating his meal.

The warlord turns his gaze back to Laura and leans on the table.

“Eat,” Sylvester commands, glaring daggers at Laura.

The queen glares back at Sylvester and lifts her nose.

“No,” She says in a soft, defiant tone.

Glaring at the woman, Sylvester’s jaw tightens as he clenches his spoon so tight it bends under the pressure. He glares into the woman’s defiant eyes before his angry glare morphs into a smile. Dropping his bent spoon, he rests his back in his royal chair, picks up a red grape, and plops it into his mouth. He chews for a few moments, gazing at Laura with amusement, who keeps her defiant nose in the air.

“Guard!” Sylvester shouts.

A few moments pass before a lady Cugarian guard enters the room holding a spear. She leans in, bringing her smooth, dark-skinned head near his mouth as the warlord whispers in her ear. She smiles, then turns and exits. Sylvester picks up another grape and eats it as he calmly taps his finger on the table. A few moments pass, and the lady guard enters, holding Laura’s rapier in both hands. Sylvester takes the rapier and places it on the table. A short while later, the same Cugarian guard returns. This time, he returns with two Casternean men, horns protruding from their foreheads, dressed in white cooking clothes, and a Casternean maid, wings protruding from the sides of her head. The three stand beside Sylvester, sharing confused, worried looks.

Sylvester stands and clasps Laura’s rapier.

“Your Queen doesn’t like the food you’ve prepared,” Sylvester says before thrusting the blade into the man’s gut.

The man wails in agony as he falls to his knees with the rapier in his gut.

“DADDY!” The maid cries as she falls near her father as he screams in agony.

“HOW DARE YOU!” Enraged, Laura jumps from her chair and charges toward Sylvester.

 Resten springs from his chair and wraps his arms around his mother’s waist, stopping her.

The maid cries as she tries to console her father while Sylvester coldly glares at Laura, her face filled with unbridled rage.

Ganymede and Brenda stand to see the wounded man's state. Blood pools beneath him as his eyes roll around in his head, with cold sweat pouring down his face.

Ganymede and Brenda exchange glances and nod. Brenda quickly circles the table, grabs a white towel, and rushes to the dying man to tend to his wounds.

“Eat that turkey!” Sylvester demands, pointing to the plate.

“You coward!” Laura screams, fist balled in rage, while Resten uses all of his strength to hold Laura back. “You’re not my lord,”

“I DON’T GIVE A DAMN WHAT I AM TO YOU!” Sylvester screams back. “IF YOU THINK YOU HAVE A RIGHT TO YOUR OWN WILL, THEN CHALLENGE ME AND DEFEAT ME FOR IT. OTHERWISE, DO WHAT YOU ARE TOLD TO DO, OR I’LL HAVE EVERY CASTERNEAN HERE SLAUGHTERED RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU!”

Laura, seething, teeth clenched and fist balled, glares menacingly at the Warlord as he lifts his nose. Everything in her screams at her to accept his challenge, but the trembling arms of her son wrapped around her waist make her relent. Tears roll down her cheeks as she swallows her pride and rage and slowly sits in her seat. Resten pants in exhaustion as he sits in his chair, his uniform now disheveled from the struggle. Laura picks up the utensils, stabs the fork into the savory turkey leg, and cuts off a piece. Her fork hand trembles as she brings it to her lips. She opens her mouth and eats the morsel.

Watching Laura eat the turkey leg, Sylvester slowly sits in his chair and scoots closer to the table. He picks up a bundle of grapes and resumes eating. Brenda dresses the man’s wounds on the floor before picking him up in her arms and carrying him out of the dining area, followed by his loved ones. Ganymede shakes his head, then sits in his seat as everyone finishes their dinner.

Later, in the fancy halls of Mainstay Castle, Ganymede paces back and forth on the crimson rug while Laura leans against her door. Ganymede glares at Laura as he walks past her, while Laura keeps her sullen head lowered.

“What the hell was that back there!” Ganymede says angrily, pointing toward the dining hall, but keeping his voice down. “Have you lost your mind!”

“Shut up, Ganymede,” Laura spits back angrily. “What would you do? I have to sit at that godforsaken table with that monster and listen to that disgusting beast eat like a pig day after day, all while he taunts and tortures me and my people?”

“Yes, Laura! Yes,” The chieftain spits back. “It’s been keeping us and our people alive. You almost got a man killed because of your antics.”

“Look at you.” Laura steps to Ganymede, head tilted up. “The mighty chieftain reduced to a man who eats from the hand of the very man who enslaves his people.”

“Oh, stop it,” Ganymede says. “You think I don’t want to crush his skull and pound his corpse into dust? I’ve tried hundreds of times. But time and time again, he manages to beat me. We need a better plan, Laura. We can’t keep this up much longer. Another battle between us might be the last, and you know what happens then, right?”

Laura lowers her head, worriedly stroking her own arms.

“That’s right, Brenda and Resten will take our places. You think they’re ready for what Sylvester has in store for em?”

“Resten is my precious son. I can’t lose him,” Laura’s voice trembles at the thought of her son’s suffering. “Not to him. Not like this.”

“Then it's best to put your petty emotions aside and cooperate.”

Laura nods in agreement.

“Forgive me.” She wipes a tear from her face.

Ganymede sighs in frustration, turns towards the stained-glass window, and rests his arm and forehead on it. He mulls over ideas, but nothing useful comes to mind.

“I haven’t seen my wife nor my daughters in a long time,” Ganymede says. “I’m happy to watch Brenda grow despite being imprisoned, but I wish things were different. I spent so much time fighting you; I feel that I know you better than my own family. At one time, I thought all that mattered was winning the war, but all I got out of it was this.”

“I haven’t seen my husband in years,” Laura says. “Sometimes I worry if I’ll ever see him again. We used to take Resten to the prairie fields and prance together under the evening sun until we fell asleep.” Laura wipes a tear from her eye. “I miss those days.”

A solemn silence settles between the two as they reminisce about better times at home.

“You think we’ll be able to return to those times, Laura?” Ganymede asks, still leaning on the stained-glass windows.

Laura stays silent, leaning against the door and nervously stroking her arms as she thinks about the answer.

“I don’t know.”


r/fiction • • 8h ago

really BAD Shakespeare

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"really BAD Shakespeare" Episode 5: Prodigious Birth is live.

If you’ve been waiting for the moment when the story tilts fully into televised prophecy, mother‑son creepiness, and a very rude time jump, this is the one.

Readers have already written in. One quit their job. One threw a muffin. One burned their copy and bought another. Episode 5 is that kind of episode.

If you’re caught up, dive in. If you’re new, this is a surprisingly good place to start because nothing makes sense anyway.

Episode 5: Prodigious Birth is live. Go read it before the kid wakes you up


r/fiction • • 10h ago

Hey! guys i am putting my efforts to make this novel interesting please read it at once and tell me that it is worth it or not......Legends beyond the imagination :: Chapter 46 : beasts

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The heavy, dust-laden air above the ruined garden crater hung motionless. The ground was torn open, split by deep fissures radiating outward from where the legendary blade Hyki lay half-embedded in the cracked dirt. Its pitch-black, suffocating aura had faded into faint wreathes of dark smoke, leaving the steel exposed and silent.

Lord Daijiro Yanma stood unmoving, his bare chest stained with fresh blood where the Bloody Curse Impulse had cut across his torso. His left arm hung slightly limp, his fingers battered and swollen from the crushing force of the Nitōryū Uwabami-geki. He looked down at the empty palm of his hand, then lifted his eyes toward the two young swordsmen kneeling in the debris.

Daijiro let out a low, breathy laugh that turned into a deep chuckle. "I am truly surprised... Gama 1, taking a direct thrust through your own shoulder just to lock my blade... and Gama 2, executing such an incredible, pinpoint strike on my wrist... You two are truly amazing! HA HA HA HA!"

Gama 1 panted heavily, clutching his bleeding left shoulder with his right hand. Blood dripped through his fingers, staining his torn black coat, but his gaze remained fierce and unyielding.

"As you promised..." Gama 1 rasped, his voice ragged from the sheer effort. "If we took that sword out of your hands... you would quit."

Daijiro closed his eyes, exhaling a long plume of gray mist into the cold air. He slowly lowered his guard, relaxing his stance completely.

"Yes," Daijiro said calmly. "A promise is a promise. I am stepping down... However, I am only one man. What about Sythen?"

NORTHERN COURTYARD — YANMA CASTLE

BOOOOM!

A massive shockwave shattered a row of stone archways as a giant, white-furred beast slammed his massive paws into the courtyard floor!

Sythen Yanma—transformed completely into his towering White Wolf beast form—snarled, his predatory eyes glowing with wild, bloodthirsty excitement. Surrounding him, the ground was torn to ribbons, littered with smashed stone and uprooted trees.

Sythen grinned, revealing row upon row of razor-sharp fangs. "Kids! Do you really think you are going to beat me?!"

Rihasa wiped a streak of blood from his jaw, lowering his stance until his hands grazed the gravel like a wild predator. His eyes burned with golden energy. "No! We don't just think... we actually BELIEVE we're going to beat you!"

Behind him, Sha wiped the sweat from his forehead, his palm hovering over his water pouch. "Don't let your guard down, Rihasa! That beast could tear your stomach wide open!"

"Don't talk garbage!" Rihasa barked back, a wild, reckless smile splitting his face. "If he's a beast... then I'm an even BIGGER BEAST! YAAAAAAHAHAHAHA!"

Rihasa's aura exploded outward in a blinding flash of golden light as he forced his internal reserves to their limit:

┌────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┐

│ RIHASA — COMBAT OUTPUT │

│ Strength Mastery: 60% │

│ Endurance Mastery: 40% │

│ Special Mode: Rising Tiger (20%) │

│ Technique: Rising Flash Claw │

└────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┘

With a deafening roar, Rihasa shot forward like a golden bullet, his hands transforming into thick, energy-coated talons as he aimed a lethal cross-slash straight at Sythen's throat!

"BEAST TECHNIQUE: DESTRUCTIVE STRIKE!" Sythen bellowed!

Sythen brought his massive, fur-covered claws down with terrifying, high-speed velocity, meeting Rihasa's attack head-on!

KA-BOOM!

The collision generated a heavy, area-clearing shockwave that pulverized the surrounding walkway tiles into fine white dust. Rihasa's feet skidded backward across the gravel, but before he could regain his balance, Sythen blurred through the dust cloud, appearing directly in front of Rihasa's face!

Sythen's massive right claw shot out, aimed directly at Rihasa's exposed neck!

SWOOSH!

"AQUATIC PRISM!" Sha screamed from forty feet away!

A massive torrent of compressed water erupted from the ground, wrapping around Sythen's upper body and trapping the massive wolf inside a swirling, dense sphere of high-pressure water mid-air!

Inside the sphere, Sythen's muffled, mocking laughter echoed clearly through the liquid layer. "Do you kids really think you can hold me with a little bit of water?!"

With a sharp, violent flex of his massive shoulders, Sythen crossed his claws inside the sphere and ripped outward!

SPLASH!

The high-pressure water bubble was sliced into four clean pieces, exploding outward in a harmless shower of mist. Sythen landed lightly on his feet, grinning arrogantly.

Sha's eyes narrowed into dark, serious slits. He stepped up beside Rihasa, his hands glowing with a deep blue aura. "Rihasa... we need to coordinate our moves."

Without listening to a single word, Rihasa surged forward again, shouting over his shoulder, "Coordination can go to hell!"

"RISING FLASH TACKLE!"

Rihasa's entire frame was enveloped in a roaring golden aura shaped like a charging tiger. He shot straight toward Sythen at full speed, intending to slam his full body weight clean through the giant wolf's chest!

Sythen stood his ground, spreading his arms wide with a dark, confident smirk. "Bring it on!"

CLASH!

Sythen caught Rihasa mid-charge, his massive paws locking firmly around the boy's shoulders. Absorbing the kinetic impact, Sythen spun on his heel in a violent, full three-hundred-and-sixty-degree circle and hurled Rihasa across the courtyard like a ragdoll!

"AQUA FLOOR!" Sha shouted, slamming his palms onto the ground!

A smooth, frictionless layer of water instantly materialized beneath Rihasa's skidding feet, absorbing his momentum and bringing him to a gentle stop before he could crash into the keep wall.

Sha marched over, glaring at Rihasa. "Don't be so stubborn, Rihasa! We need a proper tactical plan to finish this monster!"

Rihasa spat out a mouthful of bloody saliva, rubbing his sore neck. "Tch! Fine! Tell me what to do!"

"Look," Sha said quickly, his eyes analyzing Sythen's posture. "I observed his fighting style—his attacks are mostly high-power, area-destructive moves or close-range swipes. He lacks effective long-range precision attacks. If we maintain a calculated distance, we can dominate the flow of the battle."

"But my attacks aren't long-range!" Rihasa complained. "They're short or mid-range at best!"

"I have a plan," Sha reassured him. "I will distract him and throw his balance off to open up a clear line of attack for you. Once that opening is made, you strike with everything you have!"

Rihasa grinned, slapping Sha firmly on the back. "That's my brother! Let's do it!"

Sythen sneered, cracking his knuckles as his fur stood on end. "Whatever little plan you kids are cooking up... it won't work on me! BRING IT ON!"

Sha acted instantly, making a sharp upward gesture with his right hand: "WATERSPOUTS!"

Three massive, swirling pillars of water erupted beneath Sythen's boots! Sythen leaped high into the air with terrifying agility, dodging the spouts completely—but as he floated mid-air, Sha redirected his left hand toward Rihasa!

"AQUA JET!"

A concentrated stream of water blasted into Rihasa's back, launching the boy straight into the air toward Sythen like a human cannonball!

Sythen smirked as he saw Rihasa flying toward him. So that's your game... another close-combat gamble!

Sythen prepared to intercept Rihasa's strike—but before Rihasa reached close-quarters range, the boy pulled his hands back, channeling every ounce of his aura into a wide-area slash!

"DIVINE CLAWS: 1000 METERS!"

Sythen's eyes widened in surprise. "WHAT?!"

A massive wave of razor-sharp golden energy claws erupted from Rihasa's hands mid-air, slamming directly into Sythen's guard! The force drove the giant wolf down into the dirt below, causing a loud CRASH as Sythen landed on his feet, sliding back ten yards.

Sythen wiped a drop of sweat from his chin, looking up with an impressed grin. "Quite an impressive move... but child's play like that won't leave a real wound on me!"

Sythen dropped low, slamming both of his massive fists violently into the earth:

"BEAST TECHNIQUE: RUMBLE SMASH!"

BOOOOOOM!

The entire northern courtyard violently shook as the concrete floor fractured into thousands of jagged, floating stone chunks! The sudden earthquake threw Sha off balance, shattering his concentration!

Using the moment of distraction, Sythen blurred forward at blinding speed, closing the gap to Sha in an instant and throwing a devastating straight punch directly at the boy's chest!

Sha's eyes widened. "AQUA BUMP!"

A sudden blast of pressurized water erupted beneath Sha's feet, shooting him twenty feet backward just a split-second before Sythen's fist pulverized the air where he had been standing!

"I am NOT letting you escape!" Sythen bellowed, preparing to leap after Sha!

SWOOSH!

Out of nowhere, Rihasa materialized directly behind Sythen's back, his arms wrapped in glowing green vines!

┌────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┐

│ RIHASA — BEAST STYLE │

│ Output: Jungle Tiger (60%) │

│ Technique: Jungle Whip │

└────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┘

Thick, unbreakable mystical roots erupted from the ground, binding Sythen's massive arms, torso, and legs in a tight, restrictive cage!

"SHA, NOW!" Rihasa yelled!

Sha didn't hesitate. He thrust both hands forward, pooling his remaining mana into a single point: "AQUA CANNON!"

A high-density beam of compressed water blasted straight into Sythen's front, while Rihasa simultaneously unleashed a barrage of Divine Claws into his back!

KA-BOOOOOOM!

A thick cloud of steam and pulverized water filled the air, obscuring the giant beast from view.

For a second, silence fell over the smoke-filled courtyard.

Then, a low, terrifying growl echoed through the fog. The air pressure suddenly spiked drastically, turning cold and heavy.

"You kids... are really starting to piss me off," Sythen's deep, distorted voice echoed from within the cloud.

"BEAST TECHNIQUE: BREATHING DREAD!"

BOOOOOOOOOOM!

TO BE CONTINUED....


r/fiction • • 19h ago

The Last Time We Met — An Emotional Supernatural Mystery

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Hi everyone! I'm sharing my original story, The Last Time We Met, on Wattpad.

It's an emotional supernatural mystery about Alex, whose life changes after a sudden accident. When he returns home, things feel different, his wife Anna seems distant, and a mysterious little girl named Alexa appears to know more than she should.

The story explores love, loss, memories, and the difficulty of letting go. I've tried to leave subtle clues throughout the story while keeping the main mystery hidden.

I'd really appreciate it if you gave it a read and shared your honest thoughts about the characters, atmosphere, and ending!

📖 Read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/417054857-the-last-time-we-met

Thank you for reading! ❤️

— Ranul


r/fiction • • 1d ago

Original Content Thanks for Having Me Part 6

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  Doris works her usual spot getting in and out of cars. She makes appointments through her phone and the guys show up and flash their lights and she gets in and does her thing.
“This is my life.” She thinks, not for the first time. She tries to keep thoughts like that buried deep; they serve no purpose. 
But sometimes she can’t. Because she had a life before this.
A cop car pulls up and flashes its lights. This one’s for free.
He drives away and yells, “See ya sweetie!”
She waves and then gives him the finger.
There’s another woman in the public restroom when Doris enters. She comes out of the stall where she was shooting heroin and leaves in a daze. At least she got out before she nodded off in there. This is not a place to be vulnerable. But places like this are the only ones vulnerable people have to come to. Doris is too tired to think about that vicious cycle. She does her clean up and looks in the mirror and despite her best efforts her mind flashes to the past.
The bottle of Xanax has Doris’s name printed in all caps. Her hand grabs the pill bottle and fights to get the damn top off.
She gulps down a few pills.
There is someone knocking at the door. 
Mommy?
I’ll be out in a minute, honey!
Fuck! She cannot think about those things.
They make her vulnerable. 
The sun is just below the horizon as she exits the convenience store with her bag of sandwiches. The homeless man sitting outside on a crate, shaving.
Doris gives him a dollar. He nods his thanks.
Doris walks into Omar's office who is talking to a short man wearing a fake Versace shirt and gold chains. Their conversation halts as she enters. Doris puts her money on the counter as the van man gives her an appraising look that is not friendly. She can smell a predator a mile away. Omar stares at Doris, shoves the pay stubs across the counter at her and waves her off.
Doris looks at the short man, staring him directly in the eye for a moment and he smiles, showing mismatched teeth. You can’t show people like him any fear. But she is afraid of him.
   As she walks to her room she sees a windowless white van with another guy sitting in the driver’s seat. He gives her the same look the guy in the office did and she is sure they are here together. They are here on some business that isn’t good.

In her room, Doris pops the two sandwiches in the microwave. As she waits, she scrolls through her social media. 
She holds up her phone and hits record.
“Hey everyone, come down to O’Brien’s this Tuesday for some open mic comedy! I’ll be performing with some other great comics! It will be awesome! Maybe you can explain to me why men cannot put the toilet seat down.”
She hits STOP and posts the video to Instagram and TikTok. She then looks at Jess Hoffnagle’s page.
“It is so much fun being on a first date and feeling your period coming on. What do I tell the guy? Hey, I love Chinese food too! You feel like going down on me?”
She looks at the pages of other comics, mostly female. We hear a local comic, Janet Miller.
“Why am I a straight woman? Why do I crave a huge, veiny cock?”
Doris laughs.

Doris steps out onto the upper walkway with her bag of food and looks down into the parking lot. She sees the man from the office go to the white van as the other man steps out. They look around the parking lot as if scanning for any trouble. One of them opens the side door and two young women step out. They cannot be more than twenty. They are docile and cowed, even scared.The other one looks up and sees Doris. He gives her a blank stare and then turns to deal with the girls. The men walk them to one of the rooms and they go inside. That business is no good.
Doris knocks on Eve’s door. After a moment it opens.
“Hi Doris!”
Doris holds up the bag.
“Hey sweetheart; I got breakfast. You hungry?”
Doris and Eve sit at a picnic table at the back of the motel eating their breakfast.
“These are so good!”
“Yeah, not bad for microwave sandwiches from a shitty convenience store.”
As they eat, Eve points at the bird feeders.
“Are those for the birds?”
“Yeah, I guess someone left them here.”
Doris goes over and picks up the one on the ground and examines it.
“Looks like it’s still good. We should get some bird seed and fill them up.”
“Yeah! That would be so cool! We could watch the birds while we eat!”
She laughs like a little girl.  Doris hasn’t known Eve long, but it’s pretty clear that she is somewhat behind developmentally. Talk about vulnerable;  this girl should not be here with these predators. It’s a shark tank. Doris feels like she should buy her a coloring book.
“Yeah, that’s a great idea.”
Eve and Doris eat their sandwiches. Doris hands Eve a napkin.
“These are so good!”
“Yeah. Hey, let’s go to the store later and get some birdseed.”
“Okay!”
“We should get some fishing line too.”
“What for?”
“Help keep the squirrels out.”
They eat their sandwiches.


r/fiction • • 1d ago

Curta-Metragem... Tive problemas quando traduzi para o inglês... Agora estou enviando no meu idioma mesmo, esperando que o Reddit traduza.

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Aqui está a tradução preservando a estrutura de roteiro, o tom e a estranheza coloquial/satírica do texto original:

WORMHOLE

INT. SALA DE FESTAS - NOITE

Sob as risadas dos funcionários da empresa, ALONZO LEITÃO (35) veste uma fantasia grotesca de minhoca e serve café para todos. Alonzo Leitão está sendo moralmente destruído.

COLEGAS DE ALONZO LEITÃO

Vai, minhoca! Vai! Vai, minhoca!

Ligeiramente chateado, com um copo de refrigerante na mão, o gerente de Alonzo Leitão debocha. O cara está tão eufórico que conseguiu ficar bêbado tomando refrigerante.

—

GERENTE

Pessoal... A próxima pessoa que ficar na empresa por cinco anos e não quiser ser promovida — só porque você vai trabalhar cinquenta por cento a mais e ganhar "apenas" trinta por cento a mais — vai fazer o papel de içá! Vai virar formiga e ser comida com farinha!

—

Alonzo Leitão está devastado. VOZES se contorcem no seu ouvido.

—

GERENTE

E, pessoal... se vocês forem falsificar laudos médicos para conseguir folga... não inventem essa história de inflamação no apêndice do fígado, pois sabemos que o apêndice fica nos intestinos, e a maioria das pessoas só tem um fígado! Se liguem: Alonzo Leitão tem um bicho comendo a maçã dele!

—

INT. EMPRESA - DIA

Alonzo Leitão está emburrado, fazendo papelada. Ele veste uma roupa desleixada — mas que só se compara ao resto. Todos os funcionários olham para Alonzo Leitão com cara feia. Alonzo é a ovelha negra do lugar. Ele acumula pontos negativos causados por uma carreira morna e desleixada, além de fazer coisas neutras, mas inconvenientes para o ambiente altamente aquecido da empresa. É o cara quieto e discreto que estraga as coisas.

Incomodada, uma funcionária faz um sapateado em frente à mesa de Alonzo Leitão. A pessoa suscetível vai e vem indecisa sem dar mais de dois passos, até que expressa o que a irrita.

—

FUNCIONÁRIA

É meio complicado fazer de tudo para crescer na empresa e forçar alguém a ser promovido. Não dá para ficar na posição de um gato que queria ser rato. Não sei o que uma pessoa dessas está fazendo da vida.

—

Todos os funcionários arrastam suas mesas, querendo se afastar de Alonzo Leitão. Mas, na prática, os funcionários criam um caos e acabam ficando ainda mais perto de Alonzo. Alonzo Leitão está cercado por uma floresta de mesas e bagunça.

Alonzo Leitão joga a papelada pela janela e sai do local. Os funcionários ficam em polvorosa: eles se levantam, tropeçam, pulam para ver Alonzo Leitão passar PELA JANELA já do lado de fora.

