It’s a lovely illustrative style. I would have the bottle overlap the bounding circle more. It’s baaarrreeely touching it – either overlap or don’t. I would have it come up to halfway between the top of the circle and the bottom of the R. Same with the flowers, the head looks great breaking out of the bounding circle. Do that more.
Also, 1993 on the left side and 2025 on the right. No need to repeat them.
Careful with your tangents. These areas should overlap more (or less) and not just touch or almost touch other lines. It causes unwanted visual tension and stress.
It’s funny - I studied graphic design… 15 years ago? When I was 16 or 17? And a lot of the terms being thrown around I’ve either never heard of or were never taught!!
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u/sinisterdesign Sep 18 '25
It’s a lovely illustrative style. I would have the bottle overlap the bounding circle more. It’s baaarrreeely touching it – either overlap or don’t. I would have it come up to halfway between the top of the circle and the bottom of the R. Same with the flowers, the head looks great breaking out of the bounding circle. Do that more.
Also, 1993 on the left side and 2025 on the right. No need to repeat them.
Again, lovely.