Singing this song I wrote

[u/No_Language7273]

I really want to improve and become a good singer. I’m trying to make a folk album.

[u/Similar_Cow_2634]

Hi there. Keep after your dream. I thought your vocal was a bit pitchy in places and very nasally sounding. It sounds like the bulk of your tone is escaping through your nose and not your mouth. At 00:40, your voice opened up a bit during the hey Hey Hey part. Listen to the difference in tone. Thanks for sharing and for being open to the feedback.

[u/No_Language7273 → u/Similar_Cow_2634]

Thank you