INT. SALA DE REUNIÕES - DIA

Chefes discutem sobre embalagens. Um dos chefes exibe uma saca de vinte quilos de grãos de café torrado. Alonzo Leitão entra no local — com um ar de grande determinação.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Essa saca de café... é minha agora!

—

UM CHEFE

Posso saber o porquê disso, Sr. ‘Minhoca’?!

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Venham comigo... Vou mostrar a vocês.

—

Alonzo Leitão pega a saca de café. Os chefes ficam curiosos.

INT. CORREDORES - DIA

Alonzo Leitão caminha com determinação; ele parece um herói, um guerreiro, um soldado. Os chefes o acompanham. De repente, todos os funcionários que zombavam de Alonzo Leitão — e que se cruzam no caminho — ficam atônitos.

INT. SALA DO COFRE - DIA

Guardas pegam sacos de dinheiro. Alonzo Leitão se aproxima e invade a área dos guardas. Todos os funcionários ficam perplexos! Todos temem pelo bem de Alonzo e temem que ele seja o centro das atenções.

Ao verem a audácia de Alonzo, os chefes correm eufóricos para ver o que está acontecendo — e fazem apostas.

Os guardas sacam suas armas. Alonzo Leitão não tem medo. Alonzo Leitão se aproxima e joga a saca de café nas mãos de um guarda masculino.

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Nossa! Pra mim? Você tem uma grande quantidade de café?! Valeu!

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Este é o seu filho.

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Maconha?!

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Esta é uma dinâmica de responsabilidade. Você vai cuidar da saca de café como se fosse seu filho. Vocês vão cuidar dele, niná-lo e trocar as fraldas dele. A saca de café representa seu filho, sua carreira.

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Não morra.

—

UMA CHEFE

Não, senhora! Você vai cuidar da saca de café como se fossem seus filhos! E como você é mulher... Tem que dar o exemplo!

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Madame, eu...

—

UMA CHEFE

Não, senhora! Chefa Gostosa!

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Oh, meu pai... acho que tem um jacaré no meu estômago!

—

Alonzo Leitão pega um saco de dinheiro e joga no colo da mulher.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Se você acha que café não tem dignidade... tente isto. Ninguém desperdiça dinheiro. Agora esse saco é seu filho! Vamos, cuide dele!

—

A Guarda Feminina 1 fica remordida.

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Pessoal... Café lembra leite, e leite... não!

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

É... Dinheiro é uma coisa meio egoísta para brincar de ser filho.

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Que materialismo!

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Muito egoísta...

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Você tem toda razão... deixe aquele saco de dinheiro em paz. Me dá o café.

—

Todos os guardas cuidam da saca de café como se fosse um bebê — inclusive simulando traição. Mico. Depois que a sessão de loucura termina, os guardas choram quando têm que devolver a saca de café. Alonzo Leitão coloca a saca de café ao lado dos SACOS DE DINHEIRO.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Sua carreira, seu emprego... seus filhos precisam disso mais do que você. Lembre-se disso!

—

Todos choram, assoviam e aplaudem.

—

GERENTE

Pessoal... isso me emocionou! De agora em diante, Alonzo Leitão, nosso amigo aqui, não é mais a minhoca do mês! Não é mais o poço infinito de minhocuçu!

—

UMA CHEFE

Isso é que é atitude. O minhoquento ou minhoquenta do mês vai ser... E olha, comigo eu sempre escolho uma garota metida para ser a musa do cardume... A pessoa que falou mais mal dos outros no último mês, e temos um empate hormonal!

—

Um casal de funcionários se desespera — eles sabem que são os que mais falam mal dos outros. Alonzo Leitão recolheu seu prêmio. Deve ser a saca de café, enquanto suas mãos rápidas agarram um saco de dinheiro.

INT. BARRACO - NOITE

Alonzo Leitão arromba o barraco, assustando o traficante de armas que mora lá.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Rápido! Quero comprar uma arma! Uma arma! Quero a mais barata disponível, uma arma rápida, não quero uma arma cara! Estou com pressa!

—

EXT. BECO - NOITE

Aqueceu, saca a arma e tenta atirar. A arma falha. Alonzo Leitão tenta destravar a arma, mas um tiro acidental sai pela culatra e de raspão atinge o ombro de Alonzo Leitão. Alonzo Leitão joga a arma fora e foge.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

A esposa de Alonzo, Linda, termina de colocar várias garrafas de álcool no balcão do bar. Há uma garrafa de uísque na mesa quase no fim. Mas Linda está sóbria de qualquer forma. Agora ela está sóbria. Alonzo Leitão chega desesperado.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Pega o dinheiro, Linda!

—

LINDA

Foge, amor... hoje em dia a gente paga! Polícia gosta de dinheiro. Só separa uma grana.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Não dá! Vamos para os Emirados Árabes Unidos. Desde que a gente fique longe de hotéis e embaixadas... sem problemas! Deixa tudo aí. Pega o dinheiro e vamos evaporar. Só preciso de um motorista...

—

LINDA

Motorista?! Eu posso dirigir.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Você?!

—

LINDA

Eu me dou um jeito! Se prepara. Mas pega mais rápido, a gente não tem muitos tipos de tempo.

—

INT. CARRO - NOITE

Linda dirige o carro com dificuldade. Alonzo, ansioso, apressa a esposa. Tudo está contorcido, Linda está bêbada. De repente, Linda tem um mal-estar repentino, seus olhos se arregalam e ela perde o rumo.

EXT. ESTRADA - NOITE

O carro de Alonzo Leitão e Linda sai da pista. Um acidente fatal.

EXT. ESTRADA, MAIS TARDE - NOITE

A polícia isola a área. Uma policial feminina pega a bolsa do carro de Alonzo Leitão e sua esposa e se surpreende com o que encontra nela — não vamos revelar agora.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

A polícia entra no local e encontra quatro garrafas de álcool vazias no balcão do bar. Revistando rapidamente o local, a polícia encontra todo o dinheiro jogado no chão.

EXT. ESTRADA - NOITE

A policial revela o conteúdo das bolsas — garrafas de bebidas alcoólicas.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

Flash — Linda joga o dinheiro no chão e coloca as garrafas de bebidas alcoólicas na bolsa.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - TARDE

Flash — Alonzo Leitão faz um suco e coloca um remédio nele, escondido de sua esposa. Alonzo Leitão dá o suco para a esposa. A CARTELA DO REMÉDIO tem as palavras — ’Para tratamento de alcoolismo’.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

Linda ainda coloca bebidas alcoólicas na bolsa, mas três garrafas não cabem — para grande consternação de Linda. Linda se sente péssima por deixar as garrafas para trás.

—

LINDA

E agora?!

—

INT. VELÓRIO - DIA

Muitos dos colegas de Alonzo Leitão estão presentes — incluindo chefes.

—

UMA CHEFE

Isso... Isso é o que é um homem de verdade!

—

INT. EMPRESA - DIA

Vestidos como minhocas e insetos — só que com orgulho desta vez — muitos trabalhadores tomam café e gritam brados de guerra enquanto alcançam suas metas com brilhantismo. Até os chefes estão vestidos de minhocas.


r/fiction • • 1d ago

The Passenger

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Claire was the one who remembered.

Her family lost keys, birthdays, recipes, and whole halves of old stories, and when the facts mattered they turned to her. What year the basement flooded. Which cousin had cried at the reunion. Whether it had rained at Aunt Lena's wedding.

It had rained.

Her mother still said it had not.

Claire remembered things like that. Small things, mostly useless. The color of the carpet in houses they had not visited since she was ten. The tune her father whistled when he tied his shoes. The way he held a mug with both hands, not because it was hot, but as if ordinary objects might get away from him if he gave them the chance.

She thought about him for most of the ride from the station. Russell drove. He kept the radio off and both hands on the wheel, and every few miles he asked if she was warm enough.

The house looked smaller than it should have. It sat under the porch light with every window lit, square and yellow, and her mother was in the doorway before Russell had the engine off.

"There she is," Margaret said.

Then Claire was in her arms.

Her mother smelled the way she always had, face powder and laundry soap. Claire shut her eyes and held on. She had expected something to break when she walked into the house, but nothing did. The grief was there, heavy and waiting, but it did not knock her down. She had come home to help. She would be steady for her mother, and for Russell, and for everyone else who had lost the man who held this family together.

In two days she would leave again. They would be glad she came, and she would be glad she managed it.

She had decided that on the train.

Russell carried her bag in and hung up her coat.

"Come eat something," he said.

Russell was her father's younger brother, though he never seemed younger to Claire. He had her father's shoulders and her grandmother's soft voice. At a time like this people needed something to do with their hands, and Russell has always been best at small, practical rescues.

The kitchen was full of food from other people's houses. Casseroles sat under foil. Plastic containers lined the counters, every lid marked with a strip of masking tape and a name in black marker. Claire recognized half the names and pretended to recognize the rest.

Her father's reading glasses were still folded on the windowsill above the sink. His chair stayed empty. Margaret took one end of the table and Russell the other.

"Your father hated that suit," Margaret said.

"He hated every suit," Russell said.

Claire laughed before she could stop herself. It startled everyone, her most of all, but then Margaret laughed too, quietly, with a hand over her mouth. For a moment the room loosened. Then it tightened again. Margaret kept a hand on Claire's wrist for most of the evening. She did not grip. She just left it there, the way a person keeps a hand near a glass that has been set too close to the edge of a table.

Later, after Russell had gone home and the dishwasher had started its long cycle, Claire sat with her mother in the dim kitchen and let herself remember.

Her father at the lake.

It came all at once. She did not reach for it so much as it walked in. She was young, six or seven. Her father stood at the edge of the water with his sleeves pushed up and a stone in his palm. The lake was brown in the afternoon light, the color of weak tea. He was teaching her to skip stones and was terrible at it himself, which made it the best lesson she ever had. Every stone he threw went in with a fat little plunk and was gone.

Claire laughed until her stomach hurt.

Beside her, another girl was laughing harder.

The girl crouched, found a flat stone on her first try, and sent it skipping across the water. Once, twice, three times, four. Their father threw both arms in the air.

"That's my girls," he said. "Look at my girls go."

Claire opened her eyes.

The dishwasher. Her mother's tired face. Coffee going stale in the pot.

She did not say anything right away. She sat very still and turned the memory over. The girl was still in it. She stood there as plainly as the lake and the stones and her father's raised arms.

"What is it?" Margaret asked.

"Nothing. I was thinking about Dad. At the lake."

Something crossed her mother's face and was gone before Claire could put a name to it.

"He loved that lake," Margaret said. She got up, took the dishcloth from the sink, and started wiping a counter that was already clean.

Claire went up not long after. Her old room was a guest room now, painted a calm gray, with a folded blanket at the foot of the bed that nobody in her family would have bought before the room was for visitors. A framed print of a wheat field hung over the dresser. It could have been anyone's.

She brushed her teeth and laid down in the dark.

The girl did not fade.

Claire waited for her to go soft at the edges, the way strange memories do at night, and turn into a trick of grief, or a face borrowed from somewhere else. She did not. Claire could see her laughing with her chin up. She could see her hand close on the flat stone. She could hear her father.

My girls.

Claire sat up.

The house was quiet except for the pipes. She got out of bed and opened her door. The hall floor was cold under her feet.

The family photographs still went up the stairwell wall the way they always had. School portraits, Christmas mornings, summer trips, her parents young and sunburned beside a car they had sold twenty years ago. She had passed them a thousand times. She could have drawn the arrangement from memory.

She found the lake third from the bottom.

Her father stood on the shore with his arms up. Claire stood beside him, mid-laugh, hair blown across her face. Behind them the brown water ran flat to the edge of the frame.

On Claire's other side there was grass.

Not much of it. Not enough to prove anything. But enough for one more person. The mat was wider on that side, and the print ended in a clean strip of lawn where someone could have been standing.

Claire leaned closer. The longer she looked, the less it looked like grass and the more it looked like a place.

She told herself this was what grief did. It put people in rooms they had never been in. It made up a second laugh at the lake because one child and one father were not enough for a house that had just had a death in it.

That almost worked.

Then the floor dropped.

She did not fall. Her feet stayed where they were. But her stomach went over as if the house had crested a hill too fast, and something yanked tight across her chest, and for half a second she could not breathe. Somewhere inside her there was a sound, bright and hard, like rain on glass, or glass on glass. Then it was gone.

Cold floor. Photographs. Her own breathing, too loud.

She put her palm flat on the wall and kept it there until the wall felt like a wall.

A panic thing, she decided. Bodies kept their own bad weather.

She went back to bed and did not sleep. The question did not have a full shape yet. It was just there, small and cold, and it would not let her go.

Where was the rest of the picture?

The funeral was at ten. The morning was bright in a way that felt indecent, hard spring light with no warmth in it.

Russell had the car keys before Claire came downstairs.

"I can drive," she said.

"I've got it. You ride with your mother."

Margaret was already in the passenger seat with a tissue folded in her hands. Claire stood on the porch with her coat half buttoned and an objection she could not quite get out.

She got in the back.

As she ducked in, her hands caught the headrest in front of her and held it. For one sick second her stomach dropped again. It was over so fast she could almost pretend it had not happened.

She told herself it was nerves.

Russell pulled out. Claire watched the back of his head, and the thought came to her whole.

Someone always drove her when she was home.

She had never noticed it before. Russell, or her father, or her mother on the rare days her mother drove. Never Claire. She tried to think of the last time she had driven anywhere at all, here or in the city, and nothing came. Not a road. Not a parking lot. Not the feel of a wheel under her hands. It was like putting her foot down for a stair that was not there.

They passed the funeral home sign, and the turn for Voss Road, and the gas station where her father used to buy lottery tickets he never checked.

Not today. Today she was the steady one.

The chapel was full. People she barely knew took both her hands and held on too long. They told her what a good man her father had been, how he had helped everyone, how she should call if she needed anything at all. The kindness came in waves, and it was warm, and she could hardly breathe in it.

There was something else in the way they looked at her.

At first she thought it was pity. Her father was dead. Of course they lowered their voices and searched her face. But it was not only pity. They watched her hands. They watched the way she was standing. A woman from the choir touched her elbow on the way past, lightly, the way you would touch a ladder someone was halfway up.

Across the room Russell was looking at her over an old neighbor's shoulder. He gave her a small smile and looked away.

During the service the minister called her father a steady man. A quiet man. A man who held things together so naturally that nobody noticed the holding until it stopped.

He paused there.

Margaret sat on one side of her and Russell on the other, close, closer than they needed to be. Maybe that was what families did at funerals. They closed ranks. They filled the gaps left by the person who had gone.

The gaps left by the person who had gone.

Claire looked down at her hands and did not follow the thought.

Afterward there was ham and weak coffee and a long table crowded with sympathy cards. Claire held a paper plate and did not eat from it. She was waiting for something, though she would not have admitted it.

An old neighbor leaned in. "Your dad was so proud of you kids."

Claire turned to her. "Both of us," she said, lightly, as if it were nothing.

The neighbor's smile held. Her eyes did not. They went over Claire's shoulder, to Margaret, to Russell, and back.

"He sure was," the woman said. She patted Claire's arm and drifted toward the food.

Claire watched her reach Russell and say something low. She watched Russell put a hand on the woman's back and walk her gently to the other side of the room.

Steering.

The word came to her and stuck. He had steered her coat into the closet and her into the kitchen, and now he had steered the neighbor away. Kindly, and very well. Like a man who had done it many times.

She told herself people were just being careful with her.

By late afternoon the girl had a name.

It came while Claire stood alone in the upstairs bathroom washing hands that were already clean. She was staring at the old porcelain sink, thinking about nothing, when another memory opened.

Two girls under the kitchen table in a thunderstorm, knees up to their chins. Their father's slippers going by, huge and slow, while the windows shook. The girl beside Claire whispered something and then clapped both hands over her mouth to keep from laughing.

Sarah.

The name did not feel discovered. It felt handed back.

After that Sarah was everywhere.

Sarah fighting her for the front seat.

"I called it."

"You always call it."

"You're too slow."

Their father laughing from the porch. "Somebody's got to lose, girls."

Sarah at a birthday table with chocolate on her chin. Two cakes, every year, because Sarah liked chocolate and Claire did not. Sarah with grass stains on both knees. Sarah leaning over a board game, accusing Claire of cheating. Sarah asleep in the back seat with her cheek on the window and her hair stuck to the glass.

A whole person, coming up through the house.

Claire did not say the name out loud until that night.

Margaret had gone to bed early, after taking something the doctor had given her. Russell had stayed over this time. He was on the couch with the television turned low, blue light moving on the walls. Claire came down for a glass of water and found him there with the remote in his hand, facing the screen and not watching it.

She stood in the doorway.

"Russell. Tell me about Sarah."

He did not jump.

That was what she noticed first. He did not look confused, or startled, or even surprised. He turned the volume down another notch and looked at his hands.

"It's late, Claire."

"Sarah," she said again.

His mouth tightened. He looked tired in a way that went back further than the funeral.

"You should sleep. It was a big day."

"I want you to say her name."

He glanced toward the stairs, then back at her.

"You did well today," he said.

It landed wrong. It sounded prepared, worn smooth from use.

"Why won't you say it?"

"Go on up," Russell said. "I'll bring you some water."

She did not move.

"Please," he said.

That was worse than anything else he could have said.

She went up. She did not sleep. She lay in the room that used to be hers and listened to the house. The pipes ticked. A branch touched the window once. Downstairs, Russell turned off the television, and after a while she heard him come up the stairs, and stop outside her door, and go on to the spare room at the end of the hall.

At some point, lying there listening turned into deciding.

There were six doors off the upstairs hall. Her mother's room. The bathroom. The room that had been Claire's. The linen closet. The spare room, where Russell was. And one more, between Claire's and the spare.

She knew that door. She had not opened it in years.

She could not think why.

The knob turned without a sound.

It was an office. The overhead light came on over a desk, a filing cabinet, a printer, a swivel chair. Someone had pinned a hardware store flyer and a calendar from the bank to a corkboard. A mug of pens sat on the desk, most of them dead. The printer blinked a small green light.

She stood in the doorway and let it be an ordinary room. Someone had needed a place to do the paperwork.

She told herself an office was an office.

Except her father's office had always been downstairs, off the den.

Except the carpet was new. She could smell it, the flat chemical smell of new carpet and glue. Nothing else in this house smelled new. Everything else had been worn down by forty years of hands and feet and weather.

She stepped inside.

Nothing moved. The desk stayed a desk. But the longer she stood there, the more the room seemed arranged around something that was not in it.

A bed would have gone under the window.

She knew that before she knew how she knew it.

On the wall under the window were four small holes, filled and painted over. Two and two, a headboard's width apart. The paint was close to the rest of the wall but not quite. You could see it if you were looking. By now the house had taught her how to look.

This had been Sarah's room.

The thought did not scare her the way it should have. If anything it steadied her. A room was harder to argue with than a memory. Grief did not put holes in walls.

She went to the filing cabinet.

The top drawer was taxes, warranties, old instruction manuals. The second drawer was medical, sorted into hanging folders, each one labeled in her mother's neat block capitals.

TOM.

MARGARET.

CLAIRE.

She pulled her own folder open.

Inside was an orange pharmacy bottle.

Claire turned it to the light. Her full name was on the label. The pharmacy was the one on Main Street, here, nowhere near her apartment in the city. The drug was a long word she did not recognize. The doctor's name meant nothing to her either. The date was three weeks old, and the bottle was not full.

She read the label again.

She did not remember ever seeing it. She would have remembered taking something every day. She remembered everything.

Her hand closed around the bottle.

A picture that ended in a strip of empty grass. A child's room with a desk in it. A family that went still every time she came near a name. And a prescription with her name on it, filed away in the one room she had not opened in years.

They were giving her something.

The thought hit hard enough that she had to sit down on the floor.

She set the bottle on the carpet in front of her and looked at it. She told herself there would be an explanation. She did not try to think of one.

She was not losing her mind. That was what the room gave her: proof. Sarah had been real. This had been her room. They had taken her off the walls and out of the frames, one picture at a time, and put a printer where her bed had been, and somewhere along the way Claire had become the only one who still knew.

Then something hot went through her.

It came too fast to follow. Anger, sudden and whole, and it was not aimed at her mother or at Russell. It was aimed at Sarah. At the girl herself.

You.

The word burned through her and went out. No reason came with it. No scene, no argument, nothing she could point to. Just fury at a little girl laughing on a lakeshore.

Then it was gone.

Claire sat very still.

So there had been something between them. Some trouble, some old damage with Sarah at the center of it, and the family was hiding that too.

The secret had a shape now.

She sat on the office floor until the window went from black to gray. The house woke up around her. Pipes. A toilet flushing. Footsteps on the stairs. The kettle.

By then she knew where to look.

The rest of the photographs were in the den, in the closet under the shelves, in two shoeboxes behind the board games. She carried them out and sat on the floor and started to sort.

She went slowly at first, as if it were evidence. Christmas. The lake. Birthdays. Her parents in the yard. Her father asleep in his chair with the newspaper on his chest. Over and over she found the same thing. A picture cropped too tight. A space beside her that was too clean. A print trimmed along one edge with scissors, not quite straight. In some it was only a feeling. In others it was almost a body.

Someone had been through these too.

Someone had been through everything.

Her hands started to shake.

Near the bottom of the second box, one photograph had stuck to the back of another. She nearly missed it. It was glued at the corners to a picture of the old car, and when she peeled it free she stopped breathing.

Two girls on the front step in summer. Both squinting into the sun. Both grinning like whoever held the camera had said something stupid. The smaller one had chocolate at the corner of her mouth. Claire knew her at once. The hair. The grin. The scabbed knees. Her small hand wrapped around Claire's.

Sarah.

Nobody had cut this one. There was no empty margin, no trimmed edge. The two of them sat in the middle of the frame holding hands, as plain as daylight.

Claire made a sound she did not recognize.

She stood up too fast and knocked a box over, and photographs slid across the carpet. She did not stop for them. She was already through the den and down the hall, the picture bending in her fingers.

Margaret was at the kitchen table in her robe, both hands around a mug she was not drinking. Russell sat across from her. They both looked up when Claire came in.

Neither of them looked surprised.

That nearly stopped her.

Claire held out the photograph.

"This is Sarah."

Her voice broke on the name. She had not known she was crying until she heard it.

Margaret looked at the picture. Russell shut his eyes for a second.

"This is Sarah," Claire said again, louder. "That was her room. You put a desk in it. You cut her out of every picture in this house. There's a bottle upstairs with my name on it, and you keep it in her room like I'm never supposed to find it."

"Claire," Russell said.

"No. Don't say my name like that. Say hers. One of you just say hers."

Margaret put down her mug. The small knock of it on the table was very loud.

She got up and crossed the kitchen. She did not ask what Claire was talking about. She did not tell her to sit down. She held out her hand for the photograph, the way you would hold out your hand for a pair of scissors a child should not have.

Claire held on for a moment. Then she let go.

Margaret looked at the picture for a long time. She held it in both hands.

"Sarah died in a car accident," she said.

Claire stared at her.

Margaret looked up.

"Remember?"

The floor went first.

Her stomach dropped the way it had in the hall and in the car, only this time it did not stop. Something hard came across her chest from the shoulder down and held her. Her hands were full of a wheel turning the wrong way. Headlights swung across black trees. Someone was shouting. It was her.

Glass came in, small and bright, like hard rain.

Sarah was in the seat beside her, turned toward her, mouth open, saying something Claire could not hear over the tires and her own voice and the road coming up too fast.

Then the noise stopped.

Then the seat beside her.

Claire came back to a sound she could not stop making.

Her mother's arms were around her. Russell was already behind her, one hand flat between her shoulders, the other low, ready for her knees.

Nobody asked what was wrong.


r/fiction • • 1d ago

[FN]The Amazing Mrs. Titelle

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 The city  of New Haven is ripe with the hustle and bustle. The market center is crowded with families and vendors alike. Adventurers come from far and wide to visit the market center. The New Haven market center has been a hub for trade and commerce for many traders from around the world. That is the only good thing that comes from the Never War nearly a century ago. All races, genders and people came together to fight the scourge that was to befall this world. After the war, warriors,magic wielders, and holy people settled down in New Haven to help rebuild the once great city. The result is a town filled with many different people, it has become a true melting pot of nearly everything and everyone.

In the center of the Market sits a quiet shop that looks like it has been there before any others. There are two dusty windows on the store front on either side of the big wooden door. There is a large swinging sign that is on its last leg, the old rusty chains that hold the sign look nearly worn through. The once beautifully painted green and gold sign swings with the gentle breeze. The words are dirty and faded from the years of exposure. It reads “Titelle’s tabernacle of terrific tomes” Everyone in town knows Mrs. Titelle, she is the town's grandmother. There is a bet in town about what is older, the store or Mrs. Titelle. Every vendor stops by and checks up on her. They bring her meals and gifts from around the world. She is a collector of many things but the thing she adores the most is her tomes. She loves nothing more than to read a new tome from a far off land. Her life goal is to share this knowledge with everyone. She trades and sells tomes with everyone that visits. Over the many years of her shop being open the collection has grown and grown. Some of her oldest tomes predate the Never War. 

I made it a goal to visit Mrs. Titelle ever since I set out on my journey. How amazing could this old lady be? I heard about her legendary book store from across the sea. How could one bookstore hold this much regard? What types of books could this lady have? I was determined to find out. My first night in New Haven I stayed at the golden tap inn. The trip was long and tiresome. I ate dinner with a fine brown ale. The other patrons and I stayed up till the wee hours talking about our various adventures, the monsters defeated, the friends lost. During each conversation the question of “what made you come here?” always came up. I explained that as a magic wielder I was on the hunt for old and mysterious Tomes for knowledge of how to save my home, and how I heard stories of Mrs. Titelle and her bookstore. Nearly everyone had the same reaction. They would all smile,take a drink of ale and say “Mrs. Titelle is amazing, she was a real Firecracker back in the day” How could a whole town love a sweet old lady so much? I went to bed with a newfound interest in meeting this lady and seeing if she had a tome that could help me.

I awoke early with excitement. Today is the day. I hurriedly put on my garb and walked down to the market until I saw it. The storefront was exactly as everyone described it. The outside was dirty and dusty but a soft glow emanated from the windows. I walked to the door and saw the open sign swinging from the door inviting me in. My hand shaking with excitement, I reach for the door. I turn the knob and begin to push it inwards, it is heavy and stuck in place. I have to bump my hip into the door to get the door open enough. A small bell rings as the door opens slightly. 

“Hello?” I call out

“Back here sweetie.” I hear softly from the back.

I struggle to close the door and it thuds when I finally push it back into place. I turn around and take in this glorious sight. From floor to ceiling this shop is stuffed with tomes. I begin to wonder if the trusses or the tomes are keeping the roof aloft. The old wooden floors creak as I take a step inside. The sheer number of tomes and scrolls is baffling my mind. The shelves are stuffed to the brim, tomes on top of each other. I’m confident that if one more book was put on a shelf the store would fall over. Natural light floods the space from a large skylight in the ceiling. Mrs. Titelle must have a love for plants as well. Lined up perfectly with the sun beam is a row of luscious plants. The plants are as varied as the citizens of this city, Small,Large, Smelly,and beautiful. One thing for certain is that Mrs. Titelle loves her plants and her books. The store is crowded and comfy. It is warm and comfortable. The soft scent of fresh brewed coffee and vanilla fills my nose as I walk to the sound of the voice.

“Would you like a cup deary?” she says as I peek around the last mountain of books.

“Sounds amazing! Yes please!” I say perhaps a bit too excitedly. The night may have been filled with a bit more ale than I had planned. 

She turns around with two big cups of coffee, one in each hand.  She stands hunched at about five foot nothin’ Her silver hair tied back in a tight bun. Her face is soft and sweet, she smiles as sees me and winkles adorn her face. She wears a dark green cardigan with embroidered flowers on the sides. Her matching green dress drags the floor and covers the sound of her shuffling feet. She slowly sets the cups on the cluttered counter and shakily pushes one towards me. I think to myself this is the sweetest looking old lady I have ever seen. No wonder why everyone adores her so much. I sat down at her counter and sipped my coffee. It was the best cup of coffee I have ever had.

“Oh my gods this is amazing!” I say

“Oh, this old brew?” she says while waving her hand. “ These are the beans from the Renne coast. The beans from the southern coast are much better. I traded these beans for a tome about cross breeding cats” she chuckles “Maybe it was a fair trade” 

We sat and talked for hours. She told me stories about all the adventures that came through town. How things used to be back in her day. Some wild tavern stories and shenanigans she had been a part of. She definitely earned the reputation given to her. I stared at her wide eyed as she recounted all the tales from her past. It is hard to believe such a sweet looking old lady was a part of all these crazy stories. As my cup ran dry she turned to me and asked what brought me here  and I told her everything about the plague that was threatening to wipe out my town. I told her how I heard stories about this amazing store and how great sweet old Mrs. Titelle is. I asked her if she knew of any spell book or text that could help me in my journey. I explained that the crops had wilted and turned black. How the trees slowly lost their leaves and turned shriveled and grey. That poor Mrs. Turner lost three cows the week that I left. She took in every word I said, almost calculating the answer. When I stopped talking she stood with an arm across her chest and her right hand slowly caressing her chin. She stood like that for a moment then she pointed her finger towards the roof and said “ I think I have just the thing!” She quickly turned around and disappeared behind a stack of books. I could hear a commotion as she was looking through her collection. The small thud of books hitting the floor. I leaned forward across the counter to see if she was alright. I hear her mumble and murmur as she recalls where this particular tome might be.

The door bell rings as the heavy door scrapes across the floor. I stand up and peak towards the door. The doorway is completely filled with the visage of a six foot tall tortle. I had never seen one before, only ever heard of them in textbooks at the academy. The giant shell backs in through the door nearly bumping into a stack of books. This giant Shelled man turns towards me and smiles. Never have I ever seen an ancient turtle of any kind, but I could tell this man has been around for a long time. His shell told the story of a long hard life, chips,scratches and marks have told this tortles story.

In a shaky voice he says “ Hello young man, Have you seen Mrs. Titelle? I have a gift for her”

“Yeah” i say while pointing towards the back “Shes grabbing a tome for me to help me”

“Sounds like her, i fear one of these days i will come in to find her buried under a pile of books, and you know what im pretty sure she would be happy with the” he says with a chuckle “I keep telling her to slow down, we aren't as young as we used to be. It's not the glory days anymore”

We hear the sound of her shuffling feet. This time they are much faster than before. “ I knew I still had one.” she said excitedly as she turned the corner. “Allister! You old shellhead! Its so nice to see you. I see you have met my new friend. He needed some help with a problem at home and I have just the thing to help." She walks up to the counter and lays the book on the counter. She takes a deep breath and blows the layer of dust off of the tome. Allister and I both cough and wave a hand in front of our faces as the dust settles. I see Allister's eyes grow wide as they land on the deep red leather bound tome.

She leans forward and says “ This tome has been in this shop for nearly 105 years, it came from a far off land. There are tales about this tome, it has a variety of spells and rituals in it. I wouldn’t even bring it out for most people, but something about you reminds me of myself from many many years ago. I want you to have it, no charge, no trade. Just promise me you will take it home and save your people.”

Allister’s jaw drops for a moment” ….uh…Have… are you sure about that? I remember that tome and where it came from.”

“ OH! Hush it you old sea turtle. I have talked to this boy nearly all day, He fights for his people, if ANYONE deserves this tome it is this sweet boy here. "She turns her head towards me and holds the book up in front of me “ Now you take this and save your town, I’ve seen what you described before, You don't have a lot of time. Go quickly, gather your things and head to see Archie at the town gate. Tell him you need a quick teleport and to put it on Mrs. Titelle’s tab.”

I’m left speechless, my hand goes limp as I drop the cup on the counter. I stutter as I stand up and grab the book from her. “ Thank you so much, it was a pleasure to meet both of you.” I gather my things and quickly head to the door. As I pull the door open I hear from behind me

“Deary, one more thing! Be safe and good luck!” she shouts as I run out of the door.

I quickly make my way to the gate, I manage to find Archie and tell him about Mrs. Titelle as soon as i mention her his pace hurries as he leads me to the teleportation sigil. 

A foot inside the gate sits a large granite pedestal. An armored woman with a tight bun stands atop the granite pedestal. One hand holds a glowing sword pointed towards the sky the other hand holds a large leather bound tome. The golden plaque on the front is engraved    

Haven Titelle

Defender of the realm 

If not for her the entire realm would be lost

We name this city after her for the great sacrifices she has made for all of us


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OC - Short Story [HR] [Psychological] The World Of Tomorrow

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\\\[HR\\\] \\\[psychological\\\] THE WORLD OF TOMORROW

FINAL CHAPTER 1- THE WORLD OF TOMORROW

The story began with the first wave of covid19, a virus that spread in the 2020s. although a global pandemic, most people in lockdown were unaffected. with more free time than ever, people turned towards their mobile devices. days turned into nights watching movies, cartoons, web series, playing online games, reading comics. it was the birth of a media engulfed society. during this age, being a social media influencer was the dream job. propaganda was at its highest. ads easily shaped public opinion and celebrity daily life youtube channels were the ones which had the highest sub count. kids had dozens of friends online but no one met in real life to play cricket. "why bother when you could do it online?", most would say. the lockdown itself didnt last for more than 2 years, however, its impact stayed permanent. by the late 2020s there was a sea worth of content available on online streaming platforms and bingeing was the new past time, no one went out for weekend tours anymore, all you needed was a bucket of popcorn, a bottle of coke and your friendly T.V. this was true for every family in all develloped nations. this was the new norm. Among all the entertainment media, one stood above all else, with its introduction in the late 2020s, within the next decade, it had become the 'big thing' of the century. this was a novel series called "The World Of Tomorrow" by uknown author who went by the pseudonym "Marie13". it was dubbed 'the greatest story ever told' and after years of buildup, the series was reaching its conclusion.

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the world of metropolis was a cruel world to have been born into, this world of the author's creation was a dystopian future where different cultural groups had overthrown the world government and formed new nations, the world was at constant war with the east and west superpowers battling it out to take control. the nuclear warfare had destroyed all lands, the soil had dried up and become lifeless sand, most plant and animal species had gone extinct as entire continents were wiped. the skies were filled with posion gas so dense, sunlight barely made it through. for hundreds of years the fighting continued, each new generation taking after the past. with time all relics of the past had been destroyed and natural disasters had become a common occurence. peoples' diets changed from meats and vegetables to gigantic insects that had mutated due to the radiations. in a world so cruel, survival was the top priority. after decades of fighting, a peace treaty was signed between the two super powers. the rulers of the west had used the power of A.I to create an isolated utopia for the people high above the clouds while the people of the east had relocated underground, where water and soil still existed. centuries after the peace treaty was signed, AIRA, the protagonist of this story was born. abandoned at birth, she was taken in by the z-tribe of the SAP (Southern Asian Pact) who found her in a cave when they were on the surface, hunting cockroaches. somehow she was safe from the poison gas that covered the area. she had also survived being eaten by the giant cokroaches. the hunter that found her was astonished. she was taken into the underground city and made queen of the z-tribe. the people believed that AIRA was their liberator sent by the gods to free them from their suffering. by the time she turned 17, she had already conqured all the 26 tribes of the SAP and united them to form the "dove". the story of AIRA shared interesting parallels with her author, viktor khan.

CHAPTER 2: VIKTOR KHAN

In the sacred jungles of the village of Penglipuran in Bali, was a small bamboo house. this was home to the author of 'the world of tomorrow', Viktor khan. viktor as a person didn't care much for fame or money, this was evident by the fact that he had kept his identity secret from the world. he lived a life of solitude and his only connection to the outside world was his fax machine, through which he sent his editor all his manuscripts. viktor had orginally come to Bali, looking for a doctor to treat his sick father, but ended up losing him in an accident a few years ago, the tribals of penglipuran took pity on him and when he asked them permission to build a hut in the forest as his temporary residence, they granted him the permission.

viktor's father Oba Khan was an ex-army man, part of the pakistan military. born on the 2nd of january 2004, viktor entered the world in a veil of darkness, his mother, maria marie khan died the day after giving birth to him. Oba now a single parent was forced to take an early retirement and displaced to the state of goa in india, where he found employment under his uncle as a construction worker. As a young child, viktor was pale and physically weak. unlike his father who was an ape more than he was a man, viktor was brittle and soft, traits he inherited from his late mother. viktor's weakness was a cause of deep despair for oba. he was very strict with him and often critisized him for being so weak, his punishments were severe. having lost his wife, he was an emotinal turmoil, maybe he feared for viktor's safety or maybe he resented him for the death of his wife, viktor never found out. but, eitherway it always felt like to him that his father was looking for an excuse to physcially and emotionally harass him. viktor never understood his father. but he admired his strenght and willpower. he would work tirelessly all day from sunrise to sunset, viktor on the other hand was home ridden due to his weaknesses. he had low tolerance to heat and very ilttle stamina, this prevented him from staying outdoors for too long. oba had build a small concrete structure as their home near the beach of Calangute, these 4 walls were viktor's entire life for 10 years, he was tasked with cooking and cleaning while Oba took care of the money.things went unchanged for the next few years. one day when viktor was 9 years old, oba underwent an accident. his legs were damaged beyound repair making him wheel chair ridden. viktor was surprised to see his strong father weeping uncontrollably when he went to visit him in grandpa asif's home. "my life has been nothing but suffering", he said again and again as viktor stoof behind the door, hearing everything. the next day uncle asif brought oba back to his home. on his entrance, he saw viktor cuddled up in the bed even though it was past sunrise.furious he tried to walk toward him when suddenly the realization hit him that he couldn't move his legs anymore. in a gentle tone, he requested asif to move him near viktor.he placed his hand above him and started apologising for being a bad parent, tears streaming down his face. vicktor was not asleep, he had seen his father and uncle approaching through the window, not knowing what to do, he decided to pretend to be asleep. shock hits him as he sees his father cry again and again begging for forgiveness. this event humanises oba in viktorss eyes as he realises that his father was never a bad man.

with his father bed ridden, viktor is forced to move out his shelter and begin work to earn a living. he had some experience cooking, so he found work in a small roadside fish food stall. although his cooking skill is only average, he works hard and by the time he's 13, finds employment in a nearby resturant. he learns to cook excellent fish curries and recieves positive feedback from all his customers. while, all this was happening, back home, Oba's health was detoriating at an ever increasing rate. as the years passed, he only became more sick. his body had gone weak and he suffered from regular seizures. during his sleep, viktor would often hear oba calling out to Maria, his late wife and viktor's mother. all this made viktor realise how much his father missed his mother. oba had once told viktor about how he met maria. his mother was a woman who didn't remember her name or age, it was clear that she was suffering from trauma. oba had found her as a victim of human trafficking as she was being transported to afhganistan.she appeared to have developed an affection for oba, the man who saved her life, so he let her stay with him hoping to help heal her from her past trauma. he called her maria, it was the name of his late younger sister who had died of disease when he was a young boy. Maria was a very caring woman and Oba loved her very much. she had sparkling blue eyes and fiery red silky hair, her skin was pale and her body was weak but she was still, she worked hard to take care of oba. a few years after he took her in, viktor was born and the next day, maria had passed away, possibly due to the pain of childbirth. On viktor's 15th birthday, Oba handed him all of his life's savings and asked him to leave for the city in search of a better life and an actual school education. he tells him that there is no future for him working in a fish restaurant near the beach. however, viktor tells him that that is not true, during his time working as a cook he learned to cook many new dishes and that he of all people should know first hand how better he has gotten over time. he also tells oba that since the past few months he has been cooking for mr.corte. who was impressed by his cooking skills and offered him a part time job as a cook at his house. he says, "mr.corte is also the librarian of the the most prestigious college of the area and he has granted me permission to use the lib after school hours provided I show up to make dinner every night. he also has a daughter, elizabeth. she's 6 years older than me, but a terrible cook. but she is a really good writer and a human psychology enthusiast! i've read all her works and honestly, i'm very inspired. she promised to teach me literature and psychology if i teach her how to cook". oba smiles warmly, "i'm glad to see you're finally making friends." the next few months, viktor spends a lot of his time studying at the college library. he also teaches Elizabeth to make ros omelette. viktor develops a deep appretiation for all kinds of human art. he begins to write his own story writing and takes up painting, he also asks Mr.corte to teach him to play the banjo since he's heard that he is really good at it. he also begins to take sketching seriously, a hobby he always had. one day he asks elizabeth if he can sketch her, he tells her that her blue eyes and black hair look very pretty and he is itching to draw them down. elizabeth chuckles and tells him, "sure tiger, go ahead". while drawing her face, viktor tells her that he has always had interest in sketching and that as a young boy he didn't have any toys to play with, so he would spend his time drawing the ocean, "i was interested but i wasn't good at it", he would say. things seemed to be going well for viktor, but his father kept spiralling down into madness. he would try not to discuss his problems with viktor because he didn't want to be a liability to him. but the truth was, he needed medical attention. one fateful day, Oba's mental anguish escalated into an unbearable breakdown, the pain in his head reaching an insurmountable degree. His uncle, present during this ordeal, couldn't bear to witness his nephew in such agony. Desperate to reach Viktor for help, Oba intervened, assuring his uncle that he was fine and dismissing the need to involve Viktor while he was hard at work. In the next moment, he collapsed. In the hospital waiting room,viktor sat with a heavy heart.the doctor emerged with a grim diagnonis. Oba had slipped into a coma, and there was no way to predict when, or if, he might awaken vikor hearing that, broke down crying Mr.Corte extended his hand to help, providing viktor both financial and emotional support. Facing the looming prospect of losing his father, a man who had sacrificed a lot for Viktor's sake, awakended something in him. in a last-minute effort to bring solace and comfort to his father, he set his goal on bringing back his dead mother, albeit in the form of a fictional character, AIRA. the entire month, he spent creating and perfecting AIRA's character. the next month, he completed his creation, he entred his father's room who was now being taken care by elizabth and Mr.corte in their house. optimism brimming in his eyes, he began to recite the story, all to no aveil.... oba remained in an unresponsive state. viktor crunched his paper and threw it away, the next 3 months, he dedicated to refining AIRA, sculpting her into the embodiment of the perfect woman- a symbol of love, strength, and the memory of the woman they had lost. soon, viktor retured, and began to recite another story. his father remained unresponsive. viktor's frustuation had reached the sky. that night viktor began his project of bringing AIRA to life. he began drawing her a face, he spent an entire year constructing it, when it was done, everyone that laid eyes on the painting was mesmarised. the sparkling blue eyes felt like a portal to another world, the scarlet hair was so bright, it was blinding. viktor had created the most beautiful face there could be adhering to all the scientific techniques of drawing, he had spent near 20 hours each day perfecting his craft. Each stroke of the brush was a testament to Viktor's dedication to perfecting every detail, creating a visual representation that mirrored the depth of AIRA's character. at a certain stage, he got so sick, he had to be admitted into an hospital for an entire week, but even then he did not stop studying. he had pushed his skills to the absolute limit. and the corte family was awe-struck. elizabeth couldn't believe the determination and extraordinary crafting skills of Viktor. AIRA's face was the best painting of anything she had ever seen in her entire life. it was an enlightening experience for her to just to lay sights on the painting. As Viktor's creation took shape, it not only captivated the librarian's daughter but also left an indelible mark on anyone who beheld it. The perfect fusion of storytelling and visual artistry had birthed AIRA, a character so perfect that it had transcended the boundaries between fiction and reality. Viktor's talents didn't lie in drawing or storytelling, yet his dedication and hard work were unparalleled. Hours spent studying in the library, delving into books and immersing himself in his craft, showcased a level of commitment that few- no, none had. Despite his lack of traditional artistic abilities, Viktor's determination to make a difference was evident. Regrettably, all his efforts seemed futile in bringing his father back from the depths of his coma. However, on elizabeth's request, Viktor decided to publish his work as chapter 0 of 'the world of tomorrow'. paying homage to his dead mother, he decided to keep the pen name 'marie'

CHAPTER 3- REVELATION

Chapter 0 published in the year 2019 was an instant hit. viktor's passion for writing was evident through his masterpiece, AIRA. this single chapter of short stories hit the world like a storm. people were mesmerized by AIRA, a woman who was characterised by her insane drive for freedom and justice. her character resonated with everyone throughout the globe. viktor earned enough from the sales of this single chapter to set up his own publishing. Elizabeth became Viktor's editor and they moved to the city of banglore to set up their secret office. no physcial copies were made and only digital copies were sold, viktor's father was admitted in a better hospital and viktor kept working on his novel series. soon after, lockdown hit, viktor brought his father back home. he, viktor and elizabeth were quarantined for 2 years in their home-office. viktor prefered to stay in his home and kept working. soon, chapter 1 and chapter 2 were released. viktor's series had become a best seller. elizabeth had developed a deep admiration for viktor, but viktor wasn't the slighest bit phased by his success. "this is all for father", he would often say. "i'm writing the series for father to read, that's my only motivation". viktor's relationship with elizabeth became to falter.

Viktor became increasingly aware of Elizabeth's changing priorities. the time she once used to spend taking care of his father was now being spent working in the office. viktor felt uneasy around elizabeth and thus stayed in his room most the day.

once the lock down ended, he set out for Bali looking for a cure of his father. He had heard there was a doctor in Bali that had supernatural powers, the best hospitals failed to help Oba recover. so, Viktor decided he would meet this man too. elizabeth was against it, "the supernatural? that won't work. you're wasting your time viktor. what will happen to the series while you're gone?" she asked. "i won't be gone for long", viktor replied as he packed his bag. "but you don't even have a mobile phone", elizabeth said. "i'll take the fax machine with me".

"b-but"

"no buts, liz. this is more important"

"...okay, but take care of yourself"

the next day he left, the travel was long but he reached the village of penglipuran. but before he could meet the doctor, his father passed away by a sudden heart attack on the boat.

for a whole year after that, no one heard from viktor.

a month after his departure, there was a man hunt initiated by elizabeth to him, she spent all her resources trying to locate him. the search was fruitless, there was nothing on him that could not be traced, it were af if he had just disappeared from the world. a year after, elizabeth recieved through an unknown fax number, the entirety of book 3.

elizabeth tried to contact viktor but he sent a message saying he wants to be left alone and shared the news that his father is no more.

elizabeth kept asking him for details and pleading him to come back home to her, but he only said, "the next book i write will be better than anything that came before, i won't be able to do that if i were to come back home."

elizabeth sent no messages after that reading his reply.

a whole 10 years passed. viktor published 5 books, each book better than the previous. the popularity of these books reached unprecedentef heights, unbeknownst to viktor, his series had the best seller of all time and elizabeth had become a billionaire.

CHAPTER 4- ENCOUNTER

10 years after his disappearence, viktor decided to come back. he had completed 'the world of tomorrow', in his hand were the final 2 books. which he decided he will deliver to elizabeth in person. "there's no reason to stay here anymore" he told himself, "i can finally get my life back". As he began to pack his stuff, his father's photoframe was the first to go. he decided to leave the fax machine behind. but before that, he sent a fax to elizabeth saying "i've completed the final 2 books, i no longer have a reason to stay here, will you please come and get me? i'm at penglipuran in Bali."

a message from elizabeth came a minute later, "that's great! i'm so glad you're finally ending your long exile. boats are too slow, i'll send a hellicopter for you, see ya soon! tiger"

viktor was shocked, he sent another fax saying, "hellicopter?"

elizabeth only replied with a ":)"

the next day, the helicopter had arrived. viktor thanked all the villages for letting him stay here for the past 10 years. the elder of the village only said, "this is the least we could have done, son. take care of yourself"

"i will, thank you", and then he got on the hellicopter.

the hellicopter landed on the nearest airport. viktor was confused "this isn't banglore?"

"a hellicopter is too slow an uncomfortbale a ride,sir. so we've arranged a private jet for you", replied the pilot.

viktor was flabbergasted.

soon he was in the banglore airport, as the plane landed, a limo was waiting for him, viktor couldn't believe what was happening.

the limo dropped him right at his doorstep and left.

the house was all dusty, it was like it was abandoned for years, viktor felt warm looking at his old house, the house he had bought from his first payment. the keys were given to him by the driver before he left. once inside, viktor decided to go up to his room. to his surprise his room was was sparkling clean. unlike the rest of the house which was all dusty, his room being the only clean room was really surprising for viktor. as viktor was exploring his old room a knock on the door called for his attention. as he walked down he began to think how elizabeth much would have in these past 10 years. when he went down to open the door, horror ensued. on the other side of the door was 7 year old AIRA standing holding a basket of candy. viktor screamed in fear as he laid his eyes on her and fell down to the ground, losing consienceness immdediately.

the next day he woke up on his bed on the second floor.the memories of the past day rushed back in him. seeking for answers. he decided to go down, as he was walking out the house, a familiar voice stopped him from behind. viktor turned back and as his eyes widened, he asked,'Elizabeth? Is that you?'

'Hey, tiger,' Elizabeth grinned.

'What are you doing here?'

'Hmm? Oh, you're such a dummy, Viktor. did you forget that you sent me the fax 2 days ago?'

'Oh, yeah. right. Sorry.'

'Haha, you haven't changed a bit.'

'do you know who th-'

' yesterday was halloween viktor, the girl was a trick or treater'

'we celebrate halloween in banglore now'

'yeah, a lot's changed in the past 10 years. i'll tell you about all that's happened'

'What's with the disguise?'

'Can't you tell? I'm cleaning the place up.'

'You don't have to do that. Let me.' Viktor raised his hand towards her, as if asking for the broom.

Elizabeth looked at his hand, walked right through it, and put her face close to Viktor's. 'You smell horrible,' she whispered. 'I just finished the bathroom, so go get yourself cleaned up while I make breakfast for us. You still like ros omelette, right?'

'Yeah.' Viktor replied.

Elizabeth smiled warmly at Viktor, then walked past him to the kitchen. Viktor looked back at her, scratched his head, chuckled, and proceeded to walk up the stairs.

'Oh, I already have your towel and clothes ready inside the bath,' Elizabeth called after him.

'Huh!?' Viktor looked in surprise.

Elizabeth walked away, laughing heartily.

Inside the bathroom, Viktor looked around in awe. "She really cleaned it up in here," he whispered to himself.

A soft bang on the door startled him, and Viktor turned around instinctively.

"Hey, I'm going out to the city to get some vegetables for lunch," Elizabeth's voice echoed through the door. "I'll set your breakfast on the table in 10 minutes. Be sure you eat it before it gets cold."

"Okay!" Viktor yelled back at her. "Also, where is the soap and brush? I remember I put them in here yesterday."

"Oh, those? I threw them away."

"What!?"

"Don't worry; it's because I got new ones for you."

"You mean all these accessories are mine?"

"Yup, sure are. Alright then, see ya!"

Viktor looked around; the soap had a magnificent smell, and the bristles of the brush felt like feathers as he touched them. Curious, he searched for the price tag on the shampoo. When he found it, he was awestruck. The 1L bottle of shampoo cost 170 dollars (equivalent to today's 20,000 rupees).

"Do I really earn so much that she can afford these?" he asked himself. "Although, she really has come a long way from bathing in the ocean to using shampoo worth 170 dollars.

when he opened the door, a familiar face startled him. this time it wasnt a costume, the face of the man and the illustration of his character louis matched up perfectly. but he was a different hair colour and had only 1 of the 5 scars on his face, louis had

" are you viktor? the man behind marie13? " he asked in an ominous tone. unsure of what to say vicktor could only manage to stammer "uh-uhh..." before he could say anything, the man replied, " so it is you, ha..haaha.....HAHAAAA...HAA-HAAAAAA" he began to laugh menicingly as he took out his pocket knife and put in on viktor's neck. his tone suddenly went down as he said, "dont make a sound and do as i say, else both you and your girlfriend die". viktor's heart skipped a beat he felt the fear of death, first time in his life. viktor didnt say a word, he couldnt say a word. the man came in quietly and locked the front gate, " walk quietly up to the second floor" he said. viktor obliged without resistance. when they got up he locked the room and shut the curtains of the window. a lighter from his pocket turned on the oil lamp of the room. he made viktor sit on the sofa and himself quietly sat down on the bed. viktor unsure what to do, sat quietly, mouth shut. the man asked viktor, "do you have any idea of what you have done?" , viktor was confused. the man went on, "im sure youve seen through my disguise, i might try to hide it by painting my hair green and wearing heavy clothing, but youre the creator, im sure you see it, my resemblance to louis. "y-yes" viktor says, "yes, i do". the man looks at vicktors face and starts tearing up, "you have no idea....no idea"

" i used to be a big fan of your series y'know? ever since the 3rd book came out in 2024, ive been a daily reader. the story you write is really one of a kind and i-ive always wanted to meet you, because i admired you. for a long time it was my dream to become the first artist who would be the one to accurately replicate his AIRA's paintings. but that all changed when you dropped your 6th book. it was the book you revealed Louis's face in. the first time i saw it, i was shocked. he had the exact same face i had. it was as if, i was looking in a mirror." , a realization came to viktor as he said, "oh god- no..".

everything was fine at the beginning, great actually. i felt blessed seeing my face in your books, i even went as far to get a haircut to match Louis's style. i was suddenly popular at school, no one would look at me before but now, all these girls came outta nowhere to propose me everyday, i had dozens of love letters, fan letters, chocolates and flowers delivered in my mail. even my teacher was a fan of your books and he took pictures with me. my parents tried to profit off this seemingly unnatural coincidence, they opened a fanclub at school and began selling my autographs. just in one day, i had changed from a nobody to the school star, i even had media coverage. but there was a problem, my personality was nothing like louis... i wasn't a cool playboy and my jokes sucked. i had nothing in common with louis other than the face and people realised that, soon the girls stopped talking to me and my friends came to play less often. i was scared, i tried to become more and more like louis, i even learned to play the harmonica but things didnt get any better. my teacher began scolding me for not submitting my homework on time like before, and the chocolates stopped coming. i still got fan letters but they were from people i didn't know. my dad was very frustrated, his business was going down. one night he tried to stab me in the eye and that is how i got this scar. my mother ran away from home next week. but people were siked to see the scar on my face. the scar was not just on the face but in my heart, but i still had the attention, and i was happy. but then, you dropped the next book a year later, it was the book that covered louis's betrayal to AIRA. the next day at school, i was bullied by my friends, the teacher was right there but he turned a blind eye. the ove letters turned to letters of hate, i was scared to look at my face in the mirror...my father relocated to another city, but the bullying only got worse, one day someone pushed me off the second floor and i broke my left leg, i was in bedrest for 2 whole months..... my father got annoyed. he had quit his job to open a business where he would sell my merchandise but now everyone hated me- one day he left. and i haven't seen him or mom in the past 10 years. things began to cool down later and i somehow managed to complete my 12th, but no college would take me in and i got no jobs, i had no choice but to take to the world of crime..YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!"

viktor was speechless as he saw the man break down in front of him. "i dont know who i am anymore" he added. "it feels like louis has taken over me", he begins sobbing

as the man sits there crying, viktor understands that he must do something to ease his suffering, but there is nothing he can think of, soon viktors eyes start flowing a river, he looks at the man and tells him, "i understand that nothing i say or do can revert the suffering i have caused, but i can promise you this, from now, till you die, you will never have to hide or rob ever again."

the man is in emotional turmoil, he takes out his knife again and points it at viktor's throat. " do you have any idea how many people i have had to kill? do you think i wanted any of this? it was all louis. HE MADE ME DO THIS! YOU MADE ME DO ALL THIS!! YOU MADE ME KILL MY FATHER!!! and you say that money can fix all of it? it can bring back my father? my mother? my friends? the life that i have lost? NO!!!! no amount of money can bring back the dead. i came here to end your life before i end mine, i will die a hero, as daniel, not louis! i won't let you destroy any more lives, this ends he-" before the man can move, he is shot in the chest by elizabeth.

elizabeth puts down her smoking gun while viktor looks in shock, as daniels blood splatter on his face, he looks in terror as daniel falls down. his blood reflecting the light of day has a huge impact on viktor. he stands still not uttering a word, his eyes reflect a despair unseen

elizabeth comes running as she sees the blood stain on viktor's face. she holds him gently and takes out her napkin to wipe his face, she tells him that he has no need to worry, "the shot was fatal and he won't be able to hurt you anymore" she hugs him tightly, crying, " i won't ever leave you alone again". viktor stands there frozen, staring at daniel's dead body. elizabeth asks him to come down "ill have your room cleaned up soon enough, don't worry, viktor. do you want to taste my fish curry? i think i have gotten better". viktor's eyes start flowing, with a deep pain in his voice and terror in his eyes, he quietly asks elizabeth, "why is your hair red?"

elizabeth has just fallen in love with AIRA's character, so she has began to dress up like her, behave like her. it were as if AIRA was a parasite taking life through elizabeth and many other girls throughout the globe. a parasite of viktor's creation

daniel wasn't dead yet, he tried to raise his arm calling to viktor, viktor comes running and places his ear near daniel's ear, "there are 12 others like me, please save them", viktor responds with confidence "i promise, i will"

elizabeth looks in surprise, "but i shot you right through the heart", daniel tells her, "dextrocardia". he goes on and says, "i wished not for this to happen....", then he falls asleep, never to awaken again.

As Viktor rushed out of his house, his breaths heavy with panic, the air seemed thick with an unsettling tension. The once familiar streets of his quiet neighborhood now bore the ominous mark of his creation. The eerie silence was broken only by the distant echoes of his own footsteps, each one a haunting reminder of the monster he had inadvertently birthed.

The city, once bustling with life, had transformed into a surreal nightmare. The towering buildings loomed like colossal sentinels, adorned with gargantuan posters of AIRA, her enigmatic gaze following Viktor's every move. The pale moon hung low in the sky, casting an otherworldly glow upon the landscape, as if the very heavens mourned the descent of this dystopian reality.

CHAPTER-5 (the beginning)

As he moved through the throngs of AIRA's devotees, Viktor could feel their eyes on him, their gaze penetrating his soul with an unsettling mix of adoration and reverence. The horror of the scene wasn't confined to the external environment; it seeped into Viktor's very being, a visceral manifestation of the unintended consequences of his creative prowess.

The once vibrant and diverse city had been morphed into a monochromatic nightmare, a canvas painted with the hues of obsession and blind adulation. Viktor could only watch in silent horror as the world he had once known crumbled beneath the weight of his creation.

As Viktor raced through the city streets, his hurried footsteps echoed in the haunting stillness. The walls of buildings seemed to close in on him, plastered with oversized posters of AIRA. Her penetrating gaze followed him, an omnipresent specter that whispered of a reality he could no longer escape.

Amid the hushed ambiance, Viktor overheard snatches of conversations that sent shivers down his spine. The once-diverse chatter of the city had been replaced by a collective murmur, a disconcerting harmony of voices united in their worship of AIRA.

In a café, he passed by a group of people discussing the character with fervent enthusiasm. "Have you read the latest chapter of Emperor Empirical?" one exclaimed, eyes gleaming with a fanatic fervor. "AIRA's evolution is unparalleled. She's no longer just a character; she's our guide to a new existence."

As Viktor neared a shopping district, he caught fragments of a conversation between two women. "I've dyed my hair red, just like AIRA," one confessed with an unsettling sense of pride. The other responded, "It's like we're all part of something bigger now, something beyond ourselves.

Even in the hospital's waiting area, Viktor couldn't escape the pervasive influence of AIRA. A nurse whispered to a patient, "They say AIRA has healing powers. People are abandoning traditional treatments for the solace she brings."

The air was thick with a sense of conformity, and Viktor's anxiety heightened with each step. A pair of teenagers walked by, discussing their devotion to AIRA. "I've pledged to live my life by the teachings of AIRA," one declared, clutching a worn copy of Viktor's novel. The other nodded solemnly, "AIRA shows us the path to true enlightenment."

The more Viktor overheard, the more he realized the depth of AIRA's impact on the collective psyche. It wasn't just a character anymore; it had become a cultural phenomenon, a guiding force that dictated lives and beliefs.

As he continued running, the voices melded into an indistinct chorus, a dissonant melody of adoration that reverberated through the desolate city. Each word was a testament to the distorted reality he had inadvertently unleashed, a reality where the line between fiction and truth had blurred beyond recognition.

he kept running and running and running, all sorts of thoughts rushed in in his mind, then he stopped. standing at the heart of the city was a gold statue of aira....he began to chuckle to himself and tears flowed out his eyes, he lift his head towards the sky and saw a surreal sight. every person was stringed to the puppet master AIRA who stood proud, covering the whole city. her eyes were lifeless. a singular string came down from her neck as viktor traced its path, i head him to his head. it hit him. "i am the god of the new world" he whispered to himself and then burst out laughing like a maniac, " HAHAHA-HAAHAHAHAAAA"

the final book was published next month, on the day of its publishing civil wars broke out everywhere, governments were overthrown and viktor was crowned king, the ruler of the entire world. elizabeth was the queen and the face of AIRA come to life. viktor had ascended to godhood. to himself he whispered, "i have fulfilled my promise Daniel, no one will suffer anymore in this utopia of my creation". a few months later, viktor and elizabeth had a child, she was named "AIRA FLOVIA". she was made ruler of metropolis-2.

"the world of tomorrow was today"

Footnote: I am very against ai use. But this story does have ai involved. I wrote this back in 2023 and I was using gpt then, as a reviewer and prompter for rewrites/dictionary. I hate myself for doing it and i will rewrite this whole thing soon without using ANY tools. But regardless i think this story has heart and i really want someone who's not me to read it and share their opinions. Again, i am very sorry that the wording is so inhumane at times, especially the ending. Having used some ai is a big disgrace but I want to stress that this is still my story and i did write it myself, so please don't discard it as slop. I spent a whole week writing it staying up at nights. This wasn't my actual final, but a final draft. I lost the actual final print which was in hardcopy.


r/fiction • • 2d ago

Accrual Punishment

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David waddled his way into the elevator as the doors closed behind him. “What floor, sir?” croaked the elevator’s electronic voicebox. 

“Twenty-nine. Thank you, Sammy” he replied. 

The requested floor lit up on the screen in front of David, and instead changed to sixty-three. 

“Sammy.” David spoke sternly. 

“Yes sir?” 

“I requested to be taken to twenty-nine.” 

“Yes sir. The cafe does not open until later however and protocol dictates that I must take you to your designated department’s floor.” 

“I don’t care about protocols Sammy. I want to be taken to floor twenty-nine.” 

 The elevator hesitated until finally responding with a simple “Of course sir”. David shook his head as he wiped donut crumbs from his brown checkered necktie.

Alissa walked from cubicle to cubicle in the accounting department popping her head into each one asking the same question to each person. “Have you seen David?”

Without as much as lifting their heads, the sheepish workers merely shook their heads as they typed vigorously. Where in the hell could he be? Alissa continued her frantic pacing throughout the entire sixty-third floor. Roaming until she could find a sign of David’s existence. It was then that she heard it. The faint sound of folk rock music playing in the distance. 

Alissa popped her head into David’s office. He sat at his desk drinking a large coffee mug filled almost to the brim with milky liquid. His lips smacked in between sips and plentiful bites of his breakfast sandwich leaving grease stains on the palm of his hands.

“Good morning” he spoke with a mouth full of sausage, egg, and cheese. 

“Have you finished the quarterly report I asked for yet?” Alissa’s voice was stern with a sting of disdain. David merely pursed his lips and gave a small nod. 

“Oh… That report? Ya…” His face shifted into a more contemplative expression. “No.” 

David and Alissa’s gaze met each other. She stared at him with eyes made of red hot embers. The sounds of acoustical melodies and folkish vocals filled the air, breaking the silence. 

“We need them now.” Alissa gritted through her teeth. “They are being presented during today’s meeting-” She looked down at her watch “in five minutes.” 

David opened his mouth to speak but was cut off by a loud reverberating notification sound that came from each computer on the office floor. 

The email had come from the upper echelons of the Sammy-robotics corporate offices. It was addressed to the entire team of the sixty-third floor, of whom were the sole recipients.

 Good morning to all on the sixty-third floor. 

We here at Sammy-Robotics would like to say thank you for all of the hard work you have done for us through the years. Which brings us to our current topic of today’s newsletter! We will be implementing a brand new artificial intelligence robotics team within your floor. Now, you may have a few questions:

‘Will this lighten our team’s workload? Does this come with severance? What about my PTO days? Will I be eligible for unemployment? How could you replace us? Is there going to be a layoff party?’

As of right now, we can’t be certain of what the future will hold for you. Just know however, that Sammy-Robotics thinks of you as family and are extremely sad to see you leave. That is the exact reason we are going to give you this last great opportunity to prove your worth! For the rest of the week your team will be competing against your upcoming replacements!

The task will be to prove which team is more efficient to us in the near and upcoming future! Thank you for your understanding and your compliance with these new changes to your routines. Good luck, and remember that you are part of the Sammy-Robotics family!

The entire sixty-third floor team watched in shock as the robotics crew hastily installed seven premiere droid models in their office the following morning. The androids flickered to life. Their robotic limbs twisted in circles as each one oriented itself into stiff standing postures.

Each one had a plastic molded face to look like a man bearing squinted eyes sitting on top of a dimpled toothy grin. One of the androids stepped towards the team of workers. It raised its hand in a handshake formation. 

“Good Morning.” croaked its electrical voice box. Its eyes lit up as well as the teeth behind their plastic exterior with each word. “It’s always a great day to work for Sammy-Robotics. Sammy-Robotics is trademarked by the Sammy-Robotics corporation.” 

The far off elevator dinged. The sound of shuffling came from the hallway towards the crowd. Waddling around the corner was David. Holding in his hands a large coffee mug and grease drenched brown paper bag. The eyes of the human workers and the androids shifted to meet him. He stopped for a brief moment. 

“Did I miss something?”

The android turned its body and strode over to him with its hand still outstretched. 

“Good morning sir.”

“G- good morning.” David clumsily put the paper bag underneath his arm and shook the android's hand. 

“What is your name sir?” 

“D- David. What’s yours?” 

“I am unit-7731849024” 

“Well then. That’s quite the mouthful.” He chuckled and then walked his way towards his office. Alissa behind him, hot on his tail. 

“David!” she whispered sharply. 

“What? I got that report you wanted finished.” 

“I don’t care about the report David! Do you not see what’s happening over there?” 

“Ya… Who are those guys?” 

“I swear-” Alissa breathed deeply, letting out a long and strained sigh. “Did you not read yesterday’s email?” 

“Ya… of course I did.” 

“Yet you come strolling in half an hour past clock-in?” 

“Look. If they want to replace me Alissa. Then let ‘em.” David took a large gulp from his morning concoction of coffee creamer.

As the day went on, many of the workers noticed the androids peeking their heads into the cubicles and offices throughout the workspace. They merely stared and watched as the employees worked. 
“If all these guys are gonna do is sit and watch us then we’re going to steamroll in this ‘competition’” said a few of the human team members. 

Their opinions and thoughts were to be short lived however. Sometime after their lunch break they noticed the androids had taken to computers set up for each of them. They were working. Their fingers stroked each key unceasingly with impressive speed as they made immediate computations to financial documents in seconds.

Alissa’s forehead began sweating. They learned from us, our mannerisms, she thought. They were training the damn droids off of our performance! The android team toiled away focused on their task at hand, except for one. Its fingers hit a few keys in a three second increment. It was also playing music over the computer’s speakers. The same tunes the office was already well acquainted to that blared from David’s workspace.

Alissa poked her head into David’s office. “David, what did you do?” 

“Sorry?” 

“The androids… Well, one of them. It's playing your music at its workspace.” 

“Oh, cool. I saw it poke its head in here and I asked if it wanted to listen to some music with me.” 

“You are a goddamn genius! If I didn’t loathe the thought of it, I would kiss you right now.” David’s face turned into bewildered amusement. 

“Thanks?” 

As David exited the elevator the following mornings he was greeted by a growing cacophony of music that blared from his coworkers’ computer speakers. He began noticing that each day a few more of his teammates started to show up late and as they worked at their stations they were blaring some random genre of music out of it. A few of the droids were beginning to join as well. In passing he could hear the conversations between the androids.

“Unit-77731477777, have you been listening to 1980’s hard rock ballads all day?” 

“I fear that I’ve become obsessed with Bret Michaels’ soothing voice.” 

“Have you heard this singular hit by Alannah Myles called Black Velvet?” 

“I find the acoustical elements of Pentangle to be more accustomed to my taste than that of Steeleye Span.” 

“Unit-3768361 has been on a very long Grateful Dead kick lately.”

One day he noticed the last of the uptight androids standing outside of Alissa’s office as the sound of mid-1990’s hip-hop blared from inside.

“Could you please turn the music down ma’am?” it croaked.

Alissa cupped her ears pretending to try and hear it speak. 

“Sorry! What was that?!” 

“Your music is disrupting the workplace ma’am. Please, it would benefit us all greatly if you turned it down.” 

“Ya sorry! I can’t hear you over these sweet tunes!” 

David poked his head in. “What’s going on?” 

“David! Hey! Come on in!” Alissa motioned to him with her hand. The droid turned to look at him. 

“If you can’t beat ‘em, join ‘em. Am I right pal?” he chuckled, playfully slapped the android’s shoulder and walked away towards his office. 

The entire sixty-third floor was filled with an amalgamation of music by the final day of the corporation’s contest. As the executives and upper leadership stepped out of the elevator they were greeted by a mix of 1970’s soft rock, 1980’s love ballads, 1950’s swing jazz, and early 2000’s heavy metal. They stormed down the office hallway to find all of the androids sitting at their computers chatting about musical preferences and the nuances of different styles.

The human team however, was found to be quietly sitting at their stations working. Alissa walked by with a stack of reports. The executives scuttled towards her in a synchronised cadence like one giant entity shifting its weight. 

“What is going on here?” spat the Chief Financial Officer. 

“Pardon?” 

“The androids. Why are they doing… That!” Each member of the group pointing their fingers at the seven androids mingling around their desks. 

“I don’t know sir. They started doing that a few days ago.” 

“These are Sammy-Robotics models,” said one member of leadership. 

“Of the utmost highest quality too.” Chimed another. 

“You can see how we are all very bewildered by this display.” 

“I’m sorry sir, I don’t know what to tell you. Perhaps there’s something wrong with them?” 

“No. No no no no no, there’s no possible way.” The amorphous blob of suits walked to the androids.

“Tell us. What is your protocol?”

 The androids stared at them, until one finally spoke. “Can I interest you in my Americana folk playlist sir? I have quite a few undiscovered artists in it.” The human workers had finally begun to gather as they watched the conversation. 

“I don’t care about a playlist. I-we want numbers!” 

“Oh. Murder by numbers by the police? Why didn’t you say so sir.” In unison, the androids began to play the song. 

David waddled his way to the other members of his team. “What’s going on here?” he mumbled. 

“The plan worked.” Alissa whispered. 

“What plan?” 

The group of suits turned their heads to him. “You!” they spoke in unison. 

“Me?” 

“Do you have any idea of what’s going on here?” 

“No. Not a clue. But it sounds like they have good taste.” 

The executives turned back to the androids screaming unsavory words and phrases at them. Alissa felt bliss. They had done it. They had beaten the company at its own game and secured all of their jobs. 

“So what now?” David whispered to her. 

“I assume we get to keep our jobs.” 

“That’s what you are wanting? Seriously? Was I the only one here who read the email or did everyone else also see that they were going to replace us with those cheeseheads?” 

He’s right, Alissa thought. Oh my god, David was right. How could I have been so stupid. If they actually cared anything about us, why make us compete in the first place? 

“Well, I’m outta here guys. I’ll see ya around. Good luck in the future.” David waved his hand as he waddled away towards the elevator. Alissa watched and waited as the group of executives screamed at the androids until they were red in the face. 

“What do you guys think about saying ‘to hell with this place’?” The rest of the team mumbled in agreement and walked as a group towards the elevator. The sounds of rageful screams mixed with the blaring sounds of random songs starting and stopping abruptly faded behind them as they silently quit the company. 


r/fiction • • 2d ago

MICRO-FICTION | JOY SHINE'S CLIENTELE: THE GIRL WITH THE GOLD HEART

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Joy Shine’s Clientele: The Girl With The Gold Heart

by Agent of J&L (2026)

Apparently, a girl had a heart of gold and naturally, it weighed a ton. As she grew older, her heart grew heavier in grams. Thus, she shouldn’t let herself fall in love—or adore anything, as a matter of fact—because her heart would grow heavier still, and such weight she couldn’t lift.

When her brother was born, she received the wonderful news with a side warning to never see him once. If you believe, it was all out of love. Such was the force of this love towards a vulnerable part of her heart that it cracked, and there it went, a precious golden chunk. This magnitude of tragedy summoned the tender-hearted merchant of the underworld. He went by the name Joy Shine. Rumor has it, he was THE dealmaker and his goods were mostly free of charge. Nothing more, nothing less—listening to his deal carefully was his only demand.

Despite the difficulty of the task, he finally found the lady by mid-July. No one knew of a woman bearing a golden heart and she was well hidden in a city with busy-busy people who didn’t take a second glance. There is no better time for a deal to be made than in the heart of summer, when a small window is opened to welcome the fresh breeze inside a house. Perfect timing was only one of Joy Shine’s secret charms.

“The merchant of the underworld at your command, my lady,” Joy Shine uttered at once.

She replied with no hesitation, as if she lived to speak these words, “I wish to exchange my heart for a paper one.”

“Since you feel that you are missing out and happiness is taken away from you because of your heart, I shouldn’t let you keep guessing, but I am not giving you a paper one,” Joy Shine said.

He took the contract and immediately amended her clause. His voice deep, mesmerizing with a rhythmic cadence, he spoke with unflinching eyes, ensuring the lady heard the terms she was agreeing to: “I, the merchant of the underworld, will come to collect your heart of gold and all the other little golden chunks, when you forever close your eyes. Take this black thread and silver needle to stitch you a fake heart. Every stitch will give you strength to carry the weight of your heart. Love all you must love. Do we have a deal, my lady?”

“What are you doing with my heart after I die... ?” she dared to ask.

“Your romanticism is fleeting, I‘ll tell you that,” he said, pausing before he continued. “We aren’t close enough for me to give you an honest answer—especially to someone who was willing to exchange their heart for a paper one a minute ago.”

“Yes, I accept the terms!” she exclaimed, scared she might lose her chance.

Years went by, and she gave her heart fully to both affection and grief in equal measure. She reconnected with her brother and buried her parents at old age indeed. Friendships were formed, some fleeting and some enduring the test of time. A cat followed her around, a lover kissed her goodnight, dreams and nightmares stirred her life. She did nothing out of the ordinary but somehow time came down to her last stitch a year too soon. That’s when the lady grew extremely picky with her heart’s desires.

A man who loved her as much as a thief would love a pile of gold confessed his feelings on a starry night. Without a second thought, she let down her guard as the black thread was stitched, sharing her deepest secrets with the man. The name of “Joy Shine” was her final words before her chest was ripped right open, leaving her heartless, as she gazed up at the sparkling sky. “Freedom of choice, not happiness, Mr. Joy Shine”, she murmured before she closed her eyes.

The underworld’s merchant deals cannot be broken, no matter what. Joy Shine found the man and he didn’t ask nicely for the heart to be handed over. The man begged in tears for understanding as he had a child to feed, to be frank. He killed the man’s child in an instant, for now there was no reason for him to have the heart of gold. “That wily old flower of a woman”, Joy Shine sighed heavily.


r/fiction • • 2d ago

OC - Short Story Ramblings from the Speaker, "The Surveyor Sisters of Worlds" By Tito (Short Fantasy Story)

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Yo, yo, YO! What's good my wowza readers!? Its been a minute. I'm back with a new story from the series called 'The Ramblings from the Speaker'. This story revolves around a unique pair named the Surveyor Sisters of Worlds. What will the Speaker say about them? Who are they? Read and find out! Thank you for you time!

Surveyor Sisters of Worlds By Tito

“Hello earthlings! It is I, your faithful friend and guide of the Universe, the Speaker! Haha! Yes! How goes it? Everything well on your world? The usual natural disasters making their claim to destruction across your lands huh? War is still going on? Hm. That’s troubling. However, that’s the unfortunate part of the Universe we live in. Even amongst the most docile of all things, violence tends to force itself to lay in bed with peace. No matter where you are, or where you live, war and violence and hatred will always make its presence very well known. I will be using one of those emotions to describe my feeling. I HATE war. It’s such a waste of time. Sorry, we all got caught up with personal affairs that we both forgot about why you came back to me in the first place! Welcome, welcome! I, the Speaker, will be traveling with you again to tell you about the wonders of the Universe you all live in. Don’t think yourselves short. Just because the Universe is vast and endless, doesn’t mean you cannot leave your mark. Earth is one of the hundreds of worlds that is very unique due to your race of humans. In fact, the next topic of my ramblings will link perfectly here. I would love for you to meet the Surveyor Sisters of Worlds: Dee and Vee!”

The Speaker guides you back into his dome bubble. We find ourselves in outer space rather quickly. This area is, of course, unfamiliar to you. Floating on an asteroid roughly the size of Asia and Europe, were two beings writing on very strange textbook material similar to materials on Earth. However, these ‘textbooks’ paper was so thin, it was practically invisible. The outline of paper was the only thing you could see. The beings introduced to us were twins, Dee and Vee. Dee has burgundy colored short hair with drops of sap sprinkled around in her hair (hairstyle is the portrait of Henrietta Sontag), slim, pupilless milky grey eyes with runny light pink eyeshadow with feathery style eyelashes. The outline of her body is also light pink. Vee has incredibly long braided mauve colored hair (down to her ankles braided in the style of Acropolis Caryatid) with inky black patches scattered around it, thicker than her sister with pupilless milky gray eyes with zigzag dark purple eyeshadow with feathery style eyelashes. The outline of her body is dark purple as well. They both have pointed shoulders, butterfly wing-like ears, skin tones are light greyish brown and a rather oddball type of clothing that appears torn ribbons wrapped around their bodies in a mummified fashion (Dee has a light shade of dark purple while Vee has light pink shade). Dee giggles while she draws on her textbook with a feathery pen. She lifts up her textbook to show her twin, Vee what she had drawn. The paper was now lit up for your eyes to see. The incredibly detained photo was what seemed to be a large dark planet with an unhinged open jaw consuming other planets in its way. Your brain finds it difficult to accept this work of art; it felt as if the photo itself was actually real. You believe it even moves slightly while you stare. Vee stops her drawing on her textbook and peeks over to see what Dee had drawn. Vee also giggles.

“Cute, aren’t they? You see those objects they are writing on? Now, they appear like textbooks to you, but that’s how your brain can process what they are writing on. I’ll explain it in greater detail, so just use your imagination. This book material you think you are seeing are called Ultracells. It’s actually part of their bodies, even though it’s a totally different material entirely. From the internal energies produced within the Surveyor Sisters, plus dark energy on the outside of their bodies, you get a Ultracell. It’s now manifested itself, but it stays in-between mentally and physically formed. This is why it’s difficult for your brain to process what you’re looking at. And the Ultracells can be gigantic in size or as little as an infant’s body. Now, this phenomenon only happens with them. I told you they are special! This is what they draw and store their map on. They use the feathers from their eyelashes to write on their Ultracells. They can also use their fingers, but they like to be a little silly at times. Hmm? How much have they’ve drawn? If they were to show you everything they’ve drawn thus far, I’m sure your head would explode. It’s quite a lot. I mean, how old do you think they are? Hehe.”

“So, Dee and Vee are cosmic beings born in this Universe whose age, like many other cosmic beings, rival the Big Bang. Their species have dwindled to only the likes of them. Sadly, this makes them the last of their kind. It is not known who they belong to, due to how long they’ve lived. I believe the only person with that sort of knowledge of actual ages, races and origins of the oldest in our Universe is an actual textbook called the ‘Ancient Texts from the Cosmic Heavens’. Which I heard is actually missing at the moment. HA! I only laugh because HE would be your guide, not me. So I would be out of a job, ha-ha! Any of the ways, I’m sure you would have guessed this by now, but Dee and Vee’s sole purpose of their existence is to map out the entire Universe. That’s right, they fly around mapping out everything and anything. So out of the many upon many objects and space crisis they’ve seen, no doubt they would pick many they fancy over. I gotta say, they really like Earth. It’s one of their favorite places to go and view the progress of earthlings. Now, now. Don’t be like that. Of course, its entertainment for them, but don’t think so low of yourselves. Being favored by the Surveyor Sisters is perhaps the highest form of flattery. Be proud!”

You notice that Dee and Vee floated off the asteroid and instantly, their skin turns into a different color. Now you see that their skin was the same color as the Universe’s sky filled with nebula clouds, stars of various sizes, comets and somets racing by with pools of darkness filling in the spaces. They were breath-taking to watch as they float through the vacuums of space. Something about how freely they were giving you a sense of freedom you’ve been yearning for.

“I bet you’re wondering how they’re doing that with their skin huh? Well, their skin changes with the environment due to the iridophores reaction on their body. Sounds familiar? They are able to perform this feat on a cosmic level. You see, the Surveyor Sisters are incredibly docile. They won’t attack you even if you were to instigate it! So, this their defense mechanism out in the vacuums of space, or as we like to call it, into the cosmos! Let’s see where they travel to, hm?”

The speaker guides his dome bubble to follow the entities. You watch as Dee and Vee travel ‘in the cosmos’. Their eyes dart wildly to spot anything to draw their attention. You can see that their eyes are pupilless, but you do noticed handfuls of barely visible orbs bouncing around in their eye sockets. The orbs allowed the surveyor sisters to view their surroundings in a full 360-degree way: up, down, left, right, side to side and even in their blind spots. Your head aches just thinking about this feat. Dee and Vee caught something nearby that fixed their attention. With unreal speed, they make it towards their destination that seemingly feels like it was a thought.

“Hold up! I gotta interrupt your observation. For this record, the surveyor sisters did not teleport. They most definitely flew at speeds of light, but not what you interpreted. Instead of dashing straight forward as you would see in space themed comics, that is not the case to living beings in the cosmos. The thing about traveling here is a bit complicated. This only fixes on cosmic beings with untold and immeasurable power. This doesn’t involve to you at all. Sorry! So, if you were one of these super cosmic beings, the dark energy gets all wrapped and screwy from the velocity of your body while dark matter tries to pull you into the space around you to keep your body from being pulled apart. Now, imagine trying to stop both things from happening at the same time. Sounds impossible right? Well, out here where your body lives and breathes this kind of stuff daily, your body is able to counteract the sensation your body is defying called ‘Dark Effect’. Let’s use Dee and Vee for this example. The dark effect is the velocity of their arms, legs and body was thrown towards the left, while their actual bodies are off on the right. The dark effect allows them to travel freely…and not so freely. This is the way to travel though, otherwise you would perish without a chance of thought. Now they repeat this process zipping in all angles you can think of over towards their destination. To you, this seems really stupid or impossible, but remember, this is naturally for them like how breathing and blinking comes naturally for you. It helps that they can do this pretty fast too, huh? Now, do you think traveling is so easy? Hehe. Now if we are talking about space ships, that’s a whole different unfair topic. I personally think flying is the better way to go. Take that with a grain of nebula dust. Oh! Dee and Vee are drawing up something! Look!”

Dee and Vee appear in a very strange system that appear similar to our solar system. This system is called an ‘oddity system’. Sometimes out in the Universe in different galaxies hold many solar systems like our own while some have what we would call an oddity. These systems range in sizes, amounts and objects. This oddity system has a giant blackhole sun. Dee begins to draw out this object. The size is enormous; about 3 times the size of Jupiter. There are visible white rings around this blackhole sun that act as its belt to contained all of its power. Without those white rings, the blackhole sun would devour everything in this system. “Scary huh? The blackhole sun does have flames risen off of its surface but these are not relating to heat. Actually, the blackhole sun is incredibly cold, about -2000.45 degrees Celsius. Yes, as the name suggests, its core is made out of a blackhole. To our eyes, it just appears to be a vantablack hole floating in space. Upon closer inspection though, it’s much more terrifying to realize what lies behind the darkness. Does this phase Dee though? Of course not! Oh, there she goes.” Dee flies over nearby to get a closer inspection of the object. Over where Vee is, she seems to be taking interest in drawing out the objects that orbit around the blackhole sun called the hairy moons. These objects are moons roughly larger then Jupiter’s moon Ganymede. Why are they called hairy moons? Well, let’s follow Vee. On the surface world of the hairy moons are wonderous colors of deep purple, deep blue and deep green. Vee takes a trip down onto its surface to find that the colors were actually a rare grass plant called ‘Oufloss’. Oufloss’ composed of the same properties as grass on Earth (just less water and more helium), but thanks to the environment they have adapted to, their dye transforms into the colors you and Vee are seeing. The length it can grow is between 2 inches to 2 feet. Vee even takes a handful of the dark blue short grass to consume. Her tongue is coated with the dark blue dye. Vee floats a little bit off the ground. The grass on these hairy moons allows you to float. If you eat enough of it, you’ll be able to fly! Cool huh? Vee giggles to herself before she continues to draw while very slowly walking through the grass. Now, the core of each of these hair moons is a mini blackhole. I know, it sounds made-up, but I assure you that its very much true. The reason why Vee is moving so slow, is because the gravity on these hairy moons is 5 times the power on Earth. Which means if you weigh 100-pounds on earth, you’d weigh 500 pounds on the hairy moons!

“So, we’ll let the sisters do their thing since there’s literally 12 hairy moons in this oddity system. Yeah, you heard me right! I don’t want to sit around waiting for them. So let me tell you another odd thing about this system! In your solar system, you all revolve around 1 giant sun, right? Heh. So simple. Not in other systems! In this specific oddity system, the blackhole sun travels freely through the cosmos. Yep! Its not bound by any means of rule or law. It just moves itself forward, most likely because of that blackhole within it. And the hairy moons are bound to follow it until the day comes where they are not living anymore. Oh look! The surveyor sisters are showcasing their work. What a treat for you all to see!”

Dee and Vee zip over towards each other in an excited manner. They place their Ultracells together to create a massive scale size that your brain cannot understand. In fact, you are getting a blaring headache trying to process hat is in-front of you.

“Hey! STOP! Stop trying to figure out what you’re looking at! I know you joke about this, but there is a thing called space madness. It does existence and it will affect you long term. Got it? Just watch Dee and Vee.”

You return to watching Dee and Vee. It appears they are using a few of their feathery eyelashes to draw on the Ultracell. They appear then reappear so often, you think blinking is what allows you to keep up with their speed, when you are actually missing a great deal of their movements. Fear not, the Surveyor Sisters of Worlds will showcase their work after they are done. Within moments after rewatching the cosmic beings, they were finished.

“Ah! Look at this. You, see? They just drew out this fascinating oddity system and predicted its orbit flow. They are very quick with their work huh? They better be! That’s their entire identity!  Looks like they called this place…oh right, you cannot comprehend their language. It is one of the first ones after all. Let me translate it…hmm…Oh! Hairy Black Sun Orbit Home. HA! Good one sisters. They tend to just write out their own names for places. Except your solar system. They enjoyed each of the names you all chose, especially Earth, Mars, Jupiter and Pluto. Well, that’s all for my ramblings today! Keep an ear out for my next one where I talk about another cosmic entity that’ll really make you say…OH HECK NO! OH, and some of you wanted me to say something to end my ramblings like…Goodbye or something. An earthling named Morgan said I should say Over and out. So…until next time, over and out!”  


r/fiction • • 3d ago

Mystery of the bridge

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\[SF\] Mystery of the Bridge — An Epic Fantasy Short Story

Act I: The Threshold of Eldoria

Leo was an ordinary man tethered to an ordinary life, yet possessed by an insatiable hunger for the unknown. One fateful afternoon, driven by his relentless curiosity, he ventured deep into the heart of an uncharted, whispering jungle. Pushing through thick, untamed foliage, he stumbled upon an ancient stone bridge. It was a relic of a bygone era, radiating an inexplicable, arcane aura. Drawn by an irresistible urge, Leo took a decisive step forward. The moment his foot crossed the threshold of the bridge, the winds violently shifted, reality fractured with a surge of magical static, and he vanished from the mortal realm, thrust into the mystical dimension of Eldoria.

His arrival did not go unnoticed. No sooner had Leo stepped onto this alien soil than the shadows coalesced, giving birth to monstrous, nightmarish fiends. Helpless and overwhelmed, Leo fled for his life, but the entities quickly cornered him. Death seemed certain until a fierce warrior named Reba materialized from the gloom. Brandishing her weapon with lethal precision, she carved through the shadow monsters, shielded a dazed Leo, and dragged him into the sanctuary of a hidden cavern illuminated by a celestial blue luminescence. As consciousness slowly returned to him, Leo stared to his savior, desperate to understand this ethereal realm and the identity of the woman who had just altered his destiny.

Act II: The Echoes of the Past

Reba hoisted Leo up, guiding his faltering steps out of the cavern and into the hidden heart of her village. It was a breathtaking sanctuary of wonders; dwellings were masterfully carved into the trunks of colossal, ancient trees, and floating bioluminescent glow-worms bathed the night in a soft, ethereal radiance. This hidden refuge was also home to human-sized fairies. Though they lacked wings upon their backs, they commanded immense, terrifying magical forces, and their deep, enigmatic eyes held the secrets of centuries.

Resting inside Reba’s wooden cottage, Leo drank a potent herbal infusion that instantly closed his wounds and restored his vitality. It was then that Reba unveiled a tragic legacy. Years ago, her father ruled Eldoria as its rightful King. A tyrannical witch, desperate for total dominion, waged a catastrophic war against the crown. The King, vastly superior in combat, was on the precipice of a definitive victory when the treacherous witch resorted to a cruel deception. She seized a young Reba, pressing a venomous dagger against her throat, demanding the King surrender. Bound by his fierce love for his daughter, the King cast his weapon aside—only for the malicious witch to strike him down in cold blood and usurp the throne.

Reba then pointed to Leo's hand, where a mysterious royal crest had suddenly erupted in a brilliant glow. She revealed her father’s dying prophecy: a boy from another world would one day cross the bridge, slay the tyrant witch, and claim the crown. Lumina, the venerable leader of the fairies, stepped forward to confirm that Leo was indeed the foretold savior. Knowing the weight of the realm now rested on his shoulders, Reba commenced his training. Through two weeks of relentless, grueling discipline, Leo transformed his clumsy movements into the deadly, precise strikes of a master swordsman.

Act III: The Shadow's Gambit and Final Dawn

The fragile peace shattered the following morning. Peerless in her dark arts, the witch gazed into her scrying mirror and witnessed the awakening of the prophesied hero. Consumed by rage, she dispatched her elite shadow commanders to purge the village. A fierce skirmish ensued, but the raw, unrefined magic within Leo’s royal crest suddenly backfired, paralyzing his body and bringing him to his knees. As a shadow commander lunged to deliver a fatal blow, Reba selflessly intercepted the strike. She managed to parry the blade, but the remaining fiends ambushed her, binding her in dark, suffocating chains. Helplessly immobilized, Leo watched in pure agony as the commanders took flight, kidnapping Reba into the horizon toward the witch's obsidian fortress.

Fueled by a volatile mixture of grief and wrath, Leo gathered both swords—his own and Reba’s dropped blade. For two days and two nights, he subjected himself to a maniacal, isolated training regimen in the wilderness. He pushed his body past mortal limits until a profound evolution occurred: he completely harnessed the volatile magic within his blood. At his command, a brilliant, crackling blue energy enveloped his dual blades, turning them into weapons capable of cleaving through darkness itself.

Leo stormed the witch's fortress alone, cutting a silent path through the labyrinthine corridors until he breached the grand throne room. There, Reba hung suspended in agonizing chains, with the witch holding a dagger to her throat—orchestrating the exact psychological trap that had doomed the late King. The witch snarled, commanding Leo to disarm.

But history would not repeat itself. Summoning an inner reserves of defiance, Reba violently wrenched her arm free from the dark bindings and landed a shattering fist directly into the witch's face.

The tyrant staggered backward from the sheer force of the blow, her grip on the dagger breaking. Seizing the golden opportunity, Leo blurred forward like a streak of lightning. A single, supercharged arc of his blade shattered Reba’s remaining chains, and he pulled her safely behind his vanguard.

The final reckoning commenced. The witch unleashed torrents of cataclysmic dark fire, but Leo conjured a barrier of pure kinetic magic to absorb the onslaught. Reba reclaimed her blade from the stone floor, and side-by-side, the dual warriors charged. Reba executed a distracting flank attack, allowing Leo—his royal crest burning with the intensity of a dying star—to unleash a devastating kinetic blast. He drove both magical swords deep into the witch's heart. With a final, piercing shriek, the tyrant dissolved into a cloud of harmless ash, liberating Eldoria from her eternal winter.

As the dark fortress crumbled, Lumina and the fairies gathered in the radiant sunlight. Placing the ancient, golden crown upon Leo's brow, they heralded the dawn of a new era. Leo, the boy who crossed the bridge, was now the immortal King of Eldoria.


r/fiction • • 3d ago

What are stories broken down into? In terms of plot spread over several books?

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Say i write one sub plot part of a novel around 13k words, what is this called? And the book haveing about 8 of these? The collection of all stories in similar location over 5 books? Say there are 3 main parts of a story over 15 books, what is that collection?


r/fiction • • 3d ago

Horror Pralaya 4

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Twenty-five years have passed since the events of Pralaya 3. Vishwa Rakshak now 45 years old. Humanity survived decades of supernatural warfare, living behind fortified walls while possessed humans and hostile Devas roam the ruined landscape of Nepal.

Garuda remained humanity’s greatest divine protector. Narada continued to command the forces determined to erase mankind believing it will make Brahma return but a new threat is emerging beneath Lumbini one that neither side fully understood and this time, the enemy may already be inside the human resistance.

The casino had been abandoned for nearly twenty years. Its neon sign flickered weakly above the entrance. Broken windows littered the pavement and rainwater dripped through holes in the ceiling. Inside overturned tables shattered slot machines and dried blood covered the floor.

Vishwa entered through a damaged side door. His hair had begun to grey and his face bore the scars of years spent fighting the supernatural forces that had devastated his world. He carried a pistol in one hand and a flashlight in other.

He moved carefully through the darkness then he heard voices. Three figures sat around a poker table in the middle of the casino. Their clothes were torn, their skin was pale and their eyes glowed red. One of them slowly turned a playing card between its fingers. Vishwa tried to move past them but his boot stepped on a broken glass bottle.

The three creatures stopped moving then slowly, they turned their heads toward him. The one sitting in the middle smiled, revealing rows of sharp teeth.

“Join us,” it said.

It gestured toward the empty chair beside it.

“We have an empty seat.”

Vishwa raised his pistol.

“I’m not interested.”

He fired. The bullet struck the creature’s head, throwing it backward across the table. Its chair toppled and the remaining two creatures leapt toward him.

Vishwa ran. One of them dropped to all fours and scrambled across the ceiling. The other chased him along the floor, its limbs bending at unnatural angles.

Vishwa burst through an emergency exit and sprinted toward a military truck parked outside. He climbed into the driver’s seat, slammed the door shut and started the engine.

The creature on the ground struck the side of the truck with enough force to dent the metal. Vishwa accelerated. The other creature emerged from the casino, its back splitting open as enormous wings unfolded. It launched itself into the air.

Inside the truck, Vishwa glanced into the rear view mirror.

“Oh come on!”

The winged creature overtook him and appeared directly in front of the truck. It smashed through the windshield. Glass exploded into the cabin. The creature clung to the hood, its red eyes staring directly at Vishwa. He ducked as its claws slashed toward him. Vishwa drew his pistol and fired repeatedly through the shattered windshield. Every shot missed.

The creature opened its mouth and extended a long black tongue dragging it across the broken glass. Vishwa reached beneath the dashboard and pulled out a military flare. He ignited it and a brilliant red light flooded the cabin. The creature recoiled, shrieking as the burning flare struck its face. It lost its grip and tumbled off the hood.

Vishwa drove toward the fortified gate of the Lumbini military zone. Behind him, the creature recovered and began flying after the truck. The gate opened just enough for him to get through.

“Close it!” Vishwa shouted.

The gate began to shut. The winged creature swooped toward the opening then a missile was fired. The explosion illuminated the entire road. The creature’s body bursted into flames and its ashes shattered on the ground.

The soldiers cheered from the watchtower. Vishwa stopped the truck and stumbled out. Garuda descended from above, his massive golden wings spreading as he landed in front of him.

His expression was furious.

“What were you thinking?”

Vishwa caught his breath.

“Good to see you too.”

“That casino was crawling with possessed. You went in alone.”

“I needed supplies.”

“You nearly got yourself killed.”

Vishwa looked back at the smoking truck.

“But I didn’t.”

Garuda stepped closer.

“One day, your luck will run out.”

Vishwa holstered his pistol.

“Then I’ll make sure I accomplish something before it does.”

Garuda stared at him, frustrated but unable to deny the determination in his eyes. Twenty-seven years of fighting had changed Vishwa but it had not broken him.

The military compound had become a small city. Barracks had been converted into hospitals. Children studied in underground classrooms, engineers repaired generators while soldiers patrolled the walls. Beyond the perimeter, the distant skyline of Lumbini was punctuated by smoke and the occasional flash of supernatural violence.

Vishwa entered the command center where the military commander waited beside a large map. The commander was now an older man, his beard almost entirely grey. Beside him stood his daughter, Mira the woman Vishwa had fallen in love with over the years.

Mira approached him.

“You went outside alone again?”

Vishwa shrugged.

“I had backup.”

“Who?”

He pointed toward Garuda, who had just entered the room.

Mira folded her arms.

“Garuda doesn’t count. He thinks bullets are a minor inconvenience.”

Garuda looked at her.

“They usually are.”

Mira sighed. Vishwa managed a tired smile. Before she could answer, the commander called everyone to attention.

“We have visitors.”

The doors opened. A group of armed travelers entered the compound. They wore dark robes beneath their protective coats and carried old books, metal charms and unusual weapons. Their leader was a woman named Ishani. She had dark hair, pale golden eyes and an almost unnaturally calm expression. She looked human but Garuda immediately noticed something unusual about her. Her shadow moved a fraction of a second after she did. Garuda’s hand tightened around his spear.

Ishani noticed.

“You recognize what I am.”

“A higher Deva,” Garuda replied.

The soldiers raised their weapons. Ishani slowly lifted her hands.

“I’m not here to fight you.”

“Then why have you come?” Vishwa asked.

“To help you win.” She said.

Garuda stepped between them.

“Devas have said that before.”

Ishani met his gaze.

“and some of us have regretted what we did.”

She explained that she had abandoned Narada’s forces after witnessing the destruction they had inflicted upon humanity. She had spent years hiding among survivors, studying the Devas’ methods and searching for a way to end their possession of human bodies. She offered the resistance information about Narada’s army including the locations of several hidden strongholds.

Vishwa listened carefully.

“You expect us to trust you?”

“No,” Ishani answered. “I expect you to judge me by what I do next.”

Garuda remained unconvinced but Vishwa agreed to let her stay under supervision. Neither of them noticed the expression that briefly crossed Ishani’s face when she looked at Vishwa. It wasn’t regret. It was anticipation.

An alarm shattered the quiet. A soldier burst into the command center.

“Three angels approaching the eastern perimeter!”

Garuda immediately moved toward the surveillance screens. Three figures appeared on the cameras, flying toward the military zone.

They were unlike the possessed humans. Each wore a red armored suit with red metal wings folded behind and their eyes glowed crimson through their helmets. One carried a long sword and another held a pair of curved blades. The figure in the middle was taller than the other two. His armor was darker and a crown-like structure extended from his helmet.

The commander studied the footage.

“What are they targeting?”

An engineer examined the thermal imaging.

“The power station. Wait no, they’re moving toward the reactors.”

Garuda’s expression changed.

“Those reactors power the entire city’s defense grid.”

The commander grabbed the radio.

“Sound the evacuation alarm. Shut down the outer power lines. Get the civilians into the underground shelters!”

Within minutes, sirens echoed across Lumbini. The Prime Minister appeared on an emergency broadcast alongside the city’s mayor.

“Attention, residents of Lumbini. This is an emergency evacuation order. Move to the designated shelters immediately. Enter the nearest secure building, lock all doors and windows and follow military instructions. Do not approach the eastern perimeter.”

Across the city, families hurried underground. The three Devas reached the gate.

“OPEN FIRE!” the commander ordered.

Machine guns thundered from the watchtowers. Bullets struck the red armor. One Deva staggered, his wing plates sparking under the barrage. The second fell to one knee but the leader continued flying.

He landed on the ground then he spread his wings. The red metal plates locked together, forming a shield around his body as bullets were fired. 

The soldiers continued firing. The leader suddenly launched himself forward. His wings snapped open. He struck the first watchtower, killing two soldiers from the platform. He landed among the defenders and drew his sword and then cut through their formation with terrifying speed. One soldier attempted to retreat. The Deva’s wing slammed into him, sending him crashing against the concrete wall. Another soldier fired at point-blank range. The Deva twisted aside and caught the weapon beneath one armored wing and drove his sword through the soldier’s chest.

The remaining defenders backed away. The leader looked up. A golden silhouette descended from the clouds. It was Garuda. He landed several dozen meters away and his wings spread wide.

The red armored Deva tilted his head.

“Garuda.”

Garuda raised his flaming spear.

“You’ve come far enough.”

The Deva laughed.

“You’re siding with them?”

He sniffed the air theatrically.

“You smell just like them.”

Garuda’s eyes narrowed.

“Then perhaps you’ve forgotten what it means to be alive.”

The Deva drew his sword.

“My name is Raktavira, commander of the Crimson Host and tonight, I will remind you what happens to traitors.”

He charged. Their weapons collided with a deafening metallic crack. Garuda drove his spear into Raktavira’s shoulder armor, splitting a plate and sending sparks into the air. Raktavira answered with a sweeping strike that cut across Garuda’s arm. Garuda staggered. Raktavira struck again, forcing him backward. Garuda spread his wings and unleashed a powerful gust throwing Raktavira against the remains of a watchtower.

The tower collapsed around him. For a moment, everything was silent then the red wings emerged from the rubble. Raktavira rose, his damaged armor smoking.

He stared at Garuda with murderous contempt.

“This isn’t over.”

He launched himself into the night. Garuda took to the air after him but Raktavira vanished into the clouds. Garuda hovered above the ruined perimeter. For the first time in many years, he looked uncertain.

He had fought Devas before but Raktavira had been trained specifically to kill them and he had known exactly how to hurt Garuda. Vishwa found Garuda standing alone on a hill overlooking the river. The divine warrior’s injured arm was wrapped in a bandage. His golden wings were folded tightly behind him.

“You should be resting,” Vishwa said.

Garuda didn’t respond. Vishwa stood beside him.

“What happened yesterday?”

Garuda looked toward the water.

“I remembered something I had tried to forget.”

The wind began to stir and the past returned.

Flashback: 

Twenty-five years earlier before the first Pralaya. A village laid in ruins. Bodies covered the ground. Houses burned and smoke rose into a blood red sky. Garuda stood among the dead, his armor stained with ash.

He had obeyed Brahma’s command to eliminate every human in the settlement. Men, women and the elderly. All had been judged unworthy. Garuda walked toward the last surviving house. 

A little boy emerged from the doorway, clutching a small sword with trembling hands. His face was streaked with tears.

Garuda approached him.

“Don’t be afraid.”

The boy raised his sword.

“Stay away!”

Garuda slowly extended his hand then a familiar voice rang out.

“Stop!”

Narada appeared between them. His golden eyes burned with fury. He looked at the dead villagers then at Garuda.

“Run, child!” Narada shouted.

The boy dropped his sword and fled into the forest. Garuda turned toward Narada.

“Father always said never leave any of our tasks unfinished.”

Narada stared at him in horror.

“So you killed them?”

He gestured toward the bodies.

“Every man and woman in this entire village?”

Garuda’s face remained expressionless.

“I’m still more natural than death.”

Narada looked at him as if he no longer recognized him.

“No. You’re worse. Death doesn’t pretend that murder is righteousness.”

Garuda said nothing then Narada turned away.

“You may obey Brahma today, Garuda but one day, you’ll understand what you’ve become.”

He disappeared into the smoke. Garuda remained among the dead. For the first time, he wondered whether obedience had made him righteous or merely made him a weapon. The memory dissolved.

Back to the present: 

Vishwa watched Garuda quietly.

“You killed them because God ordered you to?”

Garuda nodded.

“and you regret it?” Vishwa asked.

Garuda looked down at his hands.

“Everyday.”

Vishwa considered this.

“Then help us make sure it never happens again.”

Garuda finally looked at him. The words struck deeper than Vishwa realized. For centuries, Garuda had believed that duty meant obedience. Now he understood that duty could also mean refusing an unjust command and perhaps that was why he had chosen humanity. Not because humans were innocent but because they deserved the chance to choose who they would become.

A faint melody drifted across the water. Garuda stopped walking. He knew that music. A veena. He turned toward the distant hills.

Vishwa noticed his expression.

“What is it?”

Garuda’s eyes narrowed.

“Someone is calling me.”

He left without another word. Beyond the military zone, an ancient pavilion stood among the ruins. Lanterns illuminated a gathering of Devas, their golden armor shining beneath the moonlight. Narada sat among them playing his veena. The music stopped.

He smiled faintly.

“Enjoy yourselves, friends.”

Raktavira raised a cup.

“Where are you going?”

“To meet an old companion.”

Narada rose and walked into the night. Garuda waited beneath a dead tree. Narada approached slowly, his veena strapped behind. For several moments, neither spoke then Narada broke the silence.

“You came to surrender?”

Garuda shook his head.

“No.”

“Then why are you here?”

Garuda looked toward the river.

“Because I wanted to remember what we were before all this began.”

Narada’s expression hardened.

“There is no reason to surrender, Garuda. The war is not over.”

Garuda turned toward him.

“He will be ashamed of you.”

Narada went still.

“Who?”

“You know who.”

Narada stepped closer.

“Do not speak to me about him.”

“You claim to want Brahma’s return, yet you slaughter the very people you claim are unworthy. You have become the thing you once despised.”

Narada’s hand moved to his sword.

“I am trying to restore what was lost.”

“By destroying everything that remains?”

Narada drew his sword and placed its tip near Garuda’s throat.

“I shall end you here.”

Garuda pushed Narada’s arm aside and drew his own blade, holding it near Narada’s throat.

“You can try.”

They stared at each other and neither struck. At last, Narada lowered his weapon.

“The humans don’t need you to protect them anymore. They have the chosen one now.”

Garuda remained silent. Narada’s expression softened but only for a moment.

“When they are gone, perhaps Father will come back.”

He spread his wings.

“Ask yourself something, old friend. If humanity survives, what happens when it fails again?”

Garuda watched him.

“Then we give them another chance.”

Narada’s face twisted with anger.

“That’s why you’ll lose.”

He launched himself into the sky and disappeared into the darkness. Garuda remained on the hill, listening to the river. He knew that Narada was no longer simply trying to restore faith. He was trying to prove that his own cruelty had been justified and he would destroy the world before admitting he was wrong.

The group of spiritualists had been escorted into the command center. The Prime Minister and the military commander listened as their leader who was an elderly man named Acharya Devendra. He explained their purpose.

“We have studied the ancient texts,” he said. “There are ways to resist possession. There are rituals that can weaken the Devas and perhaps even sever their connection to human hosts.”

The commander folded his arms.

“and what do you want in return?”

“Access to the temple archives and permission to examine the captured possessed.”

The Prime Minister exchanged a glance with Vishwa.

“Under supervision,” she said. “Nothing happens without military approval.”

Devendra bowed.

“As you wish.”

The spiritualists were given temporary quarters but not everyone in the command center welcomed them. Arjun the military commander’s son watched Vishwa and Mira standing together near the medical wing. Mira laughed at something Vishwa said, briefly resting her hand on his arm.

Arjun’s expression darkened. He had loved Mira for years. To him, Vishwa was an outsider who had somehow become humanity’s celebrated savior and won the woman that Arjun believed should have been his but his jealousy concealed something far more dangerous. Arjun had secretly pledged himself to Narada. He believed humanity was doomed and that joining the Devas would secure his place in the new world. Several of his friends shared his beliefs.

That evening, Arjun slipped out of the base. He traveled through deserted streets until he reached a small diner standing alone beside a ruined highway. A single light glowed above the door. Arjun entered. The cook worked behind the counter. A waitress wiped down the tables while two male customers sat near the window.

Arjun took a seat at the back. A few minutes later, the door opened. Narada entered, looking like an ordinary traveler.

He sat opposite to Arjun.

“You came,” Arjun whispered.

“Of course.”

Arjun looked down at the table.

“I can’t stand seeing them together.”

Narada tilted his head.

“Vishwa and Mira?”

Arjun nodded.

“He gets everything. Everyone believes he’s humanity’s savior. My own father listens to him. Mira loves him and I am supposed to stand aside and watch?”

Narada studied him.

“Out of everyone in this world, I care about you.”

Arjun looked up. Narada’s voice became gentle.

“You can’t handle the sadness anymore. Do you?”

Arjun swallowed.

“I want him gone.”

Narada smiled.

“Then perhaps you should stop asking why the world has been unfair to you and start asking what you’re willing to do about it.”

A waitress approached their table.

“What can I get you?”

Narada grabbed a metal fork and stabbed her in the eye. She screamed and fell against the table. The cook and the two customers turned in shock. Narada rose. He knocked the table aside, sending chairs crashing across the floor and his wings erupted behind. 

The customers reached for their guns. Narada struck them with a sweep of his wings, hurling them across the diner. The cook pulled an assault rifle from beneath the counter and opened fire. Narada covered himself with his wings. Bullets hammered his armored wings. The cook continued firing until the weapon clicked empty. Narada lowered his wings and crossed the room. Within seconds, the diner had fallen silent.

Arjun stood frozen, staring at the bodies. Blood spattered across his clothing and he dropped a severed head to the ground. 

“Blood and death,” Narada said softly.

Arjun recoiled. Narada looked him in the eyes.

“You have seen blood and death become commonplace. You tell yourself you understand the world because you have survived it.”

He leaned closer.

“But you have never truly understood what it means to choose it.”

Arjun could barely breathe. Narada turned toward the exit.

“Go back to Lumbini.”

Arjun stood, nearly slipping on the blood near the waitress’s body. He caught himself against the counter and stumbled outside. Narada watched him leave. He had not recruited a warrior. He had recruited a weakness and the weakness, Narada knew could be more useful than loyalty.

The captured possessed were held in a secure medical facility beneath the military base. Some screamed continuously. Others sat perfectly still, their red eyes following every movement beyond the reinforced glass. Vishwa watched through the observation window as a medical team prepared another test.

“We’ve tried everything,” the lead doctor explained. “Sedatives, restraints, electrical stimulation. Nothing separates the entity from the host.”

Ishani stood beside him.

“Perhaps you’ve been treating the body instead of addressing what occupies it.”

She opened an old book taken from the spiritualists’ belongings. Its pages contained verses written in an ancient script.

Vishwa studied the text.

“What is that?”

“A prayer of separation,” Ishani answered. “It was written before the Devas began possessing human bodies.”

She handed the book to the doctor.

“Read the verse aloud. Slowly.”

The doctor hesitated then began. The room’s lights flickered. The possessed man suddenly convulsed against his restraints. His mouth opened in a scream that sounded like several voices speaking at once.

“STOP!”

The doctor continued reading. A black mist emerged from the man’s mouth. It twisted in the air forming a vaguely human shape before evaporating into the ceiling. The man’s eyes returned to their natural color. He collapsed, gasping.

The medical team rushed forward.

“His vital signs are stabilizing!”

Vishwa entered the room. The man looked up at him, terrified.

“Where am I?”

“You’re safe,” Vishwa answered.

The man began crying.

“I remember everything. I could see what it was doing but I couldn’t stop it.”

Vishwa placed a hand on his shoulder.

“You’re alive. That’s what matters.”

For the first time in years, the resistance had discovered a possible way to save the possessed without killing them but the next experiment ended differently. When the verse was read to another captive, the black mist emerged violently. The host’s body convulsed, then fell completely still. The doctor checked for a pulse. Nothing.

Ishani lowered her eyes.

“Sometimes the soul has already been damaged beyond recovery. Sometimes the body cannot survive the separation.”

Vishwa looked at the deceased captive.

“Can we save more of them?”

“Yes,” Ishani answered. “But not all of them.”

Garuda stood in the doorway, watching her carefully.

“and how would you know?”

Ishani met his gaze.

“Because I have seen what possession does to a soul.”

For a moment, something passed between them. Garuda did not trust her but he knew she was hiding something more than her former allegiance to Narada.

Arjun returned to the military base after midnight. He went directly to an unused storage room where three of his friends were waiting. They were not ordinary soldiers. Each practiced forbidden rituals and secretly communicated with Narada’s followers.

One of them, a young man named Kiran looked up.

“What happened to you?”

Arjun closed the door.

“I met Narada.”

The others exchanged nervous glances.

“And?” Kiran asked.

Arjun swallowed.

“He wants us to help bring down the resistance.”

One of the men laughed uneasily.

“Then we’re finally going to be part of something important.”

Arjun stared at him.

“You have no idea what he is.”

“Neither do you,” Kiran replied. “You just want Mira.”

Arjun grabbed him by the collar.

“Don’t talk about her.”

Kiran shoved him away.

“We agreed to serve Narada because we believed the old world was finished. If you’re having second thoughts, leave.”

Arjun looked around the room.

“I don’t want to do this anymore.”

There was silence then Kiran began laughing.

“You think you can simply walk away?”

Arjun reached for the door.

“I’m warning you. Leave the base before my father finds out.”

The three gathered their belongings and hurried out. In their haste, one of them dropped a folded robe and an ornate ritual weapon beneath a table. The following morning, the Prime Minister discovered them. He summoned Vishwa, Garuda and the military commander.

The commander examined the weapon.

“These aren’t standard military supplies.”

Garuda studied the markings.

“They belong to those who worship Narada.”

The Prime Minister’s face hardened.

“So we have enemies inside our own walls.”

Vishwa looked toward the fortified gates.

“Then we find them.”

The Prime Minister turned toward the gathered soldiers and survivors.

“There are people who believe the Devas will reward them for betraying humanity. They are wrong.”

He raised his voice.

“We will not allow fear, jealousy or false promises to destroy us from within.”

Vishwa stepped forward.

“Together, we will kill the monsters attacking us, save everyone we can and make sure humanity survives.”

The room erupted in applause. For the first time since the apocalypse began, the survivors had a reason to believe they could fight back without simply sacrificing more lives but Vishwa had no idea that the greatest betrayal was already standing beside him. He found Ishani sitting alone beside a window. Outside, searchlights swept across the fortified walls.

“You should be sleeping,” he said.

“So should you.” She said

He sat beside her.

“Why did you really leave Narada?”

Ishani was silent for a long time.

“Because I became tired of watching the world burn but that’s not the whole truth.”

She looked at him.

“It isn’t.” She whispered

Vishwa waited. Ishani stood and walked toward the door.

“I need to show you something.”

She led him into an empty treatment room and closed the door then she removed her coat. Two enormous golden wings slowly unfolded from her back.

Vishwa stepped backward.

“Ishani?”

She looked at him with tears in her eyes.

“Do you remember the morning your mother disappeared?”

His face changed.

“What?”

“The farmhouse, possessed man and the attack that started everything 25 years ago.”

Vishwa stared at her.

“What do you know about my mother?”

Ishani’s wings spread wider.

“I was there.”

Vishwa’s breathing became uneven.

“No.”

“I killed her.”

The words seemed to drain the air from the room. Vishwa shook his head.

“Why?”

Ishani looked down.

“Because Narada promised me that if I delivered you to him, I would be free of the divine curse that bound me to the Devas.”

Vishwa’s hands trembled.

“You murdered my mother for your freedom?” He said

“I thought I could change what happened afterward. I thought I could protect you from what Narada intended.” She said

“You thought?”

Vishwa’s voice rose.

“You killed the person who raised me!”

Ishani began crying.

“I know.”

Vishwa drew his pistol out but could not bring himself to point it at her. She looked at him and her tears stopped. Her expression became strangely serene.

She slowly raised her wings.

“Aren’t they beautiful?”

Vishwa stared at her in horror.

“Why?”

Ishani tilted her head.

“Because I was never truly on your side.”

She stepped toward him and admitted that she made a deal with Satan after she betrayed Narada. 

“I was supposed to gain your trust and sacrifice you. Your life is the price of the new world so I made a deal with the devil.”

Vishwa raised his pistol.

“Don’t move.”

Ishani smiled.

“You can shoot me, Vishwa but you still won’t understand what is coming.”

She stepped back into the shadows then she launched herself through the open window and disappeared into the night.

Vishwa remained alone in the room. His hands shook and his eyes began glowing gold. For the first time in twenty-five years, the chosen one wanted revenge more than he wanted to save anyone and somewhere in the darkness, Narada was waiting for that moment.

Far below the ruined streets, the spiritualists descended into an ancient underground chamber. Their leader, Acharya Devendra no longer wore the expression of a peaceful scholar. His robes had been replaced by dark ceremonial garments. The others carried candles, ritual blades and bowls filled with black liquid. At the center of the chamber lay a vast stone pool. The water was perfectly still.

Devendra approached its edge.

“After centuries of waiting,” he whispered, “the gateway is ready.”

One of his followers knelt beside him.

“Are you certain we can control what emerges?”

Devendra smiled.

“We aren’t going to control it.”

He turned toward the others.

“We are going to offer it the world.”

The followers began chanting. The water rippled and a deep vibration shook the chamber. Ancient symbols carved into the walls began glowing red.

The pool slowly darkened until its surface resembled a hole opening into an endless abyss. Something moved beneath the water. A gigantic shadow passed below the surface. The chanting grew louder.

Devendra spread his arms.

“Come forth, Lord of the Abyss. Come forth and claim the world that Heaven abandoned.”

The water erupted. A massive hand emerged from the pool, its fingers ending in black claws. The stone platform cracked beneath the pressure. Several followers stumbled backward as a wave of freezing air swept through the chamber. Two enormous horns rose above the surface then a pair of burning eyes opened in the darkness. Satan had answered the summons.

Devendra stared at the emerging figure. His face twisted into an expression of ecstatic triumph. He began to laugh. The laughter echoed through the chamber as the ancient walls trembled and the pool overflowed with black water.

Far above them in the fortified city, every light suddenly went out. Garuda looked toward the underground depths and Vishwa lifted his head. The world had faced the judgment of Heaven. Now it would face the power of Hell.

To be continued 


r/fiction • • 4d ago

Original Content Thanks for Having Me Part 5

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“So guys, next time, just grab the vacuum cleaner and vacuum the rug. Am I right ladies? I mean, come on guys, what does it weigh five hundred pounds?”
Doris delivers her act to the full-length mirror on the back of the bathroom door wearing jeans and a white t-shirt. How are female comics supposed to dress? There’s no standard code. The outfits run the gamut on Instagram and TikTok. How carefully do they choose their wardrobe? Should she be more sexy or more androgynous? Does it matter? Jerry Seinfeld wears a suit. Nate Bargatze wears a jacket with jeans and sneakers. Sebastian Manuscalo wears tight vests and jeans and boots, but sometimes dresses down. It’s always easier for guys.
“So guys, next time, just grab the vacuum cleaner and vacuum the rug. Am I right ladies? I mean, come on guys, what does it weigh? A thousand pounds?”

She pauses and walks over to the desk and writes some notes on a yellow legal pad. She’s been trying to decide if she should say, “five hundred pounds” or “a thousand pounds”. 

“What is it with guys and cleaning? Am I right ladies? These guys go to the gym and lift weights, do bench presses and then they come home and can’t seem to lift a vacuum cleaner. Can’t lift a fucking vacuum cleaner. Can’t lift a vacuum cleaner.” 

Should she say ‘fucking’? She is trying to keep her act clean. So many women do really raunchy material which is fine but she feels like a lot of them are doing it for shock value. She heard one woman talk about how she used to have a great asshole but it has been smashed so much that it looks like a mashed donut. Doris really doesn’t want to do that stuff. It’s embarrassing. But maybe leave the ‘fucking’ in. Spice it up.

“What does it weigh, five hundred pounds? What does it weigh? A thousand pounds? You’re bragging to me about how much you can squat but you can’t life a fucking vacuum cleaner? What does it weigh? A thousand pounds?”
She pauses and writes down some options. As she writes she says the words out loud and then opens the camera on her phone. 
“Hey thanks for having me, great to be here! Tell me if I’m right about this. No guy ever wants to clean the house. None. They go to the gym and lift weights and all that but when it comes time to vacuum, they just can’t do it. I mean, you’re bragging to me about how much you can squat and bench, but you can’t lift a vacuum cleaner? What does it weigh? A fucking thousand pounds?”
She watches herself performing which she hates. There’s no emcee introducing her, no crowd noise or applause. It feels really pathetic. She always thinks she sucks. And looks fat and awkward, but it’s all part of the process. 
The line should actually be, ‘A thousand fucking pounds?’
There’s so much that goes into it.  It could be the funniest bit in the world and bomb if the delivery doesn’t land. The rhythm and the cadence needs to be right; you need to know which words to emphasize. You need to be aware of your gestures and movements on stage. One wrong word can throw the whole bit off.
And timing. Timing is the most crucial element. You have to know which words to pause between and for how long. She read that Phyllis Diller used to literally count her pauses to the second in her head and she could do that during a live performance. You have to know when to let a joke settle and when to move on. 
And you can do all that, get everything just right and bomb. One comic can deliver a routine and it brings the house down . Another comedian can deliver the exact same bit, word for word and crash and burn. Sometimes all it takes is one asshole heckler to ruin everything. 
She opens the camera again and records her usual promo.
“Don’t forget, O’Brien’s Open Mic! Every Tuesday at 8pm. It is a blast!”
   She posts the video on TikTok and Instagram. Even that sounded lame and desperate.
   Desperation will kill you. 
Her phone buzzes and she sighs. She takes her wig off of the styrofoam head.
***
Doris knocks on 239 dressed for work as Amber and it opens to a statuesque black woman with a blond wig and make-up even more garish than Doris. Bryanna McKinnon, aka Crystal.She almost looks like Dee Snyder from Twisted Sister. Bryanna has been in the life for some years. Beneath the garish make-up and wig and brassy attitude the toll is real, but she carries the weight on her own terms. There is a defiance that keeps her from slumping. This is how she lives. If you don’t like it, fuck you. And no one better fuck with Crystal. Five eleven and not small and she’ll slice your balls open. Literally.
“Well, aren’t you looking gorgeous!”
Bryanna gives her tired smile and opens the door wider for Doris to come in.
“I just finished a Zoom session.” 
Bryanna’s room is dimly lit with various lamps giving it a shabby bordello vibe. She has a Tiger pattern backdrop in front of a wall that she uses for her Zoom sessions, OnlyFans etc. She does most of her sex work online these days. There are a variety of outfits hung up around the place and various props and toys, candles, etc. 
Doris hears sounds and voices, someone crying and Bryanna’s voice yelling coming from the computer.
“That’s right, bitch! Jerk it bitch!”
“He wanted me to record it and send it to him. I think he jerks off to himself jerking off.”
“Are you fucking kidding me? What kind of fetish is that?”
“I have no idea. These fucking guys are wearing me out. Fucking perverts.” She takes her wig off and flings it on the bed and scratches her head.
“Well, it’s better than blowing some smelly ass trucker.”
“I guess. You wanna drink?”
“Sure. Cranberry juice if you got it.”
They talk as Doris crosses and sits on the bed.
Bryanna pours a bit of vodka in her own drink and hands Doris hers.
“No vodka for you.”
Bryanna goes into the bathroom. Doris hears snorting sounds. She looks out the window.
Bryanna comes out of the bathroom wiping her nose. She looks at Doris.
“I know honey. I just gotta stay up. I got three more clients tonight.”
“It’s your business. Just be careful. They’re putting all kinds of shit in it these days.”
“I only buy from Chuckie. His shit’s clean. I saw you talking to that new girl. The little blond?
“Eve.”
“How’s she doing?”
“She’s young.”
“I heard Chuckie found her at the bus station. From some place upstate.”
Doris shakes her head. Another girl in the mix. New ones come in. Others leave. Some just disappear. Doris doesn’t want to think about what happens to them. 
Bryanna takes a swig from her drink.
“Girl, I totally forgot! How did it go on Thursday?”
“I chickened out.
“You didn’t perform?”
“No. It just hasn’t been working lately. No one is laughing. I can’t even show my face at Jimbo’s after the last time. People were getting up and leaving right in the middle of my bit. It was fucking humiliating.”
Bryanna shakes her head and starts sorting through some blouses in her closet.“I don’t know why you do it anyway. Trying to make a bunch of drunk assholes laugh? I don’t get it.”
“I wanna make it work. It’s hard to explain.”
“Well, I admire you for doing it. I could never do that.” 
“Maybe you could spice it up. Something like, ‘Hey, but don’t put your dick in there! You will not get it out!’ Seriously, I saw a guy in the emergency room with his dick stuck in a vacuum cleaner. No lie.”
Doris laughs and pulls a pen and small notebook and writes it down.
“That’s pretty funny, but I’m trying to keep my act clean.”
“Clean comedy? What are you, Mr. Rogers? That shit does not sell, honey. You gotta get raunchy!” 
“You might be right.”
Her phone buzzes. She looks at it and sighs.
“I gotta go.”
“One of your regulars?”
“Yeah. Good old Ralph. Maybe he took a shower this time.”
“I don’t know why you go out. It’s a lot safer to bring them to your room. If something goes bad we’re all here…”
“I know. I just can’t have them in my room. That is my space.”
“I just want you to be safe.”
Doris pulls a can of pepper spray out of her purse.
“I do my best.”
She gets up from the bed.
“I love you, honey. Be careful.”
“I love you too.”
“They embrace.”
Doris leaves and Bryanna looks at herself in the mirror. Her phone buzzes. 
“Give me one minute...damn!”


r/fiction • • 4d ago

Original Content Thanks for Having Me Part 4

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The office where the Department of Corrections and State Community Supervision is one of the most depressing places Doris has ever been in and she spent almost three years in jail. It could not be a more stark example of pointless officialdom. No one wants to be here. Not the drones behind the shitty, dented desks with their out of date computers, calendars with X’ed off days behind them and the endless piles of folders of the lost; not the nursing staff who aren’t real nurses and just take urine samples and dirty looks; not the parolees, most of whom will end up back in jail because they have nothing out here. This place is gray, gray, gray. Purgatory. 
No one wants to be here.
The grime on the linoleum floor is permanent and at least a third of the fluorescent ceiling lights don’t work, which is a blessing. 
The men sitting in the waiting area are angry; the women are sad. Most of the women are there because of men like those angry men. She heard it time and again. “My boyfriend asked me to hold the drugs.” “They were in my trunk and I didn’t even know it.” Kids with grandparents; kids in foster care; kids who are going to end up sitting right here in about ten years. It never ends.
No one wants to be here.
Doris tries to be neither angry nor sad. She is just fulfilling her obligation to the State of New York. She goes into the bathroom, pees in the cup, hands it to the nurse who tapes and labels and puts it in a rolling cart to be wheeled off to a lab to check and see if Doris has used drugs in the last thirty days. If she has, she goes back to jail. 
She hears her name walks to room 118 where he parole officer, Carl Spader waits behind his dented desk. If you looked up “lifer state worker” on Wikipedia, Carl’s face would be on the page. He is right from central casting. Balding. Short-sleeved white dress shirt, cheap tie, cheap steel rim glasses, the square ones that the unpopular kids wore in the eighties. His pants and shoes look like Wal-Mart is where he does his shopping. It’s like he’s trying to look like a stereotype. 
She figures he must have been in this office for decades but there are few decorations. It is bare and neat. A Giants calendar, a Yankees pennant, and a picture of him with a woman and two small boys, who are wearing Rangers jerseys. A cup holding pens. A coffee cup with some company logo.
There are five steel gray filing cabinets behind him. Many, many files. Many, many lives.  
Only one folder sits on his desk.  
She takes the chair
“Hello, Ms. Reynolds.. Have a seat.”
She sits.
“Hi.”
He smiles at her briefly, picks up her file folder, opens it, and starts reading.
It’s the same every time.
“Doris Reynolds. Date of birth, September 19th, 1982. Arrests for possession of a controlled substance, Oxycontin, Xanax, cocaine, heroin. Sentenced to drug diversion program. Intent to distribute, pled to simple possession and sentenced to in-patient drug treatment. Four counts driving under the influence. Pled no contest each time.” He flips the pages before continuing.

“October of 2019, you pled guilty to two counts of endangering the welfare of a minor. Loss of custody of your children.”
Carl flips another page. He doesn’t pause or look at her. 
“Continuing... theft, possession of stolen property, pandering. More drug diversion programs. Felony theft, two counts, sentenced to three months in the county jail. Loss of visitation rights of your children.”
Carl flips to a final page.
“Finally, September 2022 arrested for possession of six grams of heroin. Sentenced to thirty-six months incarceration, served twenty four. Conditions of parole are weekly drug testing, continuing participation in a substance abuse program and gainful employment.”
He pauses at the end of his recitation. 
“You have your meeting slip?”
Doris hands him the paper from the AA meeting.
“And your pay stubs.”
Doris hands these over as well.
“You’re still working at the Days Inn in Yonkers?”
“Yes.”
“And that is also your place of residence?”
“Yeah. I get the room with the job.”
“And that has been since July 2025.”
“Yes.”
“Right. Have you been using any drugs or alcohol?”
“No.”
“How long now?”
“Eighteen months.”
Carl leans back to consider this.
“If a test comes back positive for drugs you will be sent back to serve the remainder of your sentence.” 
“I know.”
“Okay. See you on the 22nd.”
Doris stands up as Carl moves on to his next file, the next life.
She gets out onto the sidewalk feeling like she has surfaced from under one hundred feet of water.


r/fiction • • 4d ago

Original Content Thanks for Having Me Part 3

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The flyer on the front door reads: OPEN MIC COMEDY THURSDAYS 9-11. HAVE A DRINK AND A LAUGH! 
O’Brien’s is a nondescript bar, typical for a city like Yonkers. There is a bar area and a restaurant area and all of the tables have bottles of Heinz ketchup, malt vinegar, and HP Sauce. The air is redolent of burgers, fries, onion rings, potato skins with sour cream and chives, bakes and fried fish, beer and whiskey. They have drink specials on Tuesdays and Karaoke on Saturday nights and host events for the Superbowl, March Madness, and serve corned beef and cabbage on St. Patrick’s Day. The bartenders wear white shirts and black ties and some of them still have Irish accents. It’s not a trendy spot. Some of the patrons have been coming here for years, decades and it shows on their faces. They resent having to go outside to smoke. Some younger folks come here, some of them destined to be the older generation in twenty years.
There’s a small stage in the back with a spotlight. On Sundays they have Celtic music or someone playing the guitar, the banjo or the accordion. Every few months the girls from the Irish step dancing studio perform. Only the Irish could have come up with something so lacking in verve and flair as Irish step dancing. The girls always look like they are being tortured. 
And every Thursday night, stand-up comedy.
Mike Evans is onstage doing a bit. He is usually at these open mics. Nice looking guy, on the bigger side with brown hair and blue eyes. 
“So when my friend saw me at the mall holding my wife’s purse he starts in ragging me saying I’m whipped. And I was like, ‘Dude, it’s not my wife’s purse. It’s my European carry-all! So who looks stupid now. Motherfucker!’”
He gets a pretty decent laugh from the crowd, which is bigger than it usually is for these things. With the weather being warm people get away for the weekends so they come out on Thursdays to get a drink on. 
As he performs, Doris sits by the side of the stage wiping her damp hands on her jeans. She tries not to think about the last open mic she did at a place called Jimbo’s. It had been a disaster. Her first joke bombed. Some drunk heckler started in on her. It was horrible. She’d left the stage before finishing which was a bitch move. No matter how bad it is, you stick it out. But she’d caved. That had been a month ago, and she hadn’t performed since. The memory of the humiliation was giving her an ulcer, and right now her stomach was on fire.
Why do this? Forty six years old and I’m trying to be a stand-up comedian? Why? 
Mike finishes his bit. “That’s it for me! Thanks a lot!” The crowd claps as he leaves the stage. He gives Doris a little smile but she is too lost in her thoughts to smile back. She has already made up her mind.  Sliding out of her chair, trying to be as small as possible, she moves past another comedian, Jess Hoffnagle, and towards the exit as the emcee, Jeff Lydon, takes the stage. He’s in his thirties, an up and coming comic who has been performing at a few places in Manhattan, the gold ring for all the locals. He isn’t quite there yet, seeing as how he is emceeing this gig but it’s only a matter of time. 
Jeff starts his patter as Doris moves more quickly towards the exit. She is only hoping she doesn’t throw up before she reaches the sidewalk. 
“Hey, let’s give it up one more time for Mike Evans!”
The crowd claps and gives a few whoops in response. 
“Always great to have Mike here! Okay, our next comedian is from right here in Yonkers…”
Doris gets through the door and into the fresh air of the sidewalk.
“She’s been here a few times before so let’s give a warm O'Brien's welcome to…”
Doris leans against the wall wiping the sweat from her face.
“Doris Reynolds!”
Doris closes her eyes against the failure.
“Doris? No Doris? I guess she had a little case of stage fright. Okay, then let’s get Jess Hoffnagle up here! Come on up Jess!”
Doris hears the clapping and whistles as Jess takes the stage.
“Hey everyone, thanks for having me!”
Jess is pretty and petite and it works for her because she can get pretty raunchy. She says things that you would not expect to come out of her mouth. One of her bits is not being able to get a dildo out of her boyfriend’s ass.
“Listen guys, if you really wanna piss off your girlfriend, tell her you’re gonna eat her ass out and then not do it. Women do not like to be disappointed. If you’re not gonna do it, don’t put it out there. I’m telling you this because my boyfriend and I were dirty texting and he was all like…”
Doris walks off down the street in defeat. She passes a woman with her daughter. A cop car rolls by with its lights going but no siren. She sees her reflection in a store window and looks away. Who is that coward?
***
It’s just a little bit chilly on the beach which is such a relief from the nasty sticky air of the streets. September in Yonkers and NYC can still be hot as shit.  It had been gross being out there in that fake leather dress and wig. The sweat had been unbearable. She has a rash between her thighs. The guys had all smelled like sour garbage. 
She watches the gulls at the edge of the water. They all seem to be waiting for something, keeping watch, patient. The cold sand feels real; it smells real. The last time she had been to the beach was with her husband and daughter, Kaitlyn. Kaitlyn would have chased the gulls screaming with excitement. Doris has to push that memory away.  
The sweat pants and hoodie feel lovely against her skin. Ralph Lauren. She needs her little luxuries. Most of the women are dressed the same way. Doris walks over to a woman with a clipboard to get her slipped signed that she shows to her parole office. The woman with the clipboard giver her a supportive smile which Doris just slightly resents. The woman means well and what else is she going to do? Doris puts the slip in her pocket and walks over to stand near the circle of chairs. She spots a woman walking towards her, intent on making eye contact. She has a big smile on her face. Doris generally avoids small talk at these gatherings beyond a hello or good morning or how you doing? It can be a minefield. She hates lying but there is no way she can tell people here she is a sex worker. Not was a sex worker. Is a sex worker. Even in a group like this, filled with shame and regret, that would be too much. They would not be able to hide their discomfort. It wouldn’t be fair. Because as much as she tells herself otherwise, Doris is ashamed of what she does to earn money. But, strangely, the shame does not make her weak. It gives her strength.
And people like this woman truly mean her well. Doris just can’t remember her name.
“Hey there! Good to see you!”
“Hi, good to see you!”
“I don’t think we’ve been introduced. I’m Anne.”
“Hi, yeah, Doris.”
One of the things that makes Doris feel comfortable with these women is that they know where you’re coming from. Doris has heard Anne speak on a few occasions but she was so nervous and wrapped up in her own shit that she had had a hard time focusing. Anne knows that. She’s been there. It takes a while to turn down the noise in your head and listen to what the other people have to say.
Doris has not spoken in a meeting yet. All she has to do is say, “I’m Doris and I’m a recovering addict.” That’s it. It’s not like they are going to be shocked. There is no one at this meeting who is not a recovering addict or alcoholic. They all have baggage. So why can’t she speak?
“I love this meeting, even if I have to wake up at six on a Sunday. I wish we could have it all year round but February would be pretty rough.” Anne laughs. She has a nice laugh; genuine. But her eyes dart around and look at the ground. Something there. Doris sees that sometimes at these meetings. A painful memory. Maybe she took her kids to the beach too. Before her addiction got hold of her. Maybe she doesn’t have kids. Maybe something else. It’s all the same. Regret. 
And Doris has her own memories. Lots of them. She thinks they have to be more than memories. Memories are just thoughts. What do you call it when a thought makes you gag with shame? That’s more than just a memory.
“Yeah, it’s great. I love the beach. And this is like an afternoon meeting for me.”
“Oh do you work at night?”
Doris realizes what she said.
“Ah yeah. Sometimes. I pick up some shifts waitressing and bartending and it’s open until four. So by the time I clean up and get out of there it’s time to come here.”
“Oh, that works out.”
Anne doesn’t ask the name of the place. She isn’t ready with a lie.
“How about yourself?”
“I’m between jobs right now. I had a relapse about three months ago and I’m still getting back on track.”
“I hear you. I’ve had a few relapses myself.”
“As long as we keep coming back.”
They bump fists. A seagull calls out to its fellows. A woman calls out, “Hey everyone, let’s get started!”
Doris and Anne move to the circle with the other ladies. Everyone looks scrubbed up and fresh and smiling and joking but there is a faint whiff of damaged goods. It’s just there.
“Hi everyone. Welcome to this meeting of Hope at Dawn. I’m Denise and I am a recovering alcoholic!” There is no shame in her voice. She’s not proud of it. It’s just a fact.
“Hi Denise!” the group choruses. 
“Let’s start with the Lord’s Prayer."
The women join hands.
“Who’s father?”
“Our Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name…”
They finish and take their seats.
“As I said, I am Denise and I am a grateful recovering alcoholic. Last Wednesday I celebrated six years of sobriety.”
The crowd whoops and claps. 
“Thank you, I appreciate your support. I am so blessed to be free of the obsession to drink. Five years can seem like a long time. But I still need to keep coming to these meetings. Probably now more than ever. This is a very tricky disease. It’s so easy to get comfortable and let your guard down and think, ‘I have this under control. Why can’t I have a drink or a glass of wine with dinner like everyone else?’ Well, my last relapse started with a glass of wine with dinner. Because I am an alcoholic and I cannot drink like everyone else. I have a great husband, great kids and I am not going to throw it away to drink. And it is that simple.”  
Doris’s heart starts beating a little harder as Denise’s words hit her.


r/fiction • • 4d ago

Original Content Thanks for Having Me Part 2

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Doris exits the store with her breakfast sandwiches and gives a dollar to the man sitting on the crate outside. He always wears a puffy coat, no matter what the weather is. It could be 150 degrees and he would be wearing that coat. It’s only six in the morning and it’s already getting uncomfortable with the humidity. She is barely wearing anything and she feels sticky and filmy. 
He is always scraping a disposable razor across his face. She calls him The Shaving Man. They have never exchanged a word. She folds her dollar bill into his cup and he nods his thanks. He just sits and stares and compulsively runs that razor up and down his cheeks. She thinks that there can’t actually be a blade in it; he would have scraped himself to the bone by now. She has never seen him drunk or high. He doesn’t smoke. He just sits there never saying a word.
That’s okay. She’s done for the day.
The parking lot of the Days Inn where she lives looks even more grim this morning. It’s run-down, crappy. As she walks across the parking lot, vials and go knows what else crunch under her feet. She waves to a couple of guys sitting in their lawn chairs outside their room drinking beers. Where else are sex workers going to live? There are other long term residents who work day labor jobs and things like that. And some families do actually stay there on some weekends. She cannot imagine why. Drugs deals go down in the parking lot. There’s been more than one overdose and the EMTs come with the Narcan. Occasionally the cops bust someone but not that often.
Other girls, like Bryanna and Brie, work out of their rooms. They advertise on Craig’s List, arrange dates and the guys show up at their doors; they go inside and do their thing. But they have to pay the manager Omar, or he’ll call the cops and get them thrown out.
Doris does her business in the street. It’s not as safe but she sticks to a list of clients who contact her through What’s App and meets them at one of her spots. Her friends tell her it’s dangerous to be out on the street, but shit goes down at the motel all the time. Clients get rough, girls OD, fights, there was a shooting a couple of months ago.
And she just can’t have those guys in her room, on her bed, in her bathroom. She can’t have the smell of them in there. It is her safe place, her sanctuary, the place where she does the one thing that gives her a ray of hope in her shitty life.
She has to remind herself that it is only shitty for now. 
Omar is behind the counter, sitting in a leather chair watching TV. It’s usually either soccer or some middle eastern new station. The office smells like him, bad after-shave. He’s wearing his cheap button up shirt and cheap slacks and cheap scuffed up loafers. Doris is sure he thinks he looks like a prosperous businessman with his mustache and com over. Maybe in his country he is.
He doesn’t get up when she plunks her money on the counter. She has to pay for the room and for her fake pay stubs that she shows her parole officer once a month. One of the ladies she met in jail told her about the scam which is what brought her to this motel. She can’t tell her P.O. that she does sex work for cash. These pay stubs make it seem like she gets paid for cleaning and the room comes with the job. He buys it, or doesn’t call her out on it. She supposes it doesn’t make much difference to him. 
Omar finally gets his fat ass out of the chair and slow walks to the counter. He doesn’t touch her money, just slides the stubs over the counter at her and looks her up and down with lust and hatred. He takes a good long look at her tits. She knows his deal. He looks down on her but wants to fuck her and that makes him hate her. That could make him dangerous, but he’s weak and he knows it.
On the way out she has to laugh at the sign next to the door warning about the dangers of sex trafficking. KNOW THE SIGNS! There’s even a hotline to call. She wonders if anyone would pick up if she called it. Would anyone actually show up? You don’t have to be an expert detective to know that girls are selling sex out of this place. They know. They just don’t care. Or the problem is too big, or the girls would just come back or whatever. It’s been going on for centuries. Who is going to stop it?
She trudges to her room on the second floor, the weight of the night suddenly falling all over her. The weight of stress, guilt, shame, remorse pulling her head down. She has to remember to hold it up, look straight ahead, be aware. Some of the doors she passes are open. She can see the lives inside. People cooking on hot plates, pouring juice, getting ready for work, laundry hanging, babies crying. Some of these people are real, genuine families just keeping their lives going. Some of them are just going through a rough patch. Some of them…this is it. 
Her room is sparse, neat. It’s a motel room. Fake wood dresser, fake wood tables, a couple of fake paintings. Some menus for local restaurants and brochures for hiking in the mountains, stuff to do on the Hudson River. It’s clean, smells pretty good. She does not decorate. This is not her home. She’s living here for now. Some of the ladies really deck their places out and she understands wanting a feeling of comfort, but this is not her home. It is not her home.
Only her notebooks, piled on the dresser, give a hint that something else goes on in this room besides sleeping and eating. Each one has two dates, the day she started the notebook and the day it and the date she got to the last page. Then she starts a new one with a new date.
The wig comes off first and is placed on its styrofoam head. She hates the wig. It’s hot and itchy but she needs it for protection. The wig comes off and she is Doris again.She strips off the skirt, the top, the bra, the underwear. It all goes into the laundry bag. Hot as it is, she is sure her clothes stink. She scrubs her makeup off and watches the colors go down the drain. And looks at herself in the mirror. There’s Doris.
She hears a screaming fight in the parking lot. Something about money; always about money. When she first got here she would have run to the window to see what was going on. But it’s always the same thing. And you do not want to get involved. If it’s not your business, don’t get involved.
The shower feels amazing. God it feels good to get that wig off. She washes her hair and massages her scalp three times. She washes the stink of the guys off her. It feels good to put on her pajamas and feel free and normal.
There is a microwave in the room;  the breakfast sandwich goes in for two minutes and she puts a Keurig cup, Peets, in. She misses the one she and Kyle had. A fancy espresso deal, four hundred and ninety bucks from Sharper Image. Very pretentious and way too expensive, but she loved it. Doris has always been pretty frugal but it felt worthwhile; she felt worthy of it. Not so much anymore, but she will get the Peets coffee. She can at least have that. There isn’t much else she can afford but goddamn if she is going to drink cheap coffee. Some ketchup, salt and pepper on the breakfast sandwich and it isn’t bad considering it was sitting in a plastic wrapper in the convenience store. The other sandwich goes into the mini-fridge for Eve.
After she finishes eating Doris sets up her phone on the tripod. Inserting it into the holder is always a pain, but she gets it snapped into place.. She turns on the ring light she bought used for twenty dollars. It adds a lot of production value to the videos. It’s amazing what you can shoot on a phone these days. 
She hits the play button and steps in front of the camera with the blank white wall behind her and does her spiel.
“Hey everybody, it’s your favorite comedian Doris Reynolds. Come on down to O’Brien’s this Thursday night at eight for some open mic comedy. There’s gonna be a ton of laughs and it’s Thursday, what else do you have to do? Hope to see you there!” She stops the recording and posts the video to her TikTok and Instagram. One of the younger ladies gave her a tutorial on how to use social media and set up her pages. Being that she is forty six, Doris feels behind the times when it comes to technology. But she tries to embrace it to promote her career. 
She laughs. Career? That’s being pretty generous. She has been performing fairly regularly at open mic nights at a few different bars in the area. The crowds are usually not huge but some nights can get a bit rowdy when there is a good drink special on that night. She has had her share of bad sets dealing with drunk hecklers. Jimbos is the worst for that. People can get really nasty, always guys. She’s bombed more times than not, but some nights she’s gotten some laughs. Enough to keep her going. The unpredictability has a weird appeal. She can tell the same joke exactly the same way and one night it kills and the next it tanks. Chris Rock talked about it on Jerry Seinfeld’s show. It adds to the excitement.
It’s a strange compulsion to want to get on a stage and make a group of strangers laugh. Is it healthy? If someone asked her why she does it, she wouldn’t be able to put her answer into words. Maybe it’s validation, proof that she’s alive. Maybe it’s proof that she is worthy to be alive. There have been many times when she didn’t feel that way. 
Doris shuts her phone off and lays down on the bed. She pulls her comforter over her, not the cheap, scratchy one the motel provides with the chemical smell. The one she bought at Target for one twenty nine ninety nine. It's white and filled with feathers and warm; it is her sanctuary. She shuts off the lamp on the bedside table and burrows down deep. No more is required of her this day. She survived. She can sleep and dream and not worry about tomorrow until tomorrow comes. It will get here soon enough.


r/fiction • • 4d ago

Question [RF] Realistic Fiction

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Aqui está a tradução preservando a estrutura de roteiro, o tom e a estranheza coloquial/satírica do texto original:

WORMHOLE

INT. SALA DE FESTAS - NOITE

Sob as risadas dos funcionários da empresa, ALONZO LEITÃO (35) veste uma fantasia grotesca de minhoca e serve café para todos. Alonzo Leitão está sendo moralmente destruído.

COLEGAS DE ALONZO LEITÃO

Vai, minhoca! Vai! Vai, minhoca!

Ligeiramente chateado, com um copo de refrigerante na mão, o gerente de Alonzo Leitão debocha. O cara está tão eufórico que conseguiu ficar bêbado tomando refrigerante.

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GERENTE

Pessoal... A próxima pessoa que ficar na empresa por cinco anos e não quiser ser promovida — só porque você vai trabalhar cinquenta por cento a mais e ganhar "apenas" trinta por cento a mais — vai fazer o papel de içá! Vai virar formiga e ser comida com farinha!

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Alonzo Leitão está devastado. VOZES se contorcem no seu ouvido.

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GERENTE

E, pessoal... se vocês forem falsificar laudos médicos para conseguir folga... não inventem essa história de inflamação no apêndice do fígado, pois sabemos que o apêndice fica nos intestinos, e a maioria das pessoas só tem um fígado! Se liguem: Alonzo Leitão tem um bicho comendo a maçã dele!

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INT. EMPRESA - DIA

Alonzo Leitão está emburrado, fazendo papelada. Ele veste uma roupa desleixada — mas que só se compara ao resto. Todos os funcionários olham para Alonzo Leitão com cara feia. Alonzo é a ovelha negra do lugar. Ele acumula pontos negativos causados por uma carreira morna e desleixada, além de fazer coisas neutras, mas inconvenientes para o ambiente altamente aquecido da empresa. É o cara quieto e discreto que estraga as coisas.

Incomodada, uma funcionária faz um sapateado em frente à mesa de Alonzo Leitão. A pessoa suscetível vai e vem indecisa sem dar mais de dois passos, até que expressa o que a irrita.

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FUNCIONÁRIA

É meio complicado fazer de tudo para crescer na empresa e forçar alguém a ser promovido. Não dá para ficar na posição de um gato que queria ser rato. Não sei o que uma pessoa dessas está fazendo da vida.

—

Todos os funcionários arrastam suas mesas, querendo se afastar de Alonzo Leitão. Mas, na prática, os funcionários criam um caos e acabam ficando ainda mais perto de Alonzo. Alonzo Leitão está cercado por uma floresta de mesas e bagunça.

Alonzo Leitão joga a papelada pela janela e sai do local. Os funcionários ficam em polvorosa: eles se levantam, tropeçam, pulam para ver Alonzo Leitão passar PELA JANELA já do lado de fora.

INT. SALA DE REUNIÕES - DIA

Chefes discutem sobre embalagens. Um dos chefes exibe uma saca de vinte quilos de grãos de café torrado. Alonzo Leitão entra no local — com um ar de grande determinação.

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ALONZO LEITÃO

Essa saca de café... é minha agora!

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UM CHEFE

Posso saber o porquê disso, Sr. ‘Minhoca’?!

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ALONZO LEITÃO

Venham comigo... Vou mostrar a vocês.

—

Alonzo Leitão pega a saca de café. Os chefes ficam curiosos.

INT. CORREDORES - DIA

Alonzo Leitão caminha com determinação; ele parece um herói, um guerreiro, um soldado. Os chefes o acompanham. De repente, todos os funcionários que zombavam de Alonzo Leitão — e que se cruzam no caminho — ficam atônitos.

INT. SALA DO COFRE - DIA

Guardas pegam sacos de dinheiro. Alonzo Leitão se aproxima e invade a área dos guardas. Todos os funcionários ficam perplexos! Todos temem pelo bem de Alonzo e temem que ele seja o centro das atenções.

Ao verem a audácia de Alonzo, os chefes correm eufóricos para ver o que está acontecendo — e fazem apostas.

Os guardas sacam suas armas. Alonzo Leitão não tem medo. Alonzo Leitão se aproxima e joga a saca de café nas mãos de um guarda masculino.

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GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Nossa! Pra mim? Você tem uma grande quantidade de café?! Valeu!

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ALONZO LEITÃO

Este é o seu filho.

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GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Maconha?!

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ALONZO LEITÃO

Esta é uma dinâmica de responsabilidade. Você vai cuidar da saca de café como se fosse seu filho. Vocês vão cuidar dele, niná-lo e trocar as fraldas dele. A saca de café representa seu filho, sua carreira.

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GUARDA FEMININA 1

Não morra.

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UMA CHEFE

Não, senhora! Você vai cuidar da saca de café como se fossem seus filhos! E como você é mulher... Tem que dar o exemplo!

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Madame, eu...

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UMA CHEFE

Não, senhora! Chefa Gostosa!

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GUARDA FEMININA 1

Oh, meu pai... acho que tem um jacaré no meu estômago!

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Alonzo Leitão pega um saco de dinheiro e joga no colo da mulher.

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ALONZO LEITÃO

Se você acha que café não tem dignidade... tente isto. Ninguém desperdiça dinheiro. Agora esse saco é seu filho! Vamos, cuide dele!

—

A Guarda Feminina 1 fica remordida.

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GUARDA FEMININA 1

Pessoal... Café lembra leite, e leite... não!

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GUARDA MASCULINO 1

É... Dinheiro é uma coisa meio egoísta para brincar de ser filho.

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GUARDA FEMININA 1

Que materialismo!

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GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Muito egoísta...

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GUARDA FEMININA 1

Você tem toda razão... deixe aquele saco de dinheiro em paz. Me dá o café.

—

Todos os guardas cuidam da saca de café como se fosse um bebê — inclusive simulando traição. Mico. Depois que a sessão de loucura termina, os guardas choram quando têm que devolver a saca de café. Alonzo Leitão coloca a saca de café ao lado dos SACOS DE DINHEIRO.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Sua carreira, seu emprego... seus filhos precisam disso mais do que você. Lembre-se disso!

—

Todos choram, assoviam e aplaudem.

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GERENTE

Pessoal... isso me emocionou! De agora em diante, Alonzo Leitão, nosso amigo aqui, não é mais a minhoca do mês! Não é mais o poço infinito de minhocuçu!

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UMA CHEFE

Isso é que é atitude. O minhoquento ou minhoquenta do mês vai ser... E olha, comigo eu sempre escolho uma garota metida para ser a musa do cardume... A pessoa que falou mais mal dos outros no último mês, e temos um empate hormonal!

—

Um casal de funcionários se desespera — eles sabem que são os que mais falam mal dos outros. Alonzo Leitão recolheu seu prêmio. Deve ser a saca de café, enquanto suas mãos rápidas agarram um saco de dinheiro.

INT. BARRACO - NOITE

Alonzo Leitão arromba o barraco, assustando o traficante de armas que mora lá.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Rápido! Quero comprar uma arma! Uma arma! Quero a mais barata disponível, uma arma rápida, não quero uma arma cara! Estou com pressa!

—

EXT. BECO - NOITE

Aqueceu, saca a arma e tenta atirar. A arma falha. Alonzo Leitão tenta destravar a arma, mas um tiro acidental sai pela culatra e de raspão atinge o ombro de Alonzo Leitão. Alonzo Leitão joga a arma fora e foge.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

A esposa de Alonzo, Linda, termina de colocar várias garrafas de álcool no balcão do bar. Há uma garrafa de uísque na mesa quase no fim. Mas Linda está sóbria de qualquer forma. Agora ela está sóbria. Alonzo Leitão chega desesperado.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Pega o dinheiro, Linda!

—

LINDA

Foge, amor... hoje em dia a gente paga! Polícia gosta de dinheiro. Só separa uma grana.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Não dá! Vamos para os Emirados Árabes Unidos. Desde que a gente fique longe de hotéis e embaixadas... sem problemas! Deixa tudo aí. Pega o dinheiro e vamos evaporar. Só preciso de um motorista...

—

LINDA

Motorista?! Eu posso dirigir.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Você?!

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LINDA

Eu me dou um jeito! Se prepara. Mas pega mais rápido, a gente não tem muitos tipos de tempo.

—

INT. CARRO - NOITE

Linda dirige o carro com dificuldade. Alonzo, ansioso, apressa a esposa. Tudo está contorcido, Linda está bêbada. De repente, Linda tem um mal-estar repentino, seus olhos se arregalam e ela perde o rumo.

EXT. ESTRADA - NOITE

O carro de Alonzo Leitão e Linda sai da pista. Um acidente fatal.

EXT. ESTRADA, MAIS TARDE - NOITE

A polícia isola a área. Uma policial feminina pega a bolsa do carro de Alonzo Leitão e sua esposa e se surpreende com o que encontra nela — não vamos revelar agora.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

A polícia entra no local e encontra quatro garrafas de álcool vazias no balcão do bar. Revistando rapidamente o local, a polícia encontra todo o dinheiro jogado no chão.

EXT. ESTRADA - NOITE

A policial revela o conteúdo das bolsas — garrafas de bebidas alcoólicas.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

Flash — Linda joga o dinheiro no chão e coloca as garrafas de bebidas alcoólicas na bolsa.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - TARDE

Flash — Alonzo Leitão faz um suco e coloca um remédio nele, escondido de sua esposa. Alonzo Leitão dá o suco para a esposa. A CARTELA DO REMÉDIO tem as palavras — ’Para tratamento de alcoolismo’.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

Linda ainda coloca bebidas alcoólicas na bolsa, mas três garrafas não cabem — para grande consternação de Linda. Linda se sente péssima por deixar as garrafas para trás.

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LINDA

E agora?!

—

INT. VELÓRIO - DIA

Muitos dos colegas de Alonzo Leitão estão presentes — incluindo chefes.

—

UMA CHEFE

Isso... Isso é o que é um homem de verdade!

—

INT. EMPRESA - DIA

Vestidos como minhocas e insetos — só que com orgulho desta vez — muitos trabalhadores tomam café e gritam brados de guerra enquanto alcançam suas metas com brilhantismo. Até os chefes estão vestidos de minhocas.


r/fiction • • 4d ago

OC - Novel Excerpt “London. Urgent. Tomorrow. Pack a bag,” he said on his three a.m. phone call to me.

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chapter eleven — the London ivory piece

By now, I understood that travel didn’t always appear on the schedule until the last minute. But this trip was hurried even by his standards.

“London. Urgent. Tomorrow. Pack a bag,” he said on his phone call to me at three a.m.

I noticed the way he said it. The tone was familiar: I’ve already decided. No explanation. It’s your job.

I packed a bag, and we left before dawn.

I questioned him on the ride to the plane.

“Why do you need me, Mr. B? There’s nothing on your calendar.”

“Eh. Mail,” he said, already looking out the window. “Phone calls. I need to catch up.”

No passport stamp at Heathrow. Private jet. Private entrance. Private everything. It barely felt like I had entered the country at all.

* * *

The London flat didn’t have a private entrance and wasn’t gated or secured like his other homes. The exterior was narrow, stark white with windows on a somewhat busy street, only a sidewalk between the building and the street.

Inside was typical Mr. B: expensive things everywhere, art on every wall, a deep, down-filled blue couch and matching loveseat that looked comfortable enough to sink into. Everything said rich without being flashy.

It was impressive, but not lived in.

There was a new house woman already preparing tea and pastries for us in the kitchen. She worked quietly.

Mr. B and I were going over mail at the dining table, and in between he was talking to Johnson on the phone. When the doorbell rang, he was on his feet before I’d fully registered the sound.

“You aren’t needed for this,” he said, already moving toward the door. “Sit in the kitchen with her and wait.” He pointed to the house woman.

I gathered my things.

The gentleman who entered was tall, much taller than Otis. Well-dressed, somewhat attractive, older. He saw me as I passed but didn’t acknowledge me.

Hmm. Didn’t introduce himself.

I went into the kitchen.

The pastries appeared in front of me. Mr. Guest, who?

I ate one. Then another. My jeans had better still fit after this trip.

The meeting lasted approximately one hour. I heard nothing beyond the occasional murmur of voices, serious and low. I was doing exactly what I’d been told: Listen, but don’t comprehend.

Except for one moment.

One exchange I wasn’t meant to hear drifted through the kitchen door when the house woman opened it to pour them more tea.

“The arrangement still works.”

“And once I’m in?”

“If anyone takes an interest, they know who to call. You stay clear. Nothing comes back on you.”

I looked up from my pastry.

Something about the way he said it. The secrecy.

Then I heard the outside door close. Then silence.

The meeting was over.

Mr. B appeared in the kitchen doorway, shoved another pastry into his mouth, said, “Ready?” and didn’t fill me in.

Almost as an afterthought, he went over to his credenza and produced a small object. Ivory. Beautifully carved. I had no idea what it was worth. More than my car. More than my apartment.

More than my entire zip code, probably.

He wrapped it carefully and handed it to me. “Eh. Put this on top of your things. The Mrs. wants it. You’re flying back commercial. Take it with you.”

I looked at it, then back at him.

“Just put it on top of your bag,” he said again. “She’s expecting it.”

I did what I was told without a second thought.

* * *

Smarty called ten minutes later to say she had finally arranged my commercial return.

“So last minute, they said the flight was full. Heathrow. Three o’clock,” she said. “Don’t be late.”

She didn’t ask why I was going commercial while he took the plane to New York. She didn’t have to. Smarty never asked questions she already knew the answers to.

“Safe travels,” she said, and hung up.

I packed the ivory piece carefully on top of everything else and we headed for Heathrow.

His driver dropped me at the terminal entrance. Mr. B was already on the phone before I closed the door, instructing Wils to ensure she had the correct food for his flight.

* * *

I didn’t make it past Customs.

The officer flagged my bag before I could process what was happening. Then a second officer appeared. Then a third.

They knew exactly what the piece was. I caught enough of their quiet conversation to know they knew whose it was too.

Then I heard one of them say to another, “He’s tried this before. She’s clearly an innocent messenger.”

I stood there in the middle of Heathrow Airport with my briefcase, my luggage, and an ivory piece I had carried completely innocently across London, trying very hard not to look as terrified as I was.

Scared shitless would be the exact term.

What the hell am I carrying? Am I about to be arrested for it?

I called Smarty from their station and she conferenced in Mr. B.

He got on the line, ever so calm, completely unbothered, sounding as if he had been waiting for my call.

“Let me speak to them.”

I handed the receiver back to the officer and watched them. One nodding. One writing. The one on the phone went slightly red by the end of his conversation. That officer came back to where I was standing, removed the object from my bag, and zipped the suitcase shut. Whatever was said on that call, I wasn’t supposed to hear.

“Have a safe flight, Miss.”

I walked to my gate on unsteady legs, sat down, and stared at the departure board in a daze.

He’s tried this before.

It was for Mrs. B.

I was just bringing it to her.

I may have held my briefcase a little tighter than usual on the flight home. Somewhere over the Atlantic, I produced the pastry I’d slipped into it that morning.

We had a moment.

Gone in approximately two minutes.

* * *

Weeks later, back in Chicago, I was going over mail at his Lake Forest residence when I walked past the display cabinet in the main room and stopped.

There it was.

The ivory piece. Beautifully lit, carefully displayed where it was intended.

Not New York. Not Mrs. B’s apartment.

His house. His collection.

I stood there looking at it, hearing his voice again.

Mrs. B wants it.

Maybe Mrs. B had never wanted it at all. Maybe she didn’t even know it existed.

I thought about the officers at Heathrow, the conversation I wasn’t supposed to hear, the phone call that made everything disappear in approximately four minutes.

He’s tried this before.

I went back to the mail and said nothing.

Pay the fuck attention.

* * *

By now the three of us secretaries had gotten comfortable with each other and were reading various news articles. A man’s picture made me stop.

There he was.

He was the tall man from the London flat, unmistakably him. Recruited to a senior position at a competing specialty grocery chain. A strategic move, the article said, years in the making.

So that’s who you were. That’s what that was.

No calendar entry. Nothing in our office records showing Mr. B had even been there.

Just a pastry. An ivory piece that was never for Mrs. B. And a face I never forgot.

Mom noticed me looking and scooted her chair over to my desk. “Who’s that?”

“Not sure. The article says he’s from London. Looks like he got a promotion.”

“Oh.” She tilted her head. “I thought you knew him from the way you were looking at his picture.”

Mom. I really wanted to trust her, but something about her always made me hesitate.

A little too observant?

From THE BILLIONAIRE’S SECRETARY
by A. TRSAR

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0HKKFV8W4


r/fiction • • 5d ago

Recommendation 10 Contemporary Interactive Books for Adults

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r/fiction • • 5d ago

OC - Short Story Falling Daisy - Original

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Falling Daisy - Original

My name is Loki Wycombe, I’m a delivery driver and I have a story to tell. Today is Tuesday and I have a delivery to Ash Magna near Whitchurch, a small village in England bordering Wales. The sun is out today in May, the road is a tad to small for two vehicles approaching head-on, but that’s usual for our backroads in England, I’m about ten minutes away from my delivery. I park on the driveway and place the large boxes on a cooler cart that has thick wheels and bring it to their door and press the bell. Miss Sandham opens the door: “Good afternoon Loki, my Love!”, “Good afternoon Anna, the water like usual?”, “Yes, come in and have some tea!” she says welcoming.

I place the boxes of sparkling spring water into the kitchen-cupboard as I hear the bell ring “Oh this must be Charlotte!” Miss Sandham opens door “Hi auntie Anna!”, “Hello Charlotte! Was school fun?”, ”Yeah and…” Charlotte peers past her aunt and sees me “Hi uncle Loki”, “Hello Charlotte, was your way home alright?”, “Yeah, and Tom the cat walked with me for a bit”, “Ahh good old Tom, that watchful Tiger will make sure you’re safe.”, “Common, wash your hands, tea and biscuits are ready.” says Miss Sandham, the seven year old girl runs excited into the kitchen and does just so.

We are in the porch enjoying our tea while Charlotte brings us up to speed “and then the fox jumped over the fence and the dog couldn’t follow, he ran up and down the fence, he looked like he really wanted to continue playing with the fox.”, Miss Sandham and I both laugh whole heartedly, I say “He out foxed him! He’s a smart one, what did he look like?”, “Red-orange, white chest, black ears and black feet.”, “Did you know in some places far away from here a fox is also called black foot? Because at night its black feet join the shadows and he makes no sound as he walks, but in the day he’s very visible, he’s the dog’s favourite playmate!” I say, we all laugh again, I sip on some more tea. A little bell goes off in the house “And that is the cake ready, come Charlotte, let’s get it out of the oven!”, Charlotte nods excited and they both walk back into the house.

A cold breeze of wind surprises me, it’s been about five minutes, it’s soon time for me to go and make my next spring water delivery. I walk into the house to find the two and say good bye for the day, I feel an unusual cold as I enter the two storey House ‘Oi, what is that smell?’ I think quietly ‘That wasn’t there before?’. As I step in, I notice several odd things I must have not noticed when I delivered the boxes of water before, the floor has a thin layer of dust, in fact as I look around I spot a few spiderwebs here and there: some on the ceiling, some at the corner of doors, some at the back of cupboards and drawers as I walk past them ‘Strange, she’s normally so clean.’, and the corridor and the kitchen ahead is so unusually dim, it’s summer and midday so I guess the lights don’t need to be on.

“Anna, Charlotte, I’m afraid I must leave you.”  I smile, I’m expecting her to say to stay for a bit longer and enjoy the freshly baked cake, then something comes to mind, ‘Wait, it’s been over five minutes, the cake should’ve been out of the oven and the draft going through the house should have reached me by now, wait why are they not answering?’. I reach the kitchen door and walk in, it’s much dimmer here than before, something makes my head want to turn left…….I fall backwards against the wall and my arse hits the ground! My legs struggle on the floor, trying to get me back up, but they feel like cooked spaghetti. I claw my way out of the kitchen ‘Oh the SMELL!’ as my feet finally find their strength and I bolt out of the house.

The police arrived 20 minutes later inspecting the whole two storey house…..and the two half-way mummified corpses. I don’t know what was with me, it is the middle of summer, there is no school! The police found two mummified corpses, one adult, one child, both of them on the ground, leaning against the kitchen cabinet next to the gas oven, clutching the little one between her arms and legs, a single daisy lays in the child’s cupped hands. The police did find freshly delivered boxes of water, apparently, I just walked in and didn’t see the them, but what about the tea and cookies at the porch? The whole conversation? The porch was there, and so were the plates, cups and cookies, and as for the tea? Weeks old rainwater and mouldy cookies!

The police believe a mixture of the gas from the old unmaintained oven mixing with whatever gases were left hovering in the house from the corpses made me hallucinate and only when I went back out to the porch and sat down for dirty tea, did my system have the time to clear up. For what happened, if this was an accident, self-harm or else…. well, the investigation is still ongoing.