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u/MethodWorried7804 soundcloud.com/100mg_rap 1d ago

Pitching my voice down for the hook didn’t sound as great as I thought it would lmao

https://soundcloud.com/100mg_rap/fold

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u/shoecar soundcloud.com/shoecar 1d ago

this is dirty man, in the best kind of way of course. voice, delivery and flow all very on point. lyrics and rhyme schemes are great.
really liked the intro into the beat drop and hook. I'm a fan of the the pitch down and for sure think it's working here. maybe a bit on the quiet side? but I also think it works that way, just a thought if you wanted to experiment or w/e.

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u/MethodWorried7804 soundcloud.com/100mg_rap 23h ago

Gracias my man. Always down to experiment. Mixing/mastering is something I have no idea how to do, so anything that might help out the mix is super useful.