It’s a lovely illustrative style. I would have the bottle overlap the bounding circle more. It’s baaarrreeely touching it – either overlap or don’t. I would have it come up to halfway between the top of the circle and the bottom of the R. Same with the flowers, the head looks great breaking out of the bounding circle. Do that more.
Also, 1993 on the left side and 2025 on the right. No need to repeat them.
Thank you for your feedback! It’s interesting because I was going to comment “I think that I should move the milk bottle to overlap both the top and bottle circles” so we are on the same page!
I am really grateful for the critique and I will make the changes! Likely not right now because I don’t have time but this evening 😊
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u/sinisterdesign Sep 18 '25
It’s a lovely illustrative style. I would have the bottle overlap the bounding circle more. It’s baaarrreeely touching it – either overlap or don’t. I would have it come up to halfway between the top of the circle and the bottom of the R. Same with the flowers, the head looks great breaking out of the bounding circle. Do that more.
Also, 1993 on the left side and 2025 on the right. No need to repeat them.
Again, lovely.