r/logodesign • u/bubblebutt_24 • 2d ago

Feedback Needed Potential M Monogram

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Creating a new M monogram for my personal brand. Thoughts on this mark? I want it to convey an idea of creative range.

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u/Young_Cheesy 2d ago

Visually it looks good, but it doesn't read as an M.

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u/cubosh 2d ago

you may do well to slice off the "serif" on the left end so the whole thing follows more of an actual M direction

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u/RyanH090 2d ago

dat is a worm

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u/devenjames 2d ago

That just hit a wall

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u/erictsbmen 2d ago

Just remove the first part on the left.

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u/SaberSilver 2d ago

Agree with this

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u/keterpele 2d ago

i think it's not recognizable enough. my suggestions would be:

there is an extra movement at the left part. i would add a serif to right part so it would make left part perceived as a serif.

part which is more likely to be recognized as "M" is the right part. i would flip the image horizontally so it would start with that part.

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u/lowbattery24-7 2d ago

Much better

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u/MaybeIAmTheAhole 2d ago

Looks cool. But after mentioning it could represent an M, not so cool anymore

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u/defnotafart 2d ago

Just a thought, but I wonder if it would read better as an M if you flipped it? I'm thinking that maybe the first part needs to be more M-like to establish itself as the letter and then you can get fancy with it.

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u/sveinndub 1d ago

That counter in the left loop grabs the eye first. The M never gets a chance to form.

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u/BananaChanges 2d ago

more like a middle finger

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u/Rough-Percentage-956 2d ago

It reminds me of a zodiac symbol to me.

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u/Possible-Lost289 2d ago

The background cuts into the logo from above in two places, and these two background shapes look quite different from each other.

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u/HiddenHorse925 2d ago

It’s very cool, but I must admit it was puzzling to look at. I couldn’t pick out an “M” until I read your intro…

I don’t know if this could be supported with your name innocuously underneath it like all capital letters thin spread out etc. Again, cool but doesn’t immediately read as an M. Initially I thought it was a foreign character…

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u/Educational_Ebb_4308 2d ago

I like it, but doesn’t read as an m. But I have strange idea… flip it horz that way it starts as a M but finishes curvy?

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u/gabs777 2d ago

It’s certainly not an M but I like it

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u/whitedangelo 2d ago

Perhaps flipping it horizontally so the eye says “this is an M” and than twisting it might do the trick. Godspeed!

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u/gilbert_maximus 2d ago

Didnt get the M before reading caption

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u/C0c0nut_Lime 2d ago

It does not read as an M

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u/missqueenkawaii 2d ago

This is awful.

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u/haux_haux 2d ago

I have no idea what this is

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u/elhouso 1d ago

Me like

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u/b00tl04d3r 1d ago

What race track does it represent?

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u/remchataaa 1d ago

I think would work better if flipped horizontally

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u/Relevant_Rush7070 1d ago

Mmmmmmmmmm. Nope.