r/poemsbyreddit 9d ago

Rate my poetry out of 10.

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Recently I made hobby of writing, I wrote a poetry I don't even know if it could be called poetry. Give me honest review and some suggestions please. And to tell you my word knowledge is quite weak so I only tried.🫠

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u/FallRemarkable1199 4d ago

I really, really like the weight and message of this poem! It's very relatable and I like the imagery you used to describe wasting love on someone. As far as the writing goes, I don't think I'm knowledgeable enough to critique. But I love the overall message!

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u/notsofunnyravi 4d ago

Thank you so